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A DarkerAndEdgier reimagining (or perhaps {{Deconstruction}}) of the ''VideoGame/TeamFortress2'' universe by Cat Bountry, in which the old [[MissionControl Administrator]] is replaced by [[AIIsACrapshoot an insane]] [[ActorAllusion AI]] and things just get worse from there in the style of ''Literature/IHaveNoMouthAndIMustScream'' by Creator/HarlanEllison (hence the story title).
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A DarkerAndEdgier reimagining (or perhaps {{Deconstruction}}) of the ''VideoGame/TeamFortress2'' universe by Cat Bountry, in which the old [[MissionControl Administrator]] is replaced by [[AIIsACrapshoot an insane]] [[ActorAllusion AI]] and things just get worse from there in the style of ''Literature/IHaveNoMouthAndIMustScream'' by Creator/HarlanEllison (hence the story title).
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* AllForNothing: [[spoiler: After mercy-killing the rest of the team, Engineer returns to the surface -- to find it's completely fine. They could have just come up and left, if they hadn't believe the Administrator's claims of destroying the world.]]
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%%* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: [[spoiler:Or not.]]
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* BuxomIsBetter: [[spoiler: [[AvertedTrope No it most certainly is NOT for Pyro]], after she's been turned into a woman. Her breasts are described as being so huge and swollen that she needs to carry them in her arms]].
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Disambiguated...but it's a ZCE
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%%* KillThemAll: [[spoiler: the ending.]]
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: It's never made clear what happened to the old Announcer. All that is known is that she made the AI to "do her job for her".
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: It's never made clear what happened to the old Announcer. All that is known is that she made the AI to "do her job for her".her", so it can be assumed that she was out of the picture long before the AI went rogue.
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* FanDisservice: [[spoiler:Pyro's genderbent form seems to invoke this--a naked, buxom woman sounds nice on paper...except Pyro's features are horrifyingly exaggerated, with her massive breasts too heavy for her to even stand up properly and skinny legs that can't even support her weight. On top of that, she's ''still wearing that gas mask''.]]
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* FanDisservice: [[spoiler:Pyro's genderbent form seems to invoke this--a naked, buxom woman sounds nice on paper...except Pyro's features are horrifyingly exaggerated, with her massive breasts too heavy for her to even stand up properly and skinny legs that can't even support her weight. On top of that, she's ''still wearing that gas mask''. With how much of a sadist the Announcer is, it's clear that she did this to her on purpose.]]
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* BuxomIsBetter: [[spoiler: [[AvertedTrope No it most certainly is NOT for Pyro]], after she's been turned into a woman. Her breasts are described as being so huge and swollen that she needs to carry them in her arms]].
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* ThePowerOfLove: Engineer muses on this with Heavy and Medic as he [[spoiler:kills them]].
-->I look over both of them, and I feel saddened. In a place where hate was so prevalent, where it ruled over every aspect of our lives, they were the last two people on earth who remembered how to love.
-->I look over both of them, and I feel saddened. In a place where hate was so prevalent, where it ruled over every aspect of our lives, they were the last two people on earth who remembered how to love.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: It's never made clear what happened to the old Announcer. All that is known is that she made the AI to "do her job for her".
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Gonna move to Trivia.
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* FandomNod: Possibly [[spoiler: the Pyro's gender bending, to [[AmbiguousGender the constant arguments about his/her gender]]]].
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Dead link.
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A fan-made sequel is also available [[https://drive.google.com/open?id=1hCZWYfzgfILN1KeFqdDUerpmPiH9GvAISqfYlixsbxA here]], by Dot-chan.
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* LikeASonToMe: Engineer sadly thinks to himself that he loved Scout like a son [[spoiler:right after MercyKilling him with Shovel]].
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Capitalization was fixed from FanFic.With Apologies To Harlan Ellison to Fanfic.With Apologies To Harlan Ellison. Null edit to update page. Page may need a mojibake cleanup after the fact
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-->'''Demoman:''' At least ye weren’t lonely before. I should a’ suspected it was you who would snap. Ne’er trust th’ nice ones.
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-->'''Demoman:''' At least ye weren’t weren't lonely before. I should a’ a' suspected it was you who would snap. Ne’er Ne'er trust th’ th' nice ones.
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--> He hates us. Whenever Medic is crying over whatever torment he has had to endure, you can hear Spy [[KickTheDog laughing]]. And when he’s not laughing, he’s [[BodyHorror screaming]].
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--> He hates us. Whenever Medic is crying over whatever torment he has had to endure, you can hear Spy [[KickTheDog laughing]]. And when he’s he's not laughing, he’s he's [[BodyHorror screaming]].
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-->I feel sick all over again. The rancid meat in my stomach probably plays a factor in this. I may have been trapped here for more than a century but the thought of possibly raping a lady is still abhorrent to me. Especially if she’s been tortured just like we have. Can I trust these men, my fellow prisoners, to feel the same way?
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-->I feel sick all over again. The rancid meat in my stomach probably plays a factor in this. I may have been trapped here for more than a century but the thought of possibly raping a lady is still abhorrent to me. Especially if she’s she's been tortured just like we have. Can I trust these men, my fellow prisoners, to feel the same way?
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* PerpetuallyProtean: Apparently despising Spy worst of all, the Administrator inflicts the worst fate on him by making him into a ''real'' shapeshifter: not only is he perpetually transforming and unable to control it, but the constant process of growing, shrinking, expanding, contracting, melting and morphing causes him agonizing pain - to the point that he avoids walking because his legs break and reset with every step. Also, making eye contact with him is extremely difficult, for not only is his face changing constantly into everything from Richard Nixon to Frank Sinatra, but his eyes are described as "runny."
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Hello Nurse Renamed per TRS
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* HelloNurse: [[spoiler: Inverted. Pyro is transformed into a horribly exaggerated caricature of a woman, causing reactions of disgust rather than attraction from most of the team.]]
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* HelloNurse: HeadTurningBeauty: [[spoiler: Inverted. Pyro is transformed into a horribly exaggerated caricature of a woman, causing reactions of disgust rather than attraction from most of the team.]]
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* KillThemAll: [[spoiler: the ending.]]
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