The backstory: I'm writing a story about an ordinary teenaged boy, who finds out the incredibly hot and sexy girl who saved his life two years earlier has been kidnapped by an evil magician, and is currently cursed.
She is tortured every day, and is forced to wear nothing except leather underwear, and so she tries to escape. She manages to escape, and meets up with the teenager again, and they have sex and start dating.
Then she is kidnapped again, and turned into a rabbit as a punishment. The boy manages to save her, but she is still a rabbit, and to show her that he doesn't mind what she looks like, he still thinks she's hot, they have sex.
I really don't know how to write this, I'm trying to make it really sad and touching, that no matter what, he still likes her, but it's coming across really stupid and narmy.
How do I write this?
PS-I'm a virgin, so I'm not good at writing sex either.
"Like a lover in the sunset, the sky falls down." -A line from my current novel.