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* CasualKink: Lucia is a masochist and her relations with [[spoiler: Itachi Uchiha]] centered around this. However, she freely admits that she has her limits, and [[spoiler: Itachi]] exceeded them. As it turns out, he was apparently teaching her torture resistance as well.

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* CasualKink: Lucia is a masochist and her relations with [[spoiler: Itachi Uchiha]] centered around this. However, she freely admits that she has her limits, and [[spoiler: Itachi]] exceeded them. As it turns out, [[spoiler: he was apparently teaching her how to resist torture resistance as well.all along when he appeared to exceed those limits of Lucia's.]]

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* AgonyOfTheFeet: In [[spoiler: chapter 19]], Yukio stabs a Grass jonin in the foot to escape him while they're taking Rina, and in [[spoiler: chapter 24]], slices that same jonin's Achilles tendon.



* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Naruto gives one to Yukio after he [[spoiler: slices Itachi's eye during their bout]]:
-->'''Naruto''': "You maimed a Leaf Nin."\\
'''Yukio''': "He's not a Leaf! He's a civilian!"\\
'''Naruto''': "Is ''that'' how you treat civilians?"



* BloodFromTheMouth: During his bout with Sasuke, Naruto hits Sasuke with a wind jutsu with such force that this happens.



* TeethClenchedTeamwork: During Sakura's test, [[GenerationXerox history repeats itself]] as Itachi, Haro, and Amaya spend quite a bit of time butting heads, though they come together after Sakura gets Itachi in the leg with a kunai. To their credit, they grasp the true goal of the genin test far faster than Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke ever did.

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During Sakura's test, [[GenerationXerox history repeats itself]] as Itachi, Haro, and Amaya spend quite a bit of time butting heads, though they come together after Sakura gets Itachi in the leg with a kunai. To kunai.
** [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] with Itachi and Yukio's respective genin teams while they're going to rescue Rina from the Grass. Despite
their credit, they grasp previous match, which resulted in Yukio damaging Itachi's eye with a kunai, the true goal of the genin test far faster than Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke ever did.two teams work quite well together.



* TranquilFury: [[spoiler: In chapter 14, when Lucia comes home and catches Amaya and Itachi together in the latter's room. She's clearly angry with both of them, but manages to stay calm and in control.]]
* TrainingFromHell: Itachi goes through it in a month before his team's match.

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* TranquilFury: In [[spoiler: In chapter 14, 14]], when Lucia comes home and catches Amaya and Itachi together in the latter's room. She's clearly angry with both of them, but manages to stay calm and in control.]]
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* TrainingFromHell: Itachi goes through it in a month before his team's match.match, courtesy of Sasuke. In some cases, he actually needs healing from Sakura to continue training.
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** Sakura briefly compares Amaya to Sasuke during the genin test, remarking that she is focused and skilled for her age.

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* BecauseISaidSo: Naruto invokes this trope to Sasuke while calling him out over his confronting Lucia in her own home behind his back, stating that, as Hokage, his orders and decisions are absolute, and while Sasuke does not have to feel the same way, he is bound as a Shinobi to follow them.



* CasualKink: [[spoiler: Lucia is a masochist and her relations with Itachi Uchiha centered around this. However, she freely admits that she has her limits, and Itachi exceeded them. As it turns out, he was apparently teaching her torture resistance as well.]]

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* CasualKink: [[spoiler: Lucia is a masochist and her relations with [[spoiler: Itachi Uchiha Uchiha]] centered around this. However, she freely admits that she has her limits, and Itachi [[spoiler: Itachi]] exceeded them. As it turns out, he was apparently teaching her torture resistance as well.]]



* EyepatchOfPower: While preparing to [[spoiler: rescue Rina, Sasuke gives Itachi a bandana bearing the Uchiha fan symbol to use as one.]]



* FunctionalAddict: Lucia, though in this case it's Functional Masochist.



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* RageAgainstTheReflection: After he [[spoiler: slices Itachi's eye]], Yukio is so conflicted over doing so that he punches out the mirror in the bathroom while scrubbing the blood off his hands.
* RavenHairIvorySkin: Lucia fits the trope. Dark hair? Check. Pale skin? Check. Considered beautiful by those around her? Check.



* TeethClenchedTeamwork: During Sakura's test, [[GenerationXerox history repeats itself]] as Itachi, Haro, and Amaya spend quite a bit of time butting heads, though they come together after Sakura gets Itachi in the leg with a kunai. To their credit, they grasp the true goal of the genin test far faster than Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke ever did.


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* TeethClenchedTeamwork: During Sakura's test, [[GenerationXerox history repeats itself]] as Itachi, Haro, and Amaya spend quite a bit of time butting heads, though they come together after Sakura gets Itachi in the leg with a kunai. To their credit, they grasp the true goal of the genin test far faster than Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke ever did.

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* CrapsackWorld: Lucia's homeland is this to a degree, at least when compared to Konoha and the Land of Fire in general. While investigating said homeland at Naruto's request, [[spoiler: Kakashi]] is surprised to hear from Lucia's sister just what people can get away with if they have money.

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* CrapsackWorld: Lucia's homeland is this CaptainOblivious: Lucia pretty much has to a degree, at least when compared spell out to Konoha Naruto exactly ''[[DomesticAbuser why]]'' she left her husband and the Land of Fire in general. While investigating said homeland at Naruto's request, [[spoiler: Kakashi]] is surprised came to hear from Lucia's sister just what people can get away with if they have money.Konoha.


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* ReallyGetsAround: Lucia claims at one point that she lost her virginity when she was Amaya's age.
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* WorstAid: During their genin test, Itachi reflexively pulls out the kunai Sakura caught him in the leg with despite Haro's warnings, and is promptly called out by Haro for it. Fortunately, Haro comes from a family of [[CombatMedic medical ninja]].
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* DefectorFromDecadence: [[spoiler: In chapter 24, a Grass genin named Saiya comes straight to Naruto and explicitly requests that he invade her village, which Naruto had made it a point to avoid doing. She explains that the Grass had become corrupted since the Higher Houses of Lucia's homeland (more specifically their money) came and that the people she knew, including her sister, who has essentially become a SexSlave to one of the members of the Higher Houses, have become corrupted along with it, and begs Naruto to step in and "save the Grass."]]

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* DefectorFromDecadence: [[spoiler: In chapter 24, a Grass genin named Saiya comes straight to Naruto and explicitly requests that he invade her village, which Naruto had made it a point to avoid doing. She explains that the Grass had become corrupted since the Higher Houses of Lucia's homeland (more specifically their money) came and that the people she knew, including her older sister, who has essentially become a SexSlave to one of the members of the Higher Houses, have become corrupted along with it, and begs Naruto to step in and "save the Grass."]]



* DontCallMeSir: Rock Lee insists that everyone, including Naruto's former teammates and his pals in the Rookie Nine, address Naruto solely as "Hokage" or "Lord Hokage." Naruto doesn't really care either way,

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* DontCallMeSir: Rock Lee insists that everyone, including Naruto's former teammates and his pals in the Rookie Nine, address Naruto solely as "Hokage" or "Lord Hokage." Hokage" to the extent that he lectures Tenten when she addresses him by name. Naruto doesn't really care either way,way.
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* AFatherToHisMen: Naruto is caring and compassionate to all of the people under his watch in Konoha, and is insistent that Shinobi are people and not just tools or mercs.



* BigBrotherInstinct: Itachi to Rina.



* BrilliantButLazy: It ''is'' still Naruto. In his first chapter, he convinces Sakura to help him with paperwork while he sleeps on the couch.



* BunnyEarsLawyer: Though Naruto remains somewhat goofy and lazy, it's established that he is quite a good Hokage and people both in and out of Konoha know of and respect him.

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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Though Naruto remains somewhat goofy and lazy, it's established that he is quite a good Hokage and people both in and out it's actually stated that he's one of Konoha know of and respect him.the most well-respected ninja on the planet.



* DefectorFromDecadence: [[spoiler: In chapter 24, a Grass genin named Saiya comes straight to Naruto and explicitly requests that he invade her village, which Naruto had made it a point to avoid doing. She explains that the Grass had become corrupted since the Higher Houses of Lucia's homeland (more specifically their money) came and that the people she knew, including her sister, have become corrupted along with it, and begs Naruto to step in and "save the Grass."]]

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* DefectorFromDecadence: [[spoiler: In chapter 24, a Grass genin named Saiya comes straight to Naruto and explicitly requests that he invade her village, which Naruto had made it a point to avoid doing. She explains that the Grass had become corrupted since the Higher Houses of Lucia's homeland (more specifically their money) came and that the people she knew, including her sister, who has essentially become a SexSlave to one of the members of the Higher Houses, have become corrupted along with it, and begs Naruto to step in and "save the Grass."]]



* GeniusDitz: It ''is'' still Naruto. In his first chapter, he convinces Sakura to help him with paperwork while he sleeps on the couch.



* HeroWithBadPublicity: It depends on how you define "hero" in her case, but Lucia is certainly not very popular back in her home country.



* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler: Rina blames herself for Yukio maiming Itachi's eye because she was the one who showed Itachi how to use the Chidori that led to it.]]

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* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler: Rina blames herself for Yukio maiming Itachi's eye because she was the one who showed Itachi how to use the Chidori that led Chidori, which he botched and gave Yukio the opportunity to it.do what he did.]]



* JerkAss: Yukio. He's able to get away with it due to being the best of the genin, though he does have the respect of the other genin and shows leadership potential. [[spoiler: Naruto eventually calls him out on his attitude after he maims Itachi and the reactions of his teammates don't help either. He begins to show he has some [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold good qualities]] when he tries to bring Rina back to the village. Also lapses into InnocentlyInsensitive, as he is genuinely surprised that Haro and Amaya hate him.]]

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* JerkAss: {{Jerkass}}: Yukio. He's able to get away with it due to being the best of the genin, though he does have the respect of the other genin and shows leadership potential. [[spoiler: Naruto eventually calls him out on his attitude after he maims Itachi and the reactions of his teammates don't help either. He begins to show he has some [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold good qualities]] when he tries to bring Rina back to the village. Also lapses into InnocentlyInsensitive, as he is genuinely surprised that Haro and Amaya hate him.]]


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* PlayAlongPrisoner: [[spoiler: In chapter 10, Jered Lassen willingly allows himself to be BoundAndGagged by Itachi and his team to throw any suspicion off him letting them go.]]


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* TranquilFury: [[spoiler: In chapter 14, when Lucia comes home and catches Amaya and Itachi together in the latter's room. She's clearly angry with both of them, but manages to stay calm and in control.]]

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* ApologeticAttacker:
** During Sakura's test, Haro apologizes to Itachi before knocking him out and swiping the bells.
** Also with Sakura herself during the test. She chucks a kunai into Itachi's leg to ensure that he knows just what the life of a ninja means, and remarks to herself that it hurt her more than it hurt him.



* CrapsackWorld: Lucia's homeland is this to a degree, at least when compared to Konoha and the Land of Fire in general. While investigating said homeland at Naruto's request, he is surprised to hear from Lucia's sister just what people can get away with if they have money.

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* CrapsackWorld: Lucia's homeland is this to a degree, at least when compared to Konoha and the Land of Fire in general. While investigating said homeland at Naruto's request, he [[spoiler: Kakashi]] is surprised to hear from Lucia's sister just what people can get away with if they have money.



* DefectorFromDecadence: [[spoiler: In chapter 24, a Grass genin named Saiya comes straight to Naruto and explicitly requests that he invade her village, which Naruto had made it a point to avoid doing. She explains that the Grass had become corrupted since the Higher Houses of Lucia's homeland (more specifically their money) came and that the people she knew, including her sister, have become corrupted along with it, and begs Naruto to step in and "save the Grass."

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* DefectorFromDecadence: [[spoiler: In chapter 24, a Grass genin named Saiya comes straight to Naruto and explicitly requests that he invade her village, which Naruto had made it a point to avoid doing. She explains that the Grass had become corrupted since the Higher Houses of Lucia's homeland (more specifically their money) came and that the people she knew, including her sister, have become corrupted along with it, and begs Naruto to step in and "save the Grass.""]]



* [[spoiler: NoPreggerSex: Averted with Sakura and Sasuke - the latter seems befuddled that the former is a lot more passionate than usual.]]


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* MissingMom: Amaya's mother was killed in a mission when she was just a baby. Part of the reason Naruto has her assigned to Sakura's squad is because he believes having a female role model will benefit her.


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* [[spoiler: NoPreggerSex: Averted with Sakura and Sasuke - the latter seems befuddled that the former is a lot more passionate than usual.]]


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* TeethClenchedTeamwork: During Sakura's test, [[GenerationXerox history repeats itself]] as Itachi, Haro, and Amaya spend quite a bit of time butting heads, though they come together after Sakura gets Itachi in the leg with a kunai. To their credit, they grasp the true goal of the genin test far faster than Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke ever did.
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* CrapsackWorld: Lucia's homeland is this to a degree, at least when compared to Konoha and the Land of Fire in general. While investigating said homeland at Naruto's request, he is surprised to hear from Lucia's sister just what people can get away with if they have money.


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* DefectorFromDecadence: [[spoiler: In chapter 24, a Grass genin named Saiya comes straight to Naruto and explicitly requests that he invade her village, which Naruto had made it a point to avoid doing. She explains that the Grass had become corrupted since the Higher Houses of Lucia's homeland (more specifically their money) came and that the people she knew, including her sister, have become corrupted along with it, and begs Naruto to step in and "save the Grass."


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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: WordOfGod invokes this to an extent, but doesn't really specify exactly what country Lucia's homeland is based off of other than explaining in an author's note that her surname is Dutch.
* GeniusDitz: It ''is'' still Naruto. In his first chapter, he convinces Sakura to help him with paperwork while he sleeps on the couch.


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* MindRape: [[spoiler: In one chapter, Sasuke forces Itachi (junior) to see a vision of the first Itachi murdering their parents. Sakura is unsurprisingly horrified at him for it.]]


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* WhyDidYouMakeMeHitYou: In the first chapter, Gehard cracks Rina across the face when she attempts to stop her from abusing Lucia, and then remarks to Lucia that she made him do it.

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* BeenThereShapedHistory: [[spoiler: Apparently, Lucia was the one who created the pills that kept the terminally ill Itachi alive long enough for Sasuke to face and kill him.]]

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* BeenThereShapedHistory: [[spoiler: Apparently, Lucia was the one who created supplied the pills that kept the terminally ill Itachi alive long enough for Sasuke to face and kill him.]]



* CasualKink: [[spoiler: Lucia is a masochist and her had relations with Itachi Uchiha centered around this. However, she freely admits that she has her limits, and Itachi exceeded them.]]

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* CasualKink: [[spoiler: Lucia is a masochist and her had relations with Itachi Uchiha centered around this. However, she freely admits that she has her limits, and Itachi exceeded them. As it turns out, he was apparently teaching her torture resistance as well.]]


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* TragicKeepsake: Of a sort; Naruto wears the Fourth Hokage's flame-embroidered BadassLongcoat.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler: Gehard may be an abusive pig, but he is genuinely shocked and horrified when he discovers that the people of the Higher Houses intend to kill Itachi and Rina.]]

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* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler: Gehard may be an abusive pig, but he is genuinely shocked and horrified when he discovers that the people of the Higher Houses he's working with fully intend to kill Itachi and Rina.]]

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* BeenThereShapedHistory: [[spoiler: Apparently, Lucia was the one who created the pills that kept the terminally ill Itachi alive long enough for Sasuke to face and kill him.]]



* BunnyEarsLawyer: Though Naruto remains somewhat goofy and lazy, it's established that he is quite a good Hokage and people both in and out of Konoha know of and respect him.
* CasualKink: [[spoiler: Lucia is a masochist and her had relations with Itachi Uchiha centered around this. However, she freely admits that she has her limits, and Itachi exceeded them.]]



* EyeScream: Yukio damages Itachi's left eye with a kunai. It's only thanks to Sakura that he doesn't lose it.

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* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler: Gehard may be an abusive pig, but he is genuinely shocked and horrified when he discovers that the people of the Higher Houses intend to kill Itachi and Rina.]]
* EyeScream: Yukio damages Itachi's left eye with a kunai. It's only thanks to Sakura that he doesn't lose it.the eye completely.



** Sakura herself does this, as she pulls something similar to her old sensei's infamous bell test for her genin team.

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** Sakura herself does this, as she pulls something similar to her old sensei's infamous bell test for her genin team. Of course, they grasp the true goal of the test far faster than she, Sasuke, and Naruto did.


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* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler: Rina blames herself for Yukio maiming Itachi's eye because she was the one who showed Itachi how to use the Chidori that led to it.]]


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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Yukio goes through this after he slashes Itachi's eye during their fight, though Naruto's lecture and the reaction of his own teammates probably contributes to it.


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* YouOweMe: Naruto persuades Sasuke to help train Itachi for his bout with Yukio by calling in a favor.

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* EyeScreamDomesticAbuser: Gehard, Lucia's husband. Being a masochist, she puts up with it, but ditches him when he turns his abuse on her kids.
* EyeScream: Yukio damages Itachi's left eye with a kunai. It's only thanks to Sakura that he doesn't lose it.



* JerkAss: Yukio. He's able to get away with it due to being the best of the genin, though he does have the respect of the other genin and shows leadership potential. [[spoiler: Naruto eventually calls him out on his attitude after he maims Itachi and the reactions of his teammates don't help either. He begins to show he has some [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold good qualities]] when he tries to bring Rina back to the village.]]

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* JerkAss: Yukio. He's able to get away with it due to being the best of the genin, though he does have the respect of the other genin and shows leadership potential. [[spoiler: Naruto eventually calls him out on his attitude after he maims Itachi and the reactions of his teammates don't help either. He begins to show he has some [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold good qualities]] when he tries to bring Rina back to the village. Also lapses into InnocentlyInsensitive, as he is genuinely surprised that Haro and Amaya hate him.]]

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* HiddenDepths: Naruto has taken to the responsibilities of being the Hokage very well.
** Also, how Sasuke deals with the metaphorical bombs dropped onto his lap.
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* HiddenDepths: Naruto has taken to the responsibilities of being the Hokage very well.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Oddly enough, '''Naruto''' is the Blue Oni to Sasuke's Red, despite that their overall characterizations haven't even changed all that much compared to canon. Their respective relationships also share the same dichotomy - Naruto and Hinata's relationship is subtle and understated just as Sasuke and Sakura's relationship is tempestuous and overt.

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* RedOniBlueOni: Oddly enough, '''Naruto''' is the Blue Oni to Sasuke's Red, despite that their overall characterizations haven't even changed all not changing that much compared to canon. Their respective relationships also share the same dichotomy - Naruto and Hinata's relationship is subtle and understated just as Sasuke and Sakura's relationship is tempestuous and overt.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Oddly enough, '''Naruto''' is the Blue Oni to Sasuke's Red. Their respective relationships also share the same dichotomy - Naruto and Hinata's relationship is subtle and understated just as Sasuke and Sakura's relationship is tempestuous and overt.

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* RedOniBlueOni: Oddly enough, '''Naruto''' is the Blue Oni to Sasuke's Red.Red, despite that their overall characterizations haven't even changed all that much compared to canon. Their respective relationships also share the same dichotomy - Naruto and Hinata's relationship is subtle and understated just as Sasuke and Sakura's relationship is tempestuous and overt.
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** You can see just how broken she is when she regards Ino and Sakura's friendship with '''curiosity'''.

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** You can see just how broken she is when she regards Ino and Sakura's friendship with '''curiosity'''. Heck, you even see her regard Hinata's love for Naruto in the same way earlier in the story.
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* [[spoiler: NoPreggerSex: Averted with Sakura and Sasuke - the latter seems befuddled that the former is a lot more passionate than usual. Unfortunately... ItGotWorse.]]

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* [[spoiler: NoPreggerSex: Averted with Sakura and Sasuke - the latter seems befuddled that the former is a lot more passionate than usual. Unfortunately... ItGotWorse.]]



* TheResenter: [[spoiler: Yukio towards Itachi, despite being TheAce and the SchoolIdol he sees Itachi's rapid improvement as a threat and challenges him after a difficult mission that Yukio perceives as a failure. [[ItGotWorse It ends badly]].]]

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* TheResenter: [[spoiler: Yukio towards Itachi, despite being TheAce and the SchoolIdol he sees Itachi's rapid improvement as a threat and challenges him after a difficult mission that Yukio perceives as a failure. [[ItGotWorse It ends badly]].badly.]]
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* HannibalLecture: Lucia gets subject to one; time will tell if it does hold.


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* KillItWithFire: [[spoiler: '''Sasuke:''' Amaterasu.]]

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* AbusiveParents: In several varieties, though the only physical abusive one of note is Itachi's father. Amaya's father is the neglectful variety that does care but is too stoic to do anything but meet her basic needs([[spoiler: and doesn't notice SheIsAllGrownUp, which causes a major problem later on]]).



** You can see just how broken she is when she regards Ino and Sakura's friendship with curiosity.

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** You can see just how broken she is when she regards Ino and Sakura's friendship with curiosity.'''curiosity'''.



* ChekhovsGunman: [[spoiler: Jered Lassen.]]



* NoTrueScotsmen: Yukio doesn't think Itachi understands what it means to be Shinobi, even insulting his surname as not belonging in the village. [[spoiler: Secretly, he's unnerved by how quickly Itachi is growing in his skills compared to someone who's been trained from birth like Yukio]].

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* NoTrueScotsmen: NoTrueScotsman: Yukio doesn't think Itachi understands what it means to be Shinobi, even insulting his surname as not belonging in the village. [[spoiler: Secretly, he's unnerved by how quickly Itachi is growing in his skills compared to someone who's been trained from birth like Yukio]].



* ParentalNeglect: Amaya's father is wrapped up in his duties to the extent that the only quality time he spends with his daughter is when they're training. It's not his fault entirely - he has been a ninja for far too long that he never really asked for time off to raise his daughter.

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* ParentalNeglect: Amaya's father is wrapped up in his duties to the extent that the only quality time he spends with his daughter is when they're training. It's not his fault entirely - he has been a ninja for far too long that he never really asked for time off to raise his daughter.daughter, or noticed that she has become a young woman in his absence.



* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Naruto as the Hokage as he balances his idealism with the realities of running the village, He does leave a lot of paperwork for Sakura, though he justifies this as paperwork not being the most important of being the Hokage. [[spoiler: He's actually made things so peaceful with the other villages that there is less need for shinobi and Konoha is feeling the pinch financially. Even then he has a plan to fix that problem, if he can get the feudal lords on board with it.]]

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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Naruto as the Hokage as he balances his idealism with the realities of running the village, He does leave a lot of paperwork for Sakura, though he justifies this as paperwork not being the most important of being the Hokage. [[spoiler: He's actually made things so peaceful with the other villages that there is less need for shinobi and Konoha is feeling the pinch financially. Even then he has a plan to fix that problem, problem - if he can get the feudal lords Feudal Lords on board with it.]]



* TheResenter: [[spoiler: Yukio towards Itachi, despite being TheAce and the SchoolIdol he sees Itachi's rapid improvement as a threat and challenges him after a difficult mission that Yukio perceives as a failure. It ends badly.]]

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* TheResenter: [[spoiler: Yukio towards Itachi, despite being TheAce and the SchoolIdol he sees Itachi's rapid improvement as a threat and challenges him after a difficult mission that Yukio perceives as a failure. [[ItGotWorse It ends badly.badly]].]]



** According to Sakura, he has one particular issue that's holding him back: Itachi. Having Itachi's kids show up doesn't help. [[spoiler: And this causes his breakup with Sakura when he finds out she's pregnant]].

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** According to Sakura, he has one '''one particular issue issue''' that's holding him back: Itachi. Having Itachi's kids show up doesn't help. [[spoiler: And this causes his breakup with Sakura when he finds out she's pregnant]].
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* TheResenter; [[spoiler: Yukio towards Itachi, despite being TheAce and the SchoolIdol he sees Itachi's rapid improvement as a threat and challenges him after a difficult mission that Yukio perceives as a failure. It ends badly.]]

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* TheResenter; TheResenter: [[spoiler: Yukio towards Itachi, despite being TheAce and the SchoolIdol he sees Itachi's rapid improvement as a threat and challenges him after a difficult mission that Yukio perceives as a failure. It ends badly.]]
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* AbusiveParents: In several varieties, though the only physical abusive one of note is Itachi's father. Amaya's father is the neglectful variety that does care but is too stoic to do anything but meet her basic needs([[spoiler: and doesn't notice SheIsAllGrownUp, which causes a major problem later on]]).


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* JerkAss: Yukio. He's able to get away with it due to being the best of the genin, though he does have the respect of the other genin and shows leadership potential. [[spoiler: Naruto eventually calls him out on his attitude after he maims Itachi and the reactions of his teammates don't help either. He begins to show he has some [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold good qualities]] when he tries to bring Rina back to the village.]]


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* NoTrueScotsmen: Yukio doesn't think Itachi understands what it means to be Shinobi, even insulting his surname as not belonging in the village. [[spoiler: Secretly, he's unnerved by how quickly Itachi is growing in his skills compared to someone who's been trained from birth like Yukio]].


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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Naruto as the Hokage as he balances his idealism with the realities of running the village, He does leave a lot of paperwork for Sakura, though he justifies this as paperwork not being the most important of being the Hokage. [[spoiler: He's actually made things so peaceful with the other villages that there is less need for shinobi and Konoha is feeling the pinch financially. Even then he has a plan to fix that problem, if he can get the feudal lords on board with it.]]


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* TheResenter; [[spoiler: Yukio towards Itachi, despite being TheAce and the SchoolIdol he sees Itachi's rapid improvement as a threat and challenges him after a difficult mission that Yukio perceives as a failure. It ends badly.]]


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** According to Sakura, he has one particular issue that's holding him back: Itachi. Having Itachi's kids show up doesn't help. [[spoiler: And this causes his breakup with Sakura when he finds out she's pregnant]].
* SheIsAllGrownUp: Amaya was an early bloomer back at the academy. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, her father was the last to notice]].


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** Also to Sasuke, though he admits how pointless this is if Sasuke won't bother to reciprocate.


* ShellShockedVeteran: Sasuke. [[{{Understatement}} Even now, the dude has]] '''[[{{Understatement}} issues]]'''.

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* ShellShockedVeteran: Sasuke. [[{{Understatement}} Even now, the dude has]] '''[[{{Understatement}} issues]]'''.has '''issues'''.
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** YourMileageMayVary (whether it is HeroicBSOD or VillainousBreakdown), but Sasuke doesn't show any signs of snapping out of his own issues.

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** YourMileageMayVary (whether it is HeroicBSOD or VillainousBreakdown), but Sasuke doesn't show any signs of snapping out of his own issues.
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** YourMileageMayVary (whether it is HeroicBSOD or VillainousBreakdown), but Sasuke doesn't show any signs of snapping out of his own issues.

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* GenerationXerox: [[spoiler: While he was named after his father, Itachi takes more after Sasuke. '''Rina''', on the other hand...]]

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* GenerationXerox: [[spoiler: While he was named after his father, Itachi takes more after Sasuke.Sasuke (it is his resemblance to pre-Uchiha Massacre Sasuke that makes his uncle uncomfortable when dealing with him). '''Rina''', on the other hand...]]


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* OriginalCharacter / OriginalGeneration: Lucia van Alstyne and her family.

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* OriginalCharacter / OriginalGeneration: Lucia van Alstyne Alstyne, her family, and her family.everyone else from that side of the world.


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** Itachi (junior) actively tries to prevent this from happening - first, with his mother; then with his team and sensei - and sometimes succeeds.

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