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Next Gen Fic is merged into Spin Offspring; Flash Forward Fic used for 'timeskip' character study sequels and Fan Created Offspring for fankids themselves
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* The NextGenFic starring an OC that is Light and Misa's kid. Expect L to have a kid too and GenerationXerox of most of the characters.
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* The NextGenFic DistantSequel starring [[FanCreatedOffspring an OC that is Light and Misa's kid.kid]]. Expect L to have a kid too and GenerationXerox of most of the characters.
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* For the [[HetIsEw rare het fic]]: Misa is a stupid puppet that does whatever Light tells her.
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* For the [[HetIsEw rare het fic]]: fic: Misa is a stupid puppet that does whatever Light tells her.
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* Light develops [[GollumMadeMeDoIt Dissociative Identity Disorder.]]
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* Light develops [[GollumMadeMeDoIt Dissociative Identity Disorder.]] Two subplots from this setup:
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** [[ForWantOfANail Another character picked up the notebook instead of Light.]]
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* [[RapePortrayedAsRedemption Light gets raped]] and [[HurtComfortFic L comforts him.]]
* L gets raped or just hurt/traumatized by Beyond Birthday and [[DracoInLeatherPants Light]] kills Beyond and [[HurtComfortFic comforts L....]]
* ...OR L gets raped or just hurt/traumatized by Light and [[DracoInLeatherPants Beyond]] kills Light and [[HurtComfortFic comforts L.]]
* L gets raped or just hurt/traumatized by Beyond Birthday and [[DracoInLeatherPants Light]] kills Beyond and [[HurtComfortFic comforts L....]]
* ...OR L gets raped or just hurt/traumatized by Light and [[DracoInLeatherPants Beyond]] kills Light and [[HurtComfortFic comforts L.]]
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* Rape HurtComfortFic.[[RapePortrayedAsRedemption Light gets raped]] and [[HurtComfortFic L comforts him.]]
*him. L gets raped or just hurt/traumatized by Beyond Birthday and [[DracoInLeatherPants Light]] kills Beyond and [[HurtComfortFic comforts L....]]
* ...L... ...OR L gets raped or just hurt/traumatized by Light and [[DracoInLeatherPants Beyond]] kills Light and [[HurtComfortFic comforts L.]]
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* ...
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* Light becomes a Shinigami.
** He's often much prettier than canon Shinigami and this is also an excuse for [[FreakinessShame WingFic]].
** Almost as frequently L becomes a Shinigami.
** He's often much prettier than canon Shinigami and this is also an excuse for [[FreakinessShame WingFic]].
** Almost as frequently L becomes a Shinigami.
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* Light becomes a Shinigami. \n** He's often much prettier than canon Shinigami and this is also an excuse for [[FreakinessShame WingFic]].
** Almost as frequently * L becomes a Shinigami.
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* [[FixFic Rewrite the show so that Light never picked up the notebook.]]
** [[ForWantOfANail Another character picked up the notebook instead...]]
** [[ForWantOfANail Another character picked up the notebook instead...]]
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* [[FixFic FixFic: Rewrite the show so that Light never picked up the notebook.]]
notebook.
** [[ForWantOfANail Another character picked up the notebookinstead...instead of Light.]]
** [[ForWantOfANail Another character picked up the notebook
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* [[spoiler: GhostShipping]] with L.
* [[EnsembleDarkhorse Matt]] saves the day.
* [[EnsembleDarkhorse Matt]] saves the day.
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* [[spoiler: GhostShipping]] GhostShipping with L.
*[[EnsembleDarkhorse Matt]] EnsembleDarkhorse Matt saves the day.
*
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* A MarySue with a tragic past falls into the Death Note world [[SelfInsertFic from our world]] and derails the plot with her charms.
* A MarySue with a tragic past arrives at Wammy's House but eventually gets kicked out for being smarter than everyone else and goes on to pair up with the character of choice.
* A MarySue with a tragic past has a super special Life Note and the Eyes and a Shinigami buddy at her side and goes on to pair up with the character of choice.
* A MarySue with a tragic past is the top student at Wammy's House but is also [[CharacterDerailment BFFs with Mello]] and Matt.
* A MarySue with a tragic past arrives at Wammy's House but eventually gets kicked out for being smarter than everyone else and goes on to pair up with the character of choice.
* A MarySue with a tragic past has a super special Life Note and the Eyes and a Shinigami buddy at her side and goes on to pair up with the character of choice.
* A MarySue with a tragic past is the top student at Wammy's House but is also [[CharacterDerailment BFFs with Mello]] and Matt.
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* A [[invoked]] MarySue with a tragic past falls into the Death Note world [[SelfInsertFic from our world]] and derails the plot with her charms.
* AMarySue [[invoked]] Mary Sue with a tragic past arrives at Wammy's House but eventually gets kicked out for being smarter than everyone else and goes on to pair up with the character of choice.
* AMarySue [[invoked]] Mary Sue with a tragic past has a super special Life Note and the Eyes and a Shinigami buddy at her side and goes on to pair up with the character of choice.
* AMarySue [[invoked]] Mary Sue with a tragic past is the top student at Wammy's House but is also [[CharacterDerailment BFFs with Mello]] and Matt.
* A
* A
* A
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** Just as often it's a College AU where the cast goes to college together.
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* For [[spoiler: ContinuationFic]] Matsuda is either a) very guilty about [[spoiler: shooting Light]], b) [[spoiler: becomes the next Kira]], c) hooks up with Sayu or d) all of the above.
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* For [[spoiler: ContinuationFic]] ContinuationFic, Matsuda is either a) very guilty about [[spoiler: shooting Light]], Light, b) [[spoiler: becomes the next Kira]], Kira, c) hooks up with Sayu or d) all of the above.
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* [[FixFic A character is brought back to life with the death eraser.]]
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* [[FixFic Fix Fic: A character is brought back to life with the death eraser.]]
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* For the epilogue Misa is [[spoiler: easily talked out of killing herself]] so that shipping may commence--usually with Matsuda or Sayu.
* Mikami [[spoiler: carried a backup page]] for the final confrontation.
* Mikami [[spoiler: carried a backup page]] for the final confrontation.
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* For the epilogue Misa is [[spoiler: easily talked out of killing herself]] herself so that shipping may commence--usually with Matsuda or Sayu.
* Mikami[[spoiler: carried a backup page]] page for the final confrontation.
* Mikami
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* For ContinuationFic: Sayu [[spoiler: discovers where her brother hid the real notebook, becomes the next Kira, and [[AvengingTheVillain avenges him.]]]]
* A MarySue just happens to recognize L and instead of getting freaked out about it (as L would in character) sex ensues. The same formula goes for a MarySue with Kira.
* A MarySue just happens to recognize L and instead of getting freaked out about it (as L would in character) sex ensues. The same formula goes for a MarySue with Kira.
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* For ContinuationFic: Sayu [[spoiler: discovers where her brother hid the real notebook, becomes the next Kira, and [[AvengingTheVillain avenges him.]]]]
]]
* A [[invoked]] MarySue just happens to recognize L and instead of getting freaked out about it (as L would in character) sex ensues. The same formula goes for aMarySue Mary Sue with Kira.
* A [[invoked]] MarySue just happens to recognize L and instead of getting freaked out about it (as L would in character) sex ensues. The same formula goes for a
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** The AU where Light is a male model and L is his creepy boss.
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* Some more examples here: [[http://2pmadness.deviantart.com/art/DEATH-NOTE-The-best-way-to-end-and-start-a-FanFic-423242978 {DEATH NOTE}The best way to end and start a FanFic]]
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%% * Some more examples here: [[http://2pmadness.deviantart.com/art/DEATH-NOTE-The-best-way-to-end-and-start-a-FanFic-423242978 {DEATH NOTE}The best way to end and start a FanFic]]FanFic]]
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%% Weblinks are not examples
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* [[{{Rule63}} The AU where one or more characters is female. Or are turned into girls.]]
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* The Literature/SherlockHolmes [[FriendlyFandoms fusion]].
* The [[spoiler: Kira's Victory]] [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] where Light is so grateful to Misa/Takada/Mikami/follower of choice that sex ensues.
* Rem invoked some unknown or little-used Shinigami loophole in order to spite Light [[spoiler: so that L is still alive.]]
* The [[spoiler: Kira's Victory]] [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] where Light is so grateful to Misa/Takada/Mikami/follower of choice that sex ensues.
* Rem invoked some unknown or little-used Shinigami loophole in order to spite Light [[spoiler: so that L is still alive.]]
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* The Literature/SherlockHolmes [[FriendlyFandoms fusion]].
* The [[spoiler:Kira's Victory]] Victory [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] where Light is so grateful to Misa/Takada/Mikami/follower of choice that sex ensues.
* Rem invoked some unknown or little-used Shinigami loophole in order to spite Light[[spoiler: so that L is still alive.]]
* The [[spoiler:
* Rem invoked some unknown or little-used Shinigami loophole in order to spite Light
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* For ContinuationFic: An [[OriginalCharacter OC]] [[spoiler: [[JackTheRipoff picks up the notebook and decides to continue Kira's work.]]]]
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* For ContinuationFic: An [[OriginalCharacter OC]] [[spoiler: [[JackTheRipoff picks up the notebook and decides to continue Kira's work.]]]]]]
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* The characters are in high school or college together.
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* Many years after [[spoiler: Kira wins,]] it's up to a couple (usually teenage) OCs to end his reign once and for all. Due to the far-future nature of this fic expect lots of {{Worldbuilding}} (with mixed results).
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* Many years after [[spoiler: Kira wins,]] wins, it's up to a couple (usually teenage) OCs to end his reign once and for all. Due to the far-future nature of this fic expect lots of {{Worldbuilding}} (with mixed results).results).
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* An [[OriginalCharacter OC]] is reincarnated as Sayu.
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* An [[OriginalCharacter OC]] is reincarnated as Sayu.Sayu.
* Many years after [[spoiler: Kira wins,]] it's up to a couple (usually teenage) OCs to end his reign once and for all. Due to the far-future nature of this fic expect lots of {{Worldbuilding}} (with mixed results).
* Many years after [[spoiler: Kira wins,]] it's up to a couple (usually teenage) OCs to end his reign once and for all. Due to the far-future nature of this fic expect lots of {{Worldbuilding}} (with mixed results).
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* L and Light team-up against an [[EvilerThanThou eviler]], incredibly brutal [[OriginalCharacter OC]] Kira. The OC will often be 1) so brutal in his/her methods that it makes Light ill to show how much more eviler s/he is 2) a graduate of Wammy's House.
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* L and Light team-up against an [[EvilerThanThou eviler]], incredibly brutal [[OriginalCharacter OC]] Kira. The OC will often be 1) so brutal in his/her methods that [[EvenEvilHasStandards it makes Light ill ill]] to show how much more eviler s/he is 2) a graduate of Wammy's House.
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* Mello experiences {{Gayngst}} over his attraction to and/or relationship with Matt (or just boys in general) [[AgainstMyReligion vs]]. [[ChristianityIsCatholic his religious beliefs]].
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* Mello experiences {{Gayngst}} over his attraction to and/or relationship with Matt (or just boys in general) [[AgainstMyReligion vs]]. [[ChristianityIsCatholic his religious beliefs]].beliefs]].
* An [[OriginalCharacter OC]] is reincarnated as Sayu.
* An [[OriginalCharacter OC]] is reincarnated as Sayu.
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* [[CommonCrossover The]] ''Franchise/CodeGeass'' CrossOver.
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* [[CommonCrossover The]] ''Franchise/CodeGeass'' CrossOver.CrossOver, [[UltimateShowdownOfUltimateDestiny Lelouch vs Light]]. Expect the entire Royal Family bar the Vi Britannia kids to be Death Noted in the first 4 chapters.
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* Matt/Mello fanfics often include a teen romance (perhaps unconsummated) in Wammy's House, Matt's heartbreak over Mello leaving to join the Mafia, which he usually copes with by using drugs and alcohol and self-harming, and then later include angst over [[spoiler: either Matt's death, Mello's death, both, or if their canon fates are avoided, their near-brushes with death]]. If the fanfic is non-angsty, Matt/Mello often appears as a [[BetaCouple secondary couple]] in a ShipMates fanfic along with L/Light, with all four working as detectives together and getting along surprisingly well, despite Light being a (possibly reformed) serial killer.
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* Matt/Mello fanfics often include a teen romance (perhaps unconsummated) in Wammy's House, Matt's heartbreak over Mello leaving to join the Mafia, which he usually copes with by using drugs and alcohol alcohol, having empty sex with numerous partners, and self-harming, and then later include angst over [[spoiler: either Matt's death, Mello's death, both, or if their canon fates are avoided, their near-brushes with death]]. If the fanfic is non-angsty, Matt/Mello often appears as a [[BetaCouple secondary couple]] in a ShipMates fanfic along with L/Light, with all four working as detectives together and getting along surprisingly well, despite Light being a (possibly reformed) serial killer.
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* Light is caught as Kira and [[FakingTheDead L fakes Light's execution in order to save him.]] Light may or may not be aware of L's plans but more often than not [[PoorCommunicationKills L will not mention his plan to rescue him]] for extra angst or L being dick or for the especially stupid reason "so that [[MasterActor Light's]] reactions would look genuine."
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* Light is caught as Kira and [[FakingTheDead L fakes Light's execution in order to save him.]] Light may or may not be aware of L's plans but more often than not [[PoorCommunicationKills L will not mention his plan to rescue him]] for extra angst or L being dick or for the especially stupid reason "so that [[MasterActor Light's]] reactions would look genuine.""
* Mello experiences {{Gayngst}} over his attraction to and/or relationship with Matt (or just boys in general) [[AgainstMyReligion vs]]. [[ChristianityIsCatholic his religious beliefs]].
* Mello experiences {{Gayngst}} over his attraction to and/or relationship with Matt (or just boys in general) [[AgainstMyReligion vs]]. [[ChristianityIsCatholic his religious beliefs]].
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* A MarySue with a tragic past is the top student at Wammy's House but is also [[CharacterDerailment BFFs with Mello]] and Matt.
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* Matt/Mello fanfics often include a teen romance (perhaps unconsummated) in Wammy's House, Matt's heartbreak over Mello leaving to join the Mafia, which he usually copes with by using drugs and alcohol, and then later include angst over [[spoiler: either Matt's death, Mello's death, both, or if their canon fates are avoided, their near-brushes with death]]. If the fanfic is non-angsty, Matt/Mello often appears as a [[BetaCouple secondary couple]] in a ShipMates fanfic along with L/Light, with all four working as detectives together and getting along surprisingly well, despite Light being a (possibly reformed) serial killer.
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* Matt/Mello fanfics often include a teen romance (perhaps unconsummated) in Wammy's House, Matt's heartbreak over Mello leaving to join the Mafia, which he usually copes with by using drugs and alcohol, alcohol and self-harming, and then later include angst over [[spoiler: either Matt's death, Mello's death, both, or if their canon fates are avoided, their near-brushes with death]]. If the fanfic is non-angsty, Matt/Mello often appears as a [[BetaCouple secondary couple]] in a ShipMates fanfic along with L/Light, with all four working as detectives together and getting along surprisingly well, despite Light being a (possibly reformed) serial killer.
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* Matt/Mello fanfics often include a teen romance (perhaps unconsummated) in Wammy's House, Matt's heartbreak over Mello leaving to join the Mafia, and then later include angst over [[spoiler: either Matt's death, Mello's death, both, or if their canon fates are avoided, their near-brushes with death]]. If the fanfic is non-angsty, Matt/Mello often appears as a [[BetaCouple secondary couple]] in a ShipMates fanfic along with L/Light, with all four working as detectives together and getting along surprisingly well, despite Light being a (possibly reformed) serial killer.
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* Matt/Mello fanfics often include a teen romance (perhaps unconsummated) in Wammy's House, Matt's heartbreak over Mello leaving to join the Mafia, which he usually copes with by using drugs and alcohol, and then later include angst over [[spoiler: either Matt's death, Mello's death, both, or if their canon fates are avoided, their near-brushes with death]]. If the fanfic is non-angsty, Matt/Mello often appears as a [[BetaCouple secondary couple]] in a ShipMates fanfic along with L/Light, with all four working as detectives together and getting along surprisingly well, despite Light being a (possibly reformed) serial killer.
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* Light and L forget that they are working on a high profile murder case and are paranoid neurotics and go to the movies / beach / mall / candy store / fun place for no good reason.
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* Light and L forget that they are working on a high profile murder case and are paranoid neurotics and go to the movies / beach / mall / candy store / other fun place for no good reason. reason, or "because it's what Kira would do."
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* The characters are in high school or college together.
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* The characters are in high school or college together.together.
* Light is caught as Kira and [[FakingTheDead L fakes Light's execution in order to save him.]] Light may or may not be aware of L's plans but more often than not [[PoorCommunicationKills L will not mention his plan to rescue him]] for extra angst or L being dick or for the especially stupid reason "so that [[MasterActor Light's]] reactions would look genuine."
* Light is caught as Kira and [[FakingTheDead L fakes Light's execution in order to save him.]] Light may or may not be aware of L's plans but more often than not [[PoorCommunicationKills L will not mention his plan to rescue him]] for extra angst or L being dick or for the especially stupid reason "so that [[MasterActor Light's]] reactions would look genuine."
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* ReincarnationRomance.
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* ReincarnationRomance.ReincarnationRomance.
* The characters are in high school or college together.
* The characters are in high school or college together.
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* The Shinigami King is actually [[Franchise/HarryPotter the Master of Death]].
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* The Shinigami King is actually [[Franchise/HarryPotter the Master of Death]].Death]].
* ReincarnationRomance.
* ReincarnationRomance.
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* A MarySue just happens to recognize L and instead of getting freaked out about it (as L would in character) sex ensues. The same formula goes for a MarySue with Kira.
* The AU where Misa is doing her modeling work and L becomes her creepy boss.
* The AU where Misa is doing her modeling work and L becomes her creepy boss.
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* A MarySue just happens to recognize L and instead of getting freaked out about it (as L would in character) sex ensues. The same formula goes for a MarySue with Kira.
Kira.
* The AU where Misa is doing her modeling work and L becomes her creepy boss.
* The AU where Misa is doing her modeling work and L becomes her creepy boss.
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* Mello is [[OverlordJr the son of a mob boss]].
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* Mello is [[OverlordJr the son of a mob boss]].
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* As the psychological warfare continues to escalate the characters challenge each other to a game of Truth or Dare or Spin the Bottle or Strip Poker.
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* As the psychological warfare continues to escalate the characters challenge each other to a game of Truth or Dare or Spin the Bottle or Strip Poker. Poker or TenMinutesInTheCloset.
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* [[SwirlyEnergyThingy That portal network]] that connects the human world with the Shinigami world is a CommonCrossover method. It apparently works for TimeTravel and dimensional travel as well.
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* [[SwirlyEnergyThingy That portal network]] that connects the human world with the Shinigami world is a CommonCrossover method. It apparently works for TimeTravel and dimensional travel as well.well.
* The Shinigami King is actually [[Franchise/HarryPotter the Master of Death]].
* The Shinigami King is actually [[Franchise/HarryPotter the Master of Death]].
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* [[CommonCrossover The]] ''Franchise/CodeGeass'' CrossOver.
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* [[CommonCrossover The]] ''Franchise/CodeGeass'' CrossOver.CrossOver.
* [[SwirlyEnergyThingy That portal network]] that connects the human world with the Shinigami world is a CommonCrossover method. It apparently works for TimeTravel and dimensional travel as well.
* [[SwirlyEnergyThingy That portal network]] that connects the human world with the Shinigami world is a CommonCrossover method. It apparently works for TimeTravel and dimensional travel as well.
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* For ContinuationFic: An [[OriginalCharacter OC]] [[spoiler: [[JackTheRipoff picks up the notebook and decides to continue Kira's work.]]]]
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* For ContinuationFic: An [[OriginalCharacter OC]] [[spoiler: [[JackTheRipoff picks up the notebook and decides to continue Kira's work.]]]]]]]]
* [[CommonCrossover The]] ''Franchise/CodeGeass'' CrossOver.
* [[CommonCrossover The]] ''Franchise/CodeGeass'' CrossOver.
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* Ryuk makes Light his sex slave.
* For ContinuationFic: An OC [[spoiler: [[JackTheRipoff picks up the notebook and decides to continue Kira's work.]]]]
* For ContinuationFic: An OC [[spoiler: [[JackTheRipoff picks up the notebook and decides to continue Kira's work.]]]]
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* Ryuk makes Light his sex slave.
SexSlave.
* For ContinuationFic: AnOC [[OriginalCharacter OC]] [[spoiler: [[JackTheRipoff picks up the notebook and decides to continue Kira's work.]]]]
* For ContinuationFic: An
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* Ryuk makes Light his sex slave.
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* Ryuk makes Light his sex slave.slave.
* For ContinuationFic: An OC [[spoiler: [[JackTheRipoff picks up the notebook and decides to continue Kira's work.]]]]
* For ContinuationFic: An OC [[spoiler: [[JackTheRipoff picks up the notebook and decides to continue Kira's work.]]]]
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* One or more characters is actually a sexy vampire. Or a sexy werewolf. Or a sexy whatever. The important part is that they can't be killed with the Death Note and sex ensues.
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* One or more characters is actually a sexy vampire. Or a sexy werewolf. Or a sexy demon. Or a sexy whatever. The important part is that they can't be killed with the Death Note and sex ensues.
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* There are other kinds of Notes and have the appropriate kind of god or spirit haunting them--The Life Note, The Debu Note (Fat Note), the Love Note, the Sex Note, the Yaoi Note, the Math Note, the Study Note, etc.
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* There are other kinds of Notes and have the appropriate kind of god or spirit haunting them--The Life Note, The Debu Note (Fat Note), the Love Note, the Sex Note, the Yaoi Note, the Math Note, the Study Note, etc.etc.
* Ryuk makes Light his sex slave.
* Ryuk makes Light his sex slave.
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* Fluff where Light hangs out with his little sister and gets a PetTheDog moment.
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* Fluff where Light hangs out with his little sister and gets a PetTheDog moment.moment.
* There are other kinds of Notes and have the appropriate kind of god or spirit haunting them--The Life Note, The Debu Note (Fat Note), the Love Note, the Sex Note, the Yaoi Note, the Math Note, the Study Note, etc.
* There are other kinds of Notes and have the appropriate kind of god or spirit haunting them--The Life Note, The Debu Note (Fat Note), the Love Note, the Sex Note, the Yaoi Note, the Math Note, the Study Note, etc.
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* Light forgets that he's on a righteous crusade to eliminate evil and because of the power of twu lub gives up the notebook to be with L.
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* Light forgets that he's on a righteous crusade to eliminate evil and because of the power of twu lub true love gives up the notebook to be with L.
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* Secretly Light always looked up to L and he was his role-model growing up.
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* Rem invoked some unknown or little-used Shinigami loophole in order to spite Light [[spoiler: so that L is still alive.]]
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* Rem invoked some unknown or little-used Shinigami loophole in order to spite Light [[spoiler: so that L is still alive.]]]]
* Fluff where Light hangs out with his little sister and gets a PetTheDog moment.
* Fluff where Light hangs out with his little sister and gets a PetTheDog moment.
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** Almost as frequently L becomes a Shinigami.
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* The [[spoiler: Kira's Victory]] [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] where Light is so grateful to Misa/Takada/Mikami/follower of choice that sex ensues.
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* The [[spoiler: Kira's Victory]] [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] where Light is so grateful to Misa/Takada/Mikami/follower of choice that sex ensues.ensues.
* Rem invoked some unknown or little-used Shinigami loophole in order to spite Light [[spoiler: so that L is still alive.]]
* Rem invoked some unknown or little-used Shinigami loophole in order to spite Light [[spoiler: so that L is still alive.]]