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* WorldOfActionGirls: This fic's whole premise is that only women are born with Quirks, and almost every male Quirk user from canon (with the sole exception of Izuku) is gender-flipped to fit this mold. Obviously in a setting where only women have superpowers, ''of course'' this means that every single powerful hero and villain is almost universally female. In fact, Izuku being the first Quirk user to be a male is considered a ''huge'' deal in-universe due to how unprecedented it is.

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* WorldOfActionGirls: This fic's whole premise is that only women are born with Quirks, and almost every male Quirk user from canon (with the sole exception of Izuku) is gender-flipped to fit this mold. Obviously in a setting where only women have superpowers, ''of course'' this means that every single all the powerful hero heroes and villain is almost universally villains are nigh-universally female. In fact, Izuku being the first Quirk user to be a male is considered a ''huge'' deal in-universe due to how unprecedented it is.
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* WorldOfActionGirls: This fic's whole premise is that only women are born with Quirks, and almost every male Quirk user from canon (with the sole exception of Izuku) is gender-flipped to fit this mold. Obviously in a setting where only women have superpowers, ''of course'' this means that every single powerful hero and villain is almost universally female. In fact, Izuku being the first Quirk user to be a male is considered a ''huge'' deal in-universe due to how unprecedented it is.
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* AdaptationalContextChange: By all indications, when Izuku tripped over something right before the U.A. Entrance Exam, it was just an accident. Here's it's strongly implied Nezumi engineered that incident.

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* AdaptationalContextChange: By all indications, when Izuku tripped over something right before the U.A. Entrance Exam, it was just an accident. Here's Here, it's strongly implied Nezumi engineered that incident.
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* AdaptationalContextChange: By all indications, when Izuku tripped over something right before the U.A. Entrance Exam, it was just an accident. Here's it's strongly implied Nezumi engineered that incident.

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* IntimateLotionApplication: In chapter 29, Izuku runs into Mitsuki Bakugo sunbathing on the beach, and she [[MrsRobinson doesn't miss the opportunity to tease him]] by asking him to put lotion on her back. Izuko points out that due to her quirk, she likely doesn't even need lotion to protect herself from the sun, and she admonishes him for bringing logic to her teasing.



* MrsRobinson: Mitsuki Bakugo likes to [[TheTease tease]] Izuku a lot, such as asking him to put lotion on her back while wearing a [[BarelyThereSwimwear skimpy bikini]] when they run into each other at the beach, and has been referred to as a cougar by her own daughter once.

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* MrsRobinson: Mitsuki Bakugo likes to [[TheTease tease]] Izuku a lot, such as [[IntimateLotionApplication asking him to put lotion on her back back]] while wearing a [[BarelyThereSwimwear skimpy bikini]] when they run into each other at the beach, and has been referred to as a cougar by her own daughter once.



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* ADateWithRosiePalms:
** Subverted with Izuku, as Total Command has subconsciously prevented him from building up sexual arousal. Nana and him have a brief moment where they ponder over this when she looks back into his memories to find he has never masturbated in his life.
** After [[AccidentalPervert accidentally watching]] [[PrimalScene Izuku and Ochako having sex]], Miruko runs to the nearest bathroom to get some relief from her sudden arousal.



* PrimalScene: [[spoiler:Miruko accidentally eavesdrops on Izuku and Ochako having sex in the hospital, leading her to seek ADateWithRosiePalms.]]

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* PrimalScene: [[spoiler:Miruko accidentally eavesdrops on Izuku and Ochako having sex in the hospital, leading her to seek ADateWithRosiePalms.self-relief.]]



* ADateWithRosiePalms: Heavily implied to be the reaction of nearly all the girls when Mei gives them her pictures of Izuku.
* CovertPervert: Hagakure uses her invisibility to peek on Izuku, while Jiro tried once to listen in on Izuku's room just in case he had ADateWithRosiePalms.

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* ADateWithRosiePalms: Heavily implied to be the reaction of nearly all the girls when Mei gives them her pictures of Izuku.
* CovertPervert: Hagakure uses her invisibility to peek on Izuku, while Jiro tried once to listen in on Izuku's room just in case he had ADateWithRosiePalms.happented to masturbate.
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[[DeadFic Hasn't updated since May 21st, 2021.]]


* InnocentCohabitation: After the USJ Battle, some of the girls (Mei, Momo, Ochaco, Kyoka, Katsumi, Mina and Tooru) join Izuku in his room, after suffering nightmares about his death.
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This or these examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected, or something is just an innate aspect of the setting or character that has a logical reason for being present); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread.


* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** With such a lopsided ratio in population favoring women, "traditional" marriages are becoming the exception instead of the norm - only Momo from Class 1-A has been mentioned as having a father. Most women having children do so through artificial insemination, and polygyny is legal.
** Izuku's Quirk improves his body's durability and growth exponentially, but it also burns through his metabolism so much that [[BigEater he eats like he was Goku]]. It gets so bad that groceries alone put a major dent in his mother's finances, leading to Izuku getting a job as a handyman at [=UA=] to pay for the bills.
** Total Command allows Izuku to consciously and unconsciously control all of his body's functions, One for All allows its holder to supercharge their body. Izuku using One for All without trying to direct it supercharges organs like his heart, bursting blood vessels.
** Izuku being unable to breathe for several minutes ends up causing partial brain death, only getting to survive thanks to Total Command being able to use the surviving parts to get by and his ability to regenerate.
** The USJ Battle causes the Class 1-A students to have PTSD from seeing Izuku almost dying.
** Izuku's reveal at the Sports Festival involves him flexing his way out of a glacier and giving off green lightning. This display of a Quirk by a man on public television makes him instantly famous. Furthermore, some think he is a transsexual woman, as Quirks have belonged solely to women for centuries and it is thought impossible for a man to have one, and others come to conclusions such as nanobots inside him or genetic experimentation.
** Endeavor instantly decides to try and have Izuku's child. Her extreme desire to sire a hero to surpass All Might led her to seek out Rei to have children with powerful Quirks. When a genetic man shows up with a physique and a Quirk that surpass her masterpiece, she instantly decides to try again with his DNA.
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* ChickMagnet: Izuku. His Quirk allows him to essentially become the epitome of manliness, which already attracts several women, especially his 1-A classmates. When he unveils One For All during his match against Shoko at the Sports Festival, however, is when things go UpToEleven and BeyondTheImpossible -- in mere moments, he becomes the ''de facto'' most attractive man on the planet, with nearly every woman in the world wanting to jump his bones. As one reader notes, the majority of Izuku's ridiculously high amount of internship offers are thinly-veiled booty calls.

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* ChickMagnet: Izuku. His Quirk allows him to essentially become the epitome of manliness, which already attracts several women, especially his 1-A classmates. When he unveils One For All during his match against Shoko at the Sports Festival, however, is when things go UpToEleven and BeyondTheImpossible -- in mere moments, he becomes the ''de facto'' most attractive man on the planet, with nearly every woman in the world wanting to jump his bones. As one reader notes, the majority of Izuku's ridiculously high amount of internship offers are thinly-veiled booty calls.
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The characters name is Minerva in this fic.


* AmbiguouslyBi: Mineta really admires Midoriya's hot bod, but she is also somewhat surprised to realize she's also appreciating some of the other girls as well.

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* AmbiguouslyBi: Mineta Minerva really admires Midoriya's hot bod, but she is also somewhat surprised to realize she's also appreciating some of the other girls as well.



** Mineta is still a pervert with a penchant for peeping or wanting to grope people from the opposite sex - only, this time Mineta's only target is Izuku.

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** Mineta Minerva is still a pervert with a penchant for peeping or wanting to grope people from the opposite sex - only, this time Mineta's Minerva's only target is Izuku.



** Also, Mineta manages to win the exam on her own.

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** Also, Mineta Minerva manages to win the exam on her own.



* OpenMouthInsertFoot: Mineta does this constantly (until her mother teaches her to stop doing it after the Sports Festival). The consequences of this leave her terrified of Izuku.

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* OpenMouthInsertFoot: Mineta Minerva does this constantly (until her mother teaches her to stop doing it after the Sports Festival). The consequences of this leave her terrified of Izuku.



* SuperheroPackingHeat: When a villain takes Mineta as a hostage, Momo creates a shotgun with bean bag rounds and shoots the villain on her chest.

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* SuperheroPackingHeat: When a villain takes Mineta Minerva as a hostage, Momo creates a shotgun with bean bag rounds and shoots the villain on her chest.

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* RealityEnsues:
** With such a lopsided ratio in population favoring women, "traditional" marriages are becoming the exception instead of the norm - only Momo from Class 1-A has been mentioned as having a father. Most women having children do so through artificial insemination, and polygyny is legal.
** Izuku's Quirk improves his body's durability and growth exponentially, but it also burns through his metabolism so much that [[BigEater he eats like he was Goku]]. It gets so bad that groceries alone put a major dent in his mother's finances, leading to Izuku getting a job as a handyman at [=UA=] to pay for the bills.
** Total Command allows Izuku to consciously and unconsciously control all of his body's functions, One for All allows its holder to supercharge their body. Izuku using One for All without trying to direct it supercharges organs like his heart, bursting blood vessels.
** Izuku being unable to breathe for several minutes ends up causing partial brain death, only getting to survive thanks to Total Command being able to use the surviving parts to get by and his ability to regenerate.
** The USJ Battle causes the Class 1-A students to have PTSD from seeing Izuku almost dying.
** Izuku's reveal at the Sports Festival involves him flexing his way out of a glacier and giving off green lightning. This display of a Quirk by a man on public television makes him instantly famous. Furthermore, some think he is a transsexual woman, as Quirks have belonged solely to women for centuries and it is thought impossible for a man to have one, and others come to conclusions such as nanobots inside him or genetic experimentation.
** Endeavor instantly decides to try and have Izuku's child. Her extreme desire to sire a hero to surpass All Might led her to seek out Rei to have children with powerful Quirks. When a genetic man shows up with a physique and a Quirk that surpass her masterpiece, she instantly decides to try again with his DNA.

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* RealityEnsues:
** With such a lopsided ratio in population favoring women, "traditional" marriages are becoming the exception instead of the norm - only Momo from Class 1-A has been mentioned as having a father. Most women having children do so through artificial insemination, and polygyny is legal.
** Izuku's Quirk improves his body's durability and growth exponentially, but it also burns through his metabolism so much that [[BigEater he eats like he was Goku]]. It gets so bad that groceries alone put a major dent in his mother's finances, leading to Izuku getting a job as a handyman at [=UA=] to pay for the bills.
** Total Command allows Izuku to consciously and unconsciously control all of his body's functions, One for All allows its holder to supercharge their body. Izuku using One for All without trying to direct it supercharges organs like his heart, bursting blood vessels.
** Izuku being unable to breathe for several minutes ends up causing partial brain death, only getting to survive thanks to Total Command being able to use the surviving parts to get by and his ability to regenerate.
** The USJ Battle causes the Class 1-A students to have PTSD from seeing Izuku almost dying.
** Izuku's reveal at the Sports Festival involves him flexing his way out of a glacier and giving off green lightning. This display of a Quirk by a man on public television makes him instantly famous. Furthermore, some think he is a transsexual woman, as Quirks have belonged solely to women for centuries and it is thought impossible for a man to have one, and others come to conclusions such as nanobots inside him or genetic experimentation.
** Endeavor instantly decides to try and have Izuku's child. Her extreme desire to sire a hero to surpass All Might led her to seek out Rei to have children with powerful Quirks. When a genetic man shows up with a physique and a Quirk that surpass her masterpiece, she instantly decides to try again with his DNA.


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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** With such a lopsided ratio in population favoring women, "traditional" marriages are becoming the exception instead of the norm - only Momo from Class 1-A has been mentioned as having a father. Most women having children do so through artificial insemination, and polygyny is legal.
** Izuku's Quirk improves his body's durability and growth exponentially, but it also burns through his metabolism so much that [[BigEater he eats like he was Goku]]. It gets so bad that groceries alone put a major dent in his mother's finances, leading to Izuku getting a job as a handyman at [=UA=] to pay for the bills.
** Total Command allows Izuku to consciously and unconsciously control all of his body's functions, One for All allows its holder to supercharge their body. Izuku using One for All without trying to direct it supercharges organs like his heart, bursting blood vessels.
** Izuku being unable to breathe for several minutes ends up causing partial brain death, only getting to survive thanks to Total Command being able to use the surviving parts to get by and his ability to regenerate.
** The USJ Battle causes the Class 1-A students to have PTSD from seeing Izuku almost dying.
** Izuku's reveal at the Sports Festival involves him flexing his way out of a glacier and giving off green lightning. This display of a Quirk by a man on public television makes him instantly famous. Furthermore, some think he is a transsexual woman, as Quirks have belonged solely to women for centuries and it is thought impossible for a man to have one, and others come to conclusions such as nanobots inside him or genetic experimentation.
** Endeavor instantly decides to try and have Izuku's child. Her extreme desire to sire a hero to surpass All Might led her to seek out Rei to have children with powerful Quirks. When a genetic man shows up with a physique and a Quirk that surpass her masterpiece, she instantly decides to try again with his DNA.
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* AbusiveParents: Endeavor. After the Sports Festival tournament, Recovery Girl strikes the ground with her cane in frustration over Izuku's foolhardiness, Shoko wakes up instantly ready for a fight, claiming it as 'reflexes'. Izuku really doesn't want to think about how those reflexes came up to be.

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* AbusiveParents: Endeavor. After the Sports Festival tournament, Recovery Girl strikes the ground with her cane in frustration over Izuku's foolhardiness, Shoko wakes up instantly ready for a fight, claiming it as 'reflexes'. Izuku really doesn't want to think about how those reflexes came up to be.
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* MrFanservice: Izuku's status as such is discussed and made very explicit by the girls. 1-B's groupchat consists mostly of the girls admitting their sexual attraction.

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* MrFanservice: Izuku's status as such is discussed and made very explicit by the girls. The fragment of 1-B's groupchat in Chapter 7 (which takes place after Total Command's Chapter 42, after Izuku reveals his Quirk) consists mostly of the girls admitting their sexual attraction.
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* PowerfulPeopleAreSubs: After an encounter with Izuku where all her actions do is to anger him and force her to leave on sheer force of will, Endeavor has fantasies of submitting to Izuku.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Endeavor comes off as being a lot worse than her canon, male counterpart. For example, canon!Endeavor was shown to have some level of affection for his wife Rei and feels proud of Shoto for how well he's doing, while TC!Endeavor only kept Rei close as the means to fulfill her "quest" to have the hero that will displace All Might, bribes a hospital director to keep Rei interned even though the doctors have given her a clean bill of health and drops Shoko like a hot potato when the chance to have a more powerful child comes up.

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* AdaptationalJerkass: Endeavor comes off as being a lot worse than her canon, male counterpart. For example, canon!Endeavor was shown to have some level of affection for his wife Rei and feels proud of Shoto for how well he's doing, while TC!Endeavor only kept Rei close as the means to fulfill her "quest" to have the hero that will displace All Might, bribes a hospital director to keep Rei interned even though the doctors have given her a clean bill of health and drops Shoko like a hot potato when the chance to have a more powerful child comes up. What's more, she never refers to Rei by name, instead calling her "[[ItIsDehumanizing the incubator]]".

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* ADateWithRosiePalms:
** Subverted with Izuku, as Total Command has subconsciously prevented him from building up sexual arousal. Nana and him have a brief moment where they ponder over this when she looks back into his memories to find he has never masturbated in his life.
** After [[AccidentalPervert accidentally watching]] [[PrimalScene Izuku and Ochako having sex]], Miruko runs to the nearest bathroom to get some relief from her sudden arousal.


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* ADateWithRosiePalms:
** Subverted with Izuku, as Total Command has subconsciously prevented him from building up sexual arousal. Nana and him have a brief moment where they ponder over this when she looks back into his memories to find he has never masturbated in his life.
** After [[AccidentalPervert accidentally watching]] [[PrimalScene Izuku and Ochako having sex]], Miruko runs to the nearest bathroom to get some relief from her sudden arousal.

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* EveryoneHasStandards: Nana Shimura's ghost is a LoveableSexManiac that encourages Izuku to live vigorously with his admirers. She initially encourages him to take [[AbhorrentAdmirer Endeavour's]] offer of sex until she is reminded of how the latter [[AbusiveParent used her wife as a breeding slave and put her daughter trainer through training hell]], ending that suggestion.



* LoveableSexManiac: Nana is seemingly constantly horny, admits to peeking when Izuku changes clothes or bathes and often tries to entice Izuku to relieve himself (and herself in the process). She even briefly tries to get Izuku to sleep with [[AbhorrentAdmirer Endeavor]] before she's reminded of what a horrible person Endeavor is. Whether this is how she was when she was alive or a side effect of being an One-for-All "ghost" inhabiting a teenager's body is unknown.

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* LoveableSexManiac: Nana is seemingly constantly horny, admits to peeking when Izuku changes clothes or bathes and often tries to entice Izuku to relieve himself (and herself in the process). She even briefly tries to get Izuku to sleep with [[AbhorrentAdmirer Endeavor]] before [[EverybodyHasStandards she's reminded of what a horrible person Endeavor is.is]]. Whether this is how she was when she was alive or a side effect of being an One-for-All "ghost" inhabiting a teenager's body is unknown.
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* MusclesAreMeaningless: Pony Tsunotori, who is a lithe girl that barely stands 155 cm (5'1) from the ground, is capable of easily lifting Izuku (who is 195 cm (6'4) tall and weighs 150 kg) without a problem.

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* MusclesAreMeaningless: Pony Tsunotori, who is a lithe girl that barely stands 155 cm (5'1) from the ground, is capable of easily lifting Izuku (who is 195 cm (6'4) tall and weighs 150 kg) kg(330lbs)) without a problem.

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* BadDreams: several members of Class 1-A suffer them after the USJ incident.

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