It should probably be mirrored.
Other than that, I like it.
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I like the suggestion.
I honestly think just the second panel is enough. Between the nurse outfit and the dialogue, we don't need any more information establishing that there's a cut.
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Oh, for a second I thought you were saying Negima was cut under the current content policy.
Suggestion works.
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Hmmm...it could work with just the second panel, although I like the setup in the first.
If we do keep the first, that illegible text under "30 minutes ago" should be made legible or cut.
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No, the other one.
I think it works with just the lower part.
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If we go with this, should we change the quote?
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Yeah, we'll either need to find a different quote or just go without...or we could move the second line to the pic's caption, I'm good with any of those.
Any other thoughts on one panel vs. both?
edited 16th Sep '13 7:33:56 PM by Willbyr
If it matters, I never would've thought that the quote came from the same thing as the pic, given the difference in wording and the general... vagueness of the wording.
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It could be the difference between the official English translation and a scanlation, which is what the image came from.
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Here's a one-panel version with the background dots edited out. The more I think about it, the more I'm leaning toward going with the one panel.
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edited 16th Sep '13 8:20:44 PM by Willbyr
Much better.
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I am OK with changing both pic and quote.
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Cool. The thread overall is in favor of the concept so the one-panel version is up, potholed, and tagged, and the quote's cut. I'll take the trope out of the first post in the IP policies thread shortly. Caption or no?
No, the other one.
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The image currently on Finger-Suck Healing has two issues, one fairly major and one minor. The fairly major one is that it only shows half the trope; there's no indication of the finger being hurt. The minor one is that the work is one that was cut under the content policy. We've got a lot of pages in the same shape, but several of them have really good pics and don't need to be messed with; this ain't the case. I've got a potential replacement here; it covers all angles nicely, shows the intimacy more openly, has the nurse imagery, and is potholed. Thoughts?
edited 16th Sep '13 4:48:10 PM by Willbyr