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* AFatherToHisMen: Naruto is caring and compassionate to all of the people under his watch in Konoha, and is insistent that Shinobi are people and not just tools or mercenaries.
** His skill with shadow clones also translates into administrativia: being able to delegate the right people to the right tasks at the right time (see Ibiki).
** His skill with shadow clones also translates into administrativia: being able to delegate the right people to the right tasks at the right time (see Ibiki).
* AllOfThem: Naruto, in a somewhat rare heroic example: he rallies all of Konoha towards Rina's rescue.
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* BabiesEverAfter: Subverted, as [[spoiler: Sasuke's actually scared witless of the fact that Sakura is carrying their child.]]
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* BabiesEverAfter: Subverted, as [[spoiler: Sasuke's actually scared witless of the fact that Sakura is carrying their child.]]child]].
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* EyepatchOfPower: While preparing to [[spoiler: rescue Rina, Sasuke gives Itachi a bandana bearing the Uchiha fan symbol to use as one.]]
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* EyepatchOfPower: While preparing to [[spoiler: rescue Rina, Sasuke gives Itachi a bandana bearing the Uchiha fan symbol to use as one.]]one]].
* AFatherToHisMen: Naruto is caring and compassionate to all of the people under his watch in Konoha, and is insistent that Shinobi are people and not just tools or mercenaries.
** His skill with shadow clones also translates into administrativia: being able to delegate the right people to the right tasks at the right time (see Ibiki).
** His skill with shadow clones also translates into administrativia: being able to delegate the right people to the right tasks at the right time (see Ibiki).
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* HowManyAllOfThem: Naruto, in a somewhat rare heroic example: he rallies all of Konoha towards Rina's rescue.
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* NotSoFastBucko: Holy crap, Itachi junior activated his Sharingan! He's beating his opponent up! He's gonna win! [[spoiler: Except the jutsu he wanted to use backfires on him terribly, and he gets a slash to an eye for his trouble.]]
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** However, the fact that [[spoiler: the feudal lords have gone underwater on their loans probably means that Lucia, for all intents and purposes, already owns a hefty chunk of Konoha.]]
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** However, the fact that [[spoiler: the feudal lords have gone underwater on their loans probably means that Lucia, for all intents and purposes, already owns a hefty chunk of Konoha.]]Konoha]].
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** According to Sakura, he has '''one particular issue''' that's holding him back: Itachi. Having Itachi's kids show up doesn't help. [[spoiler: And this causes his breakup with Sakura when he finds out she's pregnant]].
* SheIsAllGrownUp: Amaya was an early bloomer back at the academy. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, her father was the last to notice]].
* SheIsAllGrownUp: Amaya was an early bloomer back at the academy. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, her father was the last to notice]].
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** According to Sakura, he has '''one particular issue''' that's holding him back: Itachi. Having Itachi's kids show up doesn't help. [[spoiler: And this causes his breakup with Sakura when he finds out she's pregnant]].
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* SheIsAllGrownUp: Amaya was an early bloomer back at the academy. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, her father was the last tonotice]].notice.]]
* SheIsAllGrownUp: Amaya was an early bloomer back at the academy. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, her father was the last to
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* SnowMeansLove: Snow was falling when Itachi (senior) made his proposal to Lucia [[spoiler: (to pretend that they were ordinary people who loved each other). The sight of the snow outside also inspired her to name her inheritance as ''White Rain''.]]
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* SnowMeansLove: Snow was falling when Itachi (senior) made his proposal to Lucia [[spoiler: (to pretend that they were ordinary people who loved each other). The sight of the snow outside also inspired her to name her inheritance as ''White Rain''.]] Rain'']].
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* YourPrincessIsInAnotherCastle: Holy crap, Itachi junior activated his Sharingan! He's beating his opponent up! He's gonna win! [[spoiler: Except the jutsu he wanted to use backfires on him terribly, and he gets a slash to an eye for his trouble.]]
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Now has a [[Characters/WhiteRain character page]] that NeedsWikiMagicLove.
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%% * HowManyAllOfThem: Naruto, in a somewhat rare heroic example.
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* LoveTriangle: [[spoiler: Between Itachi, Amaya and Haro - funnily enough, it is '''Lucia''' who resolves the whole thing.]]
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* LoveTriangle: [[spoiler: Between Itachi, the three of [[spoiler:Itachi, Amaya and Haro - funnily enough, it is Haro]]. It's '''Lucia''' who resolves the whole thing.]]
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* MindRape: [[spoiler: In one chapter, Sasuke forces Itachi (junior) to see a vision of the first Itachi murdering their parents. Sakura is unsurprisingly horrified at him for it.]]
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* MindRape: [[spoiler: In one chapter, Sasuke [[spoiler:Sasuke]] forces Itachi (junior) [[spoiler:Itachi (junior)]] to see a vision of the [[spoiler:the first Itachi Itachi]] murdering their [[spoiler:their parents. Sakura is unsurprisingly horrified at him for it.]]it]].
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* [[spoiler: NoPreggerSex: Averted with Sakura and Sasuke - the latter seems befuddled that the former is a lot more passionate than usual.]]
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* [[spoiler: NoPreggerSex: Averted with Sakura [[spoiler:Sakura and Sasuke Sasuke]] - the latter seems befuddled that the former is a lot more passionate than usual.]]
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* PlayAlongPrisoner: [[spoiler: In chapter 10, Jered Lassen willingly allows himself to be BoundAndGagged by Itachi and his team to throw any suspicion off him letting them go.]]
* PoorCommunicationKills: [[spoiler: It's why Sasuke and Sakura break up.]]
* PoorCommunicationKills: [[spoiler: It's why Sasuke and Sakura break up.]]
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* PlayAlongPrisoner: [[spoiler: In chapter 10, Jered Lassen [[spoiler:Jered]] willingly allows himself to be BoundAndGagged by Itachi [[spoiler:Itachi and his team team]] to throw any suspicion off [[spoiler:off him letting them go.]]
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* [[spoiler: ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney]]: [[spoiler: Lucia]], but we haven't actually seen her successfully use it.
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* [[spoiler: ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney]]: ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney: [[spoiler: Lucia]], but we haven't actually seen her successfully use it.
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** [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] with Itachi and Yukio's respective genin teams while they're going to rescue Rina from the Grass. Despite their previous match, which resulted in Yukio damaging Itachi's eye with a kunai, the two teams work quite well together.
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** [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] {{Subverted|Trope}} with Itachi and Yukio's respective genin teams while they're going to rescue Rina from the Grass. Despite their previous match, which resulted in Yukio damaging Itachi's eye with a kunai, the two teams work quite well together.
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* HowManyAllOfThem: Naruto, in a somewhat rare heroic example.
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Back in Konoha, Naruto is the Hokage, Sasuke [[spoiler: has reconciled with the village and is together with Sakura]], and the next generation of shinobi are being trained with the defense of the Will of Fire in their hearts...
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Back in Konoha, Naruto is the Hokage, Sasuke [[spoiler: has reconciled with the village and is together with Sakura]], Sakura, and the next generation of shinobi are being trained with the defense of the Will of Fire in their hearts...
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* CaptainOblivious: Lucia pretty much has to spell out to Naruto exactly ''[[DomesticAbuser why]]'' she left her husband and came to Konoha.
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* CaptainOblivious: Lucia pretty much has to spell out to Naruto exactly ''[[DomesticAbuser ''[[DomesticAbuse why]]'' she left her husband and came to Konoha.
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* DomesticAbuser: Gehard, Lucia's husband. Being a masochist, she puts up with it, but ditches him when he turns his abuse on her kids.
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* DomesticAbuser: DomesticAbuse: Gehard, Lucia's husband. Being a masochist, she puts up with it, but ditches him when he turns his abuse on her kids.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4237746/1/ White Rain]] is a {{Naruto}} ContinuationFic by Zapenstap that takes place some time after the series ends... but you wouldn't know it at first glance, because the first chapter is set in a very, very different environment.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4237746/1/ White Rain]] is a {{Naruto}} ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' ContinuationFic by Zapenstap that takes place some time after the series ends... but you wouldn't know it at first glance, because the first chapter is set in a very, very different environment.
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* GenerationXerox: [[spoiler: While he was named after his father, Itachi takes more after Sasuke (it is his resemblance to pre-Uchiha Massacre Sasuke that makes his uncle uncomfortable when dealing with him). '''Rina''', on the other hand...]]
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* GenerationXerox: [[spoiler: While he was named after his father, Itachi takes more after Sasuke (it is his demeanor's resemblance to pre-Uchiha Massacre Sasuke that makes his uncle uncomfortable when dealing with him). '''Rina''', on the other hand...hand, is the genius.]]
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** Sakura's genin team also mirror that of the Fourth Hokage's: Amaya is Kakashi (the team's ace), Haro is Rin (the team's medic), and Itachi is Obito (the team newbie with a Sharingan).
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* AFatherToHisMen: Naruto is caring and compassionate to all of the people under his watch in Konoha, and is insistent that Shinobi are people and not just tools or mercs.
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* AFatherToHisMen: Naruto is caring and compassionate to all of the people under his watch in Konoha, and is insistent that Shinobi are people and not just tools or mercs.mercenaries.
** His skill with shadow clones also translates into administrativia: being able to delegate the right people to the right tasks at the right time (see Ibiki).
** His skill with shadow clones also translates into administrativia: being able to delegate the right people to the right tasks at the right time (see Ibiki).
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* MamasBabyPapasMaybe: While Itachi Jr. is confirmed to be the son of Itachi Uchiha, Lucia herself doesn't know if Rina is Itachi's child or Gehard's.
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* WhamLine: [[spoiler: '''Rina:''' I can show you how to do the Chidori.]]
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** And Itachi is the Blue Oni to Yukio's Red.
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** [[spoiler: He does, with Lucia's help.]]
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* AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: Chapter 27 has Sasuke pull this off successfully.
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** Played straight with [[spoiler: Ino and Chouji]].
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** Played straight with [[spoiler: Ino and Chouji]].Chouji]], and in Chapter 27 with [[spoiler: Sasuke and Sakura]].
** Itachi (junior) and Yukio's rivalry mirror that of Naruto and Sasuke.
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* MoneyIsNotPower: Marnix finds out the hard way this is the case in chapter 25 [[spoiler:when Sasuke immediately carves him up like a turkey before burning him to ashes with Amaterasu.]]
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* MoneyIsNotPower: Marnix finds out the hard way this is the case in chapter 25 [[spoiler:when [[spoiler: when Sasuke immediately carves him up like a turkey before burning him to ashes with Amaterasu.]]
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* YouWontFeelAThing: In chapter 24, [[spoiler: when Rina is ordered to be killed by a Grass genin, said genin uses a poisoned knife and reassures her that it'll be clean and that she'll "barely feel it." However, the genin is reluctant to go through with it, and his hesitation gives Yukio enough time to catch up with them and pull off a BigDamnHeroes moment]].
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* NomDeMom: Itachi and Rina use their mother's maiden name, van Alstyne, while in Konoha.
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** Itachi [[spoiler:- due to a lot of factors - now has his Sharingan eyes kept activated like his father.]]
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* NouveauRiche: A more positive spin, but still a core component of Lucia's problems. [[spoiler:Her family comes from one of the Lower Houses, but after years of her father's practice of investing into small/failing businesses and turning them around her current financial assets almost rival a lesser country's. The Higher Houses want those resources under their own control.]]
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* MoneyIsNotPower: Marnix finds out the hard way this is the case in chapter 25 [[spoiler:when Sasuke immediately carves him up like a turkey before burning him to ashes with Amaterasu.]]
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* HeroicBastard: Itachi jr. and Rina, both children of [[spoiler: the late Itachi Uchiha]].
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* ReallyGetsAround: Lucia claims at one point that she lost her virginity when she was Amaya's age.
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* ReallyGetsAround: Lucia claims at one point that she lost her virginity when she was Amaya's age.age, and Marnix states in chapter 25 that she slept with several other people before she was even sixteen.
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* ScrewTheMoneyIHaveRules: Lucia is completely shocked, ''shocked!'' that Naruto has no intention of charging her any fee for [[spoiler: saving Rina from the Higher Houses and the Grass]].
* [[spoiler: ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney]]: [[spoiler: Lucia]], but we haven't actually seen her successfully use it.
** However, the fact that [[spoiler: the feudal lords have gone underwater on their loans probably means that Lucia, for all intents and purposes, already owns a hefty chunk of Konoha.]]
* [[spoiler: ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney]]: [[spoiler: Lucia]], but we haven't actually seen her successfully use it.
** However, the fact that [[spoiler: the feudal lords have gone underwater on their loans probably means that Lucia, for all intents and purposes, already owns a hefty chunk of Konoha.]]
* ScrewTheMoneyIHaveRules: Lucia is completely shocked that Naruto has no intention of charging her any fee for [[spoiler: saving Rina from the Higher Houses and the Grass]].
* [[spoiler: ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney]]: [[spoiler: Lucia]], but we haven't actually seen her successfully use it.
** However, the fact that [[spoiler: the feudal lords have gone underwater on their loans probably means that Lucia, for all intents and purposes, already owns a hefty chunk of Konoha.]]
* [[spoiler: ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney]]: [[spoiler: Lucia]], but we haven't actually seen her successfully use it.
** However, the fact that [[spoiler: the feudal lords have gone underwater on their loans probably means that Lucia, for all intents and purposes, already owns a hefty chunk of Konoha.]]
* ShotToTheHeart: In chapter 25, Haro does this to a [[spoiler: poisoned Yukio]], which saves his life and buys enough time for Sakura to catch up to them and finish the job.
* StrongFamilyResemblance: Itachi (junior) is described as looking exactly like his father, whereas Rina looks so much like Lucia that even her mother is uncertain whether or not Rina is Itachi senior or Gehard's child.
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* WhyDidYouMakeMeHitYou: In the first chapter, Gehard cracks Rina across the face when she attempts to stop her from abusing Lucia, and then remarks to Lucia that she made him do it.
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* WhyDidYouMakeMeHitYou: In the first chapter, Gehard cracks Rina across the face when she attempts to stop her him from abusing Lucia, and then remarks to Lucia that she made him do it.
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* GoodParents: No matter what one thinks of Lucia, there's no doubt that she loves her kids dearly.
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* ScrewTheMoneyIHaveRules: Lucia is completely shocked, ''shocked!'' that Naruto has no intention of charging her any fee for [[spoiler: saving Rina from the Higher Houses and the Grass]].
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* TheKnightsWhoSaySquee: Yukio is awestruck when he sees Naruto perform the Flying Thunder God technique, as well as when he meets Kakashi.