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* '''Downplayed''': Alice accidentally smack bob crotch. It's enough to make his eyes bug out a bit, but isn't much.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice accidentally smack bob smacks Bob's crotch. It's enough to make his eyes bug out a bit, but isn't much.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice accidentally smack bob crotch. It's enough to make his eyes bug out a bit, but isn't much.
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** ... But she still needs to get rid of some more anger, so she hits Bob a few times [[NoKillLikeOverkill with a diamond-studded sledgehammer]].
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** ... But she still needs to get rid of some more anger, so she hits Bob a few times [[NoKillLikeOverkill [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill with a diamond-studded sledgehammer]].
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** [[Webcomic/{{Shadowgirls}} Alice kicks Bob in the crotch so hard he]] [[BloodFromTheMouth vomits blood]]
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** [[Webcomic/{{Shadowgirls}} Alice kicks Bob in the crotch so hard he]] [[BloodFromTheMouth vomits blood]]blood.]]
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** Bob is actually [[NighInvulnerability impervious to all damage]] [[AchillesHeel except for attacks aimed at his groin.]]
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** Bob is actually [[NighInvulnerability impervious to all damage]] [[AchillesHeel except for attacks aimed at his groin.]]groin]].
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** Bob punches Alice [[BreastAttack in the chest.]]
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** An attack ''from'' the groin, whether by UnusualWeaponMounting or a BiggusDickus.(Ex. [[FanFic/ThirtyHs GROINSAWS!]])
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** Bob punches Alice [[BreastAttack in the chest.]]
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** An attack ''from'' the groin, whether by UnusualWeaponMounting ora BiggusDickus.BiggerIsBetterInBed. (Ex. [[FanFic/ThirtyHs GROINSAWS!]])
** An attack ''from'' the groin, whether by UnusualWeaponMounting or
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** A swift kick to the groin works on everything, from robots to ghosts to [[DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu C'thulhu himself.]]
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** A swift kick to the groin works on everything, from robots to ghosts to [[DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu C'thulhu himself.]]himself]].
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** Alternatively, any [[ShareTheMalePain groaning]] or referring to the fact the getting kicked in the crotch [[CaptainObvious hurts like the]] [[IncrediblyLamePun dickens.]]
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** Alternatively, any [[ShareTheMalePain groaning]] or referring to the fact the getting kicked in the crotch [[CaptainObvious hurts like the]] [[IncrediblyLamePun dickens.]][[JustForPun dickens]].
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** Someone decides to learn [[CombatPragmatist Krav Maga]], which is based on [[CombatPragmatist doing what it takes to suvive a fight]].
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** Someone decides to learn [[CombatPragmatist Krav Maga]], which is based on [[CombatPragmatist doing what it takes to suvive survive a fight]].
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* '''Discussed''': "WHY?!! WHY IS ALLWAYS [[UnusualEuphemism THE GRONCH?!!"]]
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* '''Discussed''': "WHY?!! WHY IS ALLWAYS IT ALWAYS [[UnusualEuphemism THE GRONCH?!!"]]GRONCH]]?!!"
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* '''Intended Audience Reaction''': A {{Mook}} is dispatched [[CombatPragmatist by a swift kick to the groin followed by an elbow hit to the neck]] or a DoubleTap to the back of head, showing the [[{{Badass}} efficiency and training of the main character]].
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* '''Intended Audience Reaction''': A {{Mook}} {{Mook|s}} is dispatched [[CombatPragmatist by a swift kick to the groin followed by an elbow hit to the neck]] or a DoubleTap to the back of head, showing the [[{{Badass}} efficiency and training of the main character]].
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** Bob wore a cup that shielded him from the kick.
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** Bob [[WhatAnIdiot removes the cup from his pants to show it off]], Alice takes this chance to kick him again.
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* '''Reconstructed''': Ruptured testicles won't matter as it was a fight to the death involving the local CombatPragmatist who just won.
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* '''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** Ruptured testicles won't matter as it was a fight to the death involving the local CombatPragmatist who just won.
** Ruptured testicles won't matter as it was a fight to the death involving the local CombatPragmatist who just won.
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** Bob just got kicked by a CombatPragmatist, and it only angers him. No matter, said CombatPragmatist follows with [[AHandfulForAnEye a handful of ground pepper to the eyes]]. If that fails, well there's still more dirty tricks where those came from.
** Alice is able to prove that she acted in self-defense, whether it was true [[KarmaHoudini or not]].
** Alice is able to prove that she acted in self-defense, whether it was true [[KarmaHoudini or not]].
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* '''Reconstructed''': [[CombatPragmatist But it works well in a fight]].
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* '''Reconstructed''': [[CombatPragmatist But Ruptured testicles won't matter as it works well in was a fight]].fight to the death involving the local CombatPragmatist who just won.
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** Bob had BallsOfSteel and Legs strong enough to hold Alice's in place. He also does not take dirty fighting well.
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** The same as Played Straight, but [[GenderFlip with the genders reversed]].
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* '''GenderFlipped''': Bob kicks Alice in the groin. Alice find it painful, much to her surprise.
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* '''Intended Audience Reaction''': A {{Mook}} is dispatched [[CombatPragmatist by a swift kick to the groin followed by an elbow hit to the neck]] or a DoubleTap to the back of head, showing the [[{{Badass}} efficiency and training of the main character]].
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** Bob raped Alice in the past, and this is only the beginning of her [[RapeAndRevenge violent revenge on him]].
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** Bob Alice is putting her women's self-defense training to good use on Bob, who is making an unwanted advance on her.
** Alice was rapedAlice by Bob in the past, and this a vicious groin attack is only the beginning of her [[RapeAndRevenge violent revenge revenge]] on him]].him.
** Alice was raped
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** Alice is [[RapeAndRevenge taking violent revenge on Bob for raping her]], and kicking or shooting him in the groin is just the beginning of what she has planned for him.
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** Bob raped Alice in the past, and this is only the beginning of her [[RapeAndRevenge taking violent revenge on Bob for raping her]], and kicking or shooting him in the groin is just the beginning of what she has planned for him.him]].
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** Alice is [[RapeAndRevenge taking violent revenge on Bob for raping her]], and kicking or shooting him in the groin is just the beginning of what she has planned for him.
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* '''Defied''': "It t'woul be uncivil to kick at your pride, so I will be satisfied [[EyeScream with your face.]]"
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* '''Defied''': '''Defied''':
** "Itt'woul would be uncivil to kick at your pride, so I will be satisfied [[EyeScream with your face.]]"
** "It
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** After slugging him, Alice kicks Bob in the groin for real.
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** ... But she still needs to get rid of some more anger, so she hits Bob a few times with a diamond-studded sledgehammer.
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** ... But she still needs to get rid of some more anger, so she hits Bob a few times [[NoKillLikeOverkill with a diamond-studded sledgehammer.sledgehammer]].
** The attack does one of the following: make Bob impotent, destroy his groin outright, and/or [[OneHitKill kills Bob]].
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** Bob is a misogynist asshole, and anyone (males included) will gladly kick him in his balls, over and over.
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** Bob is a misogynist StrawMisogynist asshole, and anyone (males included) [[LaserGuidedKarma will gladly kick him in his balls, balls]], over and over.
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** Bob sues Alice for assault. Cue GenreShift from wacky comedy to CourtroomEpisode where Alice loses all her savings to compensate for injuring Bob.
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* '''Deconstructed''': The kick damages Bob's nerve endings, and possibly even ruptures his testicles.
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* '''Deconstructed''': '''Deconstructed''':
** The kick damages Bob's nerve endings, and possibly even ruptures his testicles.
** The kick damages Bob's nerve endings, and possibly even ruptures his testicles.
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** Bob gets kicked. It really hurts, so Bob, rather than keeling over, becomes very very angry.
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** [[{{Shadowgirls}} Alice kicks Bob in the crotch so hard he]] [[BloodFromTheMouth vomits blood]]
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** [[{{Shadowgirls}} [[Webcomic/{{Shadowgirls}} Alice kicks Bob in the crotch so hard he]] [[BloodFromTheMouth vomits blood]]
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** Alternatively, let's face it, [[CombatPragmatist the groin is a very sensitive area]]. Getting impacted there would really hurt.
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** Alternatively, let's face it, [[CombatPragmatist the groin is a very sensitive area]]. Getting impacted there would really hurt.
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** Alice isn't aiming for the crotch, and a painful keel-over, but for the femoral artery, and a OneHitKill.
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** Alice isn't aiming for the crotch, and a painful keel-over, but for the femoral artery, and a OneHitKill.
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** An attack ''from'' the groin, whether by UnusualWeaponMounting or a BiggusDickus.
*** [[FanFic/ThirtyHs GROINSAWS.]]
* '''Subverted''': Bob jumps back so as to avoid Alice's kick.
*** [[FanFic/ThirtyHs GROINSAWS.]]
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** An attack ''from'' the groin, whether by UnusualWeaponMounting or a BiggusDickus.
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* '''Parodied''': Alice flicks Bob in the groin, resulting in a torrent of HighPressureBlood. Alternately, Bob tapes a knife to his groin and tries to keep an erection, just to use the knife as a makeshift dagger.
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* '''Parodied''': '''Parodied''':
** Alice flicks Bob in the groin, resulting in a torrent ofHighPressureBlood. Alternately, Bob tapes a knife to his groin and tries to keep an erection, just to use the knife as a makeshift dagger.HighPressureBlood.
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* '''Deconstructed''': The kick damages Bob's nerve endings, and possibly even ruptures his testicles.
* '''Reconstructed''': [[CombatPragmatist But it works well in a fight]].
* '''Reconstructed''': [[CombatPragmatist But it works well in a fight]].
* '''Deconstructed''': The kick damages Bob's nerve endings, and possibly even ruptures his testicles.
* '''Reconstructed''': [[CombatPragmatist But it works well in a fight]].
* '''Reconstructed''': [[CombatPragmatist But it works well in a fight]].
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* '''Played for Drama''': All his friends think it was in good humor at the time, but Bob does not survive the groin attack.
** Bob ''survives'', but permanent damage is done. A full description of the damage would be... distasteful at best, but in short, he'll never be a father, and he spends the next week and a half having to call a nurse if he needs to pee.
** Bob ''survives'', but permanent damage is done. A full description of the damage would be... distasteful at best, but in short, he'll never be a father, and he spends the next week and a half having to call a nurse if he needs to pee.
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* '''Played for Drama''': Drama''':
** All his friends think it was in good humor at the time, but Bob does not survive the groin attack.
** Bob ''survives'', but permanent damage is done. A full description of the damage would be...distasteful Distasteful at best, but in short, he'll never be a father, and he spends the next week and a half having to call a nurse if he needs to pee.
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** Bob ''survives'', but permanent damage is done. A full description of the damage would be...
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** [[FanFic/ThirtyHs GROINSAWS.]]
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** Alice isn't aiming for the crotch, and a painful keel-over, but for the femoral artery, and an OneHitKill.
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** Alice isn't aiming for the crotch, and a painful keel-over, but for the femoral artery, and an a OneHitKill.
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** Alice isn't aiming for the crotch, and a painful keel-over, but for the femoral artery, and an InstaKill.
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** Alice isn't aiming for the crotch, and a painful keel-over, but for the femoral artery, and an InstaKill.OneHitKill.
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** The attacker isn't aiming for the crotch, but for the femoral artery.
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** The attacker Alice isn't aiming for the crotch, and a painful keel-over, but for the femoral artery.artery, and an InstaKill.
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** The attacker isn't aiming for the crotch, but for the femoral artery, which runs along the inner thigh. A cut femoral artery is just as lethal and quick as a slit throat.
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** The attacker isn't aiming for the crotch, but for the femoral artery, which runs along the inner thigh. A cut femoral artery is just as lethal and quick as a slit throat.artery.
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** The attacker isn't aiming for the crotch, but for the femoral artery, which runs along the inner thigh. A cut femoral artery is just as lethal and quick as a slit throat.
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** [[ThirtyHs GROINSAWS.]]
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** [[ThirtyHs [[FanFic/ThirtyHs GROINSAWS.]]
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** Bob may not have anything downstairs, but he still has a pelvic bone that can be broken.
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* '''Played For Laugh''': [[BloodyHilarious A]] [[DeadpanSnarker snarky]] [[BloodyHilarious description of the effects that attack had is made by a bystander/the game interface.]]
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* '''Played For Laugh''': Laughs''': [[BloodyHilarious A]] [[DeadpanSnarker snarky]] [[BloodyHilarious description of the effects that attack had is made by a bystander/the game interface.]]
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** Bob ''survives'', but permanent damage is done. A full description of the damage would be... distasteful at best, but in short, he'll never be a father, and he spends the next week and a half having to call a nurse if he needs to pee.
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Back to GroinAttack
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Back to GroinAttack[[GroinAttack Groin atta- *OW!*]] Knock that off!
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* '''Defied''': "It t'woul be uncivil to kick at your pride, so i will be satisfied [[EyeScream with your face.]]"
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*'''Exploited''': "Bob" is a SweetPollyOliver and draws attenton to her crotch so that they strike where she has extra padding.
* '''Defied''': "It t'woul be uncivil to kick at your pride, soi I will be satisfied [[EyeScream with your face.]]"
* '''Defied''': "It t'woul be uncivil to kick at your pride, so
