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Minor edit: updated fic word count under "Doorstopper" trope
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* {{Doorstopper}}: The fic has passed two-million words and is continuing to update.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: The fic has passed two-million four million words and is continuing to update.
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Incorruptible Pure Pureness has been renamed to The Incorruptible and redefined to be about characters who are portrayed in-universe as untemptable/incorruptible.
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* IncorruptiblePurePureness: Literal the case of Ruby Rose. She is explicitly described as being so pure of heart that telepathic communication with her wipes away negative feelings in people. Sunset herself describes the inside of Ruby's soul like a vast warm white light.
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* IncorruptiblePurePureness: Literal the case of TheIncorruptible: Ruby Rose. She Rose is explicitly described as being so pure of heart that telepathic communication with her wipes away negative feelings in people. Sunset herself describes the inside of Ruby's soul like a vast warm white light.
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The story is in the midst of a heavy revision.
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* DeliberateValuesDissonance: Much worldbuilding effort is done to differentiate the values of each of the Kingdoms. Vale is mostly similar to our values, with an emphasis on the heroic individual fostered by Ozpin. Atlas emphasizes civic duty and nationalism while priding itself on it's technology and wealth. Mistral by contrast is revanchist, old fashioned, and puts great stock in bloodlines, honor, and glory, and finally, Vacuo prizes freedom and prides itself on being tough enough to survive in it's deserts.
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Character Alignment and its related tropes are Flame Bait, and are not allowed to be linked anywhere except on work pages as examples where they are cannonical
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* VillainProtagonist: When she first arrives at Beacon Sunset is rather explicitly working for her own power and glory, views those around her as pawns whose only purpose is to get her to said power and glory, and is willing to contemplate such wonderful ideas as breaking up SiblingTeam Ruby and Yang because she views Yang's team as competition -- an idea which Sunset abandoned only because of the possible risks if found out. Though, as explained in other tropes on this page, she eventually develops into an AntiHero and then later a full LawfulGood hero.
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* VillainProtagonist: When she first arrives at Beacon Sunset is rather explicitly working for her own power and glory, views those around her as pawns whose only purpose is to get her to said power and glory, and is willing to contemplate such wonderful ideas as breaking up SiblingTeam Ruby and Yang because she views Yang's team as competition -- an idea which Sunset abandoned only because of the possible risks if found out. Though, as explained in other tropes on this page, she eventually develops into an AntiHero and then later a full LawfulGood full-on hero.
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* AmazonChaser: Russell wolf-whistles and calls Coco his “future wife”, after watching her tell off Cardin for bullying Velvet.
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* OverlyLongName: Pyrrha’s full name is apparently Pyrrha Penthesilea Penelope Alcestis Ariadne Hippolyta Nikos.
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[[caption-width-right:270:Cover of the first part by [[https://www.deviantart.com/amalgamzaku/art/SAPR-by-Scipio-Smith-762112978 Mix-Up]] [[note]] Left to right: Sunset Shimmer, Jaune Arc, Pyrrha Nikos, and Ruby Rose. [[/note]]]]
[[caption-width-right:270:Cover of the first part by [[https://www.deviantart.com/amalgamzaku/art/SAPR-by-Scipio-Smith-762112978 Mix-Up]] [[note]] Left to right: Sunset Shimmer, Jaune Arc, Pyrrha Nikos, and Ruby Rose. [[/note]]]]
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[[caption-width-right:270:Cover of the first part by [[https://www.deviantart.com/amalgamzaku/art/SAPR-by-Scipio-Smith-762112978 Mix-Up]] [[note]] Left to right: Sunset Shimmer, Jaune Arc, Pyrrha Nikos, and Ruby Rose. [[/note]]]]
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New trope for husbands taking the wife's name
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* TheMaidenNameDebate: In chapter 124, "Re-Forged," Pyrrha reflects that when her and Jaune get married he's going to have to take her name because she's from an ancient royal house and he... isn't.
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* TookTheWifesName: In chapter 124, "Re-Forged," Pyrrha reflects that when her and Jaune get married he's going to have to take her name because she's from an ancient royal house.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Ironwood is depicted much more unambiguously heroic in ''SAPR'', not undergoing SanitySlippage following the Fall of Beacon, and remaining a force for good.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Ironwood is depicted much more unambiguously heroic in ''SAPR'', not undergoing SanitySlippage following the Fall of Beacon, and remaining being a force genuine ReasonableAuthorityFigure and AFatherToHisMen. Contrast that with canon where he would go behind Ozpin's back thinking his methods were better, and [[spoiler:his ProtagonistJourneyToVillain culminating in him becoming a tyrannical despot willing to kill his own men for good.daring to disagree with him, all while deluding himself into thinking he's the only one who knows what is right.]]
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Ironwood is depicted much more unambiguously heroic in ''SAPR'', not undergoing SanitySlippage following the Fall of Beacon, and remaining a force for good.
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Not So Different has been renamed, and it needs to be dewicked/moved
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* NotSoDifferent: Sunset Shimmer has this line dropped on her multiple times over the course of the story with many people she ends up confronting. From bullies like Cardin to terrorists like Adam to reflections like Cinder they all carry a piece of Sunset in them. This, of course, feeds back into Sunset's own character development as she slowly starts to realize that she's been a villain this whole time and didn't even notice it.
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: Sunset Shimmer has this line dropped on her multiple times over the course of the story with many people she ends up confronting. From bullies like Cardin to terrorists like Adam to reflections like Cinder they all carry a piece of Sunset in them. This, of course, feeds back into Sunset's own character development as she slowly starts to realize that she's been a villain this whole time and didn't even notice it.
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* MoralityPet: {{Deconstructed}}. The friends Sunset makes along the way lead her away from her selfish, self-aggrandizing path to become a better, more heroic person. [[spoiler:But those very same friendships lead her to a decision that may well be considered crossing the MoralEventHorizon.]]
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* {{Doorstopper}}: The fic has passed a million words and is continuing to update.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: The fic has passed a million two-million words and is continuing to update.
