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!!The Original Game
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!!The Sequel
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* If [[WarmUpBoss Doctor West]] somehow manages to win the first battle with the player, Nyarlathotep appears, confused, saying that even ''it'' couldn't [[DidntSeeThatComing have predicted this outcome]], and now it has no idea what to do with the story. It offers a few half-assed, barely written epilogue scenarios and asks you to choose which one you like best.
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* During the battle with Dagon, after it combined with its consort Hydra, Kurou named the resorting monstrosity "Combined Monster Gondra".
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* During the battle with Dagon, after it combined with its consort Hydra, Kurou named the resorting monstrosity "Combined Monster Gondra".Gondola".
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* During the battle with Dagon, after it combined with its consort Hydra, Kurou named the resorting monstrosity "Combined Monster Gondra".
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Lolicon and shotacon have been disambiguated. Links with too little context are being removed - "paedo" is not always a trope, examples where the tropeworthiness is unclear are being removed. Also, please do not use "loli" as a synonym for little girl; see Lolicon And Shotacon as to why not
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* Makoto's PsychoLesbian {{Lolicon}} antics (usually PlayedForLaughs) straddle the line between hysterical and terrifying.
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* Makoto's PsychoLesbian {{Lolicon}} paedophile antics (usually PlayedForLaughs) straddle the line between hysterical and terrifying.
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-->'''Kurou''': This scene is way too bizarre: an occult loli girl and a tamed product of cosmic terror are lecturing three grown men.
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-->'''Kurou''': This scene is way too bizarre: an occult loli {{loli|conAndShotacon}} girl and a tamed product of cosmic terror are lecturing three grown men.
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** Al eating crab looks about eighty shades of wrong given how the art style [[FreudWasRight makes the crab meat look extremely freudian.]]
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** Al eating crab looks about eighty shades of wrong given how the art style [[FreudWasRight makes the crab meat look extremely freudian.]]
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* While it is a rather sad scene in many ways, one cannot help but laugh at Nyarlathotep trolling Azrad by turning the Scimitar of Barzai into a paper fan, and then taking apart Aeon with the sorts of tools you build plastic models with.
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* While it is a rather sad scene in many ways, one cannot help but laugh at Nyarlathotep trolling Azrad by turning the Scimitar of Barzai into a paper fan, and then taking apart Aeon with the sorts of tools you build plastic models with.
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* The awesomeness of Al's [[HesBack She's Back]] moment in the sequel is somewhat ruined by her going into LargeHam mode and being completely over-the-top arrogant (far more than she usually is), complete with an EvilLaugh and declaring herself the "main heroine" of the story, with Kurou in the supporting role. Even Kurou is rather baffled by her behavior.
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* The awesomeness of Al's [[HesBack She's Back]] moment in the sequel is somewhat ruined undermined by her going into LargeHam mode and being completely over-the-top arrogant (far more than she usually is), complete with an EvilLaugh and declaring herself the "main heroine" of the story, with Kurou in the supporting role. Even Kurou is rather baffled by her behavior. Heck, ''Demonbane'' is wearing a O_O expression in the background!
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* Kurou and Azrad get into a heated argument with Kuzaku, which ends with Kuzaku holding a sword to Kurou's neck. Then all of a sudden Al and Dunsany show up and start ''scolding'' them on acting like that. None of them know what to say in response.
-->'''Kurou''': This scene is way too bizarre: an occult loli girl and a tamed product of cosmic terror are lecturing three grown men.
-->'''Kurou''': This scene is way too bizarre: an occult loli girl and a tamed product of cosmic terror are lecturing three grown men.
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* While it is a rather sad scene in many ways, one cannot help but laugh at Nyarlathotep trolling Azrad by turning the Scimitar of Barzai into a paper fan, and then taking apart Aeon with the sorts of tools you build plastic models with.
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* The awesomeness of Al's [[HesBack She's Back]] moment in the sequel is somewhat ruined by her going into LargeHam mode and being completely over-the-top arrogant (far more than she usually is), complete with an EvilLaugh and declaring herself the "main heroine" of the story, with Kurou in the supporting role. Even Kurou is rather baffled by her behavior.
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** Kurou's (rather understandable} WTF reaction to Nya giving him a handjob.
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** Kurou's (rather understandable} understandable) WTF reaction to Nya giving him a handjob.
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-->'''Al''': DON'T SAY THINGS LIKE THAT!
-->'''Kuro''': Al, what's wrong with you? Are you still shy after all this time?
-->'''Al''': Don't compare me to you, you sex-crazed maniac! ''*MegatonPunch*''
-->'''Kuro''': Al, what's wrong with you? Are you still shy after all this time?
-->'''Al''': Don't compare me to you, you sex-crazed maniac! ''*MegatonPunch*''
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-->'''Al''': DON'T SAY THINGS LIKE THAT!
THAT! ''*MegatonPunch*''
-->'''Kuro''': Owowowow... Al, what's wrong with you? Are you still shy after all this time?
-->'''Al''':Don't compare me to I'm not so vulgar as you, you sex-crazed maniac! ''*MegatonPunch*''maniac.
-->'''Kuro''': Owowowow... Al, what's wrong with you? Are you still shy after all this time?
-->'''Al''':
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* The sequel again, after Kurou decides to abandon dialogue and just beat some sense into an angry Kuzaku:
-->'''Al''': You damned sports enthusiast.
-->'''Kurou''': Hey! I am a cultural enthusiast.
-->'''Al''': You damned physical culture enthusiast.
-->'''Al''': You damned sports enthusiast.
-->'''Kurou''': Hey! I am a cultural enthusiast.
-->'''Al''': You damned physical culture enthusiast.
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-->'''Al''': Why-WHY ARE YOU COMING IN HERE TOO!? And, hey! Don't touch me there!
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-->'''Al''': Why-WHY ARE YOU COMING IN HERE TOO!? And, hey! Don't TOO!?
-->'''Kuro''': Oh, don't mind me.
-->'''Al''': Hey! Do-don't touch me there!
-->'''Kuro''': Oh, don't mind me.
-->'''Al''': Hey! Do-don't touch me there!
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* In Ruri's route; Kuro prepares to summon Demonbane...only to find out that the teleporter is broken; thus making it impossible for him to directly summon it.
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* In Ruri's route; Kuro prepares to summon Demonbane...only to find out that the teleporter is broken; thus making it impossible for him to directly summon it. it.
* The sequel has Kuro deciding to join Al in the bath, against her wishes:
-->'''Al''': Why-WHY ARE YOU COMING IN HERE TOO!? And, hey! Don't touch me there!
-->'''Kuro''': Can't be helped, this tub is too cramped... Ah, so soft...
-->'''Al''': DON'T SAY THINGS LIKE THAT!
-->'''Kuro''': Al, what's wrong with you? Are you still shy after all this time?
-->'''Al''': Don't compare me to you, you sex-crazed maniac! ''*MegatonPunch*''
* The sequel has Kuro deciding to join Al in the bath, against her wishes:
-->'''Al''': Why-WHY ARE YOU COMING IN HERE TOO!? And, hey! Don't touch me there!
-->'''Kuro''': Can't be helped, this tub is too cramped... Ah, so soft...
-->'''Al''': DON'T SAY THINGS LIKE THAT!
-->'''Kuro''': Al, what's wrong with you? Are you still shy after all this time?
-->'''Al''': Don't compare me to you, you sex-crazed maniac! ''*MegatonPunch*''
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Removing Nightmare Fuel potholes. NF should be on YMMV only.
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* Makoto's PsychoLesbian {{Lolicon}} antics (usually PlayedForLaughs) straddle the line between hysterical and NightmareFuel.
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* Makoto's PsychoLesbian {{Lolicon}} antics (usually PlayedForLaughs) straddle the line between hysterical and NightmareFuel.terrifying.
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* In Ruri's route; Kuro prepares to summon Demonbane...only to find out that the teleporter is broken; thus making it impossible for him to directly summon it.
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* Doctor West's EpicFail. [[spoiler: Summons a Destroyer Machine from the sea so rusted it's useless on arrival.]] It's so pathetic even the Black Lodge {{Mook}}s turn away in shame, not even lifting a finger to help their boss after Kurou and Al, in the most deadpan reaction ever, calmly decide to beat the shit out of him.
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** Kurou gets DraggedIntoDrag and proves such an AttractiveBentGender ''Doctor West'' gets turned on.
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** Kurou gets DraggedIntoDrag and proves such an AttractiveBentGender ''Doctor West'' gets turned on. What gets even funnier is that before it's all over, ''everyone'' joined in making Kurou pretty, and Elsa's reaction to Kurou being prettied up is LOL worthy.
*** However, the crowning funny of the entire situation is [[DistractedByMyOwnSexy Kurou's own reaction to seeing how he looks in a mirror.]]
*** However, the crowning funny of the entire situation is [[DistractedByMyOwnSexy Kurou's own reaction to seeing how he looks in a mirror.]]
