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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Is Kimiko Ross a well crafted and interesting heroin or a bad case of the author projecting? With the lengthy name, suspiciously [[OtakuSurrogate tomboyish traits]], and the central importance of the protagonist have led some to call Mary Sue. Having her being an extremely attractive, transhuman cyborg probably [[AuthorAppeal doesn't help either]]. The fact that she's a clearly unhinged ideologue who doesn't care if mankind lives or dies is either a good counterpoint to this that makes her flawed or it just makes her creepier. In the actual comic, reality tends to bend to fit her opinions and prejudices and is, for many, the nail in the coffin.
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* BaseBreakingCharacter: Is Kimiko Ross a well crafted and interesting heroin heroine or a bad case of the author projecting? With the lengthy name, suspiciously [[OtakuSurrogate tomboyish traits]], and the central importance of the protagonist have led some to call Mary Sue. Having her being an extremely attractive, transhuman cyborg probably [[AuthorAppeal doesn't help either]]. The fact that she's a clearly unhinged ideologue who doesn't care if mankind lives or dies is either a good counterpoint to this that makes her flawed or it just makes her creepier. In the actual comic, reality tends to bend to fit her opinions and prejudices and is, for many, the nail in the coffin.
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* InternatBackdraft: Cube Watermelon's (of Webcomic/KiwiBlitz fame) [[http://cubewatermelon.tumblr.com/post/95456037742/sometimes-i-think-its-okay-to-just-admit-that-you critique]] of the series caused a bit of a stir to say the least.
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* InternatBackdraft: InternetBackdraft: Cube Watermelon's (of Webcomic/KiwiBlitz fame) [[http://cubewatermelon.tumblr.com/post/95456037742/sometimes-i-think-its-okay-to-just-admit-that-you critique]] of the series caused a bit of a stir to say the least.
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Mary Sue is no longer a trope. So I moved the entries. Wow, that's some weird uncomfortable shit right there.
* BaseBreakingCharacter: Is Kimiko Ross a well crafted and interesting heroin or a bad case of the author projecting? With the lengthy name, suspiciously [[OtakuSurrogate tomboyish traits]], and the central importance of the protagonist have led some to call Mary Sue. Having her being an extremely attractive, transhuman cyborg probably [[AuthorAppeal doesn't help either]]. The fact that she's a clearly unhinged ideologue who doesn't care if mankind lives or dies is either a good counterpoint to this that makes her flawed or it just makes her creepier. In the actual comic, reality tends to bend to fit her opinions and prejudices and is, for many, the nail in the coffin.
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* MarySue: The lengthy name, suspiciously [[OtakuSurrogate tomboyish traits]], and the central importance of the protagonist have led some to call MarySue. Having her being an extremely attractive, transhuman cyborg probably [[AuthorAppeal doesn't help either]]. The fact that she's a clearly unhinged ideologue who doesn't care if mankind lives or dies either mitigates this somewhat or makes it even creepier. In the actual comic, reality tends to bend to fit her opinions and prejudices and is, for many, the nail in the coffin.
** Made fun of by Cube Watermelon (of Webcomic/KiwiBlitz fame) [[http://cubewatermelon.tumblr.com/post/95456037742/sometimes-i-think-its-okay-to-just-admit-that-you here]].
** Made fun of by Cube Watermelon (of Webcomic/KiwiBlitz fame) [[http://cubewatermelon.tumblr.com/post/95456037742/sometimes-i-think-its-okay-to-just-admit-that-you here]].
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* MarySue: The lengthy name, suspiciously [[OtakuSurrogate tomboyish traits]], and the central importance of the protagonist have led some to call MarySue. Having her being an extremely attractive, transhuman cyborg probably [[AuthorAppeal doesn't help either]]. The fact that she's a clearly unhinged ideologue who doesn't care if mankind lives or dies either mitigates this somewhat or makes it even creepier. In the actual comic, reality tends to bend to fit her opinions and prejudices and is, for many, the nail in the coffin.
** Made fun of byInternatBackdraft: Cube Watermelon Watermelon's (of Webcomic/KiwiBlitz fame) [[http://cubewatermelon.tumblr.com/post/95456037742/sometimes-i-think-its-okay-to-just-admit-that-you here]].critique]] of the series caused a bit of a stir to say the least.
** Made fun of by
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* CounterpartComparison: [[http://thewebcomicsreview.tumblr.com/post/118278724605/dresdencodak-dark-science-45-the-favor-oh#notes Several]] [[http://mole-reads.tumblr.com/post/118279825741/changing-my-usual-tunes-here-let-me-talk-dresden people]] [[http://mr-ru.tumblr.com/post/118288470421/sigmaleph-in-the-latest-dresden-codak-kim have noticed]] the similarity between robots worshipping Kim and the robot religion storyline in ''Webcomic/GunnerkriggCourt''.
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: [[http://dresdencodak.com/2013/03/19/dark-science-25/ "I do not help, Mr. Bogan. I oppose."]]
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: [[http://dresdencodak.com/2009/12/16/lantern-season/ Never Alone]].
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: [[http://dresdencodak.com/2013/03/19/dark-science-25/ "I do not help, Mr. Bogan. I oppose."]]
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: [[http://dresdencodak.com/2009/12/16/lantern-season/ Never Alone]].
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* CounterpartComparison: [[http://thewebcomicsreview.tumblr.com/post/118278724605/dresdencodak-dark-science-45-the-favor-oh#notes Several]] [[http://mole-reads.tumblr.com/post/118279825741/changing-my-usual-tunes-here-let-me-talk-dresden people]] [[http://mr-ru.tumblr.com/post/118288470421/sigmaleph-in-the-latest-dresden-codak-kim have noticed]] the similarity between robots worshipping worshiping Kim and the robot religion storyline in ''Webcomic/GunnerkriggCourt''.
*CrowningMomentOfAwesome: SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: [[http://dresdencodak.com/2013/03/19/dark-science-25/ "I do not help, Mr. Bogan. I oppose."]]
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: [[http://dresdencodak.com/2009/12/16/lantern-season/ Never Alone]].
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: [[http://dresdencodak.
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* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: [[http://dresdencodak.com/2013/03/19/dark-science-25/ "I do not help, Mr. Bogan. I oppose."]]
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Some readers see Kimiko as an EvilutionaryBiologist. Others think more kindly of her.
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* NightmareFuel: "[[http://dresdencodak.com/2006/02/13/trouble-in-memphis/ Somewhere]], Niels Bohr walks among us, unobserved and '''immortal'''."
* PurpleProse: A ''lot'' of the comic is in text, especially really stilted dialogue that doesn't usually sound like it would come naturally to a person.
* PurpleProse: A ''lot'' of the comic is in text, especially really stilted dialogue that doesn't usually sound like it would come naturally to a person.
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* NightmareFuel: "[[http://dresdencodak.com/2006/02/13/trouble-in-memphis/ Somewhere]], Niels Bohr walks among us, unobserved and '''immortal'''."
* PurpleProse: A ''lot'' of the comic is in text, especially really stilted dialogue that doesn't usually sound like it would come naturally to a person."
* PurpleProse: A ''lot'' of the comic is in text, especially really stilted dialogue that doesn't usually sound like it would come naturally to a person.
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* CounterpartComparison: [[http://thewebcomicsreview.tumblr.com/post/118278724605/dresdencodak-dark-science-45-the-favor-oh#notes Several]] [[http://mole-reads.tumblr.com/post/118279825741/changing-my-usual-tunes-here-let-me-talk-dresden people]] [[http://mr-ru.tumblr.com/post/118288470421/sigmaleph-in-the-latest-dresden-codak-kim have noticed]] the similarity between robots worshipping Kim and the robot religion storyline in ''Webcomic/GunnerkriggCourt''.
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* PurpleProse: A ''lot'' of the comic is in text, especially really stilted dialogue that doesn't usually sound like it would come naturally to a person.
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* PurpleProse: A ''lot'' of the comic is in text, especially really stilted dialogue that doesn't usually sound like it would come naturally to a person.
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* EightDeadlyWords: The long gaps between updates and opaque characters with strange, cryptic dialogue makes it difficult to make a connection to the characters.
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* MarySue: The lengthy name, suspiciously [[OtakuSurrogate tomboyish traits]], and the central importance of the protagonist have led some to call MarySue. Having her being an extremely attractive, transhuman cyborg probably [[AuthorAppeal doesn't help either]]. The fact that she's a clearly unhinged ideologue who doesn't care if mankind lives or dies either mitigates this somewhat or makes it even creepier. The fact that reality tends to bend to fit her opinions and prejudices is, for many, the nail in the coffin.
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* EightDeadlyWords: The long gaps between updates and opaque characters with strange, cryptic dialogue makes it difficult to make a connection to the characters.
* MarySue: The lengthy name, suspiciously [[OtakuSurrogate tomboyish traits]], and the central importance of the protagonist have led some to call MarySue. Having her being an extremely attractive, transhuman cyborg probably [[AuthorAppeal doesn't help either]]. The fact that she's a clearly unhinged ideologue who doesn't care if mankind lives or dies either mitigates this somewhat or makes it even creepier.The fact that In the actual comic, reality tends to bend to fit her opinions and prejudices and is, for many, the nail in the coffin.
* MarySue: The lengthy name, suspiciously [[OtakuSurrogate tomboyish traits]], and the central importance of the protagonist have led some to call MarySue. Having her being an extremely attractive, transhuman cyborg probably [[AuthorAppeal doesn't help either]]. The fact that she's a clearly unhinged ideologue who doesn't care if mankind lives or dies either mitigates this somewhat or makes it even creepier.
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* PurpleProse: A ''lot'' of the comic is in text, especially really stilted dialogue that doesn't usually sound like it would come naturally to a person.
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* UnfortunateImplications: The portrayal of Christians as insane fundamentalist Christians would be this, if it wasn't intentional.
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** Made fun of by Cube Watermelon (of Webcomic/KiwiBlitz fame) [[http://cubewatermelon.tumblr.com/post/95456037742/sometimes-i-think-its-okay-to-just-admit-that-you here]].
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* MarySue: The lengthy name, suspiciously [[OtakuSurrogate tomboyish traits]], and the central importance of the protagonist have led some to call MarySue. Having her being an extremely attractive, transhuman cyborg probably [[AuthorAppeal doesn't help either]]. The fact that she's a clearly unhinged ideologue who doesn't care if mankind lives or dies either mitigates this somewhat or makes it even creepier.
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* MarySue: The lengthy name, suspiciously [[OtakuSurrogate tomboyish traits]], and the central importance of the protagonist have led some to call MarySue. Having her being an extremely attractive, transhuman cyborg probably [[AuthorAppeal doesn't help either]]. The fact that she's a clearly unhinged ideologue who doesn't care if mankind lives or dies either mitigates this somewhat or makes it even creepier. The fact that reality tends to bend to fit her opinions and prejudices is, for many, the nail in the coffin.
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* AssPull: Transmuting the entire natural world into computronium actually makes plants healthier and grow better. Well <i>that</i> sure is convenient.
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* AssPull: Transmuting the entire natural world into computronium actually makes plants healthier and grow better. Well <i>that</i> ''that'' sure is convenient. convenient.
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* AssPull: Transmuting the entire natural world into computronium actually makes plants healthier and grow better. Well that sure is convenient. [[SarcasmMode Can't imagine]] why those foolish Luddites took issue with it.
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* AssPull: Transmuting the entire natural world into computronium actually makes plants healthier and grow better. Well that <i>that</i> sure is convenient. [[SarcasmMode Can't imagine]] why those foolish Luddites took issue with it.convenient.
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* AssPull: Transmuting the entire natural world into computronium actually makes plants healthier and grow better. Well that sure is convenient. [[SarcasmMode Can't imagine]] why those foolish Luddites took issue with it.
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Not YMMV anymore. Moving.
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* UnfortunateImplications: The portrayal of Christians as insane fundamentalist Christians would be this, if it wasn't intentional.
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Kimiko. Especially the strips where she flashes back to her childhood. ''All of 'em.'' Also, [[http://dresdencodak.com/2010/03/11/mademoiselle/ the board game]] about it.
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Kimiko. Especially the strips where she flashes back to her childhood. ''All of 'em.'' Also, [[http://dresdencodak.com/2010/03/11/mademoiselle/ the board game]] about it.
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* UnfortunateImplications: The portrayal of Christians as insane fundamentalist Christians would be this, if it wasn't intentional.
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Kimiko. Especially the strips where she flashes back to her childhood. ''All of 'em.'' Also, [[http://dresdencodak.com/2010/03/11/mademoiselle/ the board game]] about it.intentional.
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Kimiko. Especially the strips where she flashes back to her childhood. ''All of 'em.'' Also, [[http://dresdencodak.com/2010/03/11/mademoiselle/ the board game]] about it.
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And then I forgot to make the actual edit. -_- Good going, Solarn. Really upholds the image of maturity you were going for.
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** Or the fact that the man character is an insane transhuman fundamentalist.
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There is no such thing as \"transhuman fundamentalism\" and while the protagonist is certainly insane and embraces transhumanism, she is not a religious bigot. Also your edt makes no sense and can only be read as a knee-jerk reply to perceived hostility towards your beliefs.
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** Or the fact that the man character is an insane transhuman fundamentalist.
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: [[http://dresdencodak.com/2012/12/24/dark-science-24/ "I do not help, Mr. Bogan. I oppose."]]
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: [[http://dresdencodak.com/2012/12/24/dark-science-24/ com/2013/03/19/dark-science-25/ "I do not help, Mr. Bogan. I oppose."]]
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: [[http://dresdencodak.com/2012/12/24/dark-science-24/ "I do not help, Mr. Bogan. I oppose."]]
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* MarySue: The lengthy name, suspiciously [[OtakuSurrogate tom boyish traits]], and the central importance of the protagonist have led some to call MarySue. Having her being an extremely attractive, transhuman cyborg probably [[AuthorAppeal doesn't help either]].
** The fact that she's a clearly unhinged ideologue who doesn't care if mankind lives or dies either mitigates this somewhat or makes it even creepier.
** The fact that she's a clearly unhinged ideologue who doesn't care if mankind lives or dies either mitigates this somewhat or makes it even creepier.
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* MarySue: The lengthy name, suspiciously [[OtakuSurrogate tom boyish tomboyish traits]], and the central importance of the protagonist have led some to call MarySue. Having her being an extremely attractive, transhuman cyborg probably [[AuthorAppeal doesn't help either]].
**either]]. The fact that she's a clearly unhinged ideologue who doesn't care if mankind lives or dies either mitigates this somewhat or makes it even creepier.
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Kimiko. Especially the strips where she flashes back to her childhood. ''All of 'em.''
*** [[http://dresdencodak.com/2010/03/11/mademoiselle/ Also this]]
*** [[http://dresdencodak.com/2010/03/11/mademoiselle/ Also this]]
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Kimiko. Especially the strips where she flashes back to her childhood. ''All of 'em.''
***'' Also, [[http://dresdencodak.com/2010/03/11/mademoiselle/ Also this]]the board game]] about it.
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* AcceptableReligiousTargets: Evangelical Christians, making it one of the most awesome webcomics I will never be able to read.
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* AcceptableReligiousTargets: Evangelical Christians, making it one of the most awesome webcomics I will never be able to read.Christians.
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: [[http://www.dresdencodak.com/cartoons/dc_045.html Take a look at this]] and tell me that you don't want to give Kimiko a reassuring hug, you filthy liar. Even the Hob felt sorry for her. How can you live with yourself?
** It seemed fair to me. Why must a transhumanist be so inhuman? A BlueAndOrangeMorality JerkassWoobie is still a jerkass.
** There's also the strips where she flashes back to her childhood. ''All of 'em.''
** It seemed fair to me. Why must a transhumanist be so inhuman? A BlueAndOrangeMorality JerkassWoobie is still a jerkass.
** There's also the strips where she flashes back to her childhood. ''All of 'em.''
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: [[http://www.dresdencodak.com/cartoons/dc_045.html Take a look at this]] and tell me that you don't want to give Kimiko a reassuring hug, you filthy liar. Even the Hob felt sorry for her. How can you live with yourself?
** It seemed fair to me. Why must a transhumanist be so inhuman? A BlueAndOrangeMorality JerkassWoobie is still a jerkass.
** There's alsoKimiko. Especially the strips where she flashes back to her childhood. ''All of 'em.''
** It seemed fair to me. Why must a transhumanist be so inhuman? A BlueAndOrangeMorality JerkassWoobie is still a jerkass.
** There's also
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* NightmareFuel: "[[http://dresdencodak.com/2006/02/13/trouble-in-memphis/ Somewhere]], Niels Bohr walks among us, unobserved and '''immortal'''."
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* MarySue: The lengthy name, suspiciously [[OtakuSurrogate tom boyish traits]], and the central importance of the protagonist have led some to call MarySue. Having her being an extremely attractive, transhuman cyborg probably [[AuthorAppeal doesn't help either]].
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* MarySue: The lengthy name, suspiciously [[OtakuSurrogate tom boyish traits]], and the central importance of the protagonist have led some to call MarySue. Having her being an extremely attractive, transhuman cyborg probably [[AuthorAppeal doesn't help either]]. either]].
** The fact that she's a clearly unhinged ideologue who doesn't care if mankind lives or dies either mitigates this somewhat or makes it even creepier.
** The fact that she's a clearly unhinged ideologue who doesn't care if mankind lives or dies either mitigates this somewhat or makes it even creepier.
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* AcceptableReligiousTargets: Evangelical Christians, making it one of the most awesome webcomics I will never be able to read.
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* MarySue: The lengthy name, suspiciously [[OtakuSurrogate tom boyish traits]], and the central importance of the protagonist have led some to call MarySue. Having her being an [[NinjaPirateZombieRobot extremely attractive, transhuman cyborg]] probably [[AuthorAppeal doesn't help either]].
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* MarySue: The lengthy name, suspiciously [[OtakuSurrogate tom boyish traits]], and the central importance of the protagonist have led some to call MarySue. Having her being an [[NinjaPirateZombieRobot extremely attractive, transhuman cyborg]] cyborg probably [[AuthorAppeal doesn't help either]].
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** It seemed fair to me. Why must transhumanists be so inhuman?
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** It seemed fair to me. Why must transhumanists a transhumanist be so inhuman?inhuman? A BlueAndOrangeMorality JerkassWoobie is still a jerkass.
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: [[http://www.dresdencodak.com/cartoons/dc_045.html Take a look at this]] and tell me that you don't want to give Kimiko a reassuring hug, you filthy liar. Even the Hob felt sorry for her. How can you live with yourself?
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: [[http://www.dresdencodak.com/cartoons/dc_045.html Take a look at this]] and tell me that you don't want to give Kimiko a reassuring hug, you filthy liar. Even the Hob felt sorry for her. How can you live with yourself? yourself?
** It seemed fair to me. Why must transhumanists be so inhuman?
** It seemed fair to me. Why must transhumanists be so inhuman?
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* MarySue: The lengthy name, suspiciously [[OtakuSurrogate tom boyish traits]], and the central importance of the protagonist have led some to call MarySue. Having her being an [[NinjaPirateZombieRobot extremely attractive, transhuman cyborg]] probably [[AuthorAppeal doesn't help either]].
