So, because I've gotten no responses, I'd at least like to know something. Is the concept
a) So awesome you immediately decided you couldn't add anything to it,
b) So terrible you didn't want anything to do with it,
c) So bland you didn't care, or
d) So unorganized that you didn't finish reading the post?
If it's the last one, I can fix that immediately. If it's the rest, I'd at least like to know your initial response to the premise and characters, even if you don't have any suggestions at the moment.
edited 26th May '11 10:00:53 AM by AngryBob
Um, what is the actual question you're asking here? Is it just a general 'what do you think', or 'any ideas for new characters to add', or what?
Scepticism and doubt lead to study and investigation, and investigation is the beginning of wisdom. - Clarence DarrowAll of the above.
I'll also give more detail on the plot and setting.
edited 26th May '11 11:13:10 AM by AngryBob
The setting(The Canvas) is one that brings together one(1) creature from each of many alternate universes. They all share one thing in common: These creatures were responsible for(directly or indirectly), failed to stop, were the last victim of, or were otherwise connected to the end of their world. There's no specific rule that decides who ends up in the Canvas and who doesn't, as long as they have even the most tenuous connection to the end of their world.
Some of these characters are blatant ripoffs, some are homages, some are original(or at least, I'd like to think so), and some are mix/matches of existing tropes. I need a whole menagerie of them, and am coming up short in the creativity department. Also, feel free to tell me what you think of the characters themselves and the setting/plot.
The plot is for a tabletop campaign I plan to run sometime in the future, with the P Cs being some of these "remnants." Ultimately, the "circles" of remnants compete, cooperate, and otherwise work through the levels of the Canvas(Which is hardly a safe environment in and of itself) to sow the seeds of the new multiverse. Details below.
Characters so far:
Expansion on the plot and setting:
The canvas is made up of five layers.
The first layer, the Masque, is the layer the remnants awaken in. It crawls with dangerous creatures and other remnants. Here, the remnants seek out their "circle," a group of remnants they have a apecial connection to. In game terms, all it really means is "characters that they'll be penalized for attacking." Once the circles locate an actual, physical circle, they are lowered into the Devoid.
The Devoid is where most of the story takes place. It's an infinitely large white room. As the circles collect "meat,"(by defeating minions, automata generated by the Canvas itself, and completing quests given out by similar automata and generated by the Canvas, and raiding other circles, if they are so inclined) they build camps with useful buildings(don't know how mixing Age Of Empires and tabletop gaming will work out, but hey, there's a first time for everything) and eventually construct the gate to the next layer.
The Collage is a mashup of all of the surviving circles' home worlds. I say surviving because some of the circles at this point will have been wiped out, either by minions or by other circles. This layer contains the sequestered components for another gate. Each circle has to find the components to its gate while avoiding the more powerful minions and probably the more hostile circles. The next gate leads to the Coliseum.
In the Coliseum, the ban against T King is dropped, and each circle begins in a tower. The remaining remnants must gather a piece from each tower, each of which is guarded by a Titan, an enemy of immense power. Unlike the Collage, where there were components of many gates, each component here is a component of exactly one gate. The Canvas presumably intends the circles to kill each other off, but this is unlikely. Regardless, the last gate leads to a comparatively small layer.
The last layer is Yggdrassil, which is, coincidentally, the name of the entity that the surviving remnants must defeat. Once defeated, its energies(or whatever I decide) can be used by the survivors to create the new multiverse.
edited 26th May '11 11:26:24 AM by AngryBob