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* CryCute: Hinata [[CryIntoChest sobs into Naruto's chest]] after he makes his promise with her. [[spoiler:She also starts to cry, [[TearsOfJoy out of confused happiness]], when Naruto kisses her for the first time.]]
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Despite the incredible power he displays and awesome opponents he can fight when [[spoiler:using his Kyuubi power, when Naruto fights an opponent ''far'' above his level ''without'' using the Fox's power, [[CurbStompBattle he gets completely destroyed]].]]
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* ShipperOnDeck: Sakura and Jiraiya for [[spoiler:Hinata and Naruto]], although it only takes one good conversation for each of them to [[spoiler:convince the other two to get together]].
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** Naruto to Keiji after he hears the story of how he lost his ''entire'' team in a mission gone wrong (very much like the Wave Country mission, only worse).
** Naruto to Keiji after he hears the story of how he lost his ''entire'' team in a mission gone wrong (very much like the Wave Country mission, only worse).
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* RealityEnsues: Despite the incredible power he displays and awesome opponents he can fight when [[spoiler:using his Kyuubi power, when Naruto fights an opponent ''far'' above his level ''without'' using the Fox's power, [[CurbStompBattle he gets completely destroyed]].]]
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* DealWithTheDevil: [[spoiler:Naruto makes a deal with the Kyuubi for not only power but also knowledge of the demon-fox's own unique techniques. It involves him modifying the 4th Hokage's seal and drinking a sip of the Kyuubi's BlackBlood to give the fox a more direct connection to his consciousness.]]
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* DealWithTheDevil: [[spoiler:Naruto makes a deal with the Kyuubi for not only power but also knowledge of the demon-fox's own unique techniques. It involves him modifying the 4th Hokage's seal and drinking a sip of the Kyuubi's BlackBlood black blood to give the fox a more direct connection to his consciousness.]]
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* FusionDance: [[spoiler:The Kyuubi makes a deal with Naruto to give him access to his power and also his knowledge to save his friends, by modifying the 4th Hokage's seal and drinking a sip of the Kyuubi's black blood. This causes Naruto to act extremely viciously in his battle with Wabisuke, as well as use the VoiceOfTheLegion and refer to himself as "we" rather than "I" for the duration.]]
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* FusionDance: [[spoiler:The Kyuubi makes a deal with Naruto to give him access to his power and also his knowledge to save his friends, by modifying the 4th Hokage's seal and drinking a sip of the Kyuubi's black blood. This causes Naruto to act extremely viciously in his battle with Wabisuke, as well as use the VoiceOfTheLegion and refer to himself as "we" rather than "I" for the duration.]]
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* ThePowerOfBlood: [[spoiler:Naruto's enhanced contract with the Kyuubi requires him to drink a sip of its BlackBlood.]]
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* AllMenArePerverts: When [[spoiler:Naruto shreds Tsunade's obi during their fight]], almost ''every man and boy present'' groans in collective disappointment when she manages to hold her top shut instead of letting her boobs bounce out.
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* YouShallNotPass: Naruto declares this to [[spoiler:Orochimaru]] to cover the escape of [[spoiler:Sakura, Hinata, Hanabi and Temari]].
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** JerkWithAHeartOfGold: He admits at the end that Naruto has promise because he works so hard, and is going to make a good musician [[spoiler:and ninja]].
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* ActionGirl: Sakura and Hinata both get to be this surprisingly quickly.
** Taniguchi Tsuchiko of Iwagakure, a chuunin.
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* BadassGrandpa: [[spoiler:Naruto's aged shamisen tutor is actually a powerful Oto jounin trying to live out his retirement, but he's just as deadly with his sonic techniques as always was. As an added bonus, he turns out to actually be Tayuya's grandfather.]]
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* DefeatByModesty: [[spoiler:Tsunade says she'll fight Naruto with her right hand behind her back and agrees she'll concede defeat if he can make her take it out, which he forces her to do when she grabs him with her other hand, only for him to hit her in the stomach with an incomplete Rasengan, shredding her obi and making her reflexively hold her top closed with her right hand to keep her boobs from bouncing out.]]
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* DefeatByModesty: [[spoiler:Tsunade says she'll fight Naruto with her right hand behind her back and agrees she'll concede defeat if he can make her take it out, which he forces her to do when she grabs him with her other hand, only for him to hit her in the stomach with an incomplete Rasengan, shredding her obi and making her reflexively hold her top closed with her right hand to keep her boobs from bouncing out.]]]] Also counts as a DisqualificationInducedVictory.
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* BrickJoke: In chapter 5, [[spoiler:Sakura]] persuades Akashi Tsuneo to talk by threatening to [[GroinAttack cut off his balls]] if he doesn't. Next chapter, some other Iwa-nins are discussing his disappearance, believing he's just gone AWOL, and one comments that their commander will cut of his balls for it.
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* BrickJoke: In chapter 5, [[spoiler:Sakura]] persuades Akashi Tsuneo to talk by threatening to [[GroinAttack cut off his balls]] if he doesn't. Next chapter, some other Iwa-nins are discussing his disappearance, believing he's just gone AWOL, and one comments that their commander will cut of off his balls for it.
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* BrickJoke: In chapter 5, [[spoiler:Sakura]] persuades Akashi Tsuneo to talk by threatening to [[GroinAttack cut off his balls]] if he doesn't. Next chapter, some other Iwa-nins are discussing his disappearance, believing he's just gone AWOL, and one comments that their commander will cut of his balls for it.
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* AgonyBeam: [[spoiler:Wabisuke]]'s Inner Suicide Jutsu allows him to inflict crippling agony with a touch of his hand, without inflicting (immediate) lasting damage.
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* ToThePain: [[spoiler:Wabisuke]] explains how his Inner Suicide Jutsu works to [[spoiler:Kakashi]] after giving him a small sample so he'll know exactly what will be happening to [[spoiler:Naruto]].
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* BadassBoast: Delivered by Naruto to [[spoiler:Tsunade]]:
-->'''Naruto:''' Sure I [[KnowWhenToFoldEm know when I'm beaten]], but it's not yet. Because ''[[{{Determinator}} I'm still breathing!]]''
-->'''Naruto:''' Sure I [[KnowWhenToFoldEm know when I'm beaten]], but it's not yet. Because ''[[{{Determinator}} I'm still breathing!]]''
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* EntertaininglyWrong: Naruto thinks Hinata prefers to keep the forehead protector he loaned her and give him hers to replace it because it gives her confidence the way it did to him, since [[ObliviousToLove it used to be Iruka's]].
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: [[spoiler:The Kyuubi]] unleashes this on [[spoiler:Gaara]] after [[spoiler:taking over Naruto's body during his and Gaara's duel]].
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: [[spoiler:The Kyuubi]] unleashes this on [[spoiler:Gaara]] after [[spoiler:taking over Naruto's body during his and Gaara's duel]]. A fight that up until then had been a brutally closely-contested slugout becomes a one-sided beatdown in an instant.
* NoMatterHowMuchIBeg: [[spoiler:Naruto tells Kakashi not to reveal any information about Konoha to Wabisuke no matter how much Wabisuke tortures him ([[RevengeByProxy Naruto,]] that is, not [[ForcedToWatch Kakashi]]).]]
* NoMatterHowMuchIBeg: [[spoiler:Naruto tells Kakashi not to reveal any information about Konoha to Wabisuke no matter how much Wabisuke tortures him ([[RevengeByProxy Naruto,]] that is, not [[ForcedToWatch Kakashi]]).]]
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The story [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/naruto-the-secret-songs-of-the-ninja.247675/ has a thread on]] Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom and [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/naruto-melody-of-the-shinobi.590496/ a separate one]] for ''Melody of the Shinobi'' where you can read drafts of upcoming chapters as they're written. Please do not add spoilers from there until the chapter is officially released on fanfiction.net as unreleased material is subject to change.
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At the end of Chapter 12, Arcane Azmadi announced a gaiden fic to accompany this one called ''Naruto: ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12905426/1/Naruto-Melody-of-the-Shinobi Naruto: Melody of the Shinobi,'' Shinobi]]'' begins, filling in events that would take place during the TimeSkip between Chapters 12 and 13. The first chapter has not yet been released.
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* YouShallNotPass: Naruto declares this to [[spoiler:Orochimaru]] to cover the escape of [[spoiler:Sakura, Hinata, Hanabi and Temari]].
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* YouShallNotPass: Naruto declares this to [[spoiler:Orochimaru]] to cover the escape of [[spoiler:Sakura, Hinata, Hanabi and Temari]].Temari]].
!!''Naruto: Melody of the Shinobi'' provides examples of:
* BadassGrandpa: [[spoiler:Naruto's aged shamisen tutor is actually a powerful Oto jounin trying to live out his retirement, but he's just as deadly with his sonic techniques as always was. As an added bonus, he turns out to actually be Tayuya's grandfather.]]
* BaitAndSwitch: A trio of Sound-nin attack during one of Naruto's shamisen lessons. [[spoiler:They don't even know who Naruto is, and are actually there to capture his teacher, a formerly retired Sound jounin who deserted the village when Orochimaru took over and tried to "un-retire" him.]]
* BreatherEpisode: Pretty much the entire fic serves as one of these (or several of them) to the more-serious ''Naruto: the Secret Songs of the Ninja.''
* DefectorFromDecadence: [[spoiler:Otoshiki Koushino deserted Oto because of his contempt for Orochimaru when he took over and tried to turn his sonic techniques to more malevolent purposes.]]
* {{Filler}}: Subverted; the fic is designed to cover a variety of one-off, usually more light-hearted events that took place during the timeskip in the middle of ''Secret Songs of the Ninja'' and aren't quite significant enough to have chapters dedicated to them in the main story, but these events are fully canon and can actually provide CharacterDevelopment as well as affect the relationships between the characters. Arcane Azmadi has stated that reading the fic will be ''helpful'' to fill in some details for the rest of ''Secret Songs'', but not ''essential.''
* FleetingPassionateHobbies: Subverted; Naruto takes up the shamisen as a hobby simply by deciding one day "Hey, I'm gonna learn to play the shamisen!" because he walked past an instrument store after seeing a kabuki performance, but despite how spontaneously he decides on it, he sticks with it, because giving up would be like admitting defeat.
* GrumpyOldMan: Koushakuji Tokikawa, Naruto's extremely strict shamisen tutor.
* JerkAss: Koushakuji Tokikawa, who is strict and brusque with Naruto to the point of rudeness, treating him with thinly-veiled contempt.
** JerkWithAHeartOfGold: He admits at the end that Naruto has promise because he works so hard, and is going to make a good musician [[spoiler:and ninja]].
* MusicalAssassin: [[spoiler:Koushakuji Tokikawa, Naruto's shamisen instructor, is actually Otoshiki Koushino, a powerful (retired) Sound ninja who can use his shamisen to unleash devastating sonic attacks capable of ripping his opponents to shreds.]]
* ResignationsNotAccepted: [[spoiler:Otoshiki Koushino, an aged Sound jounin, was already retired when Orochimaru took over Oto, but Orochimaru wanted to turn his sonic techniques to his own purposes, so he abandoned the village and now constantly has Sound-nin after him.]]
!!''Naruto: Melody of the Shinobi'' provides examples of:
* BadassGrandpa: [[spoiler:Naruto's aged shamisen tutor is actually a powerful Oto jounin trying to live out his retirement, but he's just as deadly with his sonic techniques as always was. As an added bonus, he turns out to actually be Tayuya's grandfather.]]
* BaitAndSwitch: A trio of Sound-nin attack during one of Naruto's shamisen lessons. [[spoiler:They don't even know who Naruto is, and are actually there to capture his teacher, a formerly retired Sound jounin who deserted the village when Orochimaru took over and tried to "un-retire" him.]]
* BreatherEpisode: Pretty much the entire fic serves as one of these (or several of them) to the more-serious ''Naruto: the Secret Songs of the Ninja.''
* DefectorFromDecadence: [[spoiler:Otoshiki Koushino deserted Oto because of his contempt for Orochimaru when he took over and tried to turn his sonic techniques to more malevolent purposes.]]
* {{Filler}}: Subverted; the fic is designed to cover a variety of one-off, usually more light-hearted events that took place during the timeskip in the middle of ''Secret Songs of the Ninja'' and aren't quite significant enough to have chapters dedicated to them in the main story, but these events are fully canon and can actually provide CharacterDevelopment as well as affect the relationships between the characters. Arcane Azmadi has stated that reading the fic will be ''helpful'' to fill in some details for the rest of ''Secret Songs'', but not ''essential.''
* FleetingPassionateHobbies: Subverted; Naruto takes up the shamisen as a hobby simply by deciding one day "Hey, I'm gonna learn to play the shamisen!" because he walked past an instrument store after seeing a kabuki performance, but despite how spontaneously he decides on it, he sticks with it, because giving up would be like admitting defeat.
* GrumpyOldMan: Koushakuji Tokikawa, Naruto's extremely strict shamisen tutor.
* JerkAss: Koushakuji Tokikawa, who is strict and brusque with Naruto to the point of rudeness, treating him with thinly-veiled contempt.
** JerkWithAHeartOfGold: He admits at the end that Naruto has promise because he works so hard, and is going to make a good musician [[spoiler:and ninja]].
* MusicalAssassin: [[spoiler:Koushakuji Tokikawa, Naruto's shamisen instructor, is actually Otoshiki Koushino, a powerful (retired) Sound ninja who can use his shamisen to unleash devastating sonic attacks capable of ripping his opponents to shreds.]]
* ResignationsNotAccepted: [[spoiler:Otoshiki Koushino, an aged Sound jounin, was already retired when Orochimaru took over Oto, but Orochimaru wanted to turn his sonic techniques to his own purposes, so he abandoned the village and now constantly has Sound-nin after him.]]
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* CutlassBetweenTheTeeth: [[CallBack Inspired by Zabuza's last stand,]] [[spoiler:Naruto]] holds a kunai between his teeth to fight [[spoiler:Taniguchi Tsuchiko while his hands are shacked behind his back]].
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* CutlassBetweenTheTeeth: [[CallBack Inspired by Zabuza's last stand,]] [[spoiler:Naruto]] holds a kunai between his teeth to fight [[spoiler:Taniguchi Tsuchiko while his hands are shacked shackled behind his back]].
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* CutlassBetweenTheTeeth: [[CallBack Inspired by Zabuza's last stand,]] [[spoiler:Naruto]] holds a kunai between his teeth to fight [[spoiler:Taniguchi Tsuchiko while his hands are shacked behind his back]].
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** The [[IDoNotOwn disclaimer]] at the start of chapter 7 is the spoken track "Disclaimer" from TheOffspring album ''Ixnay on the Hombre.''
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** Tsunade fights [[spoiler:Naruto]] with one hand behind her back. [[spoiler:If Naruto can make her take it out, he wins. He does, [[DefeatByModesty defeating her by modesty]].]]
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Absolutely ''not'' to be confused with ''FanFic/NaretoTheScretOfShiobi''.
''FanFic/NaretoTheScretOfShiobi''. See also ''Fanfic/ForLove'', a different ''Naruto'' fic by the same author.
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* HonorBeforeReason: [[spoiler:Naruto technically defeats Tsunade during their duel when she has a HeroicBSOD when he coughs up a mouthful of blood onto her face, triggering her haemophobia and causing her to use her right hand to try and wipe it off without thinking, which would be a forfeit. However, Naruto refuses to accept winning that way and wipes the blood off himself before telling Tsunade to put her hand behind her back again and keep going, even though he's getting absolutely ''wrecked'' by her. He manages to win anyway.]]
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* HonorBeforeReason: [[spoiler:Naruto technically defeats Tsunade during their duel when she has a HeroicBSOD when after he coughs up a mouthful of blood onto her face, triggering her haemophobia and causing her to use her right hand to try and wipe it off without thinking, which would be a forfeit. However, Naruto refuses to accept winning that way and wipes the blood off himself before telling Tsunade to put her hand behind her back again and keep going, even though he's getting absolutely ''wrecked'' by her. He manages to win anyway.]]
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* CryCute: Hinata [[CryIntoChest sobs into Naruto's chest]] after he makes his promise with her.
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* CryCute: Hinata [[CryIntoChest sobs into Naruto's chest]] after he makes his promise with her. [[spoiler:She also starts to cry, [[TearsOfJoy out of confused happiness]], when Naruto kisses her for the first time.]]
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* DefeatByModesty: [[spoiler:Tsunade says she'll fight Naruto with her right hand behind her back and agrees she'll concede defeat if he can make her take it out, which he forces her to do when she grabs him with her other hand, only for him to hit her in the stomach with an incomplete Rasengan, shredding her obi and forcing her to hold her top closed with her right hand to keep her boobs from bouncing out.]]
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* DefeatByModesty: [[spoiler:Tsunade says she'll fight Naruto with her right hand behind her back and agrees she'll concede defeat if he can make her take it out, which he forces her to do when she grabs him with her other hand, only for him to hit her in the stomach with an incomplete Rasengan, shredding her obi and forcing making her to reflexively hold her top closed with her right hand to keep her boobs from bouncing out.]]
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* TheBigDamnKiss: [[spoiler:Naruto and Hinata's kiss at the end of Chapter 12.]]
* CurbStompBattle: Naruto's fight against [[spoiler:Tsunade]] is the most one-sided fight in the entire fic to date, as he's [[spoiler:entirely barred from using his Kyuubi power]]- he can't even ''touch'' his opponent [[spoiler:but manages to win anyway [[DefeatByModesty by modesty]]]].
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* DemonicPossession: As a result of the above, [[spoiler:during the fight with Gaara the Kyuubi, rather than trying to break free from Naruto, takes over his body instead]].
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* DefeatByModesty: [[spoiler:Tsunade says she'll fight Naruto with her right hand behind her back and agrees she'll concede defeat if he can make her take it out, which he forces her to do when she grabs him with her other hand, only for him to hit her in the stomach with an incomplete Rasengan, shredding her obi and forcing her to hold her top closed with her right hand to keep her boobs from bouncing out.]]
* DemonicPossession: As a result of theabove, DealWithTheDevil, [[spoiler:during the fight with Gaara the Kyuubi, rather than trying to break free from Naruto, takes over his body instead]].
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* HowMuchMoreCanHeTake: Naruto gets the absolute ''shit'' beaten out of him by [[spoiler:Tsunade]] but simply refuses to quit, eventually finding a way to win.
* HowMuchMoreCanHeTake: Naruto gets the absolute ''shit'' beaten out of him by [[spoiler:Tsunade]] but simply refuses to quit, eventually finding a way to win.
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* RealityEnsues: Despite the incredible power he displays and awesome opponents he can fight when [[spoiler:using his Kyuubi power, when Naruto fights an opponent ''far'' above his level ''without'' using the Fox's power, [[CurbStompBattle he gets completely destroyed]].]]
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* CatapultNightmare: Naruto wakes up from one after [[spoiler:his fight with Gaara]], in which [[spoiler:the Kyuubi killed all his friends while possessing him]].
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** According to WordOfGod [[spoiler:the Hidden Fortress of the Senju]] is a ShoutOut to the classicAkiraKurosawa Creator/AkiraKurosawa film ''Film/TheHiddenFortress''.
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