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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Nagi denies watching Hayate on Closed-Circuit Television... when asked how she could be sure he was master [[ADateWithRosiePalms of his]] [[TheCatchPhraseCatchesOn own domain]].
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Nagi denies watching Hayate on Closed-Circuit Television... when asked how she could be sure he was [[SexualEuphemism master [[ADateWithRosiePalms of his]] [[TheCatchPhraseCatchesOn his own domain]].
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* CrackFic
* ´ShipperOnDeck: Ayumu.
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* AlternateUniverseFic: Diverges from the original storyline at around the end of the Golden Week Arc and never looks back.
* ´ShipperOnDeck: Ayumu.
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* AlternateUniverseFic: Diverges from the original storyline at around the end of the Golden Week Arc and never looks back.
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* FanNickname: The author calls the [[LemonyNarrator narrator]] [[Creator/NorioWakamoto Narrio]] [[ActorAllusion Wakamator]].
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* LampshadeHanging
* LesYay
* MemeticBadass: In a fight between a world-class assassin and a world-class butler, who would emerge victorious? ''ComicBook/SquirrelGirl''.
* LesYay
* MemeticBadass: In a fight between a world-class assassin and a world-class butler, who would emerge victorious? ''ComicBook/SquirrelGirl''.
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* LawfulStupid: Arguably averted by Hayate when he points out that, since his ancestors were scum, his only honor comes from doing his duty to his lady as efficiently as possible, [[CombatPragmatist even if he must use decidedly underhanded methods to accomplish this]].
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* TranslationTrainwreck: In the first {{omake}}.
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Dewicking per TRS decision.
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* BiTheWay: "[[WordOfGod The harem Ayumu is building is as much for her as it is for Hayate]]"[[note]]Tropers/{{EvilFuzzy9}}[[/note]].
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* BiTheWay: "[[WordOfGod The harem Ayumu is building is as much for her as it is for Hayate]]"[[note]]Tropers/{{EvilFuzzy9}}[[/note]].
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* {{Ninja}}: In the first chapter, Ayumu and Nagi both dress in a manner reflecting how they view ninja, with Nagi dressed as an [[HighlyVisibleNinja orange-clad]] ''{{Naruto}}'' cosplayer, while Nishizawa is dressed like a more traditional, [[HollywoodHistory but still anachronistic]] black-clad shinobi.
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* {{Ninja}}: In the first chapter, Ayumu and Nagi both dress in a manner reflecting how they view ninja, with Nagi dressed as an [[HighlyVisibleNinja orange-clad]] ''{{Naruto}}'' ''Franchise/{{Naruto}}'' cosplayer, while Nishizawa is dressed like a more traditional, [[HollywoodHistory but still anachronistic]] black-clad shinobi.
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* MemeticBadass: In a fight between a world-class assassin and a world-class butler, who would emerge victorious? ''SquirrelGirl''.
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* MemeticBadass: In a fight between a world-class assassin and a world-class butler, who would emerge victorious? ''SquirrelGirl''.''ComicBook/SquirrelGirl''.
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* FanNickname: The author calls the [[LemonyNarrator narrator]] [[NorioWakamoto Narrio]] [[ActorAllusion Wakamator]].
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* FanNickname: The author calls the [[LemonyNarrator narrator]] [[NorioWakamoto [[Creator/NorioWakamoto Narrio]] [[ActorAllusion Wakamator]].
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* BiTheWay: "[[WordOfGod The harem Ayumu is building is as much for her as it is for Hayate]]"[[hottip:*: ~ {{Tropers/EvilFuzzy9}}]].
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* BiTheWay: "[[WordOfGod The harem Ayumu is building is as much for her as it is for Hayate]]"[[hottip:*: ~ {{Tropers/EvilFuzzy9}}]].Hayate]]"[[note]]Tropers/{{EvilFuzzy9}}[[/note]].
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* BiTheWay: "[[WordOfGod The harem Ayumu is building is as much for her as it is for Hayate]]"[[hottip:*: ~ {{Tropers/EvilFuzzy9}}]].
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* BiTheWay: "[[WordOfGod The harem Ayumu is building is as much for her as it is for Hayate]]"[[hottip:*: ~ {{Tropers/EvilFuzzy9}}]].Hayate]]"[[note]]Tropers/{{EvilFuzzy9}}[[/note]].
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* DefeatMeansFriendship: [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]]. Dire Rat only agrees to work for Nagi because he had already been planning on retiring, only needed an excuse to do so, and figured that Nagi would be easy enough to manipulate. That poor, deluded bastard.
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* DefeatMeansFriendship: [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]].{{Deconstructed|Trope}}. Dire Rat only agrees to work for Nagi because he had already been planning on retiring, only needed an excuse to do so, and figured that Nagi would be easy enough to manipulate. That poor, deluded bastard.
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* {{Fanon}}: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] by the author when he decides to make Sharna British via a bit of contrived InsaneTrollLogic.
* {{Fanservice}}: A fight scene between Tama and an assassin is interrupted by a [[LesYay female bon]][[EroticEating ding scene]] between Ayumu and Hina.
* GratuitousJapanese: Largely averted except for [[strike:one]] [[WordOfGod two]][[hottip:*: As far as I, {{Tropers/EvilFuzzy9}}, have planned, there will only be one other unique sentence in Japanese, and that one will not show up for a while.]] occasions, [[LogicBomb one of which has not actually occurred yet]].
* {{Fanservice}}: A fight scene between Tama and an assassin is interrupted by a [[LesYay female bon]][[EroticEating ding scene]] between Ayumu and Hina.
* GratuitousJapanese: Largely averted except for [[strike:one]] [[WordOfGod two]][[hottip:*: As far as I, {{Tropers/EvilFuzzy9}}, have planned, there will only be one other unique sentence in Japanese, and that one will not show up for a while.]] occasions, [[LogicBomb one of which has not actually occurred yet]].
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* {{Fanon}}: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] {{Invoked|Trope}} by the author when he decides to make Sharna British via a bit of contrived InsaneTrollLogic.
* {{Fanservice}}: A fight scene between Tama and an assassin is interrupted by a [[LesYay femalebon]][[EroticEating ding bonding]][[EroticEating scene]] between Ayumu and Hina.
* GratuitousJapanese: Largely averted except for [[strike:one]] [[WordOfGodtwo]][[hottip:*: As two]][[note]]As far as I, {{Tropers/EvilFuzzy9}}, Tropers/{{EvilFuzzy9}}, have planned, there will only be one other unique sentence in Japanese, and that one will not show up for a while.]] [[/note]] occasions, [[LogicBomb one of which has not actually occurred yet]].
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* GratuitousJapanese: Largely averted except for [[strike:one]] [[WordOfGod
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5780009/1/bOm_b_bNom_b_bNom_b_Hamsterchan Om Nom Nom, Hamster-chan!]] is a ''Manga/HayateTheCombatButler'' [[FanFic fan]][[CrackFic fic]] by Troper Tropers/EvilFuzzy9 ostensibly following the attempts of [[UnluckyChildhoodFriend Ayumu Nishizawa]] to create a [[TenchiSolution harem]] for her beloved Hayate. ''Ostensibly''. In execution, however, it [[strike:tends to focus]] focuses more on the escapades of the [[SpotlightStealingSquad main characters]], [[HilarityEnsues to great effect]].
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5780009/1/bOm_b_bNom_b_bNom_b_Hamsterchan Om Nom Nom, Hamster-chan!]] is a ''Manga/HayateTheCombatButler'' [[FanFic fan]][[CrackFic fic]] by Troper Tropers/EvilFuzzy9 ostensibly following the attempts of [[UnluckyChildhoodFriend Ayumu Nishizawa]] to [[ShipperOnDeck create a [[TenchiSolution harem]] for her beloved Hayate. ''Ostensibly''. In execution, however, it [[strike:tends to focus]] focuses more on the escapades of the [[SpotlightStealingSquad main characters]], [[HilarityEnsues to great effect]].
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* TenchiSolution: What Ayumu hopes to achieve.´ShipperOnDeck: Ayumu.
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* [[CareerKiller Assassin]]: [[MeaningfulName Dire]] [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Rat]] is supposedly the best at what he does, [[OvershadowedByAwesome but he is simply no match]] for the likes of [[BattleButler Hay]][[LightningBruiser ate]] [[MadeOfIron Aya]][[DeterMinator saki]].
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* ProfessionalKiller: [[MeaningfulName Dire]] [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Rat]] is supposedly the best at what he does, [[OvershadowedByAwesome but he is simply no match]] for the likes of [[BattleButler Hay]][[LightningBruiser ate]] [[MadeOfIron Aya]][[DeterMinator saki]].
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Changing trope name per TRS (Also, is this actually an example?)
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Nagi denies watching Hayate on Closed-Circuit Television... when asked how she could be sure he was master [[ADateWithRosiePalms of his]] [[SeinLanguage own domain]].
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Nagi denies watching Hayate on Closed-Circuit Television... when asked how she could be sure he was master [[ADateWithRosiePalms of his]] [[SeinLanguage [[TheCatchPhraseCatchesOn own domain]].
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* OriginalFlavor: The author goes to great lengths to emulate the style of the original series humor and quirky characterization. [[YourMileageMayVary Whether or not he succeeds is up for debate]].
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* OriginalFlavor: The author goes to great lengths to emulate the style of the original series humor and quirky characterization. [[YourMileageMayVary Whether or not he succeeds is up for debate]].
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5780009/1/bOm_b_bNom_b_bNom_b_Hamsterchan Om Nom Nom, Hamster-chan!]] is a ''HayateTheCombatButler'' [[FanFic fan]][[CrackFic fic]] by Troper Tropers/EvilFuzzy9 ostensibly following the attempts of [[UnluckyChildhoodFriend Ayumu Nishizawa]] to create a [[TenchiSolution harem]] for her beloved Hayate. ''Ostensibly''. In execution, however, it [[strike:tends to focus]] focuses more on the escapades of the [[SpotlightStealingSquad main characters]], [[HilarityEnsues to great effect]].
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5780009/1/bOm_b_bNom_b_bNom_b_Hamsterchan Om Nom Nom, Hamster-chan!]] is a ''HayateTheCombatButler'' ''Manga/HayateTheCombatButler'' [[FanFic fan]][[CrackFic fic]] by Troper Tropers/EvilFuzzy9 ostensibly following the attempts of [[UnluckyChildhoodFriend Ayumu Nishizawa]] to create a [[TenchiSolution harem]] for her beloved Hayate. ''Ostensibly''. In execution, however, it [[strike:tends to focus]] focuses more on the escapades of the [[SpotlightStealingSquad main characters]], [[HilarityEnsues to great effect]].
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game, not a trope. This Troper has been eradicated.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5780009/1/bOm_b_bNom_b_bNom_b_Hamsterchan Om Nom Nom, Hamster-chan!]] is a ''HayateTheCombatButler'' [[FanFic fan]][[CrackFic fic]] by [[Tropers/EvilFuzzy9 this troper]] ostensibly following the attempts of [[UnluckyChildhoodFriend Ayumu Nishizawa]] to create a [[TenchiSolution harem]] for her beloved Hayate. ''Ostensibly''. In execution, however, it [[strike:tends to focus]] focuses more on the escapades of the [[SpotlightStealingSquad main characters]], [[HilarityEnsues to great effect]].
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5780009/1/bOm_b_bNom_b_bNom_b_Hamsterchan Om Nom Nom, Hamster-chan!]] is a ''HayateTheCombatButler'' [[FanFic fan]][[CrackFic fic]] by [[Tropers/EvilFuzzy9 this troper]] Troper Tropers/EvilFuzzy9 ostensibly following the attempts of [[UnluckyChildhoodFriend Ayumu Nishizawa]] to create a [[TenchiSolution harem]] for her beloved Hayate. ''Ostensibly''. In execution, however, it [[strike:tends to focus]] focuses more on the escapades of the [[SpotlightStealingSquad main characters]], [[HilarityEnsues to great effect]].
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* BetterThanItSounds: Or so I hope you think.
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Nagi denies watching Hayate on Closed-Circuit Television... when asked how she could be sure he was [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean master]] [[ADateWithRosiePalms of his]] [[SeinLanguage own domain]].
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Nagi denies watching Hayate on Closed-Circuit Television... when asked how she could be sure he was [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean master]] master [[ADateWithRosiePalms of his]] [[SeinLanguage own domain]].
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* AlternateUniverseFic: Diverges from the original storyline at around the end of the Golden Week Arc and never looks back.
* BiTheWay: "[[WordOfGod The harem Ayumu is building is as much for her as it is for Hayate]]"[[hottip:*: ~ {{Tropers/EvilFuzzy9}}]].
* CrackFic
* TenchiSolution: What Ayumu hopes to achieve.
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* BiTheWay: "[[WordOfGod The harem Ayumu is building is as much for her as it is for Hayate]]"[[hottip:*: ~ {{Tropers/EvilFuzzy9}}]].
* CrackFic
* TenchiSolution: What Ayumu hopes to achieve.
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* BiTheWay: "[[WordOfGod The harem Ayumu is building is as much for her as it is for Hayate]]"[[hottip:*: ~
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* TenchiSolution: What Ayumu hopes to achieve.
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* AlternateUniverseFic: Diverges from the original storyline at around the end of the Golden Week Arc and never looks back.
* [[CareerKiller Assassin]]: [[MeaningfulName Dire]] [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Rat]] is supposedly the best at what he does, [[OvershadowedByAwesome but he is simply no match]] for the likes of [[BattleButler Hay]][[LightningBruiser ate]] [[MadeOfIron Aya]][[DeterMinator saki]].
* AttackAttackAttack: [[spoiler: Dire Rat]] quickly abandons all pretense of subtlety [[spoiler: once he has been cornered by Hayate]], abandoning all of his other tactics in favor of this.
* BadassBoast: Outmatched or not, Dire Rat can still brag with the best of 'em.
* BetterThanItSounds: Or so I hope you think.
* BiTheWay: "[[WordOfGod The harem Ayumu is building is as much for her as it is for Hayate]]"[[hottip:*: ~ {{Tropers/EvilFuzzy9}}]].
* CrackFic
* DeadpanSnarker: Wataru is this most of the time he shows up; Nagi is also this whenever she isn't alternating between [[{{Tsundere}} fawning over Hayate and angrily berating berating Hayate]].
* DefeatMeansFriendship: [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]]. Dire Rat only agrees to work for Nagi because he had already been planning on retiring, only needed an excuse to do so, and figured that Nagi would be easy enough to manipulate. That poor, deluded bastard.
* FanNickname: The author calls the [[LemonyNarrator narrator]] [[NorioWakamoto Narrio]] [[ActorAllusion Wakamator]].
* {{Fanon}}: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] by the author when he decides to make Sharna British via a bit of contrived InsaneTrollLogic.
* {{Fanservice}}: A fight scene between Tama and an assassin is interrupted by a [[LesYay female bon]][[EroticEating ding scene]] between Ayumu and Hina.
* GratuitousJapanese: Largely averted except for [[strike:one]] [[WordOfGod two]][[hottip:*: As far as I, {{Tropers/EvilFuzzy9}}, have planned, there will only be one other unique sentence in Japanese, and that one will not show up for a while.]] occasions, [[LogicBomb one of which has not actually occurred yet]].
* HighlyVisibleNinja: Ayumu and Nagi dress like these during a clandestine meeting.
* LampshadeHanging
* LesYay
* MemeticBadass: In a fight between a world-class assassin and a world-class butler, who would emerge victorious? ''SquirrelGirl''.
* MilesGloriosus: Dire Rat is a borderline example, and possibly even an aversion of this trope if Klaus's initial reaction to his presence is anything to go [[PrepositionsAreNotToEndSentencesWith by]].
* {{Ninja}}: In the first chapter, Ayumu and Nagi both dress in a manner reflecting how they view ninja, with Nagi dressed as an [[HighlyVisibleNinja orange-clad]] ''{{Naruto}}'' cosplayer, while Nishizawa is dressed like a more traditional, [[HollywoodHistory but still anachronistic]] black-clad shinobi.
** [[CareerKiller Dire Rat]] claims to be a ninja when making a promise to Klaus.
* NoFourthWall: The main characters are fully aware of their fictional nature, and it is not uncommon for entire ''scenes'' to focus on this [[RuleOfFunny just to set up a gag or punchline]].
* {{Omake}}: There is one at the end of each chapter.
* OriginalFlavor: The author goes to great lengths to emulate the style of the original series humor and quirky characterization. [[YourMileageMayVary Whether or not he succeeds is up for debate]].
* RuleOfFunny
* SelfDeprecatingHumor: [[WhoWritesThisCrap Mainly with characters remarking on the utter absurdity of various gags and occurrences within the story]].
* SesquipedalianLoquaciousness: [[Tropers/EvilFuzzy9 The author]] occasionally does this, sometimes to almost {{author vocabulary calendar}} levels with gems like ''acerbic-saccharine acquaintanceship''.
* ShoutOut: Much like the original series, this fic is loaded to the brim with these.
* LawfulStupid: Arguably averted by Hayate when he points out that, since his ancestors were scum, his only honor comes from doing his duty to his lady as efficiently as possible, [[CombatPragmatist even if he must use decidedly underhanded methods to accomplish this]].
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Nagi denies watching Hayate on Closed-Circuit Television... when asked how she could be sure he was [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean master]] [[ADateWithRosiePalms of his]] [[SeinLanguage own domain]].
* ThatLiarLies: Nagi delves into this when she accuses Maria of wondering whether or not to lie to her mistress when asked a question to which the honest answer would simply be out of the question.
* TranslationTrainwreck: In the first {{omake}}.
* [[CareerKiller Assassin]]: [[MeaningfulName Dire]] [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Rat]] is supposedly the best at what he does, [[OvershadowedByAwesome but he is simply no match]] for the likes of [[BattleButler Hay]][[LightningBruiser ate]] [[MadeOfIron Aya]][[DeterMinator saki]].
* AttackAttackAttack: [[spoiler: Dire Rat]] quickly abandons all pretense of subtlety [[spoiler: once he has been cornered by Hayate]], abandoning all of his other tactics in favor of this.
* BadassBoast: Outmatched or not, Dire Rat can still brag with the best of 'em.
* BetterThanItSounds: Or so I hope you think.
* BiTheWay: "[[WordOfGod The harem Ayumu is building is as much for her as it is for Hayate]]"[[hottip:*: ~ {{Tropers/EvilFuzzy9}}]].
* CrackFic
* DeadpanSnarker: Wataru is this most of the time he shows up; Nagi is also this whenever she isn't alternating between [[{{Tsundere}} fawning over Hayate and angrily berating berating Hayate]].
* DefeatMeansFriendship: [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]]. Dire Rat only agrees to work for Nagi because he had already been planning on retiring, only needed an excuse to do so, and figured that Nagi would be easy enough to manipulate. That poor, deluded bastard.
* FanNickname: The author calls the [[LemonyNarrator narrator]] [[NorioWakamoto Narrio]] [[ActorAllusion Wakamator]].
* {{Fanon}}: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] by the author when he decides to make Sharna British via a bit of contrived InsaneTrollLogic.
* {{Fanservice}}: A fight scene between Tama and an assassin is interrupted by a [[LesYay female bon]][[EroticEating ding scene]] between Ayumu and Hina.
* GratuitousJapanese: Largely averted except for [[strike:one]] [[WordOfGod two]][[hottip:*: As far as I, {{Tropers/EvilFuzzy9}}, have planned, there will only be one other unique sentence in Japanese, and that one will not show up for a while.]] occasions, [[LogicBomb one of which has not actually occurred yet]].
* HighlyVisibleNinja: Ayumu and Nagi dress like these during a clandestine meeting.
* LampshadeHanging
* LesYay
* MemeticBadass: In a fight between a world-class assassin and a world-class butler, who would emerge victorious? ''SquirrelGirl''.
* MilesGloriosus: Dire Rat is a borderline example, and possibly even an aversion of this trope if Klaus's initial reaction to his presence is anything to go [[PrepositionsAreNotToEndSentencesWith by]].
* {{Ninja}}: In the first chapter, Ayumu and Nagi both dress in a manner reflecting how they view ninja, with Nagi dressed as an [[HighlyVisibleNinja orange-clad]] ''{{Naruto}}'' cosplayer, while Nishizawa is dressed like a more traditional, [[HollywoodHistory but still anachronistic]] black-clad shinobi.
** [[CareerKiller Dire Rat]] claims to be a ninja when making a promise to Klaus.
* NoFourthWall: The main characters are fully aware of their fictional nature, and it is not uncommon for entire ''scenes'' to focus on this [[RuleOfFunny just to set up a gag or punchline]].
* {{Omake}}: There is one at the end of each chapter.
* OriginalFlavor: The author goes to great lengths to emulate the style of the original series humor and quirky characterization. [[YourMileageMayVary Whether or not he succeeds is up for debate]].
* RuleOfFunny
* SelfDeprecatingHumor: [[WhoWritesThisCrap Mainly with characters remarking on the utter absurdity of various gags and occurrences within the story]].
* SesquipedalianLoquaciousness: [[Tropers/EvilFuzzy9 The author]] occasionally does this, sometimes to almost {{author vocabulary calendar}} levels with gems like ''acerbic-saccharine acquaintanceship''.
* ShoutOut: Much like the original series, this fic is loaded to the brim with these.
* LawfulStupid: Arguably averted by Hayate when he points out that, since his ancestors were scum, his only honor comes from doing his duty to his lady as efficiently as possible, [[CombatPragmatist even if he must use decidedly underhanded methods to accomplish this]].
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Nagi denies watching Hayate on Closed-Circuit Television... when asked how she could be sure he was [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean master]] [[ADateWithRosiePalms of his]] [[SeinLanguage own domain]].
* ThatLiarLies: Nagi delves into this when she accuses Maria of wondering whether or not to lie to her mistress when asked a question to which the honest answer would simply be out of the question.
* TranslationTrainwreck: In the first {{omake}}.
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* [[CareerKiller Assassin]]: [[MeaningfulName Dire]] [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Rat]] is supposedly the best at what he does, [[OvershadowedByAwesome but he is simply no match]] for the likes of [[BattleButler Hay]][[LightningBruiser ate]] [[MadeOfIron Aya]][[DeterMinator
* AttackAttackAttack: [[spoiler: Dire Rat]] quickly abandons all pretense of subtlety [[spoiler: once he has been cornered by Hayate]], abandoning all of his other tactics in favor of
* BadassBoast: Outmatched or not, Dire Rat can still brag with the best of
* BetterThanItSounds: Or so I hope you
* BiTheWay: "[[WordOfGod The harem Ayumu is building is as much for her as it is for Hayate]]"[[hottip:*: ~
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* DeadpanSnarker: Wataru is this most of the time he shows up; Nagi is also this whenever she isn't alternating between [[{{Tsundere}} fawning over Hayate and angrily berating berating
* DefeatMeansFriendship: [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]]. Dire Rat only agrees to work for Nagi because he had already been planning on retiring, only needed an excuse to do so, and figured that Nagi would be easy enough to manipulate. That poor, deluded bastard.
* {{Fanon}}: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] by the author when he decides to make Sharna British via a bit of contrived
* {{Fanservice}}: A fight scene between Tama and an assassin is interrupted by a [[LesYay female bon]][[EroticEating ding scene]] between Ayumu and
* GratuitousJapanese: Largely averted except for [[strike:one]] [[WordOfGod two]][[hottip:*: As far as I, {{Tropers/EvilFuzzy9}}, have planned, there will only be one other unique sentence in Japanese, and that one will not show up for a while.]] occasions, [[LogicBomb one of which has not actually occurred yet]].
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* MemeticBadass: In a fight between a world-class assassin and a world-class butler, who would emerge victorious?
* MilesGloriosus: Dire Rat is a borderline example, and possibly even an aversion of this trope if Klaus's initial reaction to his presence is anything to go [[PrepositionsAreNotToEndSentencesWith by]].
** [[CareerKiller Dire Rat]] claims to be a ninja when making a promise to Klaus.
* {{Omake}}: There is one at the end of each
* OriginalFlavor: The author goes to great lengths to emulate the style of the original series humor and quirky characterization. [[YourMileageMayVary Whether or not he succeeds is up for debate]].
* SelfDeprecatingHumor: [[WhoWritesThisCrap Mainly with characters remarking on the utter absurdity of various gags and occurrences within the
* SesquipedalianLoquaciousness: [[Tropers/EvilFuzzy9 The author]] occasionally does this, sometimes to almost {{author vocabulary calendar}} levels with gems like ''acerbic-saccharine
* ShoutOut: Much like the original series, this fic is loaded to the brim with
* LawfulStupid: Arguably averted by Hayate when he points out that, since his ancestors were scum, his only honor comes from doing his duty to his lady as efficiently as possible, [[CombatPragmatist even if he must use decidedly underhanded methods to accomplish
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Nagi denies watching Hayate on Closed-Circuit Television... when asked how she could be sure he was [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean master]] [[ADateWithRosiePalms of his]] [[SeinLanguage own domain]].
* TranslationTrainwreck: In the first
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* AttackAttackAttack: [[spoiler: Dire Rat]] quickly abandons all pretense of subtlety [[spoiler: once he has been cornered by Hayate]], abandoning all of his other tactics in favor of this.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Wataru is this most of the time he shows up; Nagi is also this whenever she isn't alternating between [[{{Tsundere}} fawning over Hayate and angrily berating berating Hayate]].
* DefeatMeansFriendship: [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]]. Dire Rat only agrees to work for Nagi because he had already been planning on retiring, only needed an excuse to do so, and figured that Nagi would be easy enough to manipulate. That poor, deluded bastard.
* DefeatMeansFriendship: [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]]. Dire Rat only agrees to work for Nagi because he had already been planning on retiring, only needed an excuse to do so, and figured that Nagi would be easy enough to manipulate. That poor, deluded bastard.
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* LawfulStupid: Arguably averted by Hayate when he points out that, since his ancestors were scum, his only honor comes from doing his duty to his lady as efficiently as possible, [[CombatPragmatist even if he must use decidedly underhanded methods to accomplish this]].
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* MemeticBadass: In a fight between a world-class assassin and a world-class butler, who would emerge victorious? ''SquirrelGirl''.
* MilesGloriosus: Dire Rat is a borderline example, and possibly even an aversion of this trope if Klaus's initial reaction to his presence is anything to go [[PrepositionsAreNotToEndSentencesWith by]].
* MilesGloriosus: Dire Rat is a borderline example, and possibly even an aversion of this trope if Klaus's initial reaction to his presence is anything to go [[PrepositionsAreNotToEndSentencesWith by]].
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* ThatLiarLies: Nagi delves into this when she accuses Maria of thinking ''Should I lie?''.
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* ThatLiarLies: Nagi delves into this when she accuses Maria of thinking ''Should I lie?''.wondering whether or not to lie to her mistress when asked a question to which the honest answer would simply be out of the question.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5780009/1/bOm_b_bNom_b_bNom_b_Hamsterchan Om Nom Nom, Hamster-chan!]] is a ''HayateTheCombatButler'' [[FanFic fan]][[CrackFic fic]] by [[EvilFuzzy9 this troper]] ostensibly following the attempts of [[UnluckyChildhoodFriend Ayumu Nishizawa]] to create a [[TenchiSolution harem]] for her beloved Hayate. ''Ostensibly''. In execution, however, it [[strike:tends to focus]] focuses more on the escapades of the [[SpotlightStealingSquad main characters]], [[HilarityEnsues to great effect]].
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5780009/1/bOm_b_bNom_b_bNom_b_Hamsterchan Om Nom Nom, Hamster-chan!]] is a ''HayateTheCombatButler'' [[FanFic fan]][[CrackFic fic]] by [[EvilFuzzy9 [[Tropers/EvilFuzzy9 this troper]] ostensibly following the attempts of [[UnluckyChildhoodFriend Ayumu Nishizawa]] to create a [[TenchiSolution harem]] for her beloved Hayate. ''Ostensibly''. In execution, however, it [[strike:tends to focus]] focuses more on the escapades of the [[SpotlightStealingSquad main characters]], [[HilarityEnsues to great effect]].
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* GratuitousJapanese: Largely averted except for [[strike:one]] [[WordOfGod two]][[hottip:*: As far as I, EvilFuzzy9, have planned, there will only be one other unique sentence in Japanese, and that one will not show up for a while.]] occasions, [[LogicBomb one of which has not actually occurred yet]].
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* GratuitousJapanese: Largely averted except for [[strike:one]] [[WordOfGod two]][[hottip:*: As far as I, EvilFuzzy9, {{Tropers/EvilFuzzy9}}, have planned, there will only be one other unique sentence in Japanese, and that one will not show up for a while.]] occasions, [[LogicBomb one of which has not actually occurred yet]].
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* NoFourthWall: The main characters are fully aware of their fictional nature, and it is not uncommon for entire ''scenes'' to focus on this [[RuleOfFunny just to set up a gag or punchline]].
* {{Omake}}: There is one at the end of each chapter.
* {{Omake}}: There is one at the end of each chapter.
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* SelfDeprecatingHumor: [[WhoWritesThisCrap Mainly with characters remarking on the utter absurdity of various gags and occurrences within the story]].
* SesquipedalianLoquaciousness: [[Tropers/EvilFuzzy9 The author]] occasionally does this, sometimes to almost {{author vocabulary calendar}} levels with gems like ''acerbic-saccharine acquaintanceship''.
* SesquipedalianLoquaciousness: [[Tropers/EvilFuzzy9 The author]] occasionally does this, sometimes to almost {{author vocabulary calendar}} levels with gems like ''acerbic-saccharine acquaintanceship''.
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Nagi denies watching Hayate on Closed-Circuit Television... when asked how she could be sure he was [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean master]] [[ADateWithRosiePalms of his]] [[SeinLanguage own domain]].
* ThatLiarLies: Nagi delves into this when she accuses Maria of thinking ''Should I lie?''.
* ThatLiarLies: Nagi delves into this when she accuses Maria of thinking ''Should I lie?''.
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* HighlyVisibleNinja: Ayumu and Nagi dress like these during a clandestine meeting.
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* {{Ninja}}: In the first chapter, Ayumu and Nagi both dress in a manner reflecting how they view ninja, with Nagi dressed as an [[HighlyVisibleNinja orange-clad]] ''{{Naruto}}'' cosplayer, while Nishizawa is dressed like a more traditional, [[HollywoodHistory but still anachronistic]] black-clad shinobi.
** [[CareerKiller Dire Rat]] claims to be a ninja when making a promise to Klaus.
** [[CareerKiller Dire Rat]] claims to be a ninja when making a promise to Klaus.
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!! This fic provides examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic: Diverges from the original storyline at around the end of the Golden Week Arc and never looks back.
* BiTheWay: "[[WordOfGod The harem Ayumu is building is as much for her as it is for Hayate]]"[[hottip:*: ~ EvilFuzzy9]].
* CrackFic
* TenchiSolution: What Ayumu hopes to achieve.
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!! Chapters of this fic provide examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic: Diverges from the original storyline at around the end of the Golden Week Arc and never looks back.
* [[CareerKiller Assassin]]: [[MeaningfulName Dire]] [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Rat]] is supposedly the best at what he does, [[OvershadowedByAwesome but he is simply no match]] for the likes of [[BattleButler Hay]][[LightningBruiser ate]] [[MadeOfIron Aya]][[DeterMinator saki]].
* BadassBoast: Outmatched or not, Dire Rat can still brag with the best of 'em.
* BetterThanItSounds: Or so I hope you think.
* BiTheWay: "[[WordOfGod The harem Ayumu is building is as much for her as it is for Hayate]]"[[hottip:*: ~ EvilFuzzy9]].
* CrackFic
* FanNickname: The author calls the [[LemonyNarrator narrator]] [[NorioWakamoto Narrio]] [[ActorAllusion Wakamator]].
* {{Fanon}}: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] by the author when he decides to make Sharna British via a bit of contrived InsaneTrollLogic.
* {{Fanservice}}: A fight scene between Tama and an assassin is interrupted by a [[LesYay female bon]][[EroticEating ding scene]] between Ayumu and Hina.
* GratuitousJapanese: Largely averted except for [[strike:one]] [[WordOfGod two]][[hottip:*: As far as I, EvilFuzzy9, have planned, there will only be one other unique sentence in Japanese, and that one will not show up for a while.]] occasions, [[LogicBomb one of which has not actually occurred yet]].
* LampshadeHanging
* LesYay
* OriginalFlavor: The author goes to great lengths to emulate the style of the original series humor and quirky characterization. [[YourMileageMayVary Whether or not he succeeds is up for debate]].
* RuleOfFunny
* ShoutOut: Much like the original series, this fic is loaded to the brim with these.
* TranslationTrainwreck: In the first {{omake}}.