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* The [[spoiler: death]] of [[spoiler: Tal Merrik]] is [[http://youtu.be/sMGM6Ne-nOo?t=8m1s pretty funny]] in a dark way.
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* The [[spoiler: death]] of [[spoiler: Tal Merrik]] is [[http://youtu.be/sMGM6Ne-nOo?t=8m1s pretty funny]] in a dark way.way.
*This Troper found the part in "Supply Lines" when Jar Jar was distracting the Trade Federation delagates with... art with table-ware. And when Lok Dod found out about the supply ships to Ryloth? He just looked at Jar Jar, and he waved.
*This Troper found the part in "Supply Lines" when Jar Jar was distracting the Trade Federation delagates with... art with table-ware. And when Lok Dod found out about the supply ships to Ryloth? He just looked at Jar Jar, and he waved.
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* When the Son admits to [[spoiler: attacking his father]] in Altar of Mortis. The flippant way he describes the situation and twiddles his fingers is very [[BlackComedy darkly humorous]] in an otherwise super serious arc. [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xoFDlXU7yXE#t=0m32s See it here]].
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* When the Son admits to [[spoiler: attacking his father]] in Altar of Mortis. The flippant way he describes the situation and twiddles his fingers is very [[BlackComedy darkly humorous]] in an otherwise super serious arc. [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xoFDlXU7yXE#t=0m32s com/watch?v=f4M1QbNLAD4 See it here]].
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* The [[spoiler: death]] of [[spoiler: Tal Merrik]] is [[http://youtu.be/sMGM6Ne-nOo?t=8m1s pretty (darkly) hilarious]].
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* The [[spoiler: death]] of [[spoiler: Tal Merrik]] is [[http://youtu.be/sMGM6Ne-nOo?t=8m1s pretty (darkly) hilarious]].funny]] in a dark way.
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* The [[spoiler: death]] of [[spoiler: Tal Merrik]] is pretty (darkly) hilarious.
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* The [[spoiler: death]] of [[spoiler: Tal Merrik]] is [[http://youtu.be/sMGM6Ne-nOo?t=8m1s pretty (darkly) hilarious.hilarious]].
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* [[http://werebazs.deviantart.com/gallery/?catpath=scraps#/d4uii4q This]] and [[http://werebazs.deviantart.com/gallery/?catpath=scraps#/d4uiiay this]] GettingCrapPastTheRadar much?
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* [[http://werebazs.deviantart.com/gallery/?catpath=scraps#/d4uii4q This]] and [[http://werebazs.deviantart.com/gallery/?catpath=scraps#/d4uiiay this]] GettingCrapPastTheRadar much?much?
* The [[spoiler: death]] of [[spoiler: Tal Merrik]] is pretty (darkly) hilarious.
* The [[spoiler: death]] of [[spoiler: Tal Merrik]] is pretty (darkly) hilarious.
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* When the warlord in bounty expects his [[spoiler: bride]], he instead finds that Ventress has [[spoiler: switched her with Boba Fett.]]
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* When the warlord in bounty "Bounty" expects his [[spoiler: bride]], he instead finds that Ventress has [[spoiler: switched her with Boba Fett.''Boba Fett''.]]
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** Heck, all of their dialogue together was quite comical, particularly the FoeYay.
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** Heck, all of their dialogue together was quite comical, particularly the FoeYay.entertaining.
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* When the Son admits to [[spoiler: attacking his father]] in Altar of Mortis. The flippant way he describes the situation and twiddles his fingers is very [[BlackHumor darkly humorous]] in an otherwise super serious arc. [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xoFDlXU7yXE#t=0m32s See it here]].
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* When the Son admits to [[spoiler: attacking his father]] in Altar of Mortis. The flippant way he describes the situation and twiddles his fingers is very [[BlackHumor [[BlackComedy darkly humorous]] in an otherwise super serious arc. [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xoFDlXU7yXE#t=0m32s See it here]].
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-->'''General Grievous''': Get us out of here!
-->'''Battle Droid''': Uhhh where are we suppose to go?
-->'''General Grievous''': Graaah
-->'''Battle Droid''': Uhh general, well I guess I'm in charge now.
-->'''General Grievous''': Get us out of here!
-->'''Battle Droid''': Uhhh where are we suppose to go?
-->'''General Grievous''': Graaah
-->'''Battle Droid''': Uhh general, well I guess I'm in charge now.
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-->'''Obi-Wan''': Vos Vos, somebody lives here.
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* [[http://werebazs.deviantart.com/gallery/?catpath=scraps#/d4uii4q This]] and [[http://werebazs.deviantart.com/gallery/?catpath=scraps#/d4uiiay this]] GettingCrapPastTheRadar much?
* [[http://werebazs.deviantart.com/gallery/?catpath=scraps#/d4uii4q This]] and [[http://werebazs.deviantart.com/gallery/?catpath=scraps#/d4uiiay this]] GettingCrapPastTheRadar much?
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* When the Son admits to [[spoiler: attacking his father]] in Altar of Mortis. The flippant way he describes the situation and twiddles his fingers is very [[BlackHumor darkly humorous]] in an otherwise super serious arc. [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xoFDlXU7yXE#t=0m32s See it here]].
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* When the Son admits to [[spoiler: attacking his father]] in Altar of Mortis. The flippant way he describes the situation and twiddles his fingers is very [[BlackHumor darkly humorous]] in an otherwise super serious arc. [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xoFDlXU7yXE#t=0m32s See it here]].here]].
* When Obi-Wan and Ventress [[EnemyMine are forced to team up]] against [[spoiler:Savage and Maul]], they find themselves outmatched and have to flee. Obi-Wan uses this opportunity to lampshade Ventress' DirtyCoward tendencies:
-->'''Obi-Wan''': We're outmatched.
-->'''Ventress''': You want to run?
-->'''Obi-Wan''': I learned from watching you!
-->'''Ventress''': [[SarcasmMode Funny...]]
* When Obi-Wan and Ventress [[EnemyMine are forced to team up]] against [[spoiler:Savage and Maul]], they find themselves outmatched and have to flee. Obi-Wan uses this opportunity to lampshade Ventress' DirtyCoward tendencies:
-->'''Obi-Wan''': We're outmatched.
-->'''Ventress''': You want to run?
-->'''Obi-Wan''': I learned from watching you!
-->'''Ventress''': [[SarcasmMode Funny...]]
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-->'''Battle Droid''': Uhh general, well I guest I'm in charge now.
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-->'''Battle Droid''': Uhh general, well I guest guess I'm in charge now.
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* Obi-Wan's [[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend reaction]] to Anakin calling Duchess Satine his girlfriend.
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* When the Son admits to [[spoiler: attacking his father]] in Altar of Mortis. The flippant way he describes the situation and twiddles his fingers is very [[BlackHumor darkly humorous]] in an otherwise super serious arc. [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xoFDlXU7yXE#t=0m32s See it here]].
* When the Son admits to [[spoiler: attacking his father]] in Altar of Mortis. The flippant way he describes the situation and twiddles his fingers is very [[BlackHumor darkly humorous]] in an otherwise super serious arc. [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xoFDlXU7yXE#t=0m32s See it here]].
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* "Oh, great, it's gonna be another one of ''those'' planets." {{http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6TIXTDMp26k}}
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* "Oh, great, it's gonna be another one of ''those'' planets." {{http://www.[[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6TIXTDMp26k}}com/watch?v=6TIXTDMp26k]]
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-->'''Vos''': Ugh smells like somebody died here.here.
* Obi-Wan's [[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend reaction]] to Anakin calling Duchess Satine his girlfriend.
* Obi-Wan's [[SheIsNotMyGirlfriend reaction]] to Anakin calling Duchess Satine his girlfriend.
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-->'''Battle Driod''': Droid''': Uhhh where are we suppose to go?
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-->'''General Grievous''': Get us out of here!
-->'''Battle Driod''': Uhhh where are we suppose to go?
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-->'''General Grievous''': Uhh general, well I guest I'm in charge now.
-->'''General Grievous''': Get us out of here!
-->'''Battle Driod''': Uhhh where are we suppose to go?
-->'''General Grievous''': Graaah
-->'''General Grievous''': Uhh general, well I guest I'm in charge now.
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* Voss breaking in Mama's hut.
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* Voss Vos breaking in Mama's hut.
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-->'''Ahsoka''': (''rolls her eyes'') Boys... whether they're of the Republic or Separatists, they're the same.
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-->'''Ahsoka''': (''rolls her eyes'') Boys... whether they're of the Republic or Separatists, they're the same.same.
* Voss breaking in Mama's hut.
-->'''Obi-Wan''': Vos somebody lives here.
-->'''Vos''': Ugh smells like somebody died here.
* Voss breaking in Mama's hut.
-->'''Obi-Wan''': Vos somebody lives here.
-->'''Vos''': Ugh smells like somebody died here.
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* One of the Padawans attempt to use a Jedi Mind Trick on a Trandoshan; it fails. Chewbacca punches the Trandoshan in the head, the Padawan tries the mind trick again and it succeeds.
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* One of the Padawans attempt to use a Jedi Mind Trick on a Trandoshan; it fails. Chewbacca punches the Trandoshan in the head, the Padawan tries the mind trick again and it succeeds.succeeds.
* When Lux Bonteri proves that AllMenArePerverts.
-->'''Ahsoka''': Look at me. I don't look so bad, don't I?
-->'''Lux''': (''MaleGaze'') No... not bad at all.
-->'''Ahsoka''': (''rolls her eyes'') Boys... whether they're of the Republic or Separatists, they're the same.
* When Lux Bonteri proves that AllMenArePerverts.
-->'''Ahsoka''': Look at me. I don't look so bad, don't I?
-->'''Lux''': (''MaleGaze'') No... not bad at all.
-->'''Ahsoka''': (''rolls her eyes'') Boys... whether they're of the Republic or Separatists, they're the same.
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* One of the Padawans attempt to use a Jedi Mind Trick on a Trandoshan; it fails. Chewbacca punches the Trandoshan in the head, the padawan tries the mind trick again and it succeeds.
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* One of the Padawans attempt to use a Jedi Mind Trick on a Trandoshan; it fails. Chewbacca punches the Trandoshan in the head, the padawan Padawan tries the mind trick again and it succeeds.
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* Padawan attempts to use Jedi Mind Trick on a bossk; it fails. Chewbacca punches bossk in the head, Padawan tries Jedi mind trick again, it succeeds.
* Padawan attempts to use Jedi Mind Trick on a bossk; it fails. Chewbacca punches bossk in the head, Padawan tries Jedi mind trick again, it succeeds.
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* "Oh, great, its it's gonna be another one of ''those'' planets." {{http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6TIXTDMp26k}}
*Padawan attempts One of the Padawans attempt to use a Jedi Mind Trick on a bossk; Trandoshan; it fails. Chewbacca punches bossk the Trandoshan in the head, Padawan the padawan tries Jedi the mind trick again, again and it succeeds.
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* Padawan attempts to use Jedi Mind Trick on a bossk, bossk; it fails, fails. Chewbacca punches bossk in the head, Padawan tries Jedi mind trick again, it succeedssucceeds.
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* "Oh, great, its gonna be another one of ''those'' planets." {{http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6TIXTDMp26k}}
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* "Oh, great, its gonna be another one of ''those'' planets." {{http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6TIXTDMp26k}}com/watch?v=6TIXTDMp26k}}
* Padawan attempts to use Jedi Mind Trick on a bossk, it fails, Chewbacca punches bossk in the head, Padawan tries Jedi mind trick again, it succeeds
* Padawan attempts to use Jedi Mind Trick on a bossk, it fails, Chewbacca punches bossk in the head, Padawan tries Jedi mind trick again, it succeeds
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* *after too many old man cracks against Dooku* "I would kill you both if I didn't have to drag your bodies."
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* *after too many old man cracks against Dooku* "I would kill you both if I didn't have to drag your bodies.""
* "Oh, great, its gonna be another one of ''those'' planets." {{http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6TIXTDMp26k}}
* "Oh, great, its gonna be another one of ''those'' planets." {{http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6TIXTDMp26k}}
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** Oh, Jinx has a couple gems. "That's great, but it might as well be Coruscant as far as I'm concerned. ''We have no ship.''"
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** Oh, Jinx has a couple gems. "That's great, but it might as well be Coruscant as far as I'm concerned. ''We ''[[CaptainObvious We have no ship.ship]].''"
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* "Fine, we'll do it the Wookiee way."
* *after too many old man cracks against Dooku* "I would kill you both if I didn't have to drag your bodies."
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* "Help! I'll be ''defoliated!''"''defoliated!''"
* "Fine, we'll do it the Wookiee way."
* "Fine, we'll do it the Wookiee way."
