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* ArentYouGoingToRavishMe: A lot of times, the women Ronman lays with come on to ''him'' first, and don't like taking 'No' for answer.
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* TheirFirstTime: Kimila and Ronman [[EarnYourHappyEnding are finally able to lay together in the final chapter of the story]], with it being the most enjoyable experience for both, and it's implied that it will happen ''a lot'' more.
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* TheirFirstTime: Kimila and Ronman [[EarnYourHappyEnding are finally able to lay together in the final chapter of the story]], with it being the most enjoyable experience for both, and it's implied that [[InsatiableNewlyweds it will happen ''a lot'' more.happen]] ''[[InsatiableNewlyweds a lot]]'' [[InsatiableNewlyweds more]].
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* TheirFirstTime: Kimila and Ronman are finally able to lay together in the final chapter of the story, with it being the most enjoyable experience for both, and it's implied that it will happen ''a lot'' more.
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* TheirFirstTime: Kimila and Ronman [[EarnYourHappyEnding are finally able to lay together in the final chapter of the story, story]], with it being the most enjoyable experience for both, and it's implied that it will happen ''a lot'' more.
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* BathingBeauty: Kimila's initial appearance to Ronman outside of his dreams.
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* BathingBeauty: Kimila's initial appearance to Ronman gets his first look of Kimila outside of his dreams.dreams when he finds her taking a WaterfallShower.
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* NakedFirstImpression: How Ronman saw Kimila for the first time in person.
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* NakedFirstImpression: How Ronman saw Kimila for the first time in person. It also swung the other way as Ronman had lost his breeches on a branch.
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* OutdoorBathPeeping: A pond called Nubile Falls where village women bathe has a hill above it called Gawker's Roost. Apparently, the women have no problem being seen, even having the road expanded to make [[BigEntrance a grander entrance]]. This is also how Ronman met Kimila, who was fine with being seen by him.
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* OutdoorBathPeeping: A pond called Nubile Falls where village women bathe has a hill above it called Gawker's Roost. Apparently, the women have no problem being seen, even having the road expanded to make [[BigEntrance a grander entrance]]. This is also how Ronman met Kimila, who was fine with being seen by him.him, even having a pleasant conversation with him mixed with flirting.
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* ADateWithRosiePalms: [[spoiler:Shegoix, while taking a bath, thinking about Ronman.]]
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* NoodleImplements: For some reason, [=NSTR=] courtship involves the male reciting poetry and the female throwing furniture.
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* NoodleImplements: For some reason, [=NSTR=] [=NSTMR=] courtship involves the male reciting poetry and the female throwing furniture.
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* NoodleImplements: For some reason, [=NSTR=] courtship involves the male reciting poetry and the female throwing furniture.
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* VictorySex: After Drakken's defeat and Ronman's victory in his duel against Kimila, Kimila and Ronman, and everyone else besides Wadelin and Joss, partook in this. [[spoiler:It's also heavily implied that Ruthless ended up in a threesome]].
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* VictorySex: After Drakken's defeat and Ronman's victory in his duel against Kimila, Kimila and Ronman, and everyone else besides [[PuppyLove Wadelin and Joss, Joss]], partook in this. [[spoiler:It's also heavily implied that Ruthless ended up in a threesome]].
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* VictorySex: After Drakken's defeat and Ronman's victory in his duel against Kimila, Kimila and Ronman, and everyone else besides [[ToyShip Wadelin and Joss]], partook in this. [[spoiler:It's also heavily implied that Ruthless ended up in a threesome]].
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* VictorySex: After Drakken's defeat and Ronman's victory in his duel against Kimila, Kimila and Ronman, and everyone else besides [[ToyShip Wadelin and Joss]], Joss, partook in this. [[spoiler:It's also heavily implied that Ruthless ended up in a threesome]].
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* GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex: Let's just say that Ronman and Kimila's first time was worth the wait.
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* RhetoricalQuestionBlunder: While talking about how she always allowed her son to go his only way, Mama King asks Drakken if she objected in him specializing in mind magic rather than elemental sorcery like her. Drakken mentally comments that she did...''for an entire year'', but figured it was best not to say so.
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* EverybodyHasLotsOfSex: A major theme of the story. The majority involves Ronman and versions of the girls Ron is mostly shipped with.
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* EverybodyHasLotsOfSex: A major theme of the story. The majority involves Ronman and versions of the girls Ron is mostly shipped with. One of Kimila's issues is that thanks to her pact, she's stuck as a virgin in an oversexualized world who can't get any until a man defeats her in combat.
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* ShamelessFanserviceGirl: A whole lot of them, who have no issues with showing off the majority of their skin, especially around Ronman.
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* TheCasanova: Ronman is definitely better with ladies than his canon counterpart, able to charm most of the lovely girls he encounters out of their clothes.
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* LadyKiller: Ronman is definitely better with ladies than his canon counterpart, able to charm most of the lovely girls he encounters out of their clothes.
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* HaremFic: Averted. Despite laying with pretty much every girl he's shipped with in {{fanon}}, Ronman solely remains with Kimila upon meeting her.
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* HaremFic: HaremGenre: Averted. Despite laying with pretty much every girl he's shipped with in {{fanon}}, Ronman solely remains with Kimila upon meeting her.
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* HaremStory: Averted. Despite laying with pretty much every girl he's shipped with in {{fanon}}, Ronman solely remains with Kimila upon meeting her.
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* HaremStory: HaremFic: Averted. Despite laying with pretty much every girl he's shipped with in {{fanon}}, Ronman solely remains with Kimila upon meeting her.
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* HaremStory: Averted. Despite laying with pretty much every girl he's shipped with in {{fanon}}, Ronman solely remains with Kimila upon meeting her.
* KinkySpanking: After having enough of Bonya's abuse, Ronman decides to punish her by spanking her. It ends up turning her on to the point that they wind up in her bed.
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* LadyKiller: Ronman is definitely better with ladies than his canon counterpart, able to charm most of the girls he encounters out of their clothes.
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* FakeMemories: How Drakken usurped Middletonia. Using a very powerful mind charm, combined with some cosmetic changes to every portrait and statue depicting the Possible dynasty, Drakken was able to alter all the citizens' memories to make them think he was the king and the Possibles were {{necromancer}}s
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* FakeMemories: How Drakken usurped Middletonia. Using a very powerful mind charm, combined with some cosmetic changes to every portrait and statue depicting the Possible dynasty, Drakken was able to alter all the citizens' memories to make them think he was the king and the Possibles were {{necromancer}}s{{necromancer}}s.
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* AbledInTheAdaptation: Felix can walk just fine here, since he plunders with Ronman.
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* SexMagic: Women of Tara's tribe gain the mantle of {{Seer}}s upon losing their virginity to a man with certain qualities. Tara's first time with Ronman unlocks her ability.
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* SexMagic: Women of Tara's tribe gain the mantle of {{Seer}}s {{Seers}} upon losing their virginity to a man with certain qualities. Tara's first time with Ronman unlocks her ability.
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* NonSequiturThud: During his first duel with Kimila, Ronman crashed into Ruthless and Moniquity's 'Seconds' box then dizzily said "Ruthless, didn't know you had a twin sister".
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* NonSequiturThud: During his first duel with Kimila, Ronman crashed into Ruthless and Moniquity's 'Seconds' box then dizzily said "Ruthless, "[[ImpairmentShot Ruthless, didn't know you had a twin sister".sister]]".
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* NoOntologicalInertia: Subverted. Despite Kimila and Vivian's beliefs that [[spoiler:Kimila's TakingYouWithMe plan]] would break the memory spell on Middletonia, Moniquity learns through Tara that the spell will outlast Drakken, and Shegoix would be free to become a DragonAscendant while Kimila's family would take the fall [[spoiler:for Drakken and Kimila's deaths]].
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* TheImmodestOrgasm: The girls Ronman laid with are left ''very'' satisfied afterwards. In fact, when Ronman had his first time with Tara, Ruthless deliberately tried to move his camp out of earshot, still without success.
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( {{Golem}}: The synthodrones from "So The Drama" are these in the story. It was mentioned that Drakken minored in golem magic at the Middletonian Esoteric School of Sorcery.
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* DivineParentage: The Gos.Gos, who are the children of Hiyadol and the deified Magnifica.
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* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Initially Tara was extremely possessive of Ronman, even saying that no matter how many girls he laid with, she was the one he'd end with. However, as she sensed Ronman and Kimila's romance blossoming, her possessiveness waned and she did all she could [[spoiler:to alter Kimila's fate of becoming a Soul Sister]].
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* DrillSergeantNasty: Kimila is thiz when she's training the army. Her training is so intense that Ronman once commented that the soldiers cry when they see her coming.
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* DrillSergeantNasty: Kimila is then when she's training the army. Her training is so intense that Ronman once commented that the soldiers cry when they see her coming.
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* DrillSergeantNasty: Kimila is then thiz when she's training the army. Her training is so intense that Ronman once commented that the soldiers cry when they see her coming.
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* OutdoorBathPeeping: A pond called Nubile Falls where village women bathe has a hill above it called Gawker's Roost. Apparently, the women have no problem being seen, even having the road expanded to make a grander entrance. This is also how Ronman met Kimila, who was fine with being seen by him.
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* OutdoorBathPeeping: A pond called Nubile Falls where village women bathe has a hill above it called Gawker's Roost. Apparently, the women have no problem being seen, even having the road expanded to make [[BigEntrance a grander entrance.entrance]]. This is also how Ronman met Kimila, who was fine with being seen by him.
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* SuperWindowJump: When Lucre is cornered by Ruthless in a hotel room, he does this, planning to climb down the awnings outside to reach the ground. Unfortunately, he forgot that the hotel was cheaply built and ends up falling through the flimsy awnings to his death.
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* LoveBeforeFirstSight: Kimila and Ronman ending up falling in love with each other before they ever met due to dreams they had involving each other, leaving them eager to actually find each other in real life.
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* TwoPersonPoolParty: James and Ann had one of these in a cistern. Kim makes a mental note to never drink from it or look at it again.
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* TwoPersonPoolParty: James and Ann had one of these [[DrumBathing in a cistern.cistern]]. Kim makes a mental note to never drink from it or look at it again.
