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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5579866/1/The_Battle_of_New_Mombasa The Battle of New Mombasa]]'' is a ''Franchise/{{Halo}} fan fic by Thuggery, written mostly out of boredom as an attempt to detail what exactly went on during the events of ''VideoGame/Halo2'' and ''[[VideoGame/Halo3ODST ODST]]'' that the player would not see. Written similarly to the much more famous ''Fanfic/TiberiumWars'' by Creator/{{Peptuck}}, it follows soldiers and ordinary citizens around Mombasa during the Battle of Earth. The author/troper doesn't particularly want to toot his own horn (and quite frankly finds that sort of behavior sexually deviant and more than slightly physically impossible), he'll let the tropes invoked speak for themselves.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5579866/1/The_Battle_of_New_Mombasa The Battle of New Mombasa]]'' is a ''Franchise/{{Halo}} ''Franchise/{{Halo}}'' fan fic by Thuggery, written mostly out of boredom as an attempt to detail what exactly went on during the events of ''VideoGame/Halo2'' and ''[[VideoGame/Halo3ODST ODST]]'' that the player would not see. Written similarly to the much more famous ''Fanfic/TiberiumWars'' by Creator/{{Peptuck}}, it follows soldiers and ordinary citizens around Mombasa during the Battle of Earth. The author/troper doesn't particularly want to toot his own horn (and quite frankly finds that sort of behavior sexually deviant and more than slightly physically impossible), he'll let the tropes invoked speak for themselves.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5579866/1/The_Battle_of_New_Mombasa The Battle of New Mombasa]] is (obviously) a Halo fan fic, written mostly out of boredom as an attempt to detail what exactly went on during the events of Halo 2 and ODST that the player would not see. Written similarly to the much more famous FanFic/TiberiumWars by Peptuck, it follows soldiers and ordinary citizens around Mombasa during the Battle of Earth. The author/troper doesn't particularly want to toot his own horn (and quite frankly finds that sort of behavior sexually deviant and more than slightly physically impossible), he'll let the tropes invoked speak for themselves.
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!! Tropes in The Battle of New Mombasa include:
* AnyoneCanDie: Oh so very true, let's keep a running tally, shall we?
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* CodeName: A whole ream of them, some of them serious and others less so.
* ColdSniper
* DrillSergeantNasty: Commander 'Sraomee plays one for his men, but is largely [[AFatherToHisMen a more sympathetic sort of guy]] when they can't see him.
* ColdSniper
* DrillSergeantNasty: Commander 'Sraomee plays one for his men, but is largely [[AFatherToHisMen a more sympathetic sort of guy]] when they can't see him.
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* FriendlySniper
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* GunPorn
* HellFire: Covenant plasma weapons.
* ImprobablePilotingSkills: The Backswords, possibly justified in that the Skyhawk is [[RuleOfCool just that awesome]].
* InterserviceRivalry: The Marines, the Army, and the Navy.
* HellFire: Covenant plasma weapons.
* ImprobablePilotingSkills: The Backswords, possibly justified in that the Skyhawk is [[RuleOfCool just that awesome]].
* InterserviceRivalry: The Marines, the Army, and the Navy.
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* PetTheDog: Already with the Sangheili Ranger Commanders, who generally behave much like ordinary humans.
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* SophisticatedAsHell
* TankGoodness: The M808A "Deathstalker" MBT.
* TheWarRoom: Mentioned and shown with HIGHCOM-6.
* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: The ANVIL-IV Air-to-Surface Missile.
* WarFic: Duh.
* WarIsHell: Oh yes it is...
* YourHeadAsplode: Used frequently but not all the time describing headshots.
* TankGoodness: The M808A "Deathstalker" MBT.
* TheWarRoom: Mentioned and shown with HIGHCOM-6.
* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: The ANVIL-IV Air-to-Surface Missile.
* WarFic: Duh.
* WarIsHell: Oh yes it is...
* YourHeadAsplode: Used frequently but not all the time describing headshots.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: Looking that way already...
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* CrazyAwesome: Rear Admiral (Upper Half) Jalila Chavez. Private Mel Takeshi. Colonel THOMAS HOGARTH.
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: "Shoot the turret,you asshole! Shoot the turret!"
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** The Sangheili commander in the first chapter has some lines that deliberately call back to FullMetalJacket.
** The NMPD SWAT team members are all named after members of TheUnit.
** The NMPD SWAT team members are all named after members of TheUnit.
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** The Sangheili commander in the first chapter has some lines that deliberately call back to FullMetalJacket.
''Film/FullMetalJacket''.
** The NMPD SWAT team members are all named after members ofTheUnit.''Series/TheUnit''.
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** Commander 'Sraomee has a conversation with one of his troopers that is highly reminiscent of something said in GenerationKill
** In Chapter I, one of the characters' names is [[MarlonBrando Marlon]] [[Film/ApocalypseNow Kurtz]]
** Also in Chapter I, the character above reports to an Admiral [[BillAndTedsExcellentAdventure Theodore Preston]]
** In Chapter I, one of the characters' names is [[MarlonBrando Marlon]] [[Film/ApocalypseNow Kurtz]]
** Also in Chapter I, the character above reports to an Admiral [[BillAndTedsExcellentAdventure Theodore Preston]]
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** Commander 'Sraomee has a conversation with one of his troopers that is highly reminiscent of something said in GenerationKill
''Series/GenerationKill''.
** In Chapter I, one of the characters' names is[[MarlonBrando [[Creator/MarlonBrando Marlon]] [[Film/ApocalypseNow Kurtz]]
** Also in Chapter I, the character above reports to an Admiral[[BillAndTedsExcellentAdventure [[Film/BillAndTedsExcellentAdventure Theodore Preston]]
** In Chapter I, one of the characters' names is
** Also in Chapter I, the character above reports to an Admiral
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** [[BattleTech The junior detective in the prologue.]]
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** Colonel [[BattleTech Thomas Hogarth]]. Not unusual considering that the author is a BattleTech fan.
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** Colonel [[BattleTech [[TabletopGame/BattleTech Thomas Hogarth]]. Not unusual considering that the author is a BattleTech ''[=BattleTech=]'' fan.
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** Chapter II has mention of several veterans of [[StarshipTroopers Zegema Beach.]]
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** Chapter II has mention of several veterans of [[StarshipTroopers [[Franchise/StarshipTroopers Zegema Beach.]]
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* DidNotDoTheResearch: WordOfGod says that the Elites are intentionally left somewhat off-baseline to facilitate a better story.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5579866/1/The_Battle_of_New_Mombasa The Battle of New Mombasa]] is (obviously) a Halo fan fic, written mostly out of boredom as an attempt to detail what exactly went on during the events of Halo 2 and ODST that the player would not see. Written similarly to the much more famous [[FanFic/TiberiumWars Tiberium Wars]] by Peptuck, it follows soldiers and ordinary citizens around Mombasa during the Battle of Earth. The author/troper doesn't particularly want to toot his own horn (and quite frankly finds that sort of behavior sexually deviant and more than slightly physically impossible), he'll let the tropes invoked speak for themselves.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5579866/1/The_Battle_of_New_Mombasa The Battle of New Mombasa]] is (obviously) a Halo fan fic, written mostly out of boredom as an attempt to detail what exactly went on during the events of Halo 2 and ODST that the player would not see. Written similarly to the much more famous [[FanFic/TiberiumWars Tiberium Wars]] FanFic/TiberiumWars by Peptuck, it follows soldiers and ordinary citizens around Mombasa during the Battle of Earth. The author/troper doesn't particularly want to toot his own horn (and quite frankly finds that sort of behavior sexually deviant and more than slightly physically impossible), he'll let the tropes invoked speak for themselves.
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** The Sangheili commander in the first chapter has some lines that deliberately call back to [[FullMetalJacket Full Metal Jacket]].
** The NMPD SWAT team members are all named after members of [[TheUnit The Unit]].
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** The Sangheili commander in the first chapter has some lines that deliberately call back to [[FullMetalJacket Full Metal Jacket]].
FullMetalJacket.
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** Commander 'Sraomee has a conversation with one of his troopers that is highly reminiscent of something said in [[GenerationKill Generation Kill]]
** In Chapter I, one of the characters' names is [[MarlonBrando Marlon]] [[ApocalypseNow Kurtz]]
** In Chapter I, one of the characters' names is [[MarlonBrando Marlon]] [[ApocalypseNow Kurtz]]
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** Commander 'Sraomee has a conversation with one of his troopers that is highly reminiscent of something said in [[GenerationKill Generation Kill]]
GenerationKill
** In Chapter I, one of the characters' names is [[MarlonBrando Marlon]][[ApocalypseNow [[Film/ApocalypseNow Kurtz]]
** In Chapter I, one of the characters' names is [[MarlonBrando Marlon]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5579866/1/The_Battle_of_New_Mombasa The Battle of New Mombasa]] is (obviously) a Halo fan fic, written mostly out of boredom as an attempt to detail what exactly went on during the events of Halo 2 and ODST that the player would not see. Written similarly to the much more famous [[FanFic/TiberiumWars Tiberium Wars]] by Peptuck, it follows soldiers and ordinary citizens around Mombasa during the Battle of Earth. The author/troper doesn't particularly want to toot his own horn (and [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean quite frankly finds that sort of behavior sexually deviant and more than slightly physically impossible]]), impossible), he'll let the tropes invoked speak for themselves.
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** The UNSC [[DoctorWho Five Rounds Rapid]]
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** The UNSC [[DoctorWho [[Series/DoctorWho Five Rounds Rapid]]