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* '''Justified''': Jack is outside the CompetenceZone and wants to be taken seriously.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** Jack is outside the CompetenceZone and wants to be takenseriously.seriously.
** [[ValuesDissonance It really was considered the cool]] [[ArtisticLicenseMedicine and healthy thing to do]] in the 1950s setting of the work.
** Jack is outside the CompetenceZone and wants to be taken
** [[ValuesDissonance It really was considered the cool]] [[ArtisticLicenseMedicine and healthy thing to do]] in the 1950s setting of the work.
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* '''Implied''': assassination company is one of the few businesses in TheCity that still adorns its offices with ashtrays, and there's a higher concentration of cigarette butts outside its doors than anywhere else.
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* '''Implied''': The assassination company is one of the few businesses in TheCity that still adorns its offices with ashtrays, and there's a higher concentration of cigarette butts outside its doors than anywhere else.
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* '''Straight''': Jack works at MurderInc, where most people with seniority smoke.
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* '''Straight''': Jack works at MurderInc, where most people with seniority seniority, including him, smoke.
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** Jack is always smoking.
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** Jack is always smoking.has a lit cigarette in his mouth every moment he's awake.
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** Jack is smoking 24/7, even in his sleep. On the rare occasions where he doesn't have a cigarette (probably because someone knocked it out of his mouth), he becomes a complete loser which is accentuated by an ArtShift, only going back to his badass self when he lights another smoke.
** A character's coolness is determined by how much they smoke. The ultimate badass in the setting is also TheUnintelligible because his mouth is completely stuffed with cigarettes, and he drops dead from lung disease after just one scene.
** A character's coolness is determined by how much they smoke. The ultimate badass in the setting is also TheUnintelligible because his mouth is completely stuffed with cigarettes, and he drops dead from lung disease after just one scene.
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** EverybodySmokes at assassination company , and so do their targets.
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** EverybodySmokes at assassination company , company, and so do their targets.
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** Jack has just finished his first assassination, and lights a cigarette -- only to be told by his superior that assassination company [[EvilVirtues doesn't allow smoking for health and safety reasons.]]
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** Jack has just finished his first assassination, and lights a cigarette -- only to be told by his superior that assassination company company [[EvilVirtues doesn't allow smoking for health and safety reasons.]]
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** The staff at assassination company don't smoke due to concerns about health. They occasionally come across poser assassins who smoke to look badass, but are completely incompetent and generally have far less stamina.
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** The staff at assassination company company don't smoke due to concerns about health. They occasionally come across poser assassins who smoke to look badass, but are completely incompetent and generally have far less stamina.
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** Jack tries to join assassination company , but he is a chain smoker. He quits, and they let him in. Soon after, he discreetly takes it up again.
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** Jack tries to join assassination company , company, but he is a chain smoker. He quits, and they let him in. Soon after, he discreetly takes it up again.
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* '''Implied''': assassination company is one of the few businesses in TheCity that still adorns its offices with ashtrays, and there's a higher concentration of cigarette butts outside its doors than anywhere else.
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* '''Implied''': assassination company company is one of the few businesses in TheCity that still adorns its offices with ashtrays, and there's a higher concentration of cigarette butts outside its doors than anywhere else.
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->So you just killed one of the most powerful and dangerous mob bosses in this city, who exactly put you up to that?\\
No one, he wouldn't shut up about my tobacco habit.
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** EverybodySmokes at MurderInc, and so do their targets.
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** EverybodySmokes at MurderInc, assassination company , and so do their targets.
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** Jack is a very capable assassin, but his smoking is explicitly shown as an annoying trait, as many people are irritated by his smell as smoke breathing. No one complains to his face, because he is such a hardened and dangerous killer.
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** Jack is a very capable assassin, but his smoking is explicitly shown as an annoying trait, as many people are irritated by his smell as and smoke breathing. No one complains to his face, because he is such a hardened and dangerous killer.
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** Jack has just finished his first assassination, and lights a cigarette -- only to be told by his superior that MurderInc [[EvilVirtues doesn't allow smoking for health and safety reasons.]]
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** Jack has just finished his first assassination, and lights a cigarette -- only to be told by his superior that MurderInc assassination company [[EvilVirtues doesn't allow smoking for health and safety reasons.]]
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** The staff at MurderInc don't smoke due to concerns about health. They occasionally come across poser assassins who smoke to look badass, but are completely incompetent and generally have far less stamina.
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** The staff at MurderInc assassination company don't smoke due to concerns about health. They occasionally come across poser assassins who smoke to look badass, but are completely incompetent and generally have far less stamina.
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** Jack tries to join MurderInc, but he is a chain smoker. He quits, and they let him in. Soon after, he discreetly takes it up again.
** Some MurderInc employees smoke, others don't, and it's not the sole or even chief factor in determining who is or isn't [[EvilIsCool cool.]]
** Some MurderInc employees smoke, others don't, and it's not the sole or even chief factor in determining who is or isn't [[EvilIsCool cool.]]
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** Jack tries to join MurderInc, assassination company , but he is a chain smoker. He quits, and they let him in. Soon after, he discreetly takes it up again.
** SomeMurderInc assassination company employees smoke, others don't, and it's not the sole or even chief factor in determining who is or isn't [[EvilIsCool cool.]]
** Some
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** Jack never has anything to do with smoking while at MurderInc
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** Jack never has anything to do with smoking while at MurderIncassassination company
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* '''Implied''': MurderInc is one of the few businesses in TheCity that still adorns its offices with ashtrays, and there's a higher concentration of cigarette butts outside its doors than anywhere else.
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* '''Implied''': MurderInc assassination company is one of the few businesses in TheCity that still adorns its offices with ashtrays, and there's a higher concentration of cigarette butts outside its doors than anywhere else.
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** Jack's HealingFactor lets him absorb a full machine gun clip to the face, but still strains to keep his lungs working.
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* '''Downplayed''': Jack used to smoke a pack of cigarettes a day, but he's cut down to one to two every few days.
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** Jack used to smoke a pack of cigarettes a day, but he's cut down to one to two every fewdays.days.
** Jack is a very capable assassin, but his smoking is explicitly shown as an annoying trait, as many people are irritated by his smell as smoke breathing. No one complains to his face, because he is such a hardened and dangerous killer.
** Jack used to smoke a pack of cigarettes a day, but he's cut down to one to two every few
** Jack is a very capable assassin, but his smoking is explicitly shown as an annoying trait, as many people are irritated by his smell as smoke breathing. No one complains to his face, because he is such a hardened and dangerous killer.
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* '''Inverted''': NoSmoking, or smoking makes you look like a wuss.
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* '''Inverted''': NoSmoking, or smoking '''Inverted''':
** NoSmoking
** Smoking makes you look like awuss.wuss.
** SmokingIsNotCool
** NoSmoking
** Smoking makes you look like a
** SmokingIsNotCool
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** The staff at MurderInc don't smoke due to concerns about health. They occasionally come across poser assassins who smoke to look {{badass}}, but are completely incompetent and generally have far less stamina.
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** The staff at MurderInc don't smoke due to concerns about health. They occasionally come across poser assassins who smoke to look {{badass}}, badass, but are completely incompetent and generally have far less stamina.
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** Everyone at MurderInc smokes, and so do their targets.
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** Everyone EverybodySmokes at MurderInc smokes, MurderInc, and so do their targets.
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Downplayed''': ???Jack used to smoke a pack of cigarettes a day, but he's cut down to one to two every few days.
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** Jack has just finished his first assassination, and lights a cigarette--only to be told by his superior that MurderInc doesn't allow smoking for health and safety reasons.
** Jack smokes but lots of just as cool people are nonsmokers
** The staff at Murder Inc don't smoke due to concerns about health. They occasionally come across poser assassins who smoke to look badass, but are completely incompetent and generally have far less stamina.
** Jack smokes but lots of just as cool people are nonsmokers
** The staff at Murder Inc don't smoke due to concerns about health. They occasionally come across poser assassins who smoke to look badass, but are completely incompetent and generally have far less stamina.
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** Jack has just finished his first assassination, and lights a cigarette--only cigarette -- only to be told by his superior that MurderInc [[EvilVirtues doesn't allow smoking for health and safety reasons.
reasons.]]
** Jacksmokes smokes, but lots of just as many comparably cool people are nonsmokers
nonsmokers.
** The staff atMurder Inc MurderInc don't smoke due to concerns about health. They occasionally come across poser assassins who smoke to look badass, {{badass}}, but are completely incompetent and generally have far less stamina.
** Jack
** The staff at
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Jack tries to join MurderInc, but he is a chain smoker. He quits, and they let him in. Soon after, he discreetly takes it up again.
* '''Averted''':
** Jack never has anything to do with smoking while at MurderInc.
* '''Averted''':
** Jack never has anything to do with smoking while at MurderInc.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Zagged''':
** Jack tries to join MurderInc, but he is a chain smoker. He quits, and they let him in. Soon after, he discreetly takes it up again.
** Some MurderInc employees smoke, others don't, and it's not the sole or even chief factor in determining who is or isn't [[EvilIsCool cool.]]
*'''Averted''':
'''Averted''':
** Jack never has anything to do with smoking while atMurderInc.MurderInc
** Jack tries to join MurderInc, but he is a chain smoker. He quits, and they let him in. Soon after, he discreetly takes it up again.
** Some MurderInc employees smoke, others don't, and it's not the sole or even chief factor in determining who is or isn't [[EvilIsCool cool.]]
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** Jack never has anything to do with smoking while at
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* '''Enforced''': "Jack would sure look [[RuleofCool cool]] if he took up smoking, wouldn't he?
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* '''Enforced''': "Jack would sure look [[RuleofCool cool]] if he took up smoking, wouldn't he?he?"
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* '''Invoked''': After a difficult assassination, Jack lights a cigarette and [[BadassBoast says something cool]]--even though he's by himself.
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* '''Invoked''': After a difficult assassination, Jack lights a cigarette and [[BadassBoast says something cool]]--even cool]] -- even though he's by himself.
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** Jack specifically bans his subordinates from smoking - the smell will give them away and he doesn't want to die from their incompetence. Besides he can't have them panting when he needs them chasing his quarry.
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** Jack specifically bans his subordinates from smoking - -- the smell will give them away and he doesn't want to die from their incompetence. Besides Besides, he can't have them panting when he needs them chasing his quarry.
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* '''Conversed''': "It's amazing how you never see those adventure-y types coughing or anything."
* '''Deconstructed''': Jack is slowed down due to his habit, and eventually dies due to it.
* '''Deconstructed''': Jack is slowed down due to his habit, and eventually dies due to it.
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* '''Conversed''': "It's amazing how you never see those adventure-y adventurous types coughing or anything."
* '''Implied''': MurderInc is one of the few businesses in TheCity that still adorns its offices with ashtrays, and there's a higher concentration of cigarette butts outside its doors than anywhere else.
* '''Deconstructed''': Jack is slowed down due to his habit, and it eventuallydies due to it.becomes the proximate cause of his early death.
* '''Implied''': MurderInc is one of the few businesses in TheCity that still adorns its offices with ashtrays, and there's a higher concentration of cigarette butts outside its doors than anywhere else.
* '''Deconstructed''': Jack is slowed down due to his habit, and it eventually
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* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Exploited''': ???Jack's target knows the best and coolest assassins all smoke, and has installed fire alarms.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Everyone at MurderInc smokes, and so do their targets.
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* '''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
** Everyone at MurderInc smokes, and so do their targets.
** Everyone at MurderInc smokes, and so do their targets.
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* '''Subverted''': Jack has just finished his first assassination, and lights a cigarette--only to be told by his superior that MurderInc doesn't allow smoking for health and safety reasons.
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* '''Subverted''': '''Subverted''':
** Jack has just finished his first assassination, and lights a cigarette--only to be told by his superior that MurderInc doesn't allow smoking for health and safety reasons.
** Jack has just finished his first assassination, and lights a cigarette--only to be told by his superior that MurderInc doesn't allow smoking for health and safety reasons.
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* '''Parodied''': Jack has to take a "cool test" to determine whether or not he may take up smoking.
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* '''Parodied''': '''Parodied''':
** Jack has to take a "cool test" to determine whether or not he may take up smoking.
** Jack has to take a "cool test" to determine whether or not he may take up smoking.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Jack is slowed down due to his habit, and eventually dies due to it.
* '''Reconstructed''': The fact that Jack is so good at what he does despite that makes him even cooler.
* '''Reconstructed''': The fact that Jack is so good at what he does despite that makes him even cooler.
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* '''Averted''': Jack never has anything to do with smoking while at MurderInc.
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* '''Averted''': '''Averted''':
** Jack never has anything to do with smoking while at MurderInc.
** Jack never has anything to do with smoking while at MurderInc.
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* '''Defied''': Jack knows one of his subordinates is considering starting smoking, and casually reminds him that smokers often end up with several different health issues.
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* '''Defied''': '''Exploited''': ???
* '''Defied''':
** Jack knows one of his subordinates is considering starting smoking, and casually reminds him that smokers often end up with several different health issues.
* '''Defied''':
** Jack knows one of his subordinates is considering starting smoking, and casually reminds him that smokers often end up with several different health issues.
* '''Deconstructed''': Jack is slowed down due to his habit, and eventually dies due to it.
* '''Reconstructed''': The fact that Jack is so good at what he does despite that makes him even cooler.
* '''Reconstructed''': The fact that Jack is so good at what he does despite that makes him even cooler.
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** Jack smokes but lots of just as [[XtremeKoolLetterz Kewl]] people are nonsmokers
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** Jack smokes but lots of just as [[XtremeKoolLetterz Kewl]] cool people are nonsmokers
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** The staff at Murder Inc don't smoke due to concerns about health. They occasionally come across poser assassins who smoke to look badass, but are completely incompetent and generally have far less stamina.
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** Jack smokes but lots of just as [[XtremeKoolLetterz Kewl]] people are nonsmokers
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* '''Straight''': [[JackAttack Jack]] works at MurderInc, where most people with seniority smoke.
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* '''Straight''': [[JackAttack Jack]] Jack works at MurderInc, where most people with seniority smoke.
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** Jack ''does'' smoke, but isn't cool.
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* '''Inverted''': NoSmoking.
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* '''Inverted''': NoSmoking.NoSmoking, or smoking makes you look like a wuss.
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** Smoking makes anyone who picks up a cigarette a badass but guarantees a death by something improbable and awesome.
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** Jack specifically bans his subordinates from smoking - the smell will give them away and he doesn't want to die from their incompetence. Besides he can't have them panting when he needs them chasing his quarry.
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* '''Reconstructed''': Jack quits smoking at some point.
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* '''Reconstructed''': The fact that Jack quits smoking is so good at some point.what he does despite that makes him even cooler.
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* '''Straight''': [[JackAttack Jack]] works at MurderInc, where most people with seniority smoke.
* '''Exaggerated''': Everyone at MurderInc smokes, and so do their targets.
** Jack is always smoking.
* '''Justified''': Jack is outside the
* '''Inverted''': NoSmoking.
* '''Subverted''': Jack has just finished his first assassination, and lights a cigarette--only to be told by his superior that MurderInc doesn't allow smoking for health and safety reasons.
* '''Double Subverted''': However, most people who really want to smoke usually get away with it, and Jack is one of those people.
* '''Parodied''': Jack has to take a "cool test" to determine whether or not he may take up smoking.
* '''Deconstructed''': Jack is slowed down due to his habit, and eventually dies due to it.
* '''Reconstructed''': Jack quits smoking at some point.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Jack tries to join MurderInc, but he is a chain smoker. He quits, and they let him in. Soon after, he discreetly takes it up again.
* '''Averted''': Jack never has anything to do with smoking while at MurderInc.
* '''Enforced''': "Jack would sure look [[RuleofCool cool]] if he took up smoking, wouldn't he?
* '''Lampshaded''': "I only smoke at work. Maybe it's just 'cause I'm cooler then."
* '''Invoked''': After a difficult assassination, Jack lights a cigarette and [[BadassBoast says something cool]]--even though he's by himself.
* '''Defied''': Jack knows one of his subordinates is considering starting smoking, and casually reminds him that smokers often end up with several different health issues.
* '''Discussed''': "Kid, you can't learn everything from movies. Smoking is like kryptonite for assassins. Or anyone who runs around a lot, really."
* '''Conversed''': "It's amazing how you never see those adventure-y types coughing or anything."
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SmokingIsCool, if you can quit before you get lung cancer.
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