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* RonTheDeathEater: Dumbledore is the BigBad. Yes, that Dumbledore.
** Snape. Not only is he turned into a rapist, he also tries to rape LILY, showing yet again that Dally couldn't give a crap for canon.
*** Edward is a borderline case- he acts like an even bigger JerkAss than his worst moments in ''Literature/TheTwilightSaga'' and pulls a FaceHeelTurn eventually. The author seems to like him, though... EvilIsSexy, perhaps?
** Snape. Not only is he turned into a rapist, he also tries to rape LILY, showing yet again that Dally couldn't give a crap for canon.
*** Edward is a borderline case- he acts like an even bigger JerkAss than his worst moments in ''Literature/TheTwilightSaga'' and pulls a FaceHeelTurn eventually. The author seems to like him, though... EvilIsSexy, perhaps?
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** Snape. Not only is he turned into a rapist, he also tries to rape LILY, showing yet again that Dally couldn't give a crap for canon.
*** Edward is a borderline case- he acts like an even bigger JerkAss than his worst moments in ''Literature/TheTwilightSaga'' and pulls a FaceHeelTurn eventually. The author seems to like him, though... EvilIsSexy, perhaps?
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* AlasPoorScrappy: Bella's death to ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' haters, even though she's TheWoobie here.
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* AlasPoorScrappy: Bella's death to ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' ''[[Literature/TheTwilightSaga Twilight]]'' haters, even though she's TheWoobie here.
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* FridgeHorror: In ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'', vampires had to eat humans to gain {{red eyes|TakeWarning}}. Dally has bright scarlet eyes in every drawing of her. [[ImAHumanitarian How does she keep them that bright of a red?]]
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* FridgeHorror: In ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'', ''Literature/TheTwilightSaga'', vampires had to eat humans to gain {{red eyes|TakeWarning}}. Dally has bright scarlet eyes in every drawing of her. [[ImAHumanitarian How does she keep them that bright of a red?]]
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* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: This is one of those rare stories where you actually will be ''rooting for'' and ''[[TheWoobie pitying]]'' Bella Swan, no matter what you think of her in ''Literature/{{Twilight}}''.
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* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: This is one of those rare stories where you actually will be ''rooting for'' and ''[[TheWoobie pitying]]'' Bella Swan, no matter what you think of her in ''Literature/{{Twilight}}''.''Literature/TheTwilightSaga''.
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*** Edward is a borderline case- he acts like an even bigger JerkAss than his worst moments in ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' and pulls a FaceHeelTurn eventually. The author seems to like him, though... EvilIsSexy, perhaps?
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*** Edward is a borderline case- he acts like an even bigger JerkAss than his worst moments in ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' ''Literature/TheTwilightSaga'' and pulls a FaceHeelTurn eventually. The author seems to like him, though... EvilIsSexy, perhaps?
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* BileFascination
* CanonDefilement
* CanonDefilement
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* BileFascination
BileFascination: Being this is an attempt to create the worst piece of FanFiction ever, this was expected.
*CanonDefilementCanonDefilement: Loads and loads.
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* NauseaFuel
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* NauseaFuelNauseaFuel: Loads and loads.
* QuirkyWork: '''Especially''' the chapters after they leave Hogwarts onward.
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* {{Squick}}
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* {{Squick}}{{Squick}}: Loads and loads.
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* WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs: '''Especially''' the chapters after they leave Hogwarts onward.
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* TastesLikeDiabetes: Some of the biography and chapter pictures are cutesy chibis. It wouldn't be so bad if it [[SurpriseCreepy contrasted]] [[{{Gorn}} the feel of the story so much]].
** Shadow's song for Dally when she's in the hospital waiting to give birth.
--->“youre my honey bunch sugar puff
--->Hubby ubby umpkins
--->Youre my sweetie pie
--->Youre my cuppy cake gumdrop
--->Shnoogum boogum you're
--->The apple of my eye…”
** Shadow's song for Dally when she's in the hospital waiting to give birth.
--->“youre my honey bunch sugar puff
--->Hubby ubby umpkins
--->Youre my sweetie pie
--->Youre my cuppy cake gumdrop
--->Shnoogum boogum you're
--->The apple of my eye…”
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Uncanny Valley is IUEO now and the subjective version has been split; cleaning up misuse and ZCE in the process
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* UncannyValley: The only way to describe [[http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss251/dallypics/dallyfuneal.jpg this image from Chapter 8]].
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* AngstWhatAngst: Professor [[WesternAnimation/TheNightmareBeforeChristmas Skellington's]] reaction to finding [[Franchise/HarryPotter Snape's]] and [[Literature/{{Twilight}} Bella's]] corpses? "Now we will need a new teacher again."
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* AngstWhatAngst: Professor [[WesternAnimation/TheNightmareBeforeChristmas Skellington's]] Skellington's reaction to finding [[Franchise/HarryPotter Snape's]] Snape and [[Literature/{{Twilight}} Bella's]] Bella's corpses? "Now we will need a new teacher again."
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* DesignatedHero: The main characters kill [[Literature/{{Twilight}} Bella]] because she is being [[RapeAsDrama raped by]] [[Franchise/HarryPotter Snape]], for starters.
* DesignatedVillain: Franchise/{{Ha|rryPotter}}grid doesn't do anything in the story and still suffers a CruelAndUnusualDeath. Also, [[Literature/{{Twilight}} Bella]], while not neccessarily a "villain" in the story, is still antagonized when she is a [[RapeAsDrama rape victim]].
* DesignatedVillain: Franchise/{{Ha|rryPotter}}grid doesn't do anything in the story and still suffers a CruelAndUnusualDeath. Also, [[Literature/{{Twilight}} Bella]], while not neccessarily a "villain" in the story, is still antagonized when she is a [[RapeAsDrama rape victim]].
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* DesignatedHero: The main characters kill [[Literature/{{Twilight}} Bella]] Bella because she is being [[RapeAsDrama raped by]] [[Franchise/HarryPotter Snape]], Snape, for starters.
* DesignatedVillain:Franchise/{{Ha|rryPotter}}grid Hagrid doesn't do anything in the story and still suffers a CruelAndUnusualDeath. Also, [[Literature/{{Twilight}} Bella]], Bella, while not neccessarily necessarily a "villain" in the story, is still antagonized when she is a [[RapeAsDrama rape victim]].
* DesignatedVillain:
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* DracoInLeatherPants: [[Franchise/HarryPotter Draco]] himself and Franchise/{{S|onicTheHedgehog}}hadow, who are '''nothing''' like their canon selves.
** Hilariously enough, [[InformedFlaw Draco is referred to as "evil" in his biography]].
** Hilariously enough, [[InformedFlaw Draco is referred to as "evil" in his biography]].
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* DracoInLeatherPants: [[Franchise/HarryPotter Draco]] Draco himself and Franchise/{{S|onicTheHedgehog}}hadow, Shadow, who are '''nothing''' like their canon selves.
** Hilariously enough, [[InformedFlaw Draco is referred to as "evil" in his biography]].selves.
** Hilariously enough, [[InformedFlaw Draco is referred to as "evil" in his biography]].
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* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: This is one of those rare stories where you actually will be ''rooting for'' and ''[[TheWoobie pitying]]'' [[Literature/{{Twilight}} Bella]], no matter what you think of her in ''Literature/{{Twilight}}''.
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* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: This is one of those rare stories where you actually will be ''rooting for'' and ''[[TheWoobie pitying]]'' [[Literature/{{Twilight}} Bella]], Bella Swan, no matter what you think of her in ''Literature/{{Twilight}}''.
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* RonTheDeathEater: [[Franchise/HarryPotter Dumbledore]] is the BigBad. Yes, that Dumbledore.
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* RonTheDeathEater: [[Franchise/HarryPotter Dumbledore]] Dumbledore is the BigBad. Yes, that Dumbledore.
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* TheWoobie: ''[[Literature/{{Twilight}} Bella]]'', of all people. She loses Edward to Dally, who flops between him and [[Manga/YuYuHakusho Hiei]]. [[DesignatedVillain She has fingers pointed at her for being mad at Edward for liking Dally]], but no one has problems with Dally going back and forth between guys. Then, she's kidnapped by Snape, {{rape|AsDrama}}d, and she dies. The biggest {{kick|TheDog}} of all? After all that, Dally ''chooses Hiei anyway'', making Bella's loss meaningless.
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* TheWoobie: ''[[Literature/{{Twilight}} Bella]]'', ''Bella'', of all people. She loses Edward to Dally, who flops between him and [[Manga/YuYuHakusho Hiei]].Hiei. [[DesignatedVillain She has fingers pointed at her for being mad at Edward for liking Dally]], but no one has problems with Dally going back and forth between guys. Then, she's kidnapped by Snape, {{rape|AsDrama}}d, and she dies. The biggest {{kick|TheDog}} of all? After all that, Dally ''chooses Hiei anyway'', making Bella's loss meaningless.
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** In Chapter 9, the chapter illustration is a screencap from WesternAnimation/StarWarsTheCloneWars. It has nothing to do with the chapter at all.
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** In Chapter 9, the chapter illustration is a screencap from WesternAnimation/StarWarsTheCloneWars.''WesternAnimation/StarWarsTheCloneWars''. It has nothing to do with the chapter at all.
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Misuse.
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* FamilyUnfriendlyAesop: Hey kids- if you get pregnant at a young age while still in school via a full-grown stranger, you'll be rich enough to buy a mansion and be loved by all!
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Dewicking per TRS decision.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Jack's BiTheWay moment comes out of nowhere and is never referenced again.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Jack's BiTheWay bisexuality moment comes out of nowhere and is never referenced again.
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* [[HoYay Les Yay]]: Could also double as BiTheWay:
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* [[HoYay Les Yay]]: Could also double as BiTheWay:LesYay:
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** Duh, I don't know, maybe [[CaptainObvious because you keep trying to seduce him and claim he's yours only to cockblock him]]?
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** Duh, I don't know, maybe [[CaptainObvious because you keep trying to seduce him and claim he's yours only to cockblock him]]?him?
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** Hagrid, to a lesser extent, if only for his CruelAndUnusualDeath, especially since he's never shown to actually be helping Dumbledore in raping and is only noted to be his sex partner.
* JustForFun/XMeetsY: ''FanFic/BrewdeningLove'' meets Fanfic/MyImmortal... [[ThisIsYourPremiseOnDrugs on drugs]].
* JustForFun/XMeetsY: ''FanFic/BrewdeningLove'' meets Fanfic/MyImmortal... [[ThisIsYourPremiseOnDrugs on drugs]].
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** Hagrid, to a lesser extent, if only for his CruelAndUnusualDeath, especially since he's never shown to actually be helping Dumbledore in raping and is only noted to be his sex partner.
* JustForFun/XMeetsY: ''FanFic/BrewdeningLove'' meets Fanfic/MyImmortal... [[ThisIsYourPremiseOnDrugs on drugs]].partner.
* JustForFun/XMeetsY: ''FanFic/BrewdeningLove'' meets Fanfic/MyImmortal... [[ThisIsYourPremiseOnDrugs on drugs]].
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** Hagrid, to a lesser extent, if only for his CruelAndUnusualDeath, especially since he's never shown to actually be helping Dumbledore in raping and is only noted to be his sex partner.
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** Hagrid, to a lesser extent, if only for his CruelAndUnusualDeath, especially since he's never shown to actually be helping Dumbledore in raping and is only noted to be his sex partner.partner.
* JustForFun/XMeetsY: ''FanFic/BrewdeningLove'' meets Fanfic/MyImmortal... [[ThisIsYourPremiseOnDrugs on drugs]].
* JustForFun/XMeetsY: ''FanFic/BrewdeningLove'' meets Fanfic/MyImmortal... [[ThisIsYourPremiseOnDrugs on drugs]].
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* TheyJustDidntCare: Especially after Shadow's birth, as shown by the author lazily shortening names and {{lampshad|eHanging}}ing it.
--->“I have em now,” Bellatricks said through a walkie-talkie to Dum. An dMyst. (abbreviated for faster).
--->“I have em now,” Bellatricks said through a walkie-talkie to Dum. An dMyst. (abbreviated for faster).
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** In Chapter 9, the chapter illustration is a screencap from WesternAnimation/StarWarsTheCloneWars. [[TheyJustDidntCare It has nothing to do with the chapter at all.]]
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** In Chapter 9, the chapter illustration is a screencap from WesternAnimation/StarWarsTheCloneWars. [[TheyJustDidntCare It has nothing to do with the chapter at all.]]
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Chained sinkholes.
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* RonTheDeathEater: [[Franchise/HarryPotter Dumbledore]] is the BigBad. [[CoolOldGuy Yes,]] [[TheObiWan that]] [[BadassGrandpa Dumbledore.]]
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* RonTheDeathEater: [[Franchise/HarryPotter Dumbledore]] is the BigBad. [[CoolOldGuy Yes,]] [[TheObiWan that]] [[BadassGrandpa Yes, that Dumbledore.]]
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** In Chapter 9, the chapter illustration is a screencap from StarWarsTheCloneWars. [[TheyJustDidntCare It has nothing to do with the chapter at all]].
** In Chapter 13, Link turns on the television and completely breaks from the plot to [[TakeThat mock a DeviantArt user]] who is placed in the Special Olympics in this story and insulted as "a boy/little girl tansvesite THING on the Telly and it had greasy [[UsefulNotes/BarackObama barack]] hair and a butt chin and was ugly and clearly the most retarded of them all."
** In Chapter 13, Link turns on the television and completely breaks from the plot to [[TakeThat mock a DeviantArt user]] who is placed in the Special Olympics in this story and insulted as "a boy/little girl tansvesite THING on the Telly and it had greasy [[UsefulNotes/BarackObama barack]] hair and a butt chin and was ugly and clearly the most retarded of them all."
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** In Chapter 9, the chapter illustration is a screencap from StarWarsTheCloneWars. WesternAnimation/StarWarsTheCloneWars. [[TheyJustDidntCare It has nothing to do with the chapter at all]].
all.]]
** In Chapter 13, Link turns on the television and completely breaks from the plot to [[TakeThat mock a DeviantArt user]] who is placed in the Special Olympics in this story and insulted as "a boy/little girl tansvesite THING on the Telly and it had greasy[[UsefulNotes/BarackObama barack]] UsefulNotes/{{barack|Obama}} hair and a butt chin and was ugly and clearly the most retarded of them all."
** In Chapter 13, Link turns on the television and completely breaks from the plot to [[TakeThat mock a DeviantArt user]] who is placed in the Special Olympics in this story and insulted as "a boy/little girl tansvesite THING on the Telly and it had greasy
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* [[TheyJustDidntCare They Just Didn't Care]]: Especially after Shadow's birth, as shown by the author lazily shortening names and [[{{Lampshaded}} lampshading]] it.
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* [[TheyJustDidntCare They Just Didn't Care]]: TheyJustDidntCare: Especially after Shadow's birth, as shown by the author lazily shortening names and [[{{Lampshaded}} lampshading]] {{lampshad|eHanging}}ing it.
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* [[WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs What Do You Mean, It Wasn't Made On Drugs?]]: '''Especially''' the chapters after they leave Hogwarts onward.
* TheWoobie: ''[[Literature/{{Twilight}} Bella]]'', of all people. She loses [[RelationshipSue Edward]] to [[MarySue Dally]], who flops between him and [[Manga/YuYuHakusho Hiei]]. [[DesignatedVillain She has fingers pointed at her for being mad at Edward for liking Dally]], but no one has problems with Dally going back and forth between guys. Then, she's kidnapped by Snape, [[RapeasDrama raped]], and she dies. The biggest [[KickTheDog kick]] of all? After all that, Dally ''chooses Hiei anyway'', making Bella's loss meaningless.
** She thought Snape was Edward, so [[NotIfTheyEnjoyedItRationalization the fic tries to make Bella look bad for enjoying being screwed by another guy even though she was blinded and had no clue what was happening]]. Oh, but if Dally goes to Hiei over Edward or vice versa? [[PuritySue She's still a perfect little angel!]]
* TheWoobie: ''[[Literature/{{Twilight}} Bella]]'', of all people. She loses [[RelationshipSue Edward]] to [[MarySue Dally]], who flops between him and [[Manga/YuYuHakusho Hiei]]. [[DesignatedVillain She has fingers pointed at her for being mad at Edward for liking Dally]], but no one has problems with Dally going back and forth between guys. Then, she's kidnapped by Snape, [[RapeasDrama raped]], and she dies. The biggest [[KickTheDog kick]] of all? After all that, Dally ''chooses Hiei anyway'', making Bella's loss meaningless.
** She thought Snape was Edward, so [[NotIfTheyEnjoyedItRationalization the fic tries to make Bella look bad for enjoying being screwed by another guy even though she was blinded and had no clue what was happening]]. Oh, but if Dally goes to Hiei over Edward or vice versa? [[PuritySue She's still a perfect little angel!]]
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* [[WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs What Do You Mean, It Wasn't Made On Drugs?]]: WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs: '''Especially''' the chapters after they leave Hogwarts onward.
* TheWoobie: ''[[Literature/{{Twilight}} Bella]]'', of all people. She loses[[RelationshipSue Edward]] Edward to [[MarySue Dally]], Dally, who flops between him and [[Manga/YuYuHakusho Hiei]]. [[DesignatedVillain She has fingers pointed at her for being mad at Edward for liking Dally]], but no one has problems with Dally going back and forth between guys. Then, she's kidnapped by Snape, [[RapeasDrama raped]], {{rape|AsDrama}}d, and she dies. The biggest [[KickTheDog kick]] {{kick|TheDog}} of all? After all that, Dally ''chooses Hiei anyway'', making Bella's loss meaningless.
** She thought Snape was Edward, so [[NotIfTheyEnjoyedItRationalization the fic tries to make Bella look bad for enjoying being screwed by another guy even though she was blinded and had no clue what was happening]]. Oh, but if Dally goes to Hiei over Edward or vice versa?[[PuritySue She's still a perfect little angel!]]angel!
* TheWoobie: ''[[Literature/{{Twilight}} Bella]]'', of all people. She loses
** She thought Snape was Edward, so [[NotIfTheyEnjoyedItRationalization the fic tries to make Bella look bad for enjoying being screwed by another guy even though she was blinded and had no clue what was happening]]. Oh, but if Dally goes to Hiei over Edward or vice versa?
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* TheWoobie: ''[[Literature/{{Twilight}} Bella]]'', of all people. She loses [[RelationshipSue Edward]] to [[MarySue Dally]], who flops between him and [[YuYuHakusho Hiei]]. [[DesignatedVillain She has fingers pointed at her for being mad at Edward for liking Dally]], but no one has problems with Dally going back and forth between guys. Then, she's kidnapped by Snape, [[RapeasDrama raped]], and she dies. The biggest [[KickTheDog kick]] of all? After all that, Dally ''chooses Hiei anyway'', making Bella's loss meaningless.
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* TheWoobie: ''[[Literature/{{Twilight}} Bella]]'', of all people. She loses [[RelationshipSue Edward]] to [[MarySue Dally]], who flops between him and [[YuYuHakusho [[Manga/YuYuHakusho Hiei]]. [[DesignatedVillain She has fingers pointed at her for being mad at Edward for liking Dally]], but no one has problems with Dally going back and forth between guys. Then, she's kidnapped by Snape, [[RapeasDrama raped]], and she dies. The biggest [[KickTheDog kick]] of all? After all that, Dally ''chooses Hiei anyway'', making Bella's loss meaningless.
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Removed a lot of Sue tropes, since they all are Flame Bait tropes that should not be allowed; see the Fame Bait page for more details.
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* BlackHoleSue: Everyone drops anything if anything happens with Dally and later [[GodModeSue baby Shadow]]. Also, every male wants to get into Dally's pants, [[{{Squick}} human or otherwise]].
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* DesignatedVillain: [[Franchise/HarryPotter Hagrid]] doesn't do anything in the story and still suffers a CruelAndUnusualDeath. Also, [[Literature/{{Twilight}} Bella]], while not neccessarily a "villain" in the story, is still antagonized when she is a [[RapeAsDrama rape victim]].
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* DesignatedVillain: [[Franchise/HarryPotter Hagrid]] Franchise/{{Ha|rryPotter}}grid doesn't do anything in the story and still suffers a CruelAndUnusualDeath. Also, [[Literature/{{Twilight}} Bella]], while not neccessarily a "villain" in the story, is still antagonized when she is a [[RapeAsDrama rape victim]].
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* DracoInLeatherPants: [[Franchise/HarryPotter Draco]] himself and [[SonicTheHedgehog Shadow]], who are '''nothing''' like their canon selves.
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* DracoInLeatherPants: [[Franchise/HarryPotter Draco]] himself and [[SonicTheHedgehog Shadow]], Franchise/{{S|onicTheHedgehog}}hadow, who are '''nothing''' like their canon selves.
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* FridgeHorror: In ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'', vampires had to eat humans to gain [[RedEyesTakeWarning red eyes]]. Dally has bright scarlet eyes in every drawing of her. [[ImAHumanitarian How does she keep them that bright of a red?]]
* GaryStu[=/=]GodModeSue: Baby Shadow, who makes [[Literature/{{Twilight}} Renesmee]] look like a realistic infant.
* GaryStu[=/=]GodModeSue: Baby Shadow, who makes [[Literature/{{Twilight}} Renesmee]] look like a realistic infant.
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* FridgeHorror: In ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'', vampires had to eat humans to gain [[RedEyesTakeWarning red eyes]].{{red eyes|TakeWarning}}. Dally has bright scarlet eyes in every drawing of her. [[ImAHumanitarian How does she keep them that bright of a red?]]
* GaryStu[=/=]GodModeSue: Baby Shadow, who makes [[Literature/{{Twilight}} Renesmee]] look like a realistic infant.red?]]
* GaryStu[=/=]GodModeSue: Baby Shadow, who makes [[Literature/{{Twilight}} Renesmee]] look like a realistic infant.
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* LesYay: [[HoYay Les Yay]]: Could also double as BiTheWay:
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* MarySue: Dally, naturally. She's a [[OurVampiresAreDifferent vampire]], a witch, has [[Franchise/XMen mutant]] powers, every boy wants to get into her pants, everyone loves her, her mother is ComicBook/{{Mystique}}, and her [[GodModeSue son]] is perfect in every way. She's [[BlackHoleSue Black hole]] [[RelationshipSue Relationship]] [[JerkSue Jerk Sue]], used so that the author can [[MyGirlIsASlut bang every guy in]] [[AuthorAppeal every fandom she knows about]].
** Her biography even says under powers: "[[OurVampiresAreDifferent Vampire powers]], witch powers, [[HealingHands can heal wounds fast]] [[FromBadToWorse (more to come)]]"
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** The vast majority of the RougeAnglesOfSatin and [[{{Narm}} Narmy]] quotes became memetic on the forums, and to a lesser extent on some other sites.
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* PossessionSue: [[YuYuHakusho Hiei]] is twisted into a [[ChivalrousPervert sex-hungry]] LoveInterest who lives to screw [[MarySue Dally]].
* PuritySue: [[AuthorAvatar Dally]] can do no wrong and is loved by all.
* RelationshipSue: Dally as the stand-in, vicariously-living-through variety, who is a [[NinjaPirateZombieRobot vampire witch]] who is [[PuritySue loved by all]]. For the perfect significant other flavor, there's [[YuYuHakusho Hiei]], who has been derailed into a personified sex toy.
* PuritySue: [[AuthorAvatar Dally]] can do no wrong and is loved by all.
* RelationshipSue: Dally as the stand-in, vicariously-living-through variety, who is a [[NinjaPirateZombieRobot vampire witch]] who is [[PuritySue loved by all]]. For the perfect significant other flavor, there's [[YuYuHakusho Hiei]], who has been derailed into a personified sex toy.
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* RonTheDeathEater: [[Franchise/HarryPotter Dumbledore]] is the BigBad. [[CoolOldGuy Yes]], [[TheObiWan that]] [[BadassGrandpa Dumbledore]].
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* RonTheDeathEater: [[Franchise/HarryPotter Dumbledore]] is the BigBad. [[CoolOldGuy Yes]], Yes,]] [[TheObiWan that]] [[BadassGrandpa Dumbledore]].Dumbledore.]]
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* MarySue: Dally, naturally. She's a [[OurVampiresAreDifferent vampire]], a witch, has [[Franchise/{{X-Men}} mutant]] powers, every boy wants to get into her pants, everyone loves her, her mother is [[ComicBook/{{X-Men}} Mystique]], and her [[GodModeSue son]] is perfect in every way. She's [[BlackHoleSue Black hole]] [[RelationshipSue Relationship]] [[JerkSue Jerk Sue]], used so that the author can [[MyGirlIsASlut bang every guy in]] [[AuthorAppeal every fandom she knows about]].
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* MarySue: Dally, naturally. She's a [[OurVampiresAreDifferent vampire]], a witch, has [[Franchise/{{X-Men}} [[Franchise/XMen mutant]] powers, every boy wants to get into her pants, everyone loves her, her mother is [[ComicBook/{{X-Men}} Mystique]], ComicBook/{{Mystique}}, and her [[GodModeSue son]] is perfect in every way. She's [[BlackHoleSue Black hole]] [[RelationshipSue Relationship]] [[JerkSue Jerk Sue]], used so that the author can [[MyGirlIsASlut bang every guy in]] [[AuthorAppeal every fandom she knows about]].
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** In Chapter 13, Link turns on the television and completely breaks from the plot to [[TakeThat mock a DeviantArt user]] who is placed in the Special Olympics in this story and insulted as [[DudeNotFunny "a boy/little girl tansvesite THING on the Telly and it had greasy]] [[UsefulNotes/BarackObama barack]] [[DudeNotFunny hair and a butt chin and was ugly and clearly the most retarded of them all."]]
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** In Chapter 13, Link turns on the television and completely breaks from the plot to [[TakeThat mock a DeviantArt user]] who is placed in the Special Olympics in this story and insulted as [[DudeNotFunny "a boy/little girl tansvesite THING on the Telly and it had greasy]] greasy [[UsefulNotes/BarackObama barack]] [[DudeNotFunny hair and a butt chin and was ugly and clearly the most retarded of them all."]]"
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* DudeNotFunny: Sprinkled throughout the fic, but this one stands out even then:
--->They tuned it on and the Special Olympics was on. There was a boy/little girl tansvesite THING on the Telly and it had greasy barack hair and a butt chin and was ugly and clearly the most retarded of them all. It was flopping around like a crazy penis because it’s the most retardedest and cant right write.
** The author goes out of the way to be offensive. The groups of people she's offended include but are probably not limited to: homosexuals, Jews, black people, the mentally and physically disabled, women, men, all humans ever, etc. The remarks she makes in being offensive are often attempts at humor, which makes it worse.
--->They tuned it on and the Special Olympics was on. There was a boy/little girl tansvesite THING on the Telly and it had greasy barack hair and a butt chin and was ugly and clearly the most retarded of them all. It was flopping around like a crazy penis because it’s the most retardedest and cant right write.
** The author goes out of the way to be offensive. The groups of people she's offended include but are probably not limited to: homosexuals, Jews, black people, the mentally and physically disabled, women, men, all humans ever, etc. The remarks she makes in being offensive are often attempts at humor, which makes it worse.
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* NoYay: Among Dally's "dream cast" in the {{Maury}} portion is Shadow. It's never clarified whether it's her son or the hedgehog, but considering the latter was KilledOffForReal...
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* NoYay: Among Dally's "dream cast" in the {{Maury}} Series/{{Maury}} portion is Shadow. It's never clarified whether it's her son or the hedgehog, but considering the latter was KilledOffForReal...
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**The author goes out of the way to be offensive. The groups of people she's offended include but are probably not limited to: homosexuals, Jews, black people, the mentally and physically disabled, women, men, all humans ever, etc. The remarks she makes in being offensive are often attempts at humor, which makes it worse.
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--->Della was at a lost for words. She was a virgin and did not know about dicks and '''it was her first time having a penis.'''
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** In Chapter 13, Link turns on the television and completely breaks from the plot to [[TakeThat mock a DeviantArt user]] who is placed in the Special Olympics in this story and insulted as [[DudeNotFunny "a boy/little girl tansvesite THING on the Telly and it had greasy]] [[BarackObama barack]] [[DudeNotFunny hair and a butt chin and was ugly and clearly the most retarded of them all."]]
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** In Chapter 13, Link turns on the television and completely breaks from the plot to [[TakeThat mock a DeviantArt user]] who is placed in the Special Olympics in this story and insulted as [[DudeNotFunny "a boy/little girl tansvesite THING on the Telly and it had greasy]] [[BarackObama [[UsefulNotes/BarackObama barack]] [[DudeNotFunny hair and a butt chin and was ugly and clearly the most retarded of them all."]]