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TobiasDrake Queen of Good Things, Honest (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Arm chopping is not a love language!
Queen of Good Things, Honest
#46776: Jun 23rd 2017 at 7:35:32 AM

I totally caved and watched it early just so I'd have time to prepare my current story, "Damaged Goods", for what it reveals. AJ's parents are going to be important to a portion of the story, and I needed to know if it would be possible to be consistent with "The Perfect Pear" and, if so, how much salvaging I would have to do to keep as much of my plans intact as possible.

I've got the review for it sitting on my hard drive to be posted as soon as the episode airs in the U.S., because I like making those on the spot with live reactions.

To my surprise, the answer to, "How much of my story can still work?" wound up being, "ALL OF IT!" I hit the Canon Jackpot; the only changes I need to make are in places where the concepts and ideas introduced in the episode actually improve some of the scenes I've made notes of.

The only point of contention is that in "The Crystal Ball", AJ explicitly says her mom is a city pony from Manehattan. But the episode reveals that Buttercup being a Pear is a tightly-kept secret that even AJ never knew, so that hole can be easily plastered over with four words: she was lied to.

edited 23rd Jun '17 7:36:17 AM by TobiasDrake

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Unknownlight Since: Aug, 2009
#46777: Jun 23rd 2017 at 2:23:27 PM

@Psyga315: Uh... I was following for the first idea, and then I got completely lost for the next two. How did the episode inspire you again?

edited 23rd Jun '17 2:23:37 PM by Unknownlight

Psyga315 Since: Jan, 2001
#46778: Jun 24th 2017 at 6:41:58 AM

[up] Basically the mere presence of Pear Butter helped inspire it.

God_of_Awesome Since: Jan, 2001
#46779: Jun 24th 2017 at 5:08:37 PM

Cel and Luna have to list all the potential trouble makers when they invite all the ageless immortals over for a meeting. They have the deceitful tricksters, the violent warrior and voracious hedonists. Sun Wu Kong is on every list.

KuroiTsubasaTenshi Streamer from Twitch Since: May, 2011
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#46780: Jun 25th 2017 at 4:54:37 PM

New draft time.

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Kurush from Stockholm Since: Feb, 2011 Relationship Status: Desperate
#46781: Jun 27th 2017 at 1:14:57 AM

Someone really liked my Matterhorn story, to the point they outright made a storyline for a sequel.

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#46782: Jun 29th 2017 at 5:44:57 PM

From Dusk to Night's new chapter is live.

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MetaFour Since: Jan, 2001
TobiasDrake Queen of Good Things, Honest (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Arm chopping is not a love language!
Queen of Good Things, Honest
#46784: Jul 2nd 2017 at 1:52:44 PM

Chapter Three of Damaged Goods is drafted.

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MetaFour Since: Jan, 2001
#46785: Jul 2nd 2017 at 4:46:33 PM

Reply to a comment from the previous page:

I looked at the whole caribou thing and went, "Okay, I'll make it a work of fiction in-universe." Then further, "-based on some heavily distorted historical event and figure." And make it sound like an actual thing and not something like a gross fever dream.
And I just read a fic that had an interesting alternate take on the caribou, and the author even said they were meant as a counterpoint to Fall of Equestria. The story was A Different Bridal Path, and in this one, ponies had rumors that the caribou were bloodthirsty cannibals. Then Twilight winds up in a caribou village and finds that they're civilized and friendly... and they really are cannibals. But that's purely out of necessity, because they live on a frozen tundra where resources are scarce. They have to use everything, including the dead bodies of their friends and relatives.

That fic had a lot of really cool ideas. Pity it was so heavy on Expo Dumps.

TobiasDrake Queen of Good Things, Honest (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Arm chopping is not a love language!
Queen of Good Things, Honest
#46786: Jul 3rd 2017 at 4:32:01 PM

Chapter Three of Damaged Goods is now live.

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fredhot16 Don't want to leave but cannot pretend from Baton Rogue, Louisiana. Since: Jan, 2015 Relationship Status: Too sexy for my shirt
Don't want to leave but cannot pretend
#46787: Jul 4th 2017 at 5:58:52 PM

I've been playing Kingdom Hearts: Birth by Sleep and you know what?

There should be a My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic and Kingdom Hearts crossover!

The two would work pretty well together! They're both light-hearted and idealistic, friendship is a major theme of the two, and the Equesteria Girls franchise already opened up the door to other worlds!

edited 14th Nov '17 3:59:32 PM by fredhot16

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YamiVizziniX Since: Jan, 2015 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
#46789: Jul 7th 2017 at 11:16:06 AM

Finally gotten through Urohringr. Well worth the trip as usual. Just about halfway through the series's total wordcount, and hopefully the rest won't take me another two years.

Also approaching the home stretch of catching up with the Triptych Continuum (almost done with A Mark of Appeal, which felt like it dragged some but really picked up in the second half or so) and Starlight Over Detrot (near the end of Act 2). Good times.

There is no beginning. There is no end. There is only... Hooty.
Unknownlight Since: Aug, 2009
#46790: Jul 7th 2017 at 4:09:19 PM

[up] If you're able to mentally separate them at all, which would you say are your favorite and least favorite of the Austraeoh books you've read so far?

YamiVizziniX Since: Jan, 2015 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
#46791: Jul 8th 2017 at 5:56:10 PM

I don't know about a favorite. I wasn't enthused about Innavedr (3), just because it felt like the story was taking long enough to progress and now it would take however many hundreds of thousands of words for everyone to come back together and move forward. One step forward, five steps back. But I got used to it, there were some insane battle sequences, and then when they did finally get back together was the only time I've teared up reading this, so... it balanced out? Maybe that and Odrsjot count as favorites for their giant climaxes.

Also you said you don't know of anyone who's gotten through Foal of the Forest... well, now (actually as of last November) you do. I'm just a chapter into the sequel so far, but since it's relatively short (far more so than most other installments in that series), maybe I'll polish it off before moving forward in Austraeoh and Starlight Act 3 (hopefully finish Act 2 tonight)... but maybe after catching up with Triptych... decisions.
* * *
...Welp, looks like I'm going to be reading some more into Starlight Act 3 instead.surprised

edited 9th Jul '17 8:10:40 AM by YamiVizziniX

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Unknownlight Since: Aug, 2009
#46792: Jul 10th 2017 at 9:07:10 AM

[up] Ha! I remember saying that, it was a long time ago. Ironically, I now know another person who's made it through Foal of the Forest: myself.

And the sequel.

And Book 3.

That's the point where I just could not stand reading it any longer and was finally 100% convinced it was never going to get any better, so I quit. The whole series is nine books long.

I suppose someone who's a fan of soap opera action fics would enjoy it.

edited 10th Jul '17 9:10:32 AM by Unknownlight

SantosLHalper Since: Aug, 2009
#46793: Jul 11th 2017 at 3:58:24 PM

I find the idea apparently common in ACB fics that Equestria knew before hand about Earth and humans, that they teleported to Earth deliberately to make humans into Ponies and that a physical chunk of space was teleported as opposed to the two universe universes merging together to be full of Fridge Logic and bad writing in general.

God_of_Awesome Since: Jan, 2001
#46794: Jul 14th 2017 at 3:26:05 AM

At last, the pony story that drew my attention from my other pony story. Here's the rough draft to the first part of That One Time Where Pinkie Pie Romances All Her Friends.

Zennistrad from The Multiverse Since: Jul, 2011 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#46795: Jul 16th 2017 at 6:19:33 PM

So early today I released the latest chapter of my Digimon/Pony fic as part of a mini-arc I've planned since 2014 that parallels Over A Barrel, and I wrote it with the express intention of setting it up to avoid the kind of "both-sidesy" approach seen in many stories based on real-world colonial conflicts.

Later the exact same day, Lindsay Ellis a video about Disney's Pocahontas why writing this kind of story makes me nervous by illustrating the very kind of thing that I want to avoid:

I'm not honestly sure whether to feel weirded out, grateful for the helpful analysis of what not to do, or more anxious that I might actually screw this up.

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#46796: Jul 17th 2017 at 2:25:18 PM

Pretty late draft, as it took me a bit to get traction, between work going berserk and writer's block trying to stuff up the gaps. Once I finally broke through, though, it all came together.

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kegisak Element of Class Since: Feb, 2011 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
Element of Class
#46797: Jul 17th 2017 at 3:27:03 PM

@Zennistrad: In my experience of writing First Nations characters as a very white Canadian, that anxiety is useful. If you're constantly thinking if you're doing things right, then you're constantly checking yourself to make sure you aren't going offside. And, since I know at least a few of those stories have their issues, it allows you to look back on your failures and learn from them as well.

Fear keeps you sharp; arrogance gets you killed. Or, well, hurts people.

edited 17th Jul '17 3:49:12 PM by kegisak

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TobiasDrake Queen of Good Things, Honest (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Arm chopping is not a love language!
Queen of Good Things, Honest
#46798: Jul 17th 2017 at 9:41:24 PM

Chapter Four of Damaged Goods is drafted.

Very mild spoilers for an upcoming episode; specifically, one character's parents are present in the chapter and are mentioned by name.

edited 17th Jul '17 9:43:33 PM by TobiasDrake

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God_of_Awesome Since: Jan, 2001
#46799: Jul 17th 2017 at 10:43:46 PM

Read it. Sad. May provide edits later when not sleepy.

~

Excerpt from my fic, Rainbow Dash explaining the Cutie Re-Mark:

“Ah, some crazy thing with time travel, tried to stop me from pulling off the sonic rainboom when I was a kid. It turns out I’m the chosen one, though, so when she stopped me from being awesome, it destroyed Equestria.”

Kurush from Stockholm Since: Feb, 2011 Relationship Status: Desperate
#46800: Jul 18th 2017 at 3:10:51 AM

Random Pony: "...Cool." (then walks away, not buying one bit of what Dash said)

I just couldn't resist.

edited 18th Jul '17 3:11:14 AM by Kurush


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