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The story picks up with [[DubNameChange Dr.]] [[strike:Heiter]] [[EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep Scientist]] escaping from the [[strike:pool]] "poop water" he fell into and [[BackFromTheDead died in]] at the end of the movie. Immediately he sets off on creating a "humen milipeed" after he sees that his human centipede has been killed. What follows is a hardly coherent romp through space to find the "pure tearz of the true millipede" (the last ingredient needed for his creation) and a showdown against a "MenInBlack" where both sides turn into power rangers only for the humen miliped to save the day by casting "GLACIER RETREAT!". Doktor Scintist and his creation then go to live in "Hayee" with LiloAndStitch and the Doktor gets an idea to make a new centipede from [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel Lilo and Stitch characters]].
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The story picks up with [[DubNameChange Dr.]] [[strike:Heiter]] [[EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep Scientist]] escaping from the [[strike:pool]] "poop water" he fell into and [[BackFromTheDead died in]] at the end of the movie. Immediately he sets off on creating a "humen milipeed" after he sees that his human centipede has been killed. What follows is a hardly coherent romp through space to find the "pure tearz of the true millipede" (the last ingredient needed for his creation) and a showdown against a "MenInBlack" "[[Film/MenInBlack Man In Black]]" where both sides turn into power rangers only for the humen miliped to save the day by casting "GLACIER RETREAT!". Doktor Scintist and his creation then go to live in "Hayee" with LiloAndStitch and the Doktor gets an idea to make a new centipede from [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel Lilo and Stitch characters]].
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* CallingYourAttacks: The Humen Miliped rescues Heiter from the MenInBlack by yelling "GLACIER RETREAT!" which for some reason causes the MIB agent to explode.
* CompletelyMissingThePoint: Either that, or the author has never seen ''TheHumanCentipede'' or ''MenInBlack''.
* CompletelyMissingThePoint: Either that, or the author has never seen ''TheHumanCentipede'' or ''MenInBlack''.
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* CallingYourAttacks: The Humen Miliped rescues Heiter from the MenInBlack Film/MenInBlack by yelling "GLACIER RETREAT!" which for some reason causes the MIB agent to explode.
* CompletelyMissingThePoint: Either that, or the author has never seen ''TheHumanCentipede'' or''MenInBlack''.''Film/MenInBlack''.
* CompletelyMissingThePoint: Either that, or the author has never seen ''TheHumanCentipede'' or
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* CrossOver: The story is posted in the ''LiloAndStitch'' category of fanfiction.net, yet is about the movie ''TheHumanCentipede'' and the main antagonists are the MenInBlack.
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* CrossOver: The story is posted in the ''LiloAndStitch'' category of fanfiction.net, yet is about the movie ''TheHumanCentipede'' and the main antagonists are the MenInBlack.Film/MenInBlack.
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The story picks up with Dr. [[strike:Heiter]] [[DubNameChange Scientist]] escaping from the [[strike:pool]] "poop water" he fell into and [[BackFromTheDead died in]] at the end of the movie. Immediately he sets off on creating a "humen milipeed" after he sees that his human centipede has been killed. What follows is a hardly coherent romp through space to find the "pure tearz of the true millipede" (the last ingredient needed for his creation) and a showdown against a "MenInBlack" where both sides turn into power rangers only for the humen miliped to save the day by casting "GLACIER RETREAT!". Doktor Scintist and his creation then go to live in "Hayee" with LiloAndStitch and the Doktor gets an idea to make a new centipede from [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel Lilo and Stitch characters]].
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The story picks up with Dr. [[DubNameChange Dr.]] [[strike:Heiter]] [[DubNameChange [[EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep Scientist]] escaping from the [[strike:pool]] "poop water" he fell into and [[BackFromTheDead died in]] at the end of the movie. Immediately he sets off on creating a "humen milipeed" after he sees that his human centipede has been killed. What follows is a hardly coherent romp through space to find the "pure tearz of the true millipede" (the last ingredient needed for his creation) and a showdown against a "MenInBlack" where both sides turn into power rangers only for the humen miliped to save the day by casting "GLACIER RETREAT!". Doktor Scintist and his creation then go to live in "Hayee" with LiloAndStitch and the Doktor gets an idea to make a new centipede from [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel Lilo and Stitch characters]].
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'''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5968898/1/THE_HUEMN_CENIPED_2_THE_HUMEN_MILIPEDE THE HUEMN CENIPED 2: THE HUMEN MILIPEDE]]''' is what might be the first ever FanFic of the disgusting movie ''TheHumanCentipede'' which revolves around a mad scientist kidnapping three people and stitching them together [[{{Squick}} mouth-to-anus]]. However the fanfiction is a little bit [[{{Understatement}} different]].
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'''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5968898/1/THE_HUEMN_CENIPED_2_THE_HUMEN_MILIPEDE THE HUEMN CENIPED 2: THE HUMEN MILIPEDE]]''' is what might be the first ever FanFic of the disgusting movie ''TheHumanCentipede'' which revolves around a mad scientist kidnapping three people and stitching them together [[{{Squick}} mouth-to-anus]]. However the fanfiction is a little bit [[{{Understatement}} different]].
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** One suggestion: The author wrote [[UnderStatement a completely crazy, over-the-top "fanfiction" story]] as [[GallowsHumor a means to cope]] with the {{squick}}ness of the movie.
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** One suggestion: The author wrote [[UnderStatement a completely crazy, over-the-top "fanfiction" story]] story as [[GallowsHumor a means to cope]] with the {{squick}}ness of the movie.
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*** Don't forget that the 'vendar' borrows the 'I can't give you my license officer.' line.
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*** Don't forget that the 'vendar' borrows they do the 'I can't give you my license officer.' line. officer' routine.
-->'''Vendar:''' I can not seel you this item1
-->'''Vendar:''' I can not seel you this item1
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*** Don't forget that the 'vendar' borrows the 'I can't give you my license officer.' line.
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* UnfortunateImplications: Men in Black "ated a watermelon that was filld with fryed chiken".
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** However... according to [[SequelHook the last line of the story]]...
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* {{Animorphism}} ''and'' HumanityEnsues: Apparently, the creation of the Human Millipede involves this.
-->"Oh no we are humen!" Said milipeeeds.\\\
"Oh no we are millipeds!" Said humens.
-->"Oh no we are humen!" Said milipeeeds.\\\
"Oh no we are millipeds!" Said humens.
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Another strange [[TheHumanCentipede Human Centipede]] fanfiction has been written by HansVonHozel.
Two other SueMary stories now have their own pages "SherlockHomesVsJackTheRipper" and "TehScreamingOfTheLambs".
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Another strange [[TheHumanCentipede ''[[TheHumanCentipede Human Centipede]] Centipede]]'' fanfiction has been written by HansVonHozel.
Two {{Sue Mary}}'s other SueMary stories now have their own pages "SherlockHomesVsJackTheRipper" include ''SherlockHomesVsJackTheRipper'' and "TehScreamingOfTheLambs".
''TehScreamingOfTheLambs''.
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* CrackFic: ''Boy howdy.''
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* CrackFic: ''Boy howdy.''howdy''.
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* CrossesTheLineTwice: When the Men in Black "ated a watermelon that was filld with fryed chiken".
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---> Infromashun: im a haf goast haf vampeir haf gurl wif ma pet gohst unikorn Spunky. My mom deded be4 she wuz born cus of butt trouble and my ddad is domb LOL
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* WallBanger: Why is the single MenInBlack agent referred to as "Men In Black" and not "Man in Black"? Why are the MIB investigating a mad scientist anyway when they're supposed to deal with aliens? Why does Heiter need "the pure tearz of the true millipede" when he didn't need anything like that for the centipede? I could go on...
** This story IS a giant WallBanger.
** This story IS a giant WallBanger.
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** Double points for managing to apply this trope to a fanfiction for a movie that itself could have fallen into this.
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Way to self-plug there, mate. At the very least, TRY to be subtle about it and avoid dropping your own name around.
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[[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P943SZOF6Js Has recently been given the]] DramaticReading treatment by one of our very own british tropers, [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Tropers/Akriloth2160 Akriloth2160]].
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Listen to a DramaticReading [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P943SZOF6Js Has recently been given the]] DramaticReading treatment by one of our very own british tropers, [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Tropers/Akriloth2160 Akriloth2160]].
here]].
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The story picks up with Dr. Heiter, [[DubNameChange renamed]] "Doktor Scientist" escaping from the [[strike:pool]] "poop water" he fell into and [[BackFromTheDead died in]] at the end of the movie. Immediately he sets off on creating a "humen milipeed" after he sees that his human centipede has been killed. What follows is a hardly coherent romp through space to find the "pure tearz of the true millipede" (the last ingredient needed for his creation) and a showdown against a "MenInBlack" where both sides turn into power rangers only for the humen miliped to save the day by casting "GLACIER RETREAT!". Doktor Scintist and his creation then go to live in "Hayee" with LiloAndStitch and the Doktor gets an idea to make a new centipede from [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel Lilo and Stitch characters]].
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The story picks up with Dr. Heiter, [[strike:Heiter]] [[DubNameChange renamed]] "Doktor Scientist" Scientist]] escaping from the [[strike:pool]] "poop water" he fell into and [[BackFromTheDead died in]] at the end of the movie. Immediately he sets off on creating a "humen milipeed" after he sees that his human centipede has been killed. What follows is a hardly coherent romp through space to find the "pure tearz of the true millipede" (the last ingredient needed for his creation) and a showdown against a "MenInBlack" where both sides turn into power rangers only for the humen miliped to save the day by casting "GLACIER RETREAT!". Doktor Scintist and his creation then go to live in "Hayee" with LiloAndStitch and the Doktor gets an idea to make a new centipede from [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel Lilo and Stitch characters]].
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* WorldOfChaos: Basically follows the same logic as ''AxeCop'', only without the justification of being written by a small child. OrIsIt?
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* StealthParody: Come on, it's fairly obvious isn't it? Hell, it can hardly be called a ''stealth'' parody per se.
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** Well, that or it's ''not remotely supposed to be a serious fanfic'' -- seeing as the author describes herself on her profile as a "a [[HeinzHybrid haf goast haf vampeir haf gurl]] wif ma pet gohst unikorn Spunky" and [[LampshadeHanging goes by the handle]] [[MarySue Sue Mary]], that looks to be the case.
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** Well, that or it's ''not remotely supposed to be a serious fanfic'' -- seeing as the author describes herself on her profile as a "a [[HeinzHybrid haf goast haf vampeir haf gurl]] wif ma pet gohst unikorn Spunky" and [[LampshadeHanging goes by the handle]] [[MarySue Sue Sue]] [[SueMary Mary]], that looks to be the case.
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Two other Sue Mary stories now have their own pages "SherlockHomesVsJackTheRipper" and "TehScreamingOfTheLambs".
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* FakingTheDead: The "Doktor Scientist" at the end of the movie.
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* ShoutOut
**To WorldOfWarcraft. "So Doktor scientis did daily quest to get hid rep up to essalted and buy anyway."
**To Fanfic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences, with the references to "humens" and Doktor Scientist and the MIB's fight "for life and death".
**To WorldOfWarcraft. "So Doktor scientis did daily quest to get hid rep up to essalted and buy anyway."
**To Fanfic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences, with the references to "humens" and Doktor Scientist and the MIB's fight "for life and death".
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Another strange HumanCentipede fanfiction has been written by HansVonHozel.
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Another strange HumanCentipede [[TheHumanCentipede Human Centipede]] fanfiction has been written by HansVonHozel.
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Has recently been given the DramaticReading treatment by one of our very own british tropers, [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Tropers/Akriloth2160 Akriloth2160]].
Has recently been given a [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P943SZOF6Js dramatic reading]].
Has recently been given a [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P943SZOF6Js dramatic reading]].
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[[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P943SZOF6Js Has recently been given the the]] DramaticReading treatment by one of our very own british tropers, [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Tropers/Akriloth2160 Akriloth2160]].
Has recently been given a [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P943SZOF6Js dramatic reading]].
Akriloth2160]].
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The story picks up with Dr. Heiter, [[DubNameChange renamed]] "Doktor Scientist" escaping from the [[strike:pool]] "poop water" he fell into and [[BackFromTheDead died in]] at the end of the movie. Immediately he sets off on creating a "humen milipeed" after he sees that his human centipede has been killed. What follows is a hardly coherent romp through space to find the "pure tearz of the true millipede" (the last ingredient needed for his creation) and a showdown against a "MenInBlack" where both sides turn into power rangers only for the humen miliped to save the day by casting "GLACIER RETREAT!". Doktor Scintist and his creation then go to live in "Hayee" with LiloAndStitch and the Doktor gets an idea to make a new centipede from [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel Lilo and Stitch characters]] by one of our very own british tropers, [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Tropers/Akriloth2160 Akriloth2160]].
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The story picks up with Dr. Heiter, [[DubNameChange renamed]] "Doktor Scientist" escaping from the [[strike:pool]] "poop water" he fell into and [[BackFromTheDead died in]] at the end of the movie. Immediately he sets off on creating a "humen milipeed" after he sees that his human centipede has been killed. What follows is a hardly coherent romp through space to find the "pure tearz of the true millipede" (the last ingredient needed for his creation) and a showdown against a "MenInBlack" where both sides turn into power rangers only for the humen miliped to save the day by casting "GLACIER RETREAT!". Doktor Scintist and his creation then go to live in "Hayee" with LiloAndStitch and the Doktor gets an idea to make a new centipede from [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel Lilo and Stitch characters]] characters]].
Has recently been given the DramaticReading treatment by one of our very own british tropers, [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Tropers/Akriloth2160 Akriloth2160]].
Has recently been given the DramaticReading treatment by one of our very own british tropers, [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Tropers/Akriloth2160 Akriloth2160]].
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The story picks up with Dr. Heiter, [[DubNameChange renamed]] "Doktor Scientist" escaping from the [[strike:pool]] "poop water" he fell into and [[BackFromTheDead died in]] at the end of the movie. Immediately he sets off on creating a "humen milipeed" after he sees that his human centipede has been killed. What follows is a hardly coherent romp through space to find the "pure tearz of the true millipede" (the last ingredient needed for his creation) and a showdown against a "MenInBlack" where both sides turn into power rangers only for the humen miliped to save the day by casting "GLACIER RETREAT!". Doktor Scintist and his creation then go to live in "Hayee" with LiloAndStitch and the Doktor gets an idea to make a new centipede from [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel Lilo and Stitch characters]].
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The story picks up with Dr. Heiter, [[DubNameChange renamed]] "Doktor Scientist" escaping from the [[strike:pool]] "poop water" he fell into and [[BackFromTheDead died in]] at the end of the movie. Immediately he sets off on creating a "humen milipeed" after he sees that his human centipede has been killed. What follows is a hardly coherent romp through space to find the "pure tearz of the true millipede" (the last ingredient needed for his creation) and a showdown against a "MenInBlack" where both sides turn into power rangers only for the humen miliped to save the day by casting "GLACIER RETREAT!". Doktor Scintist and his creation then go to live in "Hayee" with LiloAndStitch and the Doktor gets an idea to make a new centipede from [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel Lilo and Stitch characters]].
characters]] by one of our very own british tropers, [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Tropers/Akriloth2160 Akriloth2160]].
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* ExpansionPackPast: From the author him/herself:
---> Infromashun: im a haf goast haf vampeir haf gurl wif ma pet gohst unikorn Spunky. My mom deded be4 she wuz born cus of butt trouble and my ddad is domb LOL
---> Infromashun: im a haf goast haf vampeir haf gurl wif ma pet gohst unikorn Spunky. My mom deded be4 she wuz born cus of butt trouble and my ddad is domb LOL
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[[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer I'm not kidding]].