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* HomoeroticSubtext: Sonic and Shadow.
** Later on, Shadow has a HomoeroticDream, which makes him feel ''very'' uncomfortable.

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** %%** Later on, Shadow has a HomoeroticDream, an AwkwardlyGayDream, which makes him feel ''very'' uncomfortable.
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* IncorruptiblePurePureness: The prison doctor Amy Rose Blossom is intended to be this.

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Part One - [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7189428/1/Prison-Island-Break Prison Island Break]]

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Part One - [[https://www.[[http://web.archive.org/web/20151010051039/https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7189428/1/Prison-Island-Break Prison Island Break]]



* AuthorityGrantsAsskicking: Vector is at the top of a criminal empire and he's just as dangerous if not more so as his subordinates. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] because he had to climb his way to the top, he wouldn't be in that position if he wasn't badass.
** This is made very clear when Mephiles attempts to bring him to Eggman, and Vector not only easily demolishes ten Guard Robos (not even being slowed down by losing some teeth!), he very nearly comes close to mangling Mephiles before the Head Warden can get the bars up.

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* AuthorityGrantsAsskicking: AsskickingLeadsToLeadership: Vector is at the top of a criminal empire and he's just as dangerous if not more so as his subordinates. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] because he had to climb his way to the top, top; he wouldn't be in that position if he wasn't badass.
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badass. This is made very clear apparent when Mephiles attempts to bring him to Eggman, and Eggman; Vector not only easily demolishes ten Guard Robos (not even being slowed down by losing some teeth!), Robos, he very nearly comes close to mangling Mephiles before the Head Warden can get the bars up.



* ShipTease: Tons of it:

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* ShipTease: Tons of it:ShipTease:
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* TriangRelations: Amy, Shadow and Sonic. The situation makes it fairly contorted...

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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: Vector is at the top of a criminal empire and he's just as dangerous if not more so as his subordinates. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] because he had to climb his way to the top, he wouldn't be in that position if he wasn't badass.

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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: AuthorityGrantsAsskicking: Vector is at the top of a criminal empire and he's just as dangerous if not more so as his subordinates. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] because he had to climb his way to the top, he wouldn't be in that position if he wasn't badass.



* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: This is the reason for Shadow's infatuation with Amy. It's also why he develops feelings for [[spoiler: Sonia.]]

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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: %%zce* Because YouWereNiceToMe: This is the reason for Shadow's infatuation with Amy. It's also why he develops feelings for [[spoiler: Sonia.[[spoiler:Sonia.]]



** [[spoiler: Amy]] is forced to perform lewd sexual acts for Mephiles.

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** [[spoiler: Amy]] [[spoiler:Amy]] is forced to perform lewd sexual acts for Mephiles.



* TheCassandra: Silver. Nobody really believes he knows the future, and he hates being able to see it as it does him little good. To be fair, it's really difficult to be believed when you are literally the only one who could see what was coming.
** WordOfGod is that the author used this 'psychic' approach as opposed to the contorted time-travelling that took place in VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog2006 (when Silver first canonically appeared).

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* TheCassandra: Silver. Nobody really believes he knows the future, and he hates being able to see it as it does him little good. To be fair, it's really difficult to be believed when you are literally the only one who could see what was coming.
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coming. WordOfGod is that the author used this 'psychic' approach as opposed to the contorted time-travelling that took place in VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog2006 (when Silver first canonically appeared).



%%zce* DaddyIssues: Scourge has these.
* DarkerAndEdgier: Very, VERY much so.
* DateRape: Scourge is fond of this, using Ketamine to repeatedly violate [[spoiler: Sonic.]]

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%%zce* DaddyIssues: Daddy Issues: Scourge has these.
* DarkerAndEdgier: %%zce* Darker AndEdgier: Very, VERY much so.
* DateRape: Scourge is fond of this, using Ketamine to repeatedly violate [[spoiler: Sonic.[[spoiler:Sonic.]]



%%* DefeatMeansFriendship: This is how Sonic gathers Knuckles and Shadow to his team.

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%%* DefeatMeansFriendship: Defeat MeansFriendship: This is how Sonic gathers Knuckles and Shadow to his team.



* DramaticIrony: [[spoiler: Shadow and Silver]] find out they're father and son at roughly the same time, but can't bear to tell the other for fear of rejection - even though the reader knows they'd probably embrace it. [[spoiler:Shadow]] starts treating [[spoiler:Silver]] like a son (teaching and protecting him), while [[spoiler:Silver]] starts taking on some of [[spoiler:Shadow's]] traits. But they can't bear to reveal it for ages.

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* DramaticIrony: [[spoiler: Shadow [[spoiler:Shadow and Silver]] find out they're father and son at roughly the same time, but can't bear to tell the other for fear of rejection - even though the reader knows they'd probably embrace it. [[spoiler:Shadow]] starts treating [[spoiler:Silver]] like a son (teaching and protecting him), while [[spoiler:Silver]] starts taking on some of [[spoiler:Shadow's]] traits. But they can't bear to reveal it for ages.



* DueToTheDead: There is a funeral in which nine convicts are buried in the prison grounds. One of the prison customs is that the killer, if known, should dig the grave; otherwise one of their closest should do it. Shadow ends up digging and filling in four graves, and attends their funeral, showing great respect for the dead. Several other cons follow his example.
** Interestingly, while it is mentioned that 'several wardens' and even Amy Rose attend, Mephiles is ''not'' mentioned as attending (despite being directly responsible for one death), another thing that makes him all the less humane.

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* DueToTheDead: There is a funeral in which nine convicts are buried in the prison grounds. One of the prison customs is that the killer, if known, should dig the grave; otherwise one of their closest should do it. Shadow ends up digging and filling in four graves, and attends their funeral, showing great respect for the dead. Several other cons follow his example.
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example. Interestingly, while it is mentioned that 'several wardens' and even Amy Rose attend, Mephiles is ''not'' mentioned as attending (despite being directly responsible for one death), another thing that makes him all the less humane.



'''[[spoiler:Nack:]]''' Yeah... Guess I'm gonna die the way I lived. At the wrong end of a gun...
--> '''Mephiles:''' Very nice. Very poetic. ''(fires twice)'' Now you get to die... all alone.
--> '''[[spoiler:Nack:]]''' See you in hell, Mephiles...

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'''[[spoiler:Nack:]]''' Yeah... Guess I'm gonna die the way I lived. At the wrong end of a gun...
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'''Mephiles:''' Very nice. Very poetic. ''(fires twice)'' Now you get to die... all alone.
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alone.\\
'''[[spoiler:Nack:]]''' See you in hell, Mephiles...



* FriendlyEnemy: Shadow and Sonic; the writer skilfully writes so that despite all the fighting they do, they still gradually become friends (although Shadow denies it fiercely).

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* FriendlyEnemy: FriendlyEnemy:
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Shadow and Sonic; the writer skilfully writes so that despite all the fighting they do, they still gradually become friends (although Shadow denies it fiercely).



--> '''Shadow:''' You pry, and poke, and insult all around you by your very demeanour. I should give you the thrashing of a lifetime. But I see now it would be a waste of a good shanking. You can't help it; it's in your nature. It would be like kicking a dog for licking its own balls.
--> '''Silver:''' Th-Thanks, sir...

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--> '''Shadow:''' --->'''Shadow:''' You pry, and poke, and insult all around you by your very demeanour. I should give you the thrashing of a lifetime. But I see now it would be a waste of a good shanking. You can't help it; it's in your nature. It would be like kicking a dog for licking its own balls.
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balls.\\
'''Silver:''' Th-Thanks, sir...



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* MyEyesAreUpHere: Shadow has a tendency to talk to Amy's [[MaleGaze breasts and ass.]] Mephiles does so also, but he should know better.

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* MyEyesAreUpHere: Shadow has a tendency to talk to Amy's [[MaleGaze breasts and ass.]] ass]]. Mephiles does so also, but he should know better.



* NearRapeExperience: This happens between [[spoiler: Shadow]] and [[spoiler: Amy]] during the riot arc.

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* NearRapeExperience: This happens between [[spoiler: Shadow]] [[spoiler:Shadow]] and [[spoiler: Amy]] [[spoiler:Amy]] during the riot arc.



* TheNicknamer: Sonic and Shadow both come up with a variety of nicknames for the group. It's rare that they'll ever call anyone by their actual name.



* RapeByProxy: Shadow violates [[spoiler: Doctor Blaze,]] then forces [[spoiler: Silver]] to do the same.

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* RapeByProxy: Shadow violates [[spoiler: Doctor [[spoiler:Doctor Blaze,]] then forces [[spoiler: Silver]] to do the same.



* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: E-123 Omega is probably the only guard who does his job properly. He seems to sincerely question the inhumane acts performed by the Warden, obliges Silver's request to visit a sectioned [[spoiler: Shadow,]] and listens to what Sonic has to say.

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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: ReasonableAuthorityFigure:
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E-123 Omega is probably the only guard who does his job properly. He seems to sincerely question the inhumane acts performed by the Warden, obliges Silver's request to visit a sectioned [[spoiler: Shadow,]] [[spoiler:Shadow,]] and listens to what Sonic has to say.



* RelatedInTheAdaptation: [[spoiler: Silver turns out be Shadow's son.]]

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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: [[spoiler: Silver [[spoiler:Silver turns out be Shadow's son.]] ]]
* TheReveal: Two, actually. First, [[spoiler:Rouge is Silver's mother]]. Second, [[spoiler:his father is ''Shadow'']].



** It seems that [[spoiler: Shadow and Sonia]] are now on route to becoming an item.

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** It seems that [[spoiler: Shadow [[spoiler:Shadow and Sonia]] are now on route to becoming an item.



* TheNicknamer: Sonic and Shadow both come up with a variety of nicknames for the group. It's rare that they'll ever call anyone by their actual name.
* TheReveal: Two, actually. First, [[spoiler: Rouge is Silver's mother.]] Second, [[spoiler: his father is ''Shadow''.]]



* TuckAndCover: In a sudden PetTheDog moment of selflessness, [[spoiler: VideoGame/ShadowTheHedgehog]] protects [[spoiler: the visiting Sonia]] from a shrapnel grenade.

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* TuckAndCover: In a sudden PetTheDog moment of selflessness, [[spoiler: VideoGame/ShadowTheHedgehog]] protects [[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the visiting Sonia]] from a shrapnel grenade.



* [[VillainProtagonist Villain Protagonists:]] The main cast consists of violent convicted criminals. They don't even have a particularly heroic motive; they just want to escape. But because the story is centered on them, they get the SympatheticPOV and you can almost forget they're a collection of terrorists, serial killers and rapists.
* WellDoneSonGuy: It's implied that [[spoiler: Nack]] was one of these when he's dying...

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* [[VillainProtagonist Villain Protagonists:]] VillainProtagonist: The main cast consists of violent convicted criminals. They don't even have a particularly heroic motive; they just want to escape. But because the story is centered on them, they get the SympatheticPOV and you can almost forget they're a collection of terrorists, serial killers and rapists.
* WellDoneSonGuy: It's implied that [[spoiler: Nack]] [[spoiler:Nack]] was one of these when he's dying...



* YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters: Sonic, Manic and Tails consider themselves this to some degree, being members of an undefined extremist political party opposing the current government. Sonic is even one of its mascots. However Sonic robbed banks, Manic has destroyed government buildings, and Tails committed international fraud to fund them.
** The author compares them to the Irish Republican Army (or IRA) and it makes Sonic's status as a political mascot a little less heroic...

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* YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters: Sonic, Manic and Tails consider themselves this to some degree, being members of an undefined extremist political party opposing the current government. Sonic is even one of its mascots. However Sonic robbed banks, Manic has destroyed government buildings, and Tails committed international fraud to fund them. \n** The author compares them to the Irish Republican Army (or IRA) and it makes Sonic's status as a political mascot a little less heroic...

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* DaddyIssues: Scourge has these.

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* %%zce* DaddyIssues: Scourge has these.



* DeadFic: It looked like it for a time, but the author returned after a two-year hiatus with the explanation that she'd been tied down with Bulimia Nervosa.
** And now, as of June 2019 the author has officially stopped updating the story. While the first season is still available, the second season has been deleted, causing the story to be left with NoEnding after Sonic and Mina's second meeting together.
* DefeatMeansFriendship: This is how Sonic gathers Knuckles and Shadow to his team.

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* DeadFic: It looked like it for a time, but the author returned after a two-year hiatus with the explanation that she'd been tied down with Bulimia Nervosa.
** And now, as
Nervosa. As of June 2019 2019, the author has officially stopped updating the story. While the first season is still available, the second season has been deleted, causing the story to be left with NoEnding after Sonic and Mina's second meeting together.
* %%* DefeatMeansFriendship: This is how Sonic gathers Knuckles and Shadow to his team.



* FiveManBand: Okay, they're bad... but they're still the guys you should be rooting for, and there's five of them. They fit as they do in canon.
** TheLeader: Sonic. He takes charge and helps bring the team together, and comes up with the escape plan to begin with.
** TheLancer: Shadow. He may not admit it, but he's a good second for Sonic, and despite his clashes with him he does have great potential.
** TheSmartGuy: Tails. His expertise with technology makes him incredibly important, as his objective is to wipe all records of the convicts' history so they can get new identities once they break out.
** TheBigGuy: Knuckles. Even with the padded gloves on his hands, he can still cause serious damage with his strength.
** TheHeart: Silver. He's the most morally upright of the group, even as it starts to get broken down more and more.
** TheSixthRanger: Scourge. Nobody likes him, but he's in on the plan anyway.
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->'''Breech Loader:''' The hell with boring old rape-rape... let's go for GANG RAPE.
-->-- ''The author lets you know it's going up to eleven. Then again, by the time you reach this point, you'll probably have been rendered numb to anything less...''

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->'''Breech Loader:''' The ->''"The hell with boring old rape-rape... let's go for GANG RAPE.
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-->-- ''The author lets you know it's going up to eleven. Then again, by the time you reach this point, you'll probably have been rendered numb to anything less...''
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* AbsurdlySpaciousSewer: The gang end up in one of these in chapter 76. It's even the title of the chapter.

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''Prison Island Break,'' by Breech Loader and Sonicfrank, is a DarkFic; a massive re-imagining of the ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' series where everybody is a dangerous criminal. We're talking Sonic The {{Cop Killer}} here. It includes murder, sexual violence, mental illness and the newest addition to the trauma list, A-list drug abuse. The author doesn't believe in wasting time either; the violation of basic human rights kicks off in Chapter One and escalates, enthusiastically turning your childhood heroes into violent and mentally diseased felons. It's not for the faint of heart or weak of stomach, making lesser DarkFic look like a cookbook.

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''Prison Island Break,'' by Breech Loader and Sonicfrank, is a DarkFic; a massive re-imagining of the ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' series where everybody is a dangerous criminal. We're talking Sonic The {{Cop Killer}} here. It includes murder, sexual violence, mental illness and the newest addition to the trauma list, A-list drug abuse. The author doesn't believe in wasting time either; the violation of basic human rights kicks off in Chapter One and escalates, enthusiastically turning your childhood heroes into violent and mentally diseased felons. It's not for the faint of heart or weak of stomach, making lesser DarkFic look like a cookbook.\n



The story is praised for maintaining the core personalities of the Canon Characters while exploring what could happen if they used their powers for darker and more selfish purposes in another world - for example, Sonic was reimagined as something of a mascot of a political party that seems perfectly happy to be funded by criminal activities.

Unfortunately, Breech Loader has officially announced that she won't update the story anymore as of June 23, 2019.

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The story is praised for maintaining the core personalities of the Canon Characters while exploring what could happen if they used their powers for darker and more selfish purposes in another world - for example, Sonic was reimagined as something of a mascot of a political party that seems perfectly happy to be funded by criminal activities.

Unfortunately,
Breech Loader has officially announced that she won't update the story anymore as of June 23, 2019.
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-->-- ''The author lets you know it's going UpToEleven. Then again, by the time you reach this point, you'll probably have been rendered numb to anything less...''

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-->-- ''The author lets you know it's going UpToEleven.up to eleven. Then again, by the time you reach this point, you'll probably have been rendered numb to anything less...''

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* KilledOffForReal: As of Chapter 73, [[spoiler: Nack, Manic, Vector and Espio]] are all dead.
* KnifeNut: Shadow always has multiple shivs somewhere on his person. They are generally hastily improvised and have been made of anything from simple glass and cloth, to hardened toilet paper. Every time he's shaken down or searched, he's relieved of several but he still manages to produce more.

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* KilledOffForReal: %%* KilledOff ForReal: As of Chapter 73, [[spoiler: Nack, Manic, Vector and Espio]] are all dead.
* KnifeNut: Shadow always has multiple shivs somewhere on his person. They are generally hastily improvised and have been made of anything from simple glass and cloth, to hardened toilet paper. Every time he's shaken down or searched, he's relieved of several but he still manages to produce more.
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* SinisterShiv: Shadow always has multiple shivs somewhere on his person. They are generally hastily improvised and have been made of anything from simple glass and cloth, to hardened toilet paper. Every time he's shaken down or searched, he's relieved of several but he still manages to produce more.
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* BreakTheHaughty: Silver initially believes that he can reform the entire prison population. RealityEnsues.

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* BreakTheHaughty: Silver initially believes that he can reform the entire prison population. RealityEnsues.
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In a variation on AuthorExistenceFailure, the fanfic was at first written by two authors. According to WordOfGod there was an argument and one of them quit, then refused to post a chapter to redirect the followers. The other author continues alone, but reading the full story requires visiting two different author accounts...

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In a variation on AuthorExistenceFailure, the The fanfic was at first written by two authors. According to WordOfGod there was an argument and one of them quit, then refused to post a chapter to redirect the followers. The other author continues alone, but reading the full story requires visiting two different author accounts...

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** This is made very clear when Mephiles attempts to bring him to Eggman, and Vector not only easily demolishes ten Guard Robos (not even being slowed down by losing some teeth!), he very nearly comes close to mangling Mephiles before the Head Warden can get the bars up.



** Tails also gets put through the wringer, primarily the kind involving rape.



* TheCassandra: Silver. Nobody really believes he knows the future, and he hates being able to see it as it does him little good.

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* TheCassandra: Silver. Nobody really believes he knows the future, and he hates being able to see it as it does him little good. To be fair, it's really difficult to be believed when you are literally the only one who could see what was coming.



** And now, as of June 2019 the author has officially stopped updating the story.

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** And now, as of June 2019 the author has officially stopped updating the story. While the first season is still available, the second season has been deleted, causing the story to be left with NoEnding after Sonic and Mina's second meeting together.



* DramaticIrony: Shadow and Silver find out they're father and son at roughly the same time, but can't bear to tell the other for fear of rejection - even though the reader knows they'd probably embrace it. Shadow starts treating Silver like a son (teaching and protecting him), while Silver starts taking on some of Shadow's traits. But they can't bear to reveal it for ages.

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* DramaticIrony: [[spoiler: Shadow and Silver Silver]] find out they're father and son at roughly the same time, but can't bear to tell the other for fear of rejection - even though the reader knows they'd probably embrace it. Shadow [[spoiler:Shadow]] starts treating Silver [[spoiler:Silver]] like a son (teaching and protecting him), while Silver [[spoiler:Silver]] starts taking on some of Shadow's [[spoiler:Shadow's]] traits. But they can't bear to reveal it for ages.



** After Sonic gives Shadow his nicknames, Shadow twists them into insults, and often refers to Sonic as "Streak", "The Thickest Thing Alive" and "The Blue Blockhead".

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** After Sonic gives Shadow his nicknames, Shadow twists them into insults, and often refers to Sonic as "Streak", "The Thickest Thing Alive" and "The Blue Blockhead". Earlier in the series, he also addresses Sonic as "Faker", though it's less about them being supposedly identical to each other and more about Shadow seeing Sonic's bravado and charisma as a farce.



*** Interestingly, not ''once'' in the story does either one call the other 'Faker'.



** TheLeader: Sonic
** TheLancer: Shadow
** TheSmartGuy: Tails
** TheBigGuy: Knuckles (later on, Omega)
** TheHeart: Silver
** TheSixthRanger: Scourge

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** TheLeader: Sonic
Sonic. He takes charge and helps bring the team together, and comes up with the escape plan to begin with.
** TheLancer: Shadow
Shadow. He may not admit it, but he's a good second for Sonic, and despite his clashes with him he does have great potential.
** TheSmartGuy: Tails
Tails. His expertise with technology makes him incredibly important, as his objective is to wipe all records of the convicts' history so they can get new identities once they break out.
** TheBigGuy: Knuckles (later on, Omega)
Knuckles. Even with the padded gloves on his hands, he can still cause serious damage with his strength.
** TheHeart: Silver
Silver. He's the most morally upright of the group, even as it starts to get broken down more and more.
** TheSixthRanger: ScourgeScourge. Nobody likes him, but he's in on the plan anyway.



%% * JerkJock: Knuckles.

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%% * JerkJock: Knuckles.Knuckles. He's a very pronounced example even among the other Jocks in the prison, as his HairTriggerTemper and brutality ensure that people that cross him sincerely regret it when it comes time for him to get payback.



** Sonic also counts as this. He's much more charismatic and friendly than Shadow, but keep in mind he's not above spouting insults and taunting people to make them enrage.
** Knuckles eventually graduates as this once Sonic wins Tails from him. While still temperamental and headstrong, he's very big on respecting the "loser gives winner his spoils" rule that Sonic challenges him with. And though it irritates him, he eventually grows



* KnightTemplar: Silver thinks of himself as ThePaladin, but he's really the less evil variant of a KnightTemplar, acknowledging he's not perfect but convinced that his mistakes and wrongdoings can still be justified. Silver is also extremely pious, and believes that all sins can be forgiven by God if you repent sufficiently.

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* KnightTemplar: Silver thinks of himself as ThePaladin, but he's really the less evil variant of a KnightTemplar, acknowledging he's not perfect but convinced that his mistakes and wrongdoings can still be justified. Silver is also extremely pious, and believes that all sins can be forgiven by God if you repent sufficiently. This gets beaten out of him quite literally after some time.



* ALighterShadeOfBlack: The protragonists that you should be rooting for are criminals - not framed, not vandals, but murderers and rapists. Mephiles is portrayed as being worse because he is so corrupt and sadistic. Likewise Scourge is a paedophile.

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* ALighterShadeOfBlack: The protragonists that you should be rooting for are criminals - not framed, not vandals, but murderers and rapists. Mephiles is portrayed as being worse because he is so corrupt and sadistic. Likewise Scourge is a paedophile.paedophile and absolutely savage creature who makes Shadow look like a perfectly innocent soul.



* MechaMooks: Along with regular wardens there's also the Guard Robos. They're not particularly smart or durable but are cheap, repairable, and replaceable; the latter three traits being vital considering Prison Island's isolated nature.

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* MechaMooks: Along with regular wardens there's also the Guard Robos. They're not particularly smart or durable but are cheap, repairable, and replaceable; the latter three traits being vital considering Prison Island's isolated nature. Eggman is planning on making better ones that can replace the organic wardens.



* NaiveNewcomer: Silver accepts a bag of chips from Espio, not knowing that he will have to give back two bags in exchange.

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* NaiveNewcomer: Silver accepts a bag of chips from Espio, not knowing that he will have to give back two bags in exchange. It also takes a lot of pain (literal and metaphorical) for him to realize that his plan of being God's agent of justice in Prison Island can never be achieved.



* PetTheDog: Shadow has several moments of this.

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* PetTheDog: Shadow has several moments of this. Sometimes it's genuine, sometimes it's just a prelude for some twisted joke later on.



* PrisonEpisode: This ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' AlternateUniverseFic with the Contextual Reassignment of a prison - not just the canon characters going to prison for once, but actively being convicted criminals. Active and completely unrepentant for the most part. All of the powers/talents that make them heroes in canon are simply redirected to criminal ends. Sonic robbed a bank, nearly managed a second one, killed a cop in the process and escaped normal prisons with utter ease. Shadow killed his foster parents, then used his Chaos Control to rape and murder innumerable young women, and killed several men too. He was captured when he Chaos Controlled into the path of a moving vehicle.

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* PrisonEpisode: This is a ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' AlternateUniverseFic with the Contextual Reassignment of a prison - not just the canon characters going to prison for once, but actively being convicted criminals. Active and completely unrepentant for the most part. All of the powers/talents that make them heroes in canon are simply redirected to criminal ends. Sonic robbed a bank, nearly managed a second one, killed a cop in the process and escaped normal prisons with utter ease. Shadow killed his foster parents, then used his Chaos Control to rape and murder innumerable young women, and killed several men too. He was captured when he Chaos Controlled into the path of a moving vehicle. Silver saw the future of a man planning to rape and kill a bunch of kids, and used his psychic powers to induce YourHeadAsplode to prevent it from happening.



* PunchClockVillain: Nack was a professional sniper while he was a free weasel.

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** Scourge, by comparison, is less of a person and more of a demented animal with a childlike mindset.
* PunchClockVillain: Nack was a professional sniper while he was a free weasel. He's something of a FriendlySniper too, as apart from his profession, he's fairly friendly and respectful to others.



** Nate Morgan also fits this trope, as he's kind and courteous to Sonic and Mina, and is willing to pull some strings for them to an extent. He does warn them the dangers of the conjugal between them and Shadow, however, and is blunt about the risk of trying to weaponize Shadow's abilities.



* TokenGoodTeammate: Silver is the only protagonist that isn't a definite VillainProtagonist.

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* TokenGoodTeammate: Silver is the only protagonist that isn't a definite VillainProtagonist. And even then, he killed a guy by making his head explode.



* WouldntHurtAChild: Shadow.

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* WouldntHurtAChild: Shadow.Shadow may be an unrepentant rapist and serial murderer with an unrelenting hatred of pretty much everything except his sister Maria, but he will never lay a finger upon a child no matter what.



* YourHeadAsplode: Silver kills a (suggested) future rapist in this matter.

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* YourHeadAsplode: Silver kills a (suggested) future rapist in this matter. It's what gets him sent to Prison Island to begin with.
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* AlienBlood: Shadow Robotnik bleeds BlackBlood when everybody else has red blood. This is in keeping with canon, in which he is an alien hybrid. Black was chosen rather than green to show some characters trying to 'delude' themselves into thinking that it is just a very dark red.

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* AlienBlood: Shadow Robotnik bleeds BlackBlood black blood when everybody else has red blood. This is in keeping with canon, in which he is an alien hybrid. Black was chosen rather than green to show some characters trying to 'delude' themselves into thinking that it is just a very dark red.
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''Prison Island Break,'' by Breech Loader and Sonicfrank, is a DarkFic; a massive re-imagining of the ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' series where everybody is a dangerous criminal. We're talking Sonic The Cop Killer here. It includes murder sexual violence, mental illness and the newest addition to the trauma list, A-list drug abuse. The author doesn't believe in wasting time either; the violation of basic human rights kicks off in Chapter One and escalates, enthusiastically turning your childhood heroes into violent and mentally diseased felons. It's not for the faint of heart or weak of stomach, making lesser DarkFic look like a cookbook.

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''Prison Island Break,'' by Breech Loader and Sonicfrank, is a DarkFic; a massive re-imagining of the ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' series where everybody is a dangerous criminal. We're talking Sonic The Cop Killer {{Cop Killer}} here. It includes murder murder, sexual violence, mental illness and the newest addition to the trauma list, A-list drug abuse. The author doesn't believe in wasting time either; the violation of basic human rights kicks off in Chapter One and escalates, enthusiastically turning your childhood heroes into violent and mentally diseased felons. It's not for the faint of heart or weak of stomach, making lesser DarkFic look like a cookbook.
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* {{Exploitation Fi|lm}}c: A fanfiction that has lots of murder, rape, and depraved crimes? Definitely!

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** Shadow has apparently tried to escape Prison Island and failed - and apparently he's actually gotten the furthest of any convict. He's pretty angry at Sonic for insisting that he can.

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** Shadow has apparently tried to escape Prison Island and failed - and apparently he's actually gotten the furthest of any convict. He's pretty angry at Sonic for insisting that he can.can, because he knows firsthand that it's impossible.



* ALighterShadeOfBlack: The protragonists that you should be rooting for are criminals - not framed, not vandals, but murderers and rapists. Mephiles is portrayed as being worse because he is so corrupt and sadistic. Likewise Scourge is a paedophile.



* {{Depower}}: Silver is given an injection upon arrival at Prison Island that prevents him from using his incredibly strong psychic powers. Those will come back if he stops receiving the injection but the wardens definitely don't want that to happen.
* DepravedHomosexual: Knuckles. It's stated very firmly that he's in prison because he raped multiple ''men.''

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* {{Depower}}: Every character has their powers from canon, but they've all been negated through various means (the strong Knuckles is given padded gloves to stop him from digging, etc.). Silver is given an injection upon arrival at Prison Island that prevents him from using his incredibly strong psychic powers. Those will come back if he stops receiving the injection but the wardens definitely don't want that to happen.
* DepravedHomosexual: Knuckles. It's stated very firmly that he's in prison because he raped multiple ''men.''''men'', and he sees no reason to stop now that he's in prison.



** On his way to a trial, a fangirl of Shadow jumps him, screaming that she can change him and terrifying him, resulting in him hitting her right off him. Even then she doesn't change her mind. This is actually a gag - it references how Shadow often becomes a DracoInLeatherPants. WordOfGod is that the writer is serious about how often rapists are quickly forgiven in bad fanfiction.

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** On his way to a trial, a fangirl of Shadow jumps him, screaming that she can change him and terrifying him, resulting in him hitting her right off him. Even then she doesn't change her mind. This is actually a gag - it references how Shadow often becomes a DracoInLeatherPants.DracoInLeatherPants in the ''Sonic'' fandom. WordOfGod is that the writer is serious about how often rapists are quickly forgiven in bad fanfiction.



** The story itself presents meta-inversion. The readers don't need to forgive the protagonists for any of their crimes to enjoy the story, and are encouraged to remember, but you find yourself feeling sorry for them a lot. Don't worry; there's nothing wrong with you. WordOfGod is that this is exactly how you're ''supposed'' to feel; the conditions in the prison are so horrific, so corrupt, so inhumane, that even these murderers and rapists are getting DisproportionateRetribution. That clash of emotions you're getting? That's ''intentional.''

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** The story itself presents meta-inversion. The readers don't need to forgive the protagonists for any of their crimes to enjoy the story, and are encouraged to remember, but you find yourself feeling sorry for them a lot. Don't worry; there's nothing wrong with you. WordOfGod is that this is exactly how you're ''supposed'' to feel; the conditions in the prison are so horrific, so corrupt, so inhumane, that even these murderers and rapists are getting DisproportionateRetribution.DisproportionateRetribution for what they've done. That clash of emotions you're getting? That's ''intentional.''



* GoMadFromTheIsolation: Shadow sacrifices his own sanity - he signs a paper admitting he is insane - and is locked up in the small lunatic wing also. (While drugging, rape and medical torture is something he has endured, now he goes through a week of isolation, chained to the wall and fed through a tube). When Amy rescues him a week later he is in a shocking condition, and she breaks into tears. On his part, he doesn't even recognize her as the woman he was once so infatuated with.
* HairTriggerTemper: Knuckles certainly is hot-tempered, but this is more the reason Shadow is so feared by the other convicts. There is no in-between mood for him.

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* GoMadFromTheIsolation: Shadow sacrifices his own sanity - he signs a paper admitting he is insane - and is locked up in the small lunatic wing also. (While wing. While drugging, rape and medical torture is something he has previously endured, now he goes through a week of isolation, chained to the wall and fed through a tube).tube. When Amy rescues him a week later he is in a shocking condition, and she breaks into tears. On his part, he doesn't even recognize her as the woman he was once so infatuated with.
* HairTriggerTemper: Knuckles certainly is hot-tempered, but this is more the reason Shadow is so feared by the other convicts. There is no in-between mood for him.him; he can be quietly eating his lunch, and someone can so much as breathe wrong and he'll attack them in a rage.



** HypocrisyNod: Silver is better aware of his hypocrisy and is disgusted with himself.

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** HypocrisyNod: Silver is better aware of his hypocrisy as the story goes on and is disgusted with himself.



* JerkJock: Knuckles.

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%% * JerkJock: Knuckles.



* ALighterShadeOfBlack: The protragonists that you should be rooting for are criminals - not framed, not vandals, but murderers and rapists. Mephiles is portrayed as being worse because he is so corrupt and sadistic. Likewise Scourge is a paedophile.



* MoodDissonance: It's 100% DarkFic; that's for sure. But the author does love a good dose of BlackHumour. Rather than constantly dredging the reader through the depths of despair, they make them sit up sharply using humorous descriptions of dramatic events and smart one-liners, all the way to ComedicSociopathy. For example, just after Silver has been raped...

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* MoodDissonance: It's 100% DarkFic; DarkFic, that's for sure. But the author does love a good dose of BlackHumour. Rather than constantly dredging the reader through the depths of despair, they make them sit up sharply using humorous descriptions of dramatic events and smart one-liners, all the way to ComedicSociopathy. For example, just after Silver has been raped...



* ShownTheirWork: The medical procedures and a lot of the prison protocol, and to some degree, the prison etiquette among convicts. Also, the author specifically names Shadow's mental illness as 'Depressive Schizoaffective Disorder', with a high level of psychotism. It's not perfect, but it's obvious that she does care about getting it right.
* SirSwearsALot: There's a lot of cursing, but Shadow above all characters swears a ''lot,'' a shout-out to the gratuitous swearing in his own game. Shortly the word 'fuck' ceases to have any more meaning that the word 'said'.

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* ShownTheirWork: The medical procedures and a lot of the prison protocol, and to some degree, the prison etiquette among convicts. Also, the author specifically names Shadow's mental illness as 'Depressive Schizoaffective Disorder', with a high level of psychotism. It's not perfect, but it's obvious that she does they do care about getting it right.
* SirSwearsALot: There's a lot of cursing, but Shadow above all characters swears a ''lot,'' ''lot'', a shout-out to the gratuitous swearing in his own game. Shortly the word 'fuck' ceases to have any more meaning that the word 'said'.
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** It's another case of how the author DidDoTheResearch - while shrapnel grenades are less deadly than others, they have a wide range and can easily leave people scarred for life.

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** It's another case of how the author DidDoTheResearch has ShownTheirWork - while shrapnel grenades are less deadly than others, they have a wide range and can easily leave people scarred for life.

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-->'''Silver''': What... happened to you?
-->'''Shadow''': Nobody ever came when I screamed. Nobody sympathized with me when I did what had to be done. Why should I help you, knowing there's nothing you can do for me?!

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-->'''Silver''': What... happened to you?
-->'''Shadow''':
you?\\
'''Shadow''':
Nobody ever came when I screamed. Nobody sympathized with me when I did what had to be done. Why should I help you, knowing there's nothing you can do for me?!



* DidDoTheResearch: The medical procedures and a lot of the prison protocol, and to some degree, the prison etiquette among convicts. Also, the author specifically names Shadow's mental illness as 'Depressive Schizoaffective Disorder', with a high level of psychotism. It's not perfect, but it's obvious that she does care about getting it right.



** While it's clear the author has a grudge against irresponsible drug use, they definitely DidDoTheResearch. This was especially obvious in the chapter where Ketamine was used in its capacity as a rape drug.

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** While it's clear the author has a grudge against irresponsible drug use, they definitely DidDoTheResearch.have ShownTheirWork. This was especially obvious in the chapter where Ketamine was used in its capacity as a rape drug.



--> '''Mephiles:''' So, do you have any memorable last words?
--> '''[[spoiler:Nack:]]''' Yeah... Guess I'm gonna die the way I lived. At the wrong end of a gun...

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--> '''Mephiles:''' So, do you have any memorable last words?
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words?\\
'''[[spoiler:Nack:]]''' Yeah... Guess I'm gonna die the way I lived. At the wrong end of a gun...



* ShipTease: Tons of it!

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* ShipTease: Tons of it!it:



--> '''Silver:''' I was so close! And then the day they put the rings on, I could feel it! I was doing it! I was so close! And now the rings are on, and I know it's there but I can't tap it… '''It's no use!'''
--> '''Tails:''' Aw, Silver, don't keep saying that. It just pisses people off.

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--> '''Silver:''' I was so close! And then the day they put the rings on, I could feel it! I was doing it! I was so close! And now the rings are on, and I know it's there but I can't tap it… '''It's no use!'''
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use!'''\\
'''Tails:''' Aw, Silver, don't keep saying that. It just pisses people off.


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* ABNegative: Subverted. Shadow the Hedgehog does have a rare blood type - but it's B-. And so does Silver. In a case of DidDoTheResearch, WordOfGod is that it was chosen to combine drama with {{Foreshadowing}}...

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* ABNegative: Subverted. Shadow the Hedgehog does have a rare blood type - but it's B-. And so does Silver. In a case of DidDoTheResearch, ShownTheirWork, WordOfGod is that it was chosen to combine drama with {{Foreshadowing}}...
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-> '''Breech Loader:''' The hell with boring old rape-rape... let's go for GANG RAPE.
--> ''The author lets you know it's going UpToEleven. Then again, by the time you reach this point, you'll probably have been rendered numb to anything less...''

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-> '''Breech ->'''Breech Loader:''' The hell with boring old rape-rape... let's go for GANG RAPE.
--> -->-- ''The author lets you know it's going UpToEleven. Then again, by the time you reach this point, you'll probably have been rendered numb to anything less...''



Unfortunately, Breech Loader has officially announced that she won't update the story anymore as of June 23, 2019. But wasn't it nice of her to step up to the plate and say so?

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Unfortunately, Breech Loader has officially announced that she won't update the story anymore as of June 23, 2019. But wasn't it nice of her to step up to the plate and say so?
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