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** EVERY. SINGLE. ATTACK.
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** EVERY. SINGLE. ATTACK.Pretty much done as is.
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** [[PersonOfMassDestruction Alice]] makes her presence known by [[MeteorSummoningAttack calling down a huge meteor]] to strike Emperor Evulz's castle.
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** Alice tries an awesome diving kick for her entrance... and misses it completely, ending up flying behind evulz and crashing indignantly into the floor.
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** Alice tries an awesome diving kick for her entrance... and misses it completely, ending up flying behind evulz Evulz and crashing indignantly into the floor.
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* '''Played For Horror''': ???
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* '''Played For Horror''': ???Alice's DynamicEntry is used as a JumpScare.
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** After he overwhelmed Bob, Evulz threw a [[KiAttack force-bolt]] to Alice, who was hiding and waiting for a chance to snipe him.
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** After he overwhelmed Bob, Evulz threw a [[KiAttack [[KiManipulation force-bolt]] to Alice, who was hiding and waiting for a chance to snipe him.
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* '''Parodied''': Alice uses the Dynamic Entry every time she enters a room or building, even in everyday normal life.
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* '''Parodied''': '''Parodied''':
** Alice uses the Dynamic Entry every time she enters a room or building, even in everyday normal life.
** Alice uses the Dynamic Entry every time she enters a room or building, even in everyday normal life.
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* '''Exploited''': EVERY. SINGLE. ATTACK.
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* '''Exploited''': '''Exploited''':
** EVERY. SINGLE. ATTACK.
** EVERY. SINGLE. ATTACK.
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->'''Alice:''' ''"Flying kick!"''
->'''Evulz:''' ''"Flying'' what?!"
->'''*POW!*'''
->'''Evulz:''' ''"Flying'' what?!"
->'''*POW!*'''
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-->'''Alice:''' "Flying kick!"
-->'''Evulz:''' "Flying ''what?''"
-->'''*POW*'''
-->'''Evulz:''' "Flying ''what?''"
-->'''*POW*'''
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-->'''Evulz:''' "Flying ''what?''"
-->'''*POW*'''
->'''Evulz:''' ''"Flying'' what?!"
->'''*POW!*'''
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** Alice tries an awesome diving kick for her entrance... and misses it completely, ending up flying behind evulz and crashing indignantly into the floor.
** [[TheAnticipator Evulz knows Alice will try this,]] and [[CounterAttack counters just as she bursts through the window.]]
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%%* '''Played For Laughs''': ???
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-->'''Alice:''' "Flying kick!"
-->'''Evulz:''' "Flying ''what?''"
-->'''*POW*'''
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* '''Double Subverted''': But Alice did an impossible kung-fu maneuver, and kick him with her ''other'' feet. Bet he didn't see that one coming.
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* '''Double Subverted''': But Alice did an impossible kung-fu maneuver, and kick kicked him with her ''other'' feet.other foot. Bet he didn't see that one coming.
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Suddenly, a link back to DynamicEntry!
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%%* '''Implied''': Alice is shown breaking into a building. A second later, it zooms into the building and a mook is shown knocked out next to her.
%%* '''Deconstructed''': Evulz has predicted an unexpected attack and closed the battle with Bob inside a barrier.
%%* '''Reconstructed''': Alice has secretly developed a technique that can break through the barrier. She strikes Evulz while the latter thinks they are now safe from ambushes.
%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': A villain is bigged up to set the tone for the arc, and is defeated in a single kick from behind by Alice, creating a humorous anticlimax.
%%* '''Deconstructed''': Evulz has predicted an unexpected attack and closed the battle with Bob inside a barrier.
%%* '''Reconstructed''': Alice has secretly developed a technique that can break through the barrier. She strikes Evulz while the latter thinks they are now safe from ambushes.
%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': A villain is bigged up to set the tone for the arc, and is defeated in a single kick from behind by Alice, creating a humorous anticlimax.
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%%* '''Played For Drama''': A hero's celebration is brutally ended after a villain strikes from nowhere and kills one of them, leaving the remainder in shock for a few moments while the villain presses the attack.
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* '''Invoked''': ???
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* '''Invoked''': ???Alice waited until the final moment because attacking then would be the least predictable outcome for Evulz.
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%%* '''Implied''': ???
Alice is shown breaking into a building. A second later, it zooms into the building and a mook is shown knocked out next to her.
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Evulz has predicted an unexpected attack and closed the battle with Bob inside a barrier.
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Alice has secretly developed a technique that can break through the barrier. She strikes Evulz while the latter thinks they are now safe from ambushes.
%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''':???A villain is bigged up to set the tone for the arc, and is defeated in a single kick from behind by Alice, creating a humorous anticlimax.
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%%* '''Reconstructed''':
%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''':
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%%* '''Played For Drama''': ???
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%%* '''Played For Drama''': ???A hero's celebration is brutally ended after a villain strikes from nowhere and kills one of them, leaving the remainder in shock for a few moments while the villain presses the attack.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice enetrs a room by slamming the door open, accidentally hitting Bob.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice enetrs enters a room by slamming the door open, accidentally hitting Bob.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice's kick didn't do enough damage to Evulz, who was armor-clad from head to toe. It did distract him, though.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice's kick didn't do enough damage to Evulz, who was armor-clad from head to toe. It did distract him, though.Alice enetrs a room by slamming the door open, accidentally hitting Bob.
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* '''Double Subverted''': But Alice did an impossible kung-fu manuver, and kick him with her ''other'' feet. Bet he didn't see that one coming.
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* '''Double Subverted''': But Alice did an impossible kung-fu manuver, maneuver, and kick him with her ''other'' feet. Bet he didn't see that one coming.
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--> Bob: "Oh wow, even I didn't see that one coming."
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* '''Defied''': Alice had a sniper rifle next to her and could see evuls through the window.
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* '''Defied''': Alice had a sniper rifle next to her and could see evuls Evulz through the window.
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** All the {{Nakama}} fought Evulz at the same time.
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** All the {{Nakama}} TrueCompanions fought Evulz at the same time.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice's kick made [[YourHeadAsplode Evulz' head explode]] into [[LudicrousGibs leaky visceral bits of brain-matters, blood, and bone-pieces]].
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* '''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
** Alice's kick made [[YourHeadAsplode Evulz' head explode]] into [[LudicrousGibs leaky visceral bits of brain-matters, blood, and bone-pieces]].
** Alice's kick made [[YourHeadAsplode Evulz' head explode]] into [[LudicrousGibs leaky visceral bits of brain-matters, blood, and bone-pieces]].
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* '''Inverted''': After he overwhelmed Bob, Evulz threw a [[KiAttack force-bolt]] to Alice, who was hiding and waiting for a chance to snipe him.
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** After he overwhelmed Bob, Evulz threw a [[KiAttack force-bolt]] to Alice, who was hiding and waiting for a chance to snipe him.
** After he overwhelmed Bob, Evulz threw a [[KiAttack force-bolt]] to Alice, who was hiding and waiting for a chance to snipe him.
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* '''Averted''': All the {{Nakama}} fought Evulz at the same time.
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* '''Averted''': '''Averted''':
** All the {{Nakama}} fought Evulz at the same time.
** All the {{Nakama}} fought Evulz at the same time.
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** Alice jumped through space time riding on a whale just to deliver this kick, and the surrounding environment doesn't fare well.
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Not a parody, as it can be played seriously. Added a different example for parodied.
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* '''Parodied''': After Alice, the rest of Bob's {{Nakama}} delivered their respective DynamicEntry to Evulz, complete with SuperMovePortraitAttack.
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* '''Parodied''': After Alice, Alice uses the rest of Bob's {{Nakama}} delivered their respective DynamicEntry to Evulz, complete with SuperMovePortraitAttack.Dynamic Entry every time she enters a room or building, even in everyday normal life.
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**A character enters a room in a normal way.
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** A character uses a powerful attack move that also results in them leaving the scene.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': ???
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* '''Zig Zagged''': ???Alice crashed in with a kick, which Evulz dodged. She tried to restart her attack with her other feet, but missed or was also dodged.
