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Deadlock Clock: Oct 31st 2013 at 11:59:00 PM
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#1: Sep 14th 2013 at 7:33:54 AM

This trope isn't really clear what it wants to be. Is it a trope about an advertising trick? Is it an administrivia page about something not to do on the wiki? And the fact that it's mildly self-demonstrating isn't helping.

We just need to decide what this page is and stick with it. Right now, it's too confusing for new tropers.

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#2: Sep 14th 2013 at 7:59:54 AM

Right now, it doesn't look like it is even describing weasel words. Instead, its describing how other people use it. That's more like, "and don't just take my word for it!". The Administrivia entry is clearly on Examples Are Not Arguable, though.

There are non-advertising examples of weasel words, but right now this is an index of advertising tropes that might use ww....? Page is unusable, and needs writing from the ground up.

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#3: Sep 14th 2013 at 8:33:18 AM

Weasel Words are storytelling devices, specifically words that are much more vague than they seem at first.

The policy page is Examples Are Not Arguable.

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
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#4: Sep 14th 2013 at 8:55:16 AM

This seems more like a sub-index of Advertising Tropes.

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#5: Sep 14th 2013 at 8:56:42 AM

Weasel Words is a valid Rhetoric Trope. These items would be subtropes of it.

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#6: Sep 14th 2013 at 5:41:54 PM

So, a trope about vague words has a vague description?

From what I understand of the off-wiki use of the term, it's about words or phrases that imply more than they actually mean. Taken at face value, they don't say much at all, or are just not impressive. However, the way they're used imply there's substance to them, that they mean something.

Up to __ or More is a good one. Part of this complete breakfast should perhaps be there as well. The "anonymous authority" definition found on The Other Wiki is basically about that saying, "Some people claim..." can basically amount to "Me and my friend claim..." which is useless.

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#7: Sep 15th 2013 at 4:25:39 AM

Yeah, this is one case where going self-demonstrating all the way will be self-defeating. But the main trouble with the article is that it's boring.

That said, weasel words are all about the usage. Some (a favourite weasel word!) words can act as both a weasel word or not, depending on context.

Eg:

We must approach this problem in an appropriate manner (weasel usage, gives no hint on what is considered appropriate)

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crazysamaritan NaNo 4328 / 50,000 from Lupin III Since: Apr, 2010
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#8: Sep 15th 2013 at 6:00:40 AM

Duck gave a much better definition here than what's currently on the page. The first paragraph at least can be replaced by that.

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#9: Sep 15th 2013 at 6:54:37 AM

Yeah, I agree with that as well. Switch.

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#10: Sep 15th 2013 at 8:37:10 AM

Took a stab at it. That better?

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crazysamaritan NaNo 4328 / 50,000 from Lupin III Since: Apr, 2010
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#11: Sep 15th 2013 at 9:03:25 AM

The first half actually does the job it needs to, now. Not happy with the rest of it.

We do agree that Weasel Words are a trope in their own right, not just an advertising method, correct?

edited 15th Sep '13 9:04:06 AM by crazysamaritan

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#12: Sep 15th 2013 at 9:04:47 AM

"Advertising method" is already included in "trope".

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
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#13: Sep 15th 2013 at 9:09:29 AM

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#14: Sep 25th 2013 at 8:59:51 AM

The new description is better. Anything else that ought to be fixed?

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#15: Sep 25th 2013 at 1:29:21 PM

Maybe. My question was never answered. You only stated the warrant I was using. No one else has posted since.

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#16: Sep 25th 2013 at 1:39:37 PM

I did answer it in @12, and you seemed to agree in @13.

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#17: Sep 25th 2013 at 1:44:20 PM

No, that was my warrant. An advertising method must be a trope. That's not something that needs to be said. Do we want to expand the use of Weasel Words outside of advertising methods? Because it fits with several Truth and Lies tropes, and characters can use it in a story, not just product placement.

Or, do we want to change the definition slightly to restrict this to an index of advertising tropes only?

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#18: Sep 28th 2013 at 2:41:57 AM

I could see an expansion.

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#19: Sep 28th 2013 at 3:30:54 AM

It's a "Rhetorical technique" so I think it's a general trope just as the Truth and Lies, Logical Fallacies, or the Social Engineering tropes.

edited 28th Sep '13 3:31:54 AM by m8e

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#20: Sep 28th 2013 at 3:52:03 AM

We don't have an index of these, do we?

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crazysamaritan NaNo 4328 / 50,000 from Lupin III Since: Apr, 2010
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#21: Sep 28th 2013 at 10:22:29 AM

Not that I know of, which is why I was asking if we could expand this. smile

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#23: Oct 28th 2013 at 1:14:56 PM

So should we do a crowner to see what this should be repurposed as?

crazysamaritan NaNo 4328 / 50,000 from Lupin III Since: Apr, 2010
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#24: Oct 28th 2013 at 2:46:16 PM

Why should this trope be repurposed? It is working fine. I think the definition could be expanded, but that isn't creating a new purpose.

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#25: Nov 1st 2013 at 12:52:44 AM

The clock is up; if we want to discuss broadening it, I'd need some example of this trope being used outside of advertising/rhetoric.

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