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RainehDaze Figure of Hourai from Scotland (Ten years in the joint) Relationship Status: Serial head-patter
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#226: Oct 28th 2011 at 3:12:07 AM

Nekomi just wouldn't take kindly to Vega's prodding.

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Scrounge Since: Jan, 2001
#227: Oct 29th 2011 at 5:31:40 PM

  • Name: Makurayami Ai
  • Age: 666
  • Sexuality: Lesbian
  • Appearance: Slightly but noticeably taller than average, with long legs and short, straight hair in stripes of red, orange, and yellow, though her dark red eyebrows and eyelashes make it obvious that this isn't her natural hair color. Has bright, beautiful ruby eyes that seem to shine in the dark. Curved in all the right places, though not to excess, and expertily manicured. Tanned just enough to be intriguing (and occasionally shows off her tan lines). Her only physical imperfection (unless you count the tan lines) is a pair of scars, large but faded, that suggest that she once had wings, and that they were removed quite violently.
  • Personality: Ai is evil, and she'll readily admit it, but she's quick to point out that she's the fun kind of evil. Flirtatious and vapid on the surface, she's actually quite cunning beneath her little mask, though often too short-sighted to put her deviousness to proper use. Has a voracious sexual appetite, but has no concern with any emotional connection. Will amuse herself with all sorts of malicious mischief, but is quick to act like a wounded innocent if accused, and has a million sob stories at the ready, some of which may even have the benefit of technically being true. Enjoys corrupting those around her. Unusually for a demon, Ai is not fond of violence.
  • Skills: Ai is a succubus. As such, she can make adjustments to her voice and personal appearance as needed to appear more attractive, as well as being able to create and use pheremone of various scents and effects. Rather than draining life-force, she thrives on pure, animal lust, especially directed towards herself, which she can manipulate and amplify once it's taken root. Can regrow her wings, either demonic or fallen-angelic, for brief periods. When she reveals her true succubus form, her tail is prehensile, and her horns are sturdy enough to support the weight of a high-school girl. Is capable of telekniesis and teleportation, as well as astral projection and dream manipulation; and, while she can't read minds, she ''does' have an unnerving ability to know far more about the people around her than she should be capable of. Due to her demonic nature, she is impervious to most physical harm.
  • Biography: The great-granddaughter of Mephistopiles on her father's side, and a distant descendant of Lilith's on her mother's, Ai was, of course, born and raised in hell. As such, her upbringing was... unpleasant, to say the least. In addition, her inexplicable lack of bloodlust made her an even easier target for other demons to torment... Not that demons need the excuse. However, she discovered a gift for gossip and seduction, enabling her to find a few pawns to hide behind, and even exact some measure of retribution on her tormentors. She has several stories of how she received her scars, many of which involve her father, but it's not clear which are actually true.

RainehDaze Figure of Hourai from Scotland (Ten years in the joint) Relationship Status: Serial head-patter
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#228: Oct 29th 2011 at 5:37:29 PM

Too many powers, much? For instance, why the hell does a succubus have telekinesis and teleportation as abilities and why are they immune to most harm?

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Scrounge Since: Jan, 2001
#229: Oct 29th 2011 at 5:43:31 PM

Mainly because I don't want her to get squished by Gaodia.

The teleportation is mainly because I need an easy way for her to pop up anywhere.

RainehDaze Figure of Hourai from Scotland (Ten years in the joint) Relationship Status: Serial head-patter
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#230: Oct 29th 2011 at 5:45:18 PM

To give you an honest opinion, I don't like the character. >_>

Adding in so many powers just makes things worse. And teleportation so that you can be anywhere sounds, frankly, annoying.

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Scrounge Since: Jan, 2001
#231: Oct 29th 2011 at 5:50:44 PM

...Sorry. I wanted to play an antagonist. I guess I went a little overboard.

I'll keep her away from your characters if she's accepted.

RainehDaze Figure of Hourai from Scotland (Ten years in the joint) Relationship Status: Serial head-patter
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#232: Oct 29th 2011 at 5:55:47 PM

... This is not a genre that is particularly conducive to antagonists. :|

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Scrounge Since: Jan, 2001
#233: Oct 29th 2011 at 6:02:55 PM

...I just thought it'd be a nice change to have a succubus who actually was a bad person, since generally they seem to be going the way of vampires these days. I don't intend anything big for her. Just some general sleeping around, careless breaking of hearts... You know, just so we'd have the role of The Bitch filled.

edited 29th Oct '11 6:07:32 PM by Scrounge

BetaRay Web Slinger/Hope Bringer Since: Jun, 2009 Relationship Status: Can't buy me love
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#234: Oct 29th 2011 at 6:07:41 PM

She seems like she'd upstage my antagonistic character pretty easily.

You are not alone, and you are not strange. You are you, and everyone has damage. Be the better person.
RainehDaze Figure of Hourai from Scotland (Ten years in the joint) Relationship Status: Serial head-patter
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#235: Oct 29th 2011 at 6:13:55 PM

  • Name: Saito Kaede/Kaede Saito.
  • Age: 32
  • Sexuality: Bi, with a preference for girls.
  • Appearance: Saito is tall, flat chested, and looks about twenty. Combine all of this with obvious good looks and it's little surprise that the teacher, with her short bleached-blonde hair and numerous suits, is often mistaken for a particularly effeminate bishounen. Her eyes are often described as red pits—there's a reason she wears sunglasses so much.
  • Personality: Saito is one of the two people who has raised Momoko from childhood and, as such, tends to act the same way, teasing and trolling her students. It's far from casual disdain of everyone, though, Saito is merely particularly spiky and hard to get close to.
  • Skills: Saito has a vast knowledge of literature, both Japanese and foreign, as well as a fluent grasp of English that rarely gets put to use. Outside of the academic, she draws doujinshi in her free time, dabbles in the occult (thus far without any success), and spends a lot of time visiting shinto shrines. She's also fantastically skilled at removing people's bras.
  • Biography: Born Saito Haruhiko, Saito was understandably rather unsettled mentally and things only got worse. Nevertheless, the young Saito proved a brilliant student, getting from a poor school to Tokyo university. Whilst there, a relationship was formed with a single mother earning a law degree. This relationship persisted through quite a lot, from bad experiences with traffic to sexual reassignment—the latter of which was impossibly successful, fanning a dwindling interest in the occult. Amazingly, Saito has held down a single job throughout this time.

... I felt that this was necessary.

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Scrounge Since: Jan, 2001
#236: Oct 29th 2011 at 6:16:06 PM

[up][up] I don't know if you dislike that, or just felt like poining it out, but, well, the truth is... Your antagonistic character hasn't shown up yet... So, um, I kinda forgot she was waiting in the wings...

...Um...

So, what all would you like me to do to change Ai so she's more palatable? I can ditch the teleportation and telekinesis, but I want to keep the dream manipulation (and use the Astral projection as her means of doing so). Would that help?

[up] ...I never would have guessed some of those things about Saito...

edited 29th Oct '11 6:19:04 PM by Scrounge

RainehDaze Figure of Hourai from Scotland (Ten years in the joint) Relationship Status: Serial head-patter
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#237: Oct 30th 2011 at 12:38:57 PM

But not the imperviousness? That's... still kind of a big problem, assuming Daltar gets the plot moving. Anyway... I'd advise you to be careful with the pheremones. People don't normally like mind control of their characters.

Of course you wouldn't guess some of those things. XD

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daltar The Maid from the fantasy of green. Since: Jul, 2009 Relationship Status: All is for my lord
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#238: Oct 30th 2011 at 12:48:03 PM

Saito is approved.

Also Ai is also approved since I do believe that Scrounge will be careful with all the points outlined by Raineh.

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Scrounge Since: Jan, 2001
#239: Oct 30th 2011 at 2:08:28 PM

Okay... Nerfing her abilities a bit.

Telekinesis and teleportation are out, like I said. Pheremones remain, because they're not direct mind control (and as such, have the potential to backfire in any number of ways, as well as to not work at all, either because she screwed them up, or because, well, it's based on scent, and scent-based mind control isn't particularly effective on humans). The dream manipulation is also limited in its scope; she can influence dreams, but not carve them from whole cloth.

I was actually thinking about toning down the imperviousness to mere revival and regeneration, with no immunity to pain and without the ability to regrow lost parts (hence the winglessness.)

Daltar, do you approve of this nerfing?

RainehDaze Figure of Hourai from Scotland (Ten years in the joint) Relationship Status: Serial head-patter
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#240: Oct 30th 2011 at 2:15:48 PM

Scent based... poor Nekomi. Cats have incredibly sensitive smell (they know if water is chlorinated, for a start). And her dreams are bad to start with... XD

Seems fine to me, and Daltar appears to be trusting my judgement... [lol]

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Scrounge Since: Jan, 2001
#241: Oct 30th 2011 at 2:32:00 PM

...Well, since Ai's a succubus, her meddling would probably be a pleasant change from Nekomi's normal nightmares, since sex dreams are better than bloodbath dreams for most people. ...And I suspect that Nekomi is one of the cases where it'd be easiest for the pheremone tricks to backfire horribly, the other being Vega. Don't feel obliged to be gentle with her. ;)

With those changes (and possibly a some more complex concerns hidden under her selfishness, but I'm not sure yet), I'm sending her on in. Anyone want her?

AnnoR "Of course, Satsuki-sama." from Honnouji Academy Since: Sep, 2010
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#242: Oct 30th 2011 at 2:40:04 PM

Surprise us. For who you send her to, I mean.

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"Oh, dear. The toad, the monkey, and the dog have all screwed up."
RainehDaze Figure of Hourai from Scotland (Ten years in the joint) Relationship Status: Serial head-patter
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#243: Oct 30th 2011 at 2:42:22 PM

Just not the baths, please. D:

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IchigoNeko A Forbidden Rendezvous from New York, 1928 Since: Sep, 2009
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#244: Oct 30th 2011 at 7:20:11 PM

Hmhm. If Ai manages to get away from Vega, you can send her over to Hikaru...

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AnnoR "Of course, Satsuki-sama." from Honnouji Academy Since: Sep, 2010
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#245: Nov 1st 2011 at 6:39:56 PM

Because girls who look like lolis but aren't lolis if you go by age and are kinda perverse are funny.

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"Oh, dear. The toad, the monkey, and the dog have all screwed up."
Scrounge Since: Jan, 2001
#246: Nov 1st 2011 at 6:48:25 PM

[up] Does she really need to be an albino? We already have Yuki (or had, anyways. Where'd Pidgeon wander off to?) and it just seems a little weird for her to be both albino and perma-loli.

AnnoR "Of course, Satsuki-sama." from Honnouji Academy Since: Sep, 2010
"Of course, Satsuki-sama."
#247: Nov 1st 2011 at 6:50:41 PM

I purposefully wanted to make a visually quirky character, so I went for some of the... odder, for lack of a better word, traits I could put together.

"Oh, dear. The toad, the monkey, and the dog have all screwed up."
Scrounge Since: Jan, 2001
#248: Nov 1st 2011 at 6:53:52 PM

Ah, gotcha. Still, albinos are like crazy rare. What are the odds of two of them going to the same school?

You could make Aiko a ganguro if you want her to really be visually quirky. :)

Also, is it just me, or does having an Ai and an Aiko leave as much opportunity for confusion as having a Hikari and a Hikaru? :)

AnnoR "Of course, Satsuki-sama." from Honnouji Academy Since: Sep, 2010
"Of course, Satsuki-sama."
#249: Nov 1st 2011 at 6:58:18 PM

Was Yuki a true albino, or just really pale?

I also kinda wanted to get the sensitive to sunlight angle in there, though I'm not entirely sure why.

Hm. Hopefully not, though I might change her name now. I liked the name Aiko for her, but I'll change it if it'll cause confusion.

"Oh, dear. The toad, the monkey, and the dog have all screwed up."
Scrounge Since: Jan, 2001
#250: Nov 1st 2011 at 7:06:33 PM

Yuki was a true albino.

Confusion doesn't mean you need to change it. Confusion can be fun!


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