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** Alex becomes evil [[FortheEvulz just for the sake of evil itself]].
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** MoralEventHorizon
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alex is forced to kill Betty, the only person who cares about his existence, and as a result, goes on a rampage around the world.
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**Alex is forced to kill Betty, the only person who cares about his existence, and as a result, goes on a rampage around theworld.world.
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* '''Defied''': Alex outright refuses to explain his StartOfDarkness, with the rationalisation that it doesn't change the fact that he's a villain now.
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* '''Defied''': Alex outright refuses to explain his StartOfDarkness, with the rationalisation rationalization that it doesn't change the fact that he's a villain now.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Alex tells TheHero that the reason that he became a psychopath is to avenge the death of Betty, [[LoveMakesYouEvil who he loved]]. However, TheHero later learns that Bob [[ILied lied]] about his FreudianExcuse. He recaptures Alex and is told a completely different story altogether.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Alex tells TheHero that the reason that he became a psychopath is to avenge the death of Betty, [[LoveMakesYouEvil who he loved]]. However, TheHero later learns that Bob Alex [[ILied lied]] about his FreudianExcuse. He recaptures Alex and is told a completely different story altogether.
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** Alex is portrayed as experiencing SanitySlippage as a result of losing Betty, leading him to commit ever more depraved acts.
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** Alex seems like he's going to be come the villain everyone knows -- but he's actually a DecoyProtagonist. The ''real'' villain is someone else altogether, he's just a guy with an uncanny resemblance.
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* '''Discussed''': "Why is Alex evil, anyway? [[FreudianExcuse Childhood trauma?]] [[LoveMakesYouEvil The tragic death of a loved one?]] ParentalAbandonment? [[RaisedByOrcs His upbringing?]] [[ForTheEvulz Just because he could?]]"
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* '''Discussed''': "Why is Alex evil, anyway? [[FreudianExcuse Childhood trauma?]] trauma]]? [[LoveMakesYouEvil The tragic death of a loved one?]] one]]? ParentalAbandonment? [[RaisedByOrcs His upbringing?]] upbringing]]? [[ForTheEvulz Just because he could?]]"could]]?"
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** [[RousseauWasRight No one is born evil, after all.]] Something had to [[MoralEventHorizon change]] Alex into a villain.
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** [[RousseauWasRight No one is born evil, after all.]] all]]. Something had to [[MoralEventHorizon change]] Alex into a villain. villain.
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** We see a FlashBack or the BackStory of Alex that's meant to show why he became TheHero in the first place and his ascent into goodness.
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** Alex is [[PerspectiveFlip telling the story himself]], and he [[UnreliableNarrator isn't exactly being honest.]]
** We see a FlashBack or the BackStory of Alex that's meant to show why he became TheHero in the first place and his ascent into goodness.
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** Alex is [[PerspectiveFlip telling the story himself]], and he [[UnreliableNarrator isn't exactly being honest.]]
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** Alice saves Alex, a CardCarryingVillain, who from then on steadily acts more morally [[BecauseYouWereNiceToMe thanks to Alice's kindness. kindness]]. Eventually [[HeelFaceTurn becoming one of the good guys.
guys]].
** We see a FlashBack or the BackStory of Alex that's meant to show why he became TheHero in the first place and his ascent intogoodness.
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** Alex is [[PerspectiveFlip telling the story himself]], and he [[UnreliableNarrator isn't exactly beinghonest.]]honest]].
** We see a FlashBack or the BackStory of Alex that's meant to show why he became TheHero in the first place and his ascent into
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** However, he is in fact [[VillainsNeverLie telling the truth]]... [[ProtagonistCenteredMorality as he sees it, of course.]]
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** However, he is in fact [[VillainsNeverLie telling the truth]]... [[ProtagonistCenteredMorality as he sees it, of course.]]course]].
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Alex tells TheHero that the reason that he became a psychopath is to avenge the death of Betty, [[LoveMakesYouEvil who he loved.]] However, TheHero later learns that Bob [[ILied lied]] about his FreudianExcuse. He recaptures Alex and is told a completely different story altogether.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Alex tells TheHero that the reason that he became a psychopath is to avenge the death of Betty, [[LoveMakesYouEvil who he loved.]] loved]]. However, TheHero later learns that Bob [[ILied lied]] about his FreudianExcuse. He recaptures Alex and is told a completely different story altogether.
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** Alex had a normal background. He became evil for simple reasons, like [[{{Greed}} wanting money.]]
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** Alex had a normal background. He became evil for simple reasons, like [[{{Greed}} wanting money.]]money]].
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* '''Conversed''': "What made Alex so utterly heartless?" "[[FreudianExcuse Bad parenting.]]"
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* '''Conversed''': "What made Alex so utterly heartless?" "[[FreudianExcuse Bad parenting.]]" parenting]]."
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** Because he despises evil so much, Alex [[KnightTemplar decides that killing may be a viable way to prevent more killing]], backtracks on his personal oath and gets used to committing atrocities.
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** Because he despises evil so much, Alex [[KnightTemplar despises evil]] so much, Alex decides that [[StartXToStopX killing may be a viable way to prevent more killing]], backtracks on his personal oath and gets used to committing atrocities.
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** We see a FlashBack or the BackStory of Alex that's meant to show why he became TheHero in the first place and his descent into goodness.
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** We see a FlashBack or the BackStory of Alex that's meant to show why he became TheHero in the first place and his descent ascent into goodness.
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** Alex sees his girlfriend get killed and kills the murderer, he then sees how horrible it is to be evil and swears to [[ThouShaltNotKill never kill again]].
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** Alex sees his girlfriend get killed and kills the murderer, he then sees witnessing how horrible it is to be evil and swears to [[ThouShaltNotKill never kill again]].
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**However, he is in fact [[VillainsNeverLie telling the truth]]... [[ProtagonistCenteredMorality as he sees it, of course.]]]]
** Because he despises evil so much, Alex [[KnightTemplar decides that killing may be a viable way to prevent more killing]], backtracks on his personal oath and gets used to committing atrocities.
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**However, he is in fact [[VillainsNeverLie telling the truth]]... [[ProtagonistCenteredMorality as he sees it, of course.
** Because he despises evil so much, Alex [[KnightTemplar decides that killing may be a viable way to prevent more killing]], backtracks on his personal oath and gets used to committing atrocities.
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* '''Straight''': Alex sees his girlfriend, Betty, got killed and becomes a murderer to avenge her death.
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* '''Straight''': Alex sees his girlfriend, Betty, got get killed and becomes a murderer to avenge her death.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alex's girlfriend Betty dies of an incurable disease. This made Alex not a murder, but an unpleasant and callous {{Jerkass}}.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alex's girlfriend Betty dies of an incurable disease. This made Alex not a murder, murderer, but an unpleasant and callous {{Jerkass}}.
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* '''Defied''': Alex outright refuses to explain his StartOfDarkness.
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* '''Defied''': Alex outright refuses to explain his StartOfDarkness.StartOfDarkness, with the rationalisation that it doesn't change the fact that he's a villain now.
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** Alex sees his girlfriend get killed and kills the murderer, He then sees how horrible it is to be evil and becomes TheMessiah
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** Alex sees his girlfriend get killed and kills the murderer, He he then sees how horrible it is to be evil and becomes TheMessiahswears to [[ThouShaltNotKill never kill again]].
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* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Exploited''': ???AmoralAttorney Dewey uses Alex's backstory to create sympathy in the jury at the murder trial.
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** It is revealed Alex decided to become evil after learning [[FelonyMisdemeanor someone ate the last Tasty Snack in the fridge]].
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** It is revealed that Alex decided to become evil after learning [[FelonyMisdemeanor someone ate the last Tasty Snack in the fridge]].
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* '''Parodied''': Alex, upon capturing TheHero, reveals [[ShaggyFrogStory a ridiculously nonsensical backstory]] [[TheUnreveal that doesn't really explain anything]] about Alex or [[FaceHeelTurn how he became evil]].
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* '''Parodied''': '''Parodied''':
** Alex, upon capturing TheHero, reveals [[ShaggyFrogStory a ridiculously nonsensical backstory]] [[TheUnreveal that doesn't really explain anything]] about Alex or [[FaceHeelTurn how he becameevil]].evil]].
** It is revealed Alex decided to become evil after learning [[FelonyMisdemeanor someone ate the last Tasty Snack in the fridge]].
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** It is revealed Alex decided to become evil after learning [[FelonyMisdemeanor someone ate the last Tasty Snack in the fridge]].
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** We see a FlashBack or the BackStory of Alex that's meant to show why he became TheHero in the first place.
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** We see a FlashBack or the BackStory of Alex that's meant to show why he became TheHero in the first place.place and his descent into goodness.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alex's girlfriend Betty dies of an incurable disease. This made Alex not an murder, but an callous {{Jerkass}}.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alex's girlfriend Betty dies of an incurable disease. This made Alex not an a murder, but an unpleasant and callous {{Jerkass}}.
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* '''Downplayed''': ???Alex's girlfriend Betty dies of an incurable disease. This made Alex not an murder, but an callous {{Jerkass}}.
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** Alex had a normal background. He became evil for simple reasons, like [[Greed wanting money.]]
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** Alex had a normal background. He became evil for simple reasons, like [[Greed [[{{Greed}} wanting money.]]
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* '''Averted''': The reason why Alex is evil or amoral is never revealed.
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** The reason why Alex is evil or amoral is never revealed.
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* '''Justified''': [[RousseauWasRight No one is born evil, after all.]] Something had to [[MoralEventHorizon change]] Alex into a villain.
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* '''Justified''':
** [[RousseauWasRight No one is born evil, after all.]] Something had to [[MoralEventHorizon change]] Alex into a villain.
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** [[RousseauWasRight No one is born evil, after all.]] Something had to [[MoralEventHorizon change]] Alex into a villain.
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* '''Inverted''': The story is about Alex, a CardCarryingVillain who spends his days [[PokeThePoodle poking poodles]] and [[KickTheDog kicking dogs]], and [[HeelFaceTurn discovers]] that he is GoodAllAlong.
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** The story is about Alex, a CardCarryingVillain who spends his days [[PokeThePoodle poking poodles]] and [[KickTheDog kicking dogs]], and [[HeelFaceTurn discovers]] that he is GoodAllAlong.
** The story is about Alex, a CardCarryingVillain who spends his days [[PokeThePoodle poking poodles]] and [[KickTheDog kicking dogs]], and [[HeelFaceTurn discovers]] that he is GoodAllAlong.
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* '''Subverted''': Alex is [[PerspectiveFlip telling the story himself]], and he [[UnreliableNarrator isn't exactly being honest.]]
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** Alex is [[PerspectiveFlip telling the story himself]], and he [[UnreliableNarrator isn't exactly being honest.]]
** Alex is [[PerspectiveFlip telling the story himself]], and he [[UnreliableNarrator isn't exactly being honest.]]
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* '''Deconstructed''': Alex's reasons for becoming evil, although true, are not the reason he became evil - he was a JerkAss long before Betty was killed.
* '''Reconstructed''': However, Betty was Alex's MoralityChain and, with her dead, Alex has crossed the MoralEventHorizon.
* '''Reconstructed''': However, Betty was Alex's MoralityChain and, with her dead, Alex has crossed the MoralEventHorizon.
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* '''Reconstructed''': However, Betty was Alex's MoralityChain and, with her dead, Alex has crossed the MoralEventHorizon.
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* '''Reconstructed''': However, Betty was Alex's MoralityChain and, with her dead, Alex has crossed the MoralEventHorizon from simply being a JerkAss to being a CompleteMonster.
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* '''Reconstructed''': However, Betty was Alex's MoralityChain and, with her dead, Alex has crossed the MoralEventHorizon from simply being a JerkAss to being a CompleteMonster.MoralEventHorizon.
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** Alice saves Alex, a CardCarryingVillain, who from then one steadily acts more morally thanks to Alice's kindness. Eventually becoming one of the good guys.
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** Alice saves Alex, a CardCarryingVillain, who from then one on steadily acts more morally thanks to Alice's kindness. Eventually becoming one of the good guys.
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* '''Parodied''': Alex, upon capturing TheHero, reveals [[ShaggyFrogStory a ridiculously non-nonsensical backstory]] [[TheUnreveal that doesn't really explain anything]] about Alex or [[FaceHeelTurn how he became evil]].
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* '''Parodied''': Alex, upon capturing TheHero, reveals [[ShaggyFrogStory a ridiculously non-nonsensical nonsensical backstory]] [[TheUnreveal that doesn't really explain anything]] about Alex or [[FaceHeelTurn how he became evil]].
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* '''Parodied''': Alex, upon capturing TheHero, reveals a ridiculous backstory [[TheUnreveal that doesn't really explain anything]] about Alex or [[FaceHeelTurn how he became evil]].
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* '''Parodied''': Alex, upon capturing TheHero, reveals [[ShaggyFrogStory a ridiculous backstory ridiculously non-nonsensical backstory]] [[TheUnreveal that doesn't really explain anything]] about Alex or [[FaceHeelTurn how he became evil]].
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