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* '''Straight''': [[TokenMiniMoe Miki]] is a cheerful, [[GenkiGirl peppy youngster]] with GirlishPigtails, infectious laughter [[BreadEggsMilkSquick and a knack for]] GoodOldFisticuffs.
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* '''Straight''': [[TokenMiniMoe Miki]] is a cheerful, [[GenkiGirl peppy youngster]] with GirlishPigtails, infectious laughter [[BreadEggsMilkSquick [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers and a knack for]] GoodOldFisticuffs.
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* '''Straight''': [[TokenMiniMoe Miki]] is a cheerful, [[GenkiGirl peppy youngster]] with GirlishPigtails, infectious laughter and a knack for GoodOldFisticuffs.
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* '''Straight''': [[TokenMiniMoe Miki]] is a cheerful, [[GenkiGirl peppy youngster]] with GirlishPigtails, infectious laughter [[BreadEggsMilkSquick and a knack for for]] GoodOldFisticuffs.
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* '''Parodied''': Miki sees Franchise/{{Godzilla}} and [[ImTakingHimHomeWithMe wants to take him home,]] ''[[ImTakingHimHomeWithMe by picking him up]]'' [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin and taking him home]].
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* '''Parodied''': Miki sees Franchise/{{Godzilla}} and [[ImTakingHimHomeWithMe wants to take him home,]] ''[[ImTakingHimHomeWithMe so she does by picking him up]]'' [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin up and taking him home]].running off excitedly. People can only look on in shock.
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** Miki is a very strong ShapeShifter. In her true form, she's more of a BrawnHilda.
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** She then gets back up, says "[[NowItsMyTurn My turn]]" and returns the favor.
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* '''Downplayed''': Miki is a petite teenage girl who can hold her own in a fight.
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* '''Downplayed''': Miki is a petite teenage girl who can hold her own in a fight.fight by [[WeakButSkilled using clever tactics]] and [[CombatPragmatist pragmatic strategies]].
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* '''Downplayed''': ???Miki is a petite teenage girl who can hold her own in a fight.
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* '''Parodied''': Miki sees {{Godzilla}} and [[ImTakingHimHomeWithMe wants to take him home,]] ''[[ImTakingHimHomeWithMe by picking him up]]'' [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin and taking him home]].
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* '''Parodied''': Miki sees {{Godzilla}} Franchise/{{Godzilla}} and [[ImTakingHimHomeWithMe wants to take him home,]] ''[[ImTakingHimHomeWithMe by picking him up]]'' [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin and taking him home]].
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Deconstructed''':
** After seeing Miki's strength, [[IdiotHero Agata]] assumes she'll be able to handle [[HarmfulToMinors anything that gets thrown at her]] despite her youth and inexperience. [[TheLancer Lemina]], on the other hand, isn't so sure, but chafes at having to look after [[JustAKid some dumb brat]]. And [[TheSmartGuy Cecil]] sees her fighting ability as TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior...
** And the fact that she's so strong for her size makes the team forget that there are things stronger that her. They have her try to deal with [[TheBrute Grik]]. NoHoldsBarredBeatDown ensuses.
** Alternatively, Miki starts off as cute yet weak, but by becoming stronger she gets a rougher exterior.
* '''Reconstructed''':
** Miki firmly believes that her cuteness gives her physical strength. It turns out her confidence in her appearance and her confidence in strength are directly proportional to one another.
** [[TheFace Daniel helps them get along]] by reminding Agata that she's still younger than them while assuring Lemina that she doesn't need babysitting and helping Cecil cope with her nerves. All the while encouraging Miki to do her best.
** Once Miki recovers she adds WaifFu and some kind of projectile to her arsenal
** After seeing Miki's strength, [[IdiotHero Agata]] assumes she'll be able to handle [[HarmfulToMinors anything that gets thrown at her]] despite her youth and inexperience. [[TheLancer Lemina]], on the other hand, isn't so sure, but chafes at having to look after [[JustAKid some dumb brat]]. And [[TheSmartGuy Cecil]] sees her fighting ability as TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior...
** And the fact that she's so strong for her size makes the team forget that there are things stronger that her. They have her try to deal with [[TheBrute Grik]]. NoHoldsBarredBeatDown ensuses.
** Alternatively, Miki starts off as cute yet weak, but by becoming stronger she gets a rougher exterior.
* '''Reconstructed''':
** Miki firmly believes that her cuteness gives her physical strength. It turns out her confidence in her appearance and her confidence in strength are directly proportional to one another.
** [[TheFace Daniel helps them get along]] by reminding Agata that she's still younger than them while assuring Lemina that she doesn't need babysitting and helping Cecil cope with her nerves. All the while encouraging Miki to do her best.
** Once Miki recovers she adds WaifFu and some kind of projectile to her arsenal
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** Agatha looks for the biggest and roughest and ugliest guy around to be his BigGuy because he can't imagine that cute little girl could be any help despite impressive strength.
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** Agatha looks for the biggest and roughest and ugliest guy around to be his BigGuy because he can't imagine that cute little girl could be any help despite impressive strength.
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* '''Conversed''': " Are they trying to appeal to [[AmazonChaser guys that like fighting girls?]]
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* '''Conversed''': " Are they trying to appeal to [[AmazonChaser guys that like fighting girls?]] girls?]]
* '''Deconstructed''':
** After seeing Miki's strength, [[IdiotHero Agata]] assumes she'll be able to handle [[HarmfulToMinors anything that gets thrown at her]] despite her youth and inexperience. [[TheLancer Lemina]], on the other hand, isn't so sure, but chafes at having to look after [[JustAKid some dumb brat]]. And [[TheSmartGuy Cecil]] sees her fighting ability as TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior...
** And the fact that she's so strong for her size makes the team forget that there are things stronger that her. They have her try to deal with [[TheBrute Grik]]. NoHoldsBarredBeatDown ensuses.
** Alternatively, Miki starts off as cute yet weak, but by becoming stronger she gets a rougher exterior.
* '''Reconstructed''':
** Miki firmly believes that her cuteness gives her physical strength. It turns out her confidence in her appearance and her confidence in strength are directly proportional to one another.
** [[TheFace Daniel helps them get along]] by reminding Agata that she's still younger than them while assuring Lemina that she doesn't need babysitting and helping Cecil cope with her nerves. All the while encouraging Miki to do her best.
** Once Miki recovers she adds WaifFu and some kind of projectile to her arsenal.
* '''Deconstructed''':
** After seeing Miki's strength, [[IdiotHero Agata]] assumes she'll be able to handle [[HarmfulToMinors anything that gets thrown at her]] despite her youth and inexperience. [[TheLancer Lemina]], on the other hand, isn't so sure, but chafes at having to look after [[JustAKid some dumb brat]]. And [[TheSmartGuy Cecil]] sees her fighting ability as TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior...
** And the fact that she's so strong for her size makes the team forget that there are things stronger that her. They have her try to deal with [[TheBrute Grik]]. NoHoldsBarredBeatDown ensuses.
** Alternatively, Miki starts off as cute yet weak, but by becoming stronger she gets a rougher exterior.
* '''Reconstructed''':
** Miki firmly believes that her cuteness gives her physical strength. It turns out her confidence in her appearance and her confidence in strength are directly proportional to one another.
** [[TheFace Daniel helps them get along]] by reminding Agata that she's still younger than them while assuring Lemina that she doesn't need babysitting and helping Cecil cope with her nerves. All the while encouraging Miki to do her best.
** Once Miki recovers she adds WaifFu and some kind of projectile to her arsenal.
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Hot Amazon renamed to Amazon Chaser, to make it clear that it\'s an in-universe trope about a character attracted to an Action Girl because of her amazon-ness
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* '''Conversed''': " Are they trying to appeal to [[HotAmazon guys that like fighting girls?]]
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* '''Conversed''': " Are they trying to appeal to [[HotAmazon [[AmazonChaser guys that like fighting girls?]]
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* '''Justified''': Miki has SuperStrength, and has been learning how to use it ever since her family first recognized her talent.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** Miki has SuperStrength, and has been learning how to use it ever since her family first recognized her talent.
** Miki has SuperStrength, and has been learning how to use it ever since her family first recognized her talent.
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* '''Inverted''': Homura is a BadassGrandpa.
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** Homura is a BadassGrandpa.
** Homura is a BadassGrandpa.
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* '''Subverted''': '''Subverted''':
** Miki is actually a RobotGirl.
** Miki is actually a RobotGirl.
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* '''Deconstructed''': After seeing Miki's strength, [[IdiotHero Agata]] assumes she'll be able to handle [[HarmfulToMinors anything that gets thrown at her]] despite her youth and inexperience. [[TheLancer Lemina]], on the other hand, isn't so sure, but chafes at having to look after [[JustAKid some dumb brat]]. And [[TheSmartGuy Cecil]] sees her fighting ability as TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior...
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* '''Deconstructed''': '''Deconstructed''':
** After seeing Miki's strength, [[IdiotHero Agata]] assumes she'll be able to handle [[HarmfulToMinors anything that gets thrown at her]] despite her youth and inexperience. [[TheLancer Lemina]], on the other hand, isn't so sure, but chafes at having to look after [[JustAKid some dumb brat]]. And [[TheSmartGuy Cecil]] sees her fighting ability as TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior...
** After seeing Miki's strength, [[IdiotHero Agata]] assumes she'll be able to handle [[HarmfulToMinors anything that gets thrown at her]] despite her youth and inexperience. [[TheLancer Lemina]], on the other hand, isn't so sure, but chafes at having to look after [[JustAKid some dumb brat]]. And [[TheSmartGuy Cecil]] sees her fighting ability as TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior...
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* '''Reconstructed''': Miki firmly believes that her cuteness gives her physical strength. It turns out her confidence in her appearance and her confidence in strength are directly proportional to one another.
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* '''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** Miki firmly believes that her cuteness gives her physical strength. It turns out her confidence in her appearance and her confidence in strength are directly proportional to one another.
** Miki firmly believes that her cuteness gives her physical strength. It turns out her confidence in her appearance and her confidence in strength are directly proportional to one another.
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* '''Defied''': Agatha looks for the biggest and roughest and ugliest guy around to be his BigGuy because he can't imagine that cute little girl could be any help despite impressive strength.
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* '''Defied''': '''Defied''':
** Agatha looks for the biggest and roughest and ugliest guy around to be his BigGuy because he can't imagine that cute little girl could be any help despite impressive strength.
** Agatha looks for the biggest and roughest and ugliest guy around to be his BigGuy because he can't imagine that cute little girl could be any help despite impressive strength.
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** And the fact that she's so strong for her size makes the team forget that there are things stronger that her. They have her try to deal with [[TheBrute Grik]]. Grik squeezes her head until it explodes.
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** And the fact that she's so strong for her size makes the team forget that there are things stronger that her. They have her try to deal with [[TheBrute Grik]]. Grik squeezes her head until it explodes.NoHoldsBarredBeatDown ensuses.
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* '''Reconstructed''': Miki firmly believes that her cuteness gives her physical strength. It turns out her confidence in her appearance and her confidence in strength are directly proportional to one another.
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* '''Reconstructed''': Miki firmly believes that her cuteness gives her physical strength. It turns out her confidence in her appearance and her confidence in strength are directly proportional to one another. another.
**[[TheFace Daniel helps them get along]] by reminding Agata that she's still younger than them while assuring Lemina that she doesn't need babysitting and helping Cecil cope with her nerves. All the while encouraging Miki to do her best.
** Once Miki recovers she adds WaifFu and some kind of projectile to her arsenal
**[[TheFace Daniel helps them get along]] by reminding Agata that she's still younger than them while assuring Lemina that she doesn't need babysitting and helping Cecil cope with her nerves. All the while encouraging Miki to do her best.
** Once Miki recovers she adds WaifFu and some kind of projectile to her arsenal
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* '''Defied''': ???Agatha looks for the biggest and roughest and ugliest guy around to be his BigGuy because he can't imagine that cute little girl could be any help despite impressive strength.
**Alternatively, Miki decides to be a ChildMage instead of this trope because she sees it as more realistic [[LinearWarriorsQuadraticWizards or more practical in the long run.]]
**Alternatively, Miki decides to be a ChildMage instead of this trope because she sees it as more realistic [[LinearWarriorsQuadraticWizards or more practical in the long run.]]
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* '''Conversed''': ???" Are they trying to appeal to [[HotAmazon guys that like fighting girls?]]
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* '''Exaggerated''': Miki is an absolutely ''adorable'' little kid who totes around [[EverythingsBetterWithPlushies a plush]] [[EverythingsBetterWithBunnies bunny]]. She's also a PintsizedPowerhouse capable of taking out literal ''giants'' while barely breaking a sweat.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Miki is an absolutely ''adorable'' little kid who totes around [[EverythingsBetterWithPlushies a plush]] [[EverythingsBetterWithBunnies bunny]].bunny. She's also a PintsizedPowerhouse capable of taking out literal ''giants'' while barely breaking a sweat.
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* '''Straight''': Miki is a cheerful, [[GenkiGirl peppy youngster]] with GirlishPigtails, infectious laughter and a knack for GoodOldFisticuffs.
* '''Exaggerated''': [[TokenLoli Miki]] is an absolutely ''adorable'' little kid who totes around [[EverythingsBetterWithPlushies a plush]] [[EverythingsBetterWithBunnies bunny]]. She's also a PintsizedPowerhouse capable of taking out literal ''giants'' while barely breaking a sweat.
* '''Exaggerated''': [[TokenLoli Miki]] is an absolutely ''adorable'' little kid who totes around [[EverythingsBetterWithPlushies a plush]] [[EverythingsBetterWithBunnies bunny]]. She's also a PintsizedPowerhouse capable of taking out literal ''giants'' while barely breaking a sweat.
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* '''Straight''': Miki [[TokenLoli Miki]] is a cheerful, [[GenkiGirl peppy youngster]] with GirlishPigtails, infectious laughter and a knack for GoodOldFisticuffs.
* '''Exaggerated''':[[TokenLoli Miki]] Miki is an absolutely ''adorable'' little kid who totes around [[EverythingsBetterWithPlushies a plush]] [[EverythingsBetterWithBunnies bunny]]. She's also a PintsizedPowerhouse capable of taking out literal ''giants'' while barely breaking a sweat.
* '''Exaggerated''':
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* '''Exaggerated''': Miki [[TokenLoli Miki]] is an absolutely ''adorable'' little kid who totes around [[EverythingsBetterWithPlushies a plush]] [[EverythingsBetterWithBunnies bunny]]. She's also a PintsizedPowerhouse capable of taking out literal ''giants'' while barely breaking a sweat.
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* '''Straight''': [[TokenLoli Miki]] is a cheerful, [[GenkiGirl peppy youngster]] with GirlishPigtails, infectious laughter and a knack for GoodOldFisticuffs.
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* '''Straight''': [[TokenLoli Miki]] Miki is a cheerful, [[GenkiGirl peppy youngster]] with GirlishPigtails, infectious laughter and a knack for GoodOldFisticuffs.
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** Miki is ArtificialHuman with SuperStrength. Her creator designed her to be cute so people won't suspect her.
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* '''Deconstructed''': After seeing Miki's strength, [[IdiotHero Agata]] assumes she'll be able to handle [[HarmfulToMinors anything that gets thrown at her]] despite her youth and inexperience. [[TheLancer Lemina]], on the other hand, isn't so sure, but chafes at having to look after [[JustAKid some dumb brat]]. And [[TheSmartGuy Cecil]] sees her fighting ability as TroublingUnchildhoodBehavior...
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* '''Deconstructed''': After seeing Miki's strength, [[IdiotHero Agata]] assumes she'll be able to handle [[HarmfulToMinors anything that gets thrown at her]] despite her youth and inexperience. [[TheLancer Lemina]], on the other hand, isn't so sure, but chafes at having to look after [[JustAKid some dumb brat]]. And [[TheSmartGuy Cecil]] sees her fighting ability as TroublingUnchildhoodBehavior...TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior...
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* '''Parodied''': Miki sees {{Godzilla}} and [[ImTakingHimHomeWithMe wants to take him home,]] ''[[ImTakingHimHomeWithMe by picking him up]]'' [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTin and taking him home]].
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* '''Parodied''': Miki sees {{Godzilla}} and [[ImTakingHimHomeWithMe wants to take him home,]] ''[[ImTakingHimHomeWithMe by picking him up]]'' [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTin [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin and taking him home]].
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* '''Parodied''': Miki sees {{Godzilla}} and wants to take him home, by picking him up and taking him home.
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* '''Parodied''': Miki sees {{Godzilla}} and [[ImTakingHimHomeWithMe wants to take him home, home,]] ''[[ImTakingHimHomeWithMe by picking him up up]]'' [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTin and taking him home.home]].
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** Alternatively, Miki starts off as cute yet weak, but by becoming stronger she gets a rougher exterior.
* '''Reconstructed''':???Miki firmly believes that her cuteness gives her physical strength. It turns out her confidence in her appearance and her confidence in strength are directly proportional to one another.
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* '''Inverted''': Homura is a BadassGrampa.BadassGrandpa.
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* '''Inverted''': Homura is a frail old man.
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* '''Inverted''': Homura is a frail old man.BadassGrampa.
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* '''Exploited''': ???When looking for teammates, [[IdiotHero Agata]] tries to find the smallest, cutest girl around, because he knows she'll be the toughest too.
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** Mark is an incredibly burly man that uses magic rather than resorting to physical combat.
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* '''Parodied''': Miki sees {{Godzilla}} and wantes wants to take him home, by picking him up and taking him home.
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* '''Parodied''': Miki sees {{Godzilla}} and wantes to take him home, by picking him up ant taking him home.
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* '''Parodied''': Miki sees {{Godzilla}} and wantes to take him home, by picking him up ant and taking him home.
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* '''Enforced''': ???Since [[TokenLoli Miki]] is very popular among fans, the author decide to give her more screentime. However the story is focus on battle and there is very little room for character without combat skill, so he made her a LittleMissBadass as well.
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* '''Parodied''': ???Miki sees {{Godzilla}} and wantes to take him home, by picking him up ant taking him home.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': ???Miki's fighting ability seems to differ from day to day. One day,she's as strong as most adult fighters,another she's able to take down giants,the next she's just a normal kid,and the day after that she's at adult strength again.
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** And the fact that she's so strong for her size makes the team forget that there are things stronger that her. They have her try to deal with [[TheBrute Grik]]. Grik squeezes her head until it explodes.
