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Acebrock He/Him from So-Cal Since: Dec, 2009 Relationship Status: My elf kissing days are over
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#1: Apr 23rd 2014 at 1:47:27 AM

Something's up with this article. Right now its usage stats are not great. Specifically:

Failures on Ice found in: 14 articles, excluding discussions.

Since January 1, 2012 this article has brought 2 people to the wiki from non-search engine links.

I'm pretty sure this is a fairly common trope, having seen it here and there, and yet right now it's not doing very well, even though it's had about one and a half years to gather wicks.

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FastEddie Since: Apr, 2004
#2: Apr 23rd 2014 at 11:47:55 AM

I suppose one step would be a rename to Falling On Ice, which is what it is about. Not too sure what the storytelling purpose is, though. People slip on ice, they sit in chairs ...

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AnotherDuck No, the other one. from Stockholm Since: Jul, 2012 Relationship Status: Mu
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#3: Apr 23rd 2014 at 1:14:44 PM

It's sort of like Fish out of Water, or an inversion of Graceful in Their Element, specifically relating to ice. That's what I can see, at least.

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#4: Apr 23rd 2014 at 7:48:26 PM

Really? Based on the description and page image, this seem to simply be about "people who really suck at ice-skating", which appears rather chair-y.

m8e from Sweden Since: Jul, 2012 Relationship Status: Wanna dance with somebody
#6: Apr 24th 2014 at 12:58:13 AM

[up][up] It needs a rewrite to be about the ice instead of the skating.

This is a Fish out of Water situation that show that the character have a flaw. A flaw that doesn't show when they are off ice. Often used as a "compressed flaw".

and it is of course often played for laughs.

edited 24th Apr '14 1:00:33 AM by m8e

Larkmarn Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Hello, I love you
#7: Apr 24th 2014 at 5:45:51 AM

I think it just needs crosswicking. There's more examples on the page, the name's fairly indicative, and it's essentially a stock gag of someone comically stumbling while trying to balance of skates.

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#8: Apr 24th 2014 at 9:19:37 AM

Aye, this page can definitively use some more crosswicking.

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#10: Jun 1st 2014 at 3:48:32 PM

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