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* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: the title of chapter 17 is [[LongTitle 'Zoe Explains in Excruciating Detail Why Season 3 Is the Best Season of American Horror Story']] and the very first few lines of the aforementioned chapter are:
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* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: the title of chapter 17 is [[LongTitle 'Zoe Explains in Excruciating Detail Why Season 3 Is the Best Season of American Horror Story']] Story' and the very first few lines of the aforementioned chapter are:
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* LongTitle: chapter 45: 'Damien Does an Ollie Off a Dinosaur's Back, And The Dinosaur's on Fire AND He Has Razor Claws AND Sunglasses AND Damien Has Sunglasses Too And That's Definitely What Happens in This Episode'
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* LousyLoversAreLosers: When they finally do get together, Polly eventually slips that Oz isn't exactly the best at sex, in that he's never managed to make her climax during the time they've been together. Although that's more due to a lack of experience on Oz's part than anything else, something [[SexGoddess Polly]] is more than happy to fix.
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* GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex: subverted. When they finally do get together, Polly eventually slips that Oz isn't exactly the best at sex, in that he's never managed to make her climax during the time they've been together. Although that's more due to a lack of experience on Oz's part than anything else, something Polly is more than happy to fix.
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* SchoolBullyingIsHarmless: subverted, HARD. Apparently getting her favorite toy destroyed by bullies as a child is what set Vera off on the path to becoming a ruthless criminal mastermind and even as an adult she STILL isn't over it.
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* SchoolBullyingIsHarmless: subverted, HARD.subverted. Apparently getting her favorite toy destroyed by bullies as a child is what set Vera off on the path to becoming a ruthless criminal mastermind and even as an adult she STILL isn't over it.
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* ShoutOut: When time traveling [[spoiler: to prevent Miranda's tragic death.]] in chapter 26, Zoe is absolutely insistent on using a certain [[Series/DoctorWho Blue Police Box]] to do it with despite it being completely unnecessary for the trip, [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome unfortunately it's not bigger on the inside.]]
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* ShoutOut: When time traveling [[spoiler: to prevent Miranda's tragic death.]] in chapter 26, Zoe is absolutely insistent on using a certain [[Series/DoctorWho Blue Police Box]] to do it with despite it being completely unnecessary for the trip, [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome unfortunately it's not bigger on the inside.]]
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* ScriptFicScriptFic: Unlike most examples of this trope, the fic is written in the style of a television screenplay.
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* TheBigDamnKiss: between Polly and Oz in chapter 18
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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: occurs at the end of chapter 12 with Oz which sets up the plot of chapter 13]]
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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: occurs Occurs at the end of chapter Chapter 12 with Oz Oz, which sets up the plot of chapter 13]]Chapter 13.]] [[spoiler: Brian]] dies at the end of Chapter 54, only to be revived at the end of Chapter 57 by [[spoiler: Milo]] to aid in the fight against [[spoiler: Z'Gord.]]
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* FormulaBreakingEpisode: A downplayed version. Chapter 17 focuses almost entirely on the Coven and Zoe, with the only major characters appearing in a subplot (of which a member of the coven is also involved in) while everyone else only makes brief cameo appearances. It's the first chapter where NONE of the color squad is in the spotlight.
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* SomethingCompletelyDifferent: a downplayed version. Chapter 17 focuses almost entirely on the Coven and Zoe, with the only major characters appearing in a subplot (of which a member of the coven is also involved in) while everyone else only makes brief cameo appearances. It's the first chapter where NONE of the color squad is in the spotlight.
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** Chapter 63: Brian Kicks Some Ass
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* AnimatedArmor: Zoe pulls one of these via possession [[spoiler: to give herself a physical form after losing her body to Z'gord.]]
** Brian is the victim of one of these too. [[spoiler: having gotten caught up in a zombie apocalypse in his original world that eventually lead to his brutal death and subsequent zombification after sacrificing himself to obtain the cure.]] Luckily, he got a second chance afterwards.
* DarkestHour: chapter 57. [[spoiler: to summarize, Vicky has just crossed the [[DespairEventHorizon Despair event Horizon]] and unleashed Z'gord onto the world who is now bringing about the apocalypse and Monsteropolis has descended into complete and total chaos with murderous cultists roaming the streets as reality is on the verge of collapse. All of the casts' previous struggles almost seem trivial.]]
* DarkestHour: chapter 57. [[spoiler: to summarize, Vicky has just crossed the [[DespairEventHorizon Despair event Horizon]] and unleashed Z'gord onto the world who is now bringing about the apocalypse and Monsteropolis has descended into complete and total chaos with murderous cultists roaming the streets as reality is on the verge of collapse. All of the casts' previous struggles almost seem trivial.]]
* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: what occurs in chapter 57 and 58 [[spoiler: as a result of Z'gord returning.]] Thankfully the main cast manages to stop it.
** [[spoiler: Brian did this too in his human life to stop the zombie apocalypse. He also gets better.]]
* RousingSpeech: given by DAMIEN of all people, oddly enough, in the face of the apocalypse:
--> '''Damien''': "See, that’s where you’re misunderstanding. It’s not that I don’t care, it’s that I don’t believe for a second that thing is really going to end the world. No, I’m certain we’re going to overcome this. Don’t underestimate the world…It’s harder to end than you realize."
--> '''Damien''': "See, that’s where you’re misunderstanding. It’s not that I don’t care, it’s that I don’t believe for a second that thing is really going to end the world. No, I’m certain we’re going to overcome this. Don’t underestimate the world…It’s harder to end than you realize."
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Oz spends almost the entirety of chapter 18 beating this into Polly's head, insisting that she can change for the better and sticks by her even when she falters.
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Oz spends almost the entirety of chapter 18 beating this into Polly's head, insisting that she can change for the better and sticks by her even when she falters.falters.
* ZombieApocalypse: This is basically Brian's entire backstory as to how he became a zombie in the first place. [[spoiler: [[TrappedInAnotherWorld or at least half of it...]]]]
* ZombieApocalypse: This is basically Brian's entire backstory as to how he became a zombie in the first place. [[spoiler: [[TrappedInAnotherWorld or at least half of it...]]]]
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* NotSoDifferent: [[spoiler: Polly and her boss Penny, the latter of which is a recovering heroin addict, which is the reason she gives Polly so much leeway at her job.]]
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** we get a third instance of this after they spend a rather romantic day together, with Amira [[TemptingFate saying that they're bound to get interrupted again if they try to kiss]] and the djinn even goes so far as to bet a thousand dollars that such an interruption occurring. she wins the bet when Zoe shows up and interrupts them at the exact moment Amira predicted.
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** we We get a third instance of this after they spend a rather romantic day together, with Amira [[TemptingFate saying that they're bound to get interrupted again if they try to kiss]] and the djinn even goes so far as to bet a thousand dollars that such an interruption occurring. she wins the bet when Zoe shows up and interrupts them at the exact moment Amira predicted.
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* LongTitle: chapter 45: 'Damien Does an Ollie Off a Dinosaur's Back, And The Dinosaur's on Fire AND He Has Razor Claws AND Sunglasses AND Damien Has Sunglasses Too And That's Definitely What Happens in This Episode'
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* ButNowIMustGo: [[spoiler: how Amira reacts to finding out that she's royalty, due to the fact that she feels more at home in monsteropolis than in the country she was born; she decides to give up the throne and return home but promises to keep contact with her family from now on.]]
* HiddenBackupPrince: [[spoiler: this is what Amira essentially was, having been raised under an adopted mother who worked for her family to protect the royal lineage, seeing as her djinn status made her the sole heir to the throne.]]
* LadyInWaiting: [[spoiler: Sayta, Amira's adopted mother, is revealed to be one of these to the djinn's biological mother.]]
* ReallyRoyaltyReveal: [[spoiler: Amira in chapter 43, where she discovers that she's actually the crown princess of a far of country.]]
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* RightfulKingReturns: [[spoiler: subverted in that Amira refuses to take the throne upon returning to her home country as she knows perfectly well she isn't suited to lead a country nor does she have any desire to do so.]]
* RightfulKingReturns: [[spoiler: subverted in that Amira refuses to take the throne upon returning to her home country as she knows perfectly well she isn't suited to lead a country nor does she have any desire to do so.]]
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* StreetSmart: Amira has this in spades, having grown up in the ghetto, just barely managing to scrape on by. That knowledge has saved her and her friends on more than one occassion.
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* TheUsurper: [[spoiler: Amira's biological aunt, Malkia, attempts to do this to her niece. Unfortunately she underestimates Amira's intelligence.]]
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* SchoolBullyingIsHarmless: subverted, HARD. Apparently getting her favorite toy destroyed by bullies as a child is what set Vera off on the path to becoming a ruthless criminal mastermind and even as an adult she STILL isn't over it.
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* CapturedOnPurpose: [[spoiler: Vera does one of these to try and figure out how to deal with the false accusation that she killed the mayor of monsteropolis; her friends and family don't exactly take this well, considering she never told them it was intentional.]]
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* CoolKidAndLoserFriendship: Oz with Miranda and Polly, they're some of the most popular girls and school and he's the 'dork to end all dorks', nuff said.
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* ConvenientlyCellmates: Vera and The Interdimensional Prince, the former is NOT happy about it.
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* CoolKidAndLoserFriendship: Oz with Miranda and Polly, they're some of the most popular girls and school and he's the 'dork to end all dorks', nuff said.
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* EatingTheEyeCandy: Dimitri basically peddles this in prison to put himself into a position of power amongst the inmates, charging $100 per hour for looking with an additional $50 for touching. According to the vampire he's made approximately 2 million dollars doing this, primarily through crowdsourcing.
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* NoPrisonSegregation: Zig Zagged, while Dimitri and The Interdimensional Prince are both men in a women's prison they both have reasons for being there as opposed to a men's prison: the former because the warden [[EatingTheEyeCandy REALLY likes Dimitri's appearance as do most of the inmates]] while the latter was simply mistaken for a woman. Although they are the only two men in the entire prison so it's not exactly a co-ed prison.
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* PrisonEpisode: chapter 37 'The Shawshank ReVerademption' (no, that's not a typo.)
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* PrisonChangesPeople: Vera gets some serious character development while behind bars, which includes coming to terms with her feelings for Amira.
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* WardensAreEvil: not only is the warden of Vera's prison trying to get her assasinated, [[spoiler: but she's also Vera's childhood bully that is the primary cause of most of Vera's inner demons.]]
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* GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex: subverted. When they finally do get together, Polly eventually slips that Oz isn't exactly the best at sex, in that he's never managed to make her climax during the time they've been together. Although that's more due to a lack of experience on Oz's part than anything else, something Polly is more than happy to fix.
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'Monster Prom: Senior Year'' is a ''VisualNovel/MonsterProm'' Fanfiction by ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/tenkay10/pseuds/tenkay10 tenkay10]]''
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Brian turns out to be a case of this. [[spoiler: after traveling back in time and being locked in a dungeon to await execution, Brian not only manages to easily escape the dungeon with nothing more than a [[ItMakesSenseInContext some magic supplements and a severed hand.]] but also fights his way through the entirety of the Vanderbilt castle guard, stealing some of their weapons along the way, and singlehandedly saves Miranda from Pheel the Eel, all without breaking a sweat.]]
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Brian turns out to be a case of this. [[spoiler: after traveling back in time and being locked in a dungeon to await execution, Brian not only manages to easily escape the dungeon with nothing more than a [[ItMakesSenseInContext some magic supplements and a severed hand.]] but also fights his way through the entirety of the Vanderbilt castle guard, stealing some of their weapons along the way, and singlehandedly saves Miranda from Pheel the Eel, all without breaking a sweat.]]
