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Mort08 Pirate AND writer! from Oklahoma Since: Feb, 2011 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
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#1101: Jul 2nd 2012 at 7:08:18 PM

So I was thinking of ways the story could have been a little more interesting, and I came up with something; what if the spell had wiped Elinor's memory?

We established in the first act that Elinor is a pretty tough lady, and a throwaway line in the One Dialogue, Two Conversations scene hints that she wasn't too crazy about the idea of being married off, either. Perhaps in her youth, she could have been a bit like Merida. With the memory of her family gone, she escapes the castle because she doesn't want to marry Fergus. Merida goes after her to bring her back. More mother/daughter conflict ensues, only with the roles reversed, and by being forced to take her mother's former point of view, she ends up being able to understand it better while she and Elinor realize they're Not So Different.

Granted, some more changes might have to be made, but I think this would have made a much more entertaining film, not to mention a good source of the banter between heroes that we usually get from Pixar movies.

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#1103: Jul 2nd 2012 at 10:25:25 PM

[up][up]That's certainly more interesting than what we got. And I think if the movie had been done in any way similar to that, I would like Merida more.

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#1104: Jul 2nd 2012 at 10:32:51 PM

Establishing the mothers past would have been a great use of parrallels that the movie had, but didn't use (like the be careful what you wish for plot). If they had developed those more, the movie could have been more interesting.

maxwellelvis Mad Scientist Wannabe from undisclosed location Since: Oct, 2009 Relationship Status: In my bunk
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#1106: Jul 3rd 2012 at 7:13:34 PM

[up]PIXAR YOU MAGNIFICENT BASTARDS!

Of course, don't you know anything about ALCHEMY?!- Twin clones of Ivan the Great
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#1107: Jul 3rd 2012 at 7:50:14 PM

[up][up] It's a camper, is it an anachronism joke or is it a call to another movie?

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#1108: Jul 3rd 2012 at 7:57:15 PM

It's the Pizza Planet truck. You can see the rocket ship on top.

phoenixdaughterAM Wiping All Out from Cursed college Since: Jan, 2010 Relationship Status: Wishing you were here
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#1109: Jul 3rd 2012 at 8:35:44 PM

[up][up][up] I WATCH YOUR MOVIES!!

Is there anything for Monsters University?

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Mort08 Pirate AND writer! from Oklahoma Since: Feb, 2011 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
Psychobabble6 from the spark of Westeros Since: May, 2011
#1111: Jul 3rd 2012 at 8:48:16 PM

[lol]Oh Pixar, you devil! And I forgot to even look for those things.

And if I claim to be a wise man, well, it surely means that I don't know.
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#1113: Jul 3rd 2012 at 8:56:01 PM

And if I claim to be a wise man, well, it surely means that I don't know.
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#1115: Jul 3rd 2012 at 9:28:01 PM

Oh, I didn't see the rocket, I just thought it was part of her hands in the first picture. Wow, that was a cool insert.

EDIT: Is the carving Sully? I can't see it well.

edited 3rd Jul '12 11:17:04 PM by DrPsyche

GREGTHECAT Greg 'The Cat' Longcrier from The Corner of the Paper Since: Dec, 2009
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#1116: Jul 4th 2012 at 12:24:31 PM

^^^I'm supposed to see Ralph, right? Clever.

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#1118: Jul 4th 2012 at 12:37:42 PM

[up]It's supposed to be Sulley...

right?

HidingGames Awesomebender Since: Apr, 2011
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#1119: Jul 4th 2012 at 1:14:14 PM

[up] Of course, unless somebody else can find another Monsters Inc. reference or Pixar decided to advertise for Disney's Animation.

RobbieRotten Since: Nov, 2009 Relationship Status: 700 wives and 300 concubines
#1120: Jul 4th 2012 at 1:19:20 PM

Just saw it and...it was really good! [[spoilers: I'll link a written review later, but for now, i'll say it was a lot of fun, had good characters, and good emotional moments. but, i do think some bits feel rewrote and soem bits stop it from being an A+ movie. but as it is, i give it a solid A]]

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#1121: Jul 4th 2012 at 1:36:35 PM

[up][up] So it is Sulley, and not Ralf?

edited 4th Jul '12 1:36:43 PM by DrPsyche

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#1122: Jul 4th 2012 at 2:01:13 PM

[up]Ralph, not Ralf (I'm hoping it's Ralph)

Shota Since: Oct, 2010 Relationship Status: Dancing with myself
#1123: Jul 4th 2012 at 2:05:03 PM

[up][up]Please tell me you know that Wreck It Ralph is done by Disney and that Sulley is from a Pixar film, right? Please, please!

edited 4th Jul '12 2:05:19 PM by Shota

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#1124: Jul 4th 2012 at 2:11:00 PM

[up] I do, I just thought Pixar would make some references to Disney, especially since Ralph is coming out this year and Monsters University is coming out next year. Aw well, it may be coming out next year, but it's still Pixar's next movie, so it does make sense (That's why it was my first guess back in 1115).

edited 4th Jul '12 2:16:31 PM by DrPsyche

Shota Since: Oct, 2010 Relationship Status: Dancing with myself
#1125: Jul 4th 2012 at 2:57:00 PM

I can't remember a moment where Pixar included a cameo of a non-Pixar character.


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