History Fanfic / OnACrossAndArrow

15th May '18 6:30:44 AM valar55
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: When Rarity first meets Elusive and looks him over, her inner schoolgirl squeals at the length of his horn.

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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: When Rarity first meets Elusive and looks him over, her inner schoolgirl schoolfilly squeals at the length of his horn.



* NoodleIncident: Applejack mentioned a time Rainbow Dash got stir crazy from being coped up too long. Apparently it ''wasn't'' pretty.

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* NoodleIncident: Applejack mentioned a time Rainbow Dash got stir crazy stir-crazy from being coped cooped up too long. Apparently it ''wasn't'' pretty.
15th May '18 6:26:58 AM valar55
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Cogwork has also written a sequel, ''Fanfic/OnAWhisperOfWind'', where Applebuck travels to the mane 6's universe to find his "cousin" again.

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Cogwork has also written a sequel, ''Fanfic/OnAWhisperOfWind'', where Applebuck travels to the mane Mane 6's universe to find his "cousin" again.
10th Mar '18 11:50:11 AM Malady
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** "Well, speak o' [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyTheMovie1987 th' smooze]]."

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** "Well, speak o' [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyTheMovie1987 [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyTheMovie1986 th' smooze]]."
10th Mar '18 11:47:27 AM Malady
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** "Well, speak o' [[MyLittlePonyTheMovie th' smooze]]."

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** "Well, speak o' [[MyLittlePonyTheMovie [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyTheMovie1987 th' smooze]]."
2nd Jun '17 9:32:43 AM Scalondragon
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Added DiffLines:

* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Rarity, on seeing Silver Bell, Elusive's little brother, realizes that in her wanting to stay in Elusive's world, she was ready to ''abandon Sweetie Belle'' to do it. She then tearfully admits to Elusive, "I...I have a sister. I-I haven't seen her in so long...seeing your brother just now, made me realize...''howmuchIreallymissher!!''" And goes into InelegantBlubbering as the guilt and longing hits home. [[spoiler: Knowing Rarity has a little sister like he does a little brother gives Elusive the strength to tell Rarity "Go to her."]]
15th May '17 3:46:37 PM ImperialMajestyXO
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* AmbiguouslyBi: Elusive's attracted to Rarity, no doubt, but some of his thoughts regarding his masseur hint that he might have some... tendencies. Since he's Rarity's counterpart, this applies to her by extension.



* CampStraight: Elusive (although his thoughts toward his masseur hint [[BiTheWay otherwise]]...)

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* CampStraight: Elusive (although his thoughts toward his masseur hint [[AmbiguouslyBi hint]] [[BiTheWay otherwise]]...)
1st Jan '17 4:15:38 PM DastardlyDemolition
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* FollowTheLeader: While not the first piece of fiction to have gender-flipped ponies, this story did open the floodgates for many other stories involving the gender-flipped [[FanNickname Mane Six]], and has given the gender-bent ponies their fanon names: Dusk Shine, Elusive, Butterscotch, Rainbow Blitz, Applejack, and Berry Bubble[[note]]counterparts to Twilight Sparkle, Rarity, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie, respectively[[/note]].
** [[PopCulturalOsmosisFailure Fanon Osmosis Failure]]: This was the fic that locked in the Fanon names for the gender-flipped [[FanNickname Mane Six]], EXCEPT for Pinkie Pie, whose counterpart is here named Berry Bubble[[note]]Short for Beriswainer [=DaVinci=] Bubble, just as Pinkie's full name is Pinkimena Diane Pie[[/note]] while at least half of the works that take the rest of their names from ''On a Cross and Arrow'' flip his to Bubble Berry.
*** Not '''technically''' one of the Mane 6, but Spike's [[DistaffCounterpart counterpart]] here is named Spines, while nearly all of the copycats call her Barb. There's also Elusive's kid brother ''Sweepy'' Bell, though the author has since edited it to "Silver" Bell instead.
18th Apr '15 6:33:12 PM nombretomado
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* GlassesPull: Pinkie Pie in Chapter 2, directly mimicking [[CSIMiami the master himself]] (and then comments on the missing BigYes and song afterwords).

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* GlassesPull: Pinkie Pie in Chapter 2, directly mimicking [[CSIMiami [[Series/CSIMiami the master himself]] (and then comments on the missing BigYes and song afterwords).
10th Apr '15 2:28:47 PM theLibrarian
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*** Not '''technically''' one of the Mane 6, but Spike's [[DistaffCounterpart counterpart]] here is named Spines, while nearly all of the copycats call her Barb.

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*** Not '''technically''' one of the Mane 6, but Spike's [[DistaffCounterpart counterpart]] here is named Spines, while nearly all of the copycats call her Barb. There's also Elusive's kid brother ''Sweepy'' Bell, though the author has since edited it to "Silver" Bell instead.
5th Feb '15 1:15:33 PM valozzy
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* NamesTheSame: Applejack and... Applejack. To avoid confusion and keep her cover from being blown, female!Applejack refers to herself as "Cousin [=JayJay=]" to Applebuck and her male self.

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* NamesTheSame: [[invoked]] Applejack and... Applejack. To avoid confusion and keep her cover from being blown, female!Applejack refers to herself as "Cousin [=JayJay=]" to Applebuck and her male self.
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