Literature / The Wishing Maiden
"If I could have any wish,
I'd wish that I could wed a prince.
Be happy every moment since,
The dearest wish that I have."
— The shop girl's lament.
Written by R.R Hood
, The Wishing Maiden
is available for free online here
.Red-haired rogue Jacquotte
leads the infamous Red Quintet, a Five-Man Band
traveling where ever they please and doing as they like, all in the pursuit of adventure. Circumstance brings them to Felicitie, a thriving kingdom in which the citizens have fallen into the mindset that living in peaceful prosperity is dull
, and are starting to grow restless...
Particularly as tales of a legendary maiden, who grants every wish she hears, start to spread as more than myth.
The Red Quintet is charged with tracking down the Wishing Maiden on behalf of the Prince Caietanus and his showpiece of an adviser, Balthazar
, in exchange for not being thrown in prison.
Interspersed with rhyme, The Wishing Maiden
is a fatalistic Fairy Tale
that explores the more destructive aspects of hope and dreams.
Tropes found in The Wishing Maiden:
- Action Girl: Jacquotte.
- Ambiguously Bi: Asha makes mention of a man named Willem who loved her, but avoids stating how she felt about him.
- Anti-Hero: Jacquotte is on the wrong side of the law and is shown unrepentantly killing a vanquished enemy.
- Asshole Victim: Caietanus.
- Bar Brawl: The Red Quintet starts one, and are subsequently caught by the lawmen.
- Be Careful What You Wish For: Not the overall message of the story, but significant nonetheless.
- Beauty Is Never Tarnished: Asha, despite being cuffed at the bottom of a well for a hundred years, is still beautiful. Possibly a Justified Trope in that it's implied someone wished for her to be that way.
- Bookends: The beginning and closing rhyme follows the same structure.
- Blessed with Suck: Asha.
- Braids of Action: Bron, the most physically powerful of the Quintet, wears her hair in a long braid.
- Complete Immortality: Asha does not age, or die.
- Damsel in Distress: Asha.
- Death by Irony
- Death by Materialism: Goes hand-in-hand with the above trope.
- Dream Sequence: The Wishing Maiden first appears to Jacquotte in one of these. She comes to her again the same way later, when being held prisoner in Felicitie.
- Embodiment of Vice: Grete, unsurprisingly.
- Empty Shell: Asha has shades of this.
- Erotic Dream: Part of the Dream Sequence.
- Exact Words: The nature of wish-granting.
- Five-Man Band:
- For Your Own Good: When Bron knocks out Jacquotte to steal Asha away.
- Forgiven, but Not Forgotten: Jacquotte, to Bron.
- Great Offscreen War: Rather than having taken place in the past, one appears to be on the brink of brewing.
- Ho Yay: Possibly one-sided between Balthazar and Caietanus. Some of Balthazar's lyrical musings about the Prince could be construed as...suggestive. Overlaps with Foe Yay.
- Hope Bringer: Asha; before she is freed, the idea of her gives the people something to dream about. Once she's out...
- Hope Springs Eternal: Inverted. Once 'hope' is free, everyone starts pursuing wild dreams, and chaos abounds.
- I Want My Beloved to Be Happy: Lyall.
- Incompatible Orientation: Lyall and Jacquotte. When Lyall wishes to be attractive, to her, he's turned into a woman.
- Caietanus (incorrectly) assumes this will be the case between Jacquotte and Asha, which is part of why he decided to send a woman to find his potential bride.
- Inner Monologue: Sometimes Inner Monologue Conversation, written in poetry.
- Kind Restraints: Asha put herself in captivity, with the aid of her once-beau, Willem.
- Lady of Adventure: Jacquotte.
- Les Yay: Apart from the obvious, between Jacquotte and Asha, there's a bit between Asha and Bron, as well.
- Lipstick Lesbian: Possibly Jacquotte; she is referred to as having long hair and being quite pretty, but there is some overlap due to her roguish tendencies and ability to fight capably.
- Literal Genie: Asha cannot help but be this.
- Loophole Abuse: Naturally.
- Manipulative Bastard: Balthazar, though it's mostly off-screen.
- Meaningful Name: The four other members of the Quintet all have names that identify a key personality trait: Grete is greedy, Bron is brawny, Lyall is loyal, and Sly is...well, sly.
- The Wishing Maiden's name is 'Asha', meaning 'wish, desire, hope'.
- Jacquotte Delahaye was a French pirate known for her vivid red hair.
- The Wishing Maiden is rife with this, including the names of places (Felicitie being a reference to 'luck', and ship they arrived on being called the Pandora...)
- Mystical White Hair: Asha.
- Power Degeneration: Every wish Asha grants causes her extreme, potentially deadly, pain. However, since she's also cursed with Complete Immortality, it just hurts like she's dying.
- Power Incontinence: Asha has no control over which wishes she grants.
- Pyrrhic Victory: Leads to the Downer Ending.
- Rescue Romance: Jacquotte thinks she's pursuing this. Turns out there are...other factors.
- Royal Brat: Prince Caietanus is an adult version.
- Shrouded in Myth: Part of what makes the Wishing Maiden so difficult to find.
- Single Stanza Song: Not always only one stanza, but the lyrical snippets that display the characters' thoughts aren't full-song length.
- Thrown Down a Well: Where Asha is found.
- Treacherous Advisor: Balthazar has plots of his own, against Caietanus. He can't entirely be blamed for this.
- Unresolved Sexual Tension
- Unwanted Rescue: Asha put herself at the bottom of the well.
- Yes-Man: Balthazar, for his prince. He loathes it.