History FanFic / InFlight

21st Sep '17 7:40:34 PM Pyromania101
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* SexSlave: Akitsu refers to herself as Shirou's. He's... [[{{Understatement}} uncomfortable]], to say the least.
15th Sep '17 6:56:50 AM Cheapsunglasses
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* WorthyOpponent: Shirou regards [[AxCrazy Toyotama and Ichiya]] as this, describing them as the type of people he was trained to kill. The feeling is ''[[InLoveWithYourCarnage very]]'' mutual.
11th Sep '17 9:12:41 PM Cheapsunglasses
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* DidNotThinkThisThrough: Higa and Kakizaki's plan to [[spoiler:force Shirou to serve them by kidnapping Yukari positively ''reeks'' of this! Not only does Higa send Kakizaki to Izumo Inn with no form of protection, but he never even considers the possibility that Shirou might, ya know, take Kakizaki hostage and threaten to torture vital company information out of him if Higa refuses to play ball in his court. In addition, as Shirou contemptuously points out, a pair of boots is not sufficient evidence to prove that Yukari was even kidnapped in the first place. But the two biggest factors he overlooked are the following: he failed to capture Yukari's Sekirei, meaning that the boy might, say, break into the facility to rescue her; and that Shirou has already established himself as a grade-A badass who cannot be taken lightly.]]
** A less serious example with Shirou regarding [[spoiler:aforementioned kidnapping: he was so obsessed with rescuing Yukari himself that he never even considered the possibility that Shiina might rescue her first.]]


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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: All of Higa's plots against Shirou end up benefitting him. [[spoiler:After Shirou prevents him from winging Tsukiumi, he puts a bounty on Shirou's head, hoping that anyone wanting to collect it will at least weaken Shirou enough to make him non-threatening. Shirou [[CurbStompBattle curb-stomps]] them without any losses of his own and thus becomes more feared as a result. Higa tries to get Uzume to spy on Shirou for him, only for Uzume to eventually decide to cut a deal with Shirou instead when she realizes he can rescue her Ashikabi from Higa's clutches and cure her of her terminal illness. His final, desperate attempt to blackmail Shirou into serving him by kidnapping Yukari only serves to give Shirou an excuse to murder him outright--which he does.]]
11th Sep '17 7:47:44 PM Cheapsunglasses
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* EverybodyHasStandards: Matsu and Kazehana are shameless perverts, but even they don't approve of kiddie porn.
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* JailbaitWait: [[spoiler:The DistantFinale reveals that Kusano has been chomping at the bit for Shirou to take her virginity ever since she hit puberty. Much to her consternation, everyone else--even [[LovableSexManiac Matsu]] and [[EthicalSlut Kazehana]]--decided that she'd have to wait until her eighteenth birthday. She's been counting down the days ever since.]]
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** [[spoiler:Higa eventually tries to enslave Shirou directly by taking Yukari hostage after being thwarted by the man one too many times. It backfires spectacularly.]]
21st Aug '17 8:04:32 AM Cheapsunglasses
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* AnimalMotifs: We get a few.
** Musubi: the bear.
** Akitsu: the dog.
** Kusano: the kitten.
16th May '17 10:56:09 AM FramePlus
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--> "I'm broken," she whispered, not even bothering to glance at me, "a failure."

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--> "I'm -->"I'm broken," she whispered, not even bothering to glance at me, "a failure."



* AdaptationalBadass: [[spoiler: Shiina handles Yukari's kidnapping much better than he does in Sekirei canon. Somewhat justified as his accommodating personality and respect for Shirou probably influenced him to at least try to match Shirou's readiness under dangerous situations.]]

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* AdaptationalBadass: [[spoiler: Shiina [[spoiler:Shiina handles Yukari's kidnapping much better than he does in Sekirei canon. Somewhat justified as his accommodating personality and respect for Shirou probably influenced him to at least try to match Shirou's readiness under dangerous situations.]]



** Benitsubasa becomes this after [[spoiler: Karasuba brutally kills her on Shirou's instructions, whimpering her Ashikabi's name as she dies.]]

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** Benitsubasa becomes this after [[spoiler: Karasuba [[spoiler:Karasuba brutally kills her on Shirou's instructions, whimpering her Ashikabi's name as she dies.]]



** [[spoiler: And now Rin as well, though she at least has to concentrate first to experience it.]]

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** [[spoiler: And [[spoiler:And now Rin as well, though she at least has to concentrate first to experience it.]]



---> I would have to start analyzing the information Matsu had gathered, reevaluate my plans on how to go about fighting this war, deal with the fact that I had accidentally started a relationship with multiple partners, try to unravel whatever plot or conspiracy MBI was initiating, attempt to convince a potentially homicidal alien that she really didn't want to kill me and instead wanted to allow me to wing her, and find a kitty.

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---> I --->I would have to start analyzing the information Matsu had gathered, reevaluate my plans on how to go about fighting this war, deal with the fact that I had accidentally started a relationship with multiple partners, try to unravel whatever plot or conspiracy MBI was initiating, attempt to convince a potentially homicidal alien that she really didn't want to kill me and instead wanted to allow me to wing her, and find a kitty.



---> Strangely enough, it was the kitty that really worried me. I was experienced with all the other tasks, but I'd never had a pet before.

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---> Strangely --->Strangely enough, it was the kitty that really worried me. I was experienced with all the other tasks, but I'd never had a pet before.



-->[[spoiler: Well, I've had enough! [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere There's no way in hell I'm going to stay here]], not when this freaking place has some kind of [[TheUnfettered demon murderer]] in it! Or that [[DemonHead freaky hannya ghost lady]], or [[TheDreaded 'Devil Ashikabi']] or [[BadPowersGoodPeople 'Grim Reaper' Sekirei]], or [[AlcoholInducedIdiocy crazy drunks]]!]]

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-->[[spoiler: Well, -->[[spoiler:Well, I've had enough! [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere There's no way in hell I'm going to stay here]], not when this freaking place has some kind of [[TheUnfettered demon murderer]] in it! Or that [[DemonHead freaky hannya ghost lady]], or [[TheDreaded 'Devil Ashikabi']] or [[BadPowersGoodPeople 'Grim Reaper' Sekirei]], or [[AlcoholInducedIdiocy crazy drunks]]!]]



** [[spoiler: The extent of Shirou's distortion, as pointed out by Rin and expanded upon by his explanation to Homura.]]
* BabiesEverAfter: Ten years after the final battle, [[spoiler: Kazehana is the only member of Shirou's flock to have had any children (two to be precise). Musubi and Tsukiumi have decided they're ready now. And Kazehana wants another.]]

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** [[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The extent of Shirou's distortion, as pointed out by Rin and expanded upon by his explanation to Homura.]]
* BabiesEverAfter: Ten years after the final battle, [[spoiler: Kazehana [[spoiler:Kazehana is the only member of Shirou's flock to have had any children (two to be precise). Musubi and Tsukiumi have decided they're ready now. And Kazehana wants another.]]



* BigBad: [[spoiler: Minaka, of all people.]]

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* BigBad: [[spoiler: Minaka, [[spoiler:Minaka, of all people.]]



* BittersweetEnding: A few elements of this are present, though only really noticeable to those well-versed in Nasuverse lore. [[spoiler: Shirou and his flock are now the first of the [[Literature/AngelNotes A-rays, and the Ultimate One of Jupiter had just been sighted]].]]

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* BittersweetEnding: A few elements of this are present, though only really noticeable to those well-versed in Nasuverse lore. [[spoiler: Shirou [[spoiler:Shirou and his flock are now the first of the [[Literature/AngelNotes A-rays, and the Ultimate One of Jupiter had just been sighted]].]]



* [[spoiler: BlankSlate: Another part of Shirou's distortion in the aftermath of the fire.]]

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* [[spoiler: BlankSlate: [[spoiler:BlankSlate: Another part of Shirou's distortion in the aftermath of the fire.]]



** [[spoiler: Minaka as well. He used guns, gas, and a Jinki as a Mystic Code. Shirou had to pull out [[FieldOfBlades Unlimited Blade Works to win]].]]

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** [[spoiler: Minaka [[spoiler:Minaka as well. He used guns, gas, and a Jinki as a Mystic Code. Shirou had to pull out [[FieldOfBlades Unlimited Blade Works to win]].]]



--> "I must get as strong as Shirou-san so I can fight beside him next time!"

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--> "I -->"I must get as strong as Shirou-san so I can fight beside him next time!"



--> '''Uzume''': "Damn, bro. When you say you like to be prepared, you really like to be prepared, dontcha?"
--> '''Shirou''': "I will not be caught unaware in this game. No matter what, I will be ready for it,"

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--> '''Uzume''': -->'''Uzume''': "Damn, bro. When you say you like to be prepared, you really like to be prepared, dontcha?"
--> '''Shirou''': -->'''Shirou''': "I will not be caught unaware in this game. No matter what, I will be ready for it,"



--> '''Shirou''': "Even after so short a period I felt it in my bones that a crying Takami was just somehow an affront to reality as a whole."

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--> '''Shirou''': -->'''Shirou''': "Even after so short a period I felt it in my bones that a crying Takami was just somehow an affront to reality as a whole."



--> "I sighed. I knew it wouldn't help my cause, but when confronted with so much cuteness it was either perform or be sentenced to the special hell that only people who made adorable children cry could be condemned to."

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--> "I -->"I sighed. I knew it wouldn't help my cause, but when confronted with so much cuteness it was either perform or be sentenced to the special hell that only people who made adorable children cry could be condemned to."



--> "[[spoiler:If my limbs weren't so securely held at the moment I probably would have wrapped my arms around her to try and comfort her. As it was, the only thing I could do was crane my head and neck so that I could keep her in view. Even though I had been mad at her for the last few days, I still couldn't repress the biological male urge to comfort a crying female.]]"

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--> "[[spoiler:If -->"[[spoiler:If my limbs weren't so securely held at the moment I probably would have wrapped my arms around her to try and comfort her. As it was, the only thing I could do was crane my head and neck so that I could keep her in view. Even though I had been mad at her for the last few days, I still couldn't repress the biological male urge to comfort a crying female.]]"



** [[spoiler: How everyone sees Karasuba after she winged herself to Shirou, once he broke her contract using Rule Breaker. Given that these are [[LoveFreak Sekirei]], just about '''every one of them ran'''. The ironic thing is that Karasuba was reacting to Shirou before she was winged.]]

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** [[spoiler: How [[spoiler:How everyone sees Karasuba after she winged herself to Shirou, once he broke her contract using Rule Breaker. Given that these are [[LoveFreak Sekirei]], just about '''every one of them ran'''. The ironic thing is that Karasuba was reacting to Shirou before she was winged.]]



** [[spoiler: Kuno is terminated by Uzume in chapter 43]].

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** [[spoiler: Kuno [[spoiler:Kuno is terminated by Uzume in chapter 43]].



--> "Use fists?" I echoed, my lips twisting into a distasteful sneer. "How? Should I have you two beat her until she can't resist, and then take her by force? Is that what you're proposing?"

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--> "Use -->"Use fists?" I echoed, my lips twisting into a distasteful sneer. "How? Should I have you two beat her until she can't resist, and then take her by force? Is that what you're proposing?"



--> "You can't seriously be considering using a manga as a reference book for... ...Wait, is that what I think it is?"

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--> "You -->"You can't seriously be considering using a manga as a reference book for... ...Wait, is that what I think it is?"



* {{Determinator}}: Shirou, [[spoiler: especially during his battle with Rin and Saber. Despite having an arm cut off, and rendered so sick from ''three consecutive'' Gandr shots that he can't even see straight or talk through the vomiting, he still manages to get up again to pull off a complete victory.]]

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* {{Determinator}}: Shirou, [[spoiler: especially [[spoiler:especially during his battle with Rin and Saber. Despite having an arm cut off, and rendered so sick from ''three consecutive'' Gandr shots that he can't even see straight or talk through the vomiting, he still manages to get up again to pull off a complete victory.]]



--> [[spoiler:I suppose I had an excuse, for not being ready for what came next. After all, as drenched as I was with fluid there was no way that I could have noticed the scent of blood as it grew even stronger.]]\\
[[spoiler: But that didn't change the fact that I was unprepared when with the noise like a stained glass window being shattered, a dark blur appeared above me at the edge of Akitsu's territory, scattering ice and frost in its wake as Karasuba, with eyes wide with glee launched herself at me, a cry of, "Sahashi!" being howled as the Black Sekirei bared her steel and her teeth at me.]]\\

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--> [[spoiler:I -->[[spoiler:I suppose I had an excuse, for not being ready for what came next. After all, as drenched as I was with fluid there was no way that I could have noticed the scent of blood as it grew even stronger.]]\\
[[spoiler: But [[spoiler:But that didn't change the fact that I was unprepared when with the noise like a stained glass window being shattered, a dark blur appeared above me at the edge of Akitsu's territory, scattering ice and frost in its wake as Karasuba, with eyes wide with glee launched herself at me, a cry of, "Sahashi!" being howled as the Black Sekirei bared her steel and her teeth at me.]]\\



---> I asked her something that I was suspicious about from the night before. "Last night, was the reason you didn't tell me you were still hungry because I didn't ask?" Was she so determined to obey me that she was willing to even let her body suffer for it?
---> "Ah," Akitsu murmured, and from the corner of my eye I caught her blushing. "I forgot," she admitted in a tone that I was beginning to suspect was Akitsu-speak for sheepish.

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---> I --->I asked her something that I was suspicious about from the night before. "Last night, was the reason you didn't tell me you were still hungry because I didn't ask?" Was she so determined to obey me that she was willing to even let her body suffer for it?
---> "Ah," --->"Ah," Akitsu murmured, and from the corner of my eye I caught her blushing. "I forgot," she admitted in a tone that I was beginning to suspect was Akitsu-speak for sheepish.



* {{Foreshadowing}}: Karasuba's muttering about [[spoiler: Benitsubasa]] after [[spoiler: her fight with Shirou]] implies that she is going to kill her. [[spoiler: In the penultimate chapter, she does.]]
** Similarly, Benitsubasa's angry remark about how Shirou and Karasuba are perfect for each other could be considered this after [[spoiler: the events of Chapter 43.]]

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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Karasuba's muttering about [[spoiler: Benitsubasa]] [[spoiler:Benitsubasa]] after [[spoiler: her [[spoiler:her fight with Shirou]] implies that she is going to kill her. [[spoiler: In [[spoiler:In the penultimate chapter, she does.]]
** Similarly, Benitsubasa's angry remark about how Shirou and Karasuba are perfect for each other could be considered this after [[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the events of Chapter 43.]]



** [[spoiler: Minaka in Chapter 42. It's his trigger as a magus.]]

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** [[spoiler: Minaka [[spoiler:Minaka in Chapter 42. It's his trigger as a magus.]]



* [[spoiler: GrievousHarmWithABody: Well, not exactly "harm" but… when confronted by Karasuba after his battle with Rin and Saber, Shirou throws his own severed arm at her. Karasuba is apparently so surprised by this that it actually hits her.]]

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* [[spoiler: GrievousHarmWithABody: [[spoiler:GrievousHarmWithABody: Well, not exactly "harm" but… when confronted by Karasuba after his battle with Rin and Saber, Shirou throws his own severed arm at her. Karasuba is apparently so surprised by this that it actually hits her.]]



* HalfHumanHybrid: [[spoiler: At the end of the fic, Shirou has become an [[Literature/AngelNotes A-Ray]] due to the Jinki.]]

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* HalfHumanHybrid: [[spoiler: At [[spoiler:At the end of the fic, Shirou has become an [[Literature/AngelNotes A-Ray]] due to the Jinki.]]



--> I wasn't quite sure what was happening to the female lead in this one and I had trouble believing that anyone could really enjoy what was being done to her, but from the expression on her face either she was an incredible actress or as depraved as they come.
--> "So that's what that was for," I muttered, feeling my own case of shock setting in as I recognized one of the contraptions that Yukari had gotten for me nearly a month ago being put to use, feeling lightheaded when I discovered precisely what the toy was meant for.
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: After Shirou uses Rule Breaker on Karasuba in the hopes of terminating her, she pounces on him and wings herself to him, meaning that all the knife did was unwing her.]]

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--> I -->I wasn't quite sure what was happening to the female lead in this one and I had trouble believing that anyone could really enjoy what was being done to her, but from the expression on her face either she was an incredible actress or as depraved as they come.
--> "So -->"So that's what that was for," I muttered, feeling my own case of shock setting in as I recognized one of the contraptions that Yukari had gotten for me nearly a month ago being put to use, feeling lightheaded when I discovered precisely what the toy was meant for.
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: After [[spoiler:After Shirou uses Rule Breaker on Karasuba in the hopes of terminating her, she pounces on him and wings herself to him, meaning that all the knife did was unwing her.]]



** And yet he's actually ''much better'' about technology than most magi. Which is... kind of sad, in and of itself. [[spoiler: Rin Tohsaka has no clue what a cellphone or a computer is which makes her even worse off than Shirou.]]

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** And yet he's actually ''much better'' about technology than most magi. Which is... kind of sad, in and of itself. [[spoiler: Rin [[spoiler:Rin Tohsaka has no clue what a cellphone or a computer is which makes her even worse off than Shirou.]] ]]



* LukeIAmYourFather: [[spoiler: Yukari reveals that Minaka is Shirou's father. He doesn't really care.]]

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* LukeIAmYourFather: [[spoiler: Yukari [[spoiler:Yukari reveals that Minaka is Shirou's father. He doesn't really care.]]



** In Chapter 14, as Kakizaki is retreating from his battle with Shirou, he spouts the old clichéd villain line: "Shirou Emiya. I'll remember this." Then in Chapter 37, just before Shirou [[spoiler: kills him]], he remarks:

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** In Chapter 14, as Kakizaki is retreating from his battle with Shirou, he spouts the old clichéd villain line: "Shirou Emiya. I'll remember this." Then in Chapter 37, just before Shirou [[spoiler: kills [[spoiler:kills him]], he remarks:



--> [[spoiler:For a moment I could see them making the connection. Me: capable of fighting against Miya for a prolonged period of time. Them: privileged rich kid bullies. Result:…]]
--> [[spoiler:"Oh my," Miya sighed. "I hope you didn't kill any of them." Uzume nodded her head in agreement, smirking as she did so.]]

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--> [[spoiler:For -->[[spoiler:For a moment I could see them making the connection. Me: capable of fighting against Miya for a prolonged period of time. Them: privileged rich kid bullies. Result:…]]
--> [[spoiler:"Oh -->[[spoiler:"Oh my," Miya sighed. "I hope you didn't kill any of them." Uzume nodded her head in agreement, smirking as she did so.]]



--> If this was some kind of anime or story of some sort, I was absolutely positive that I would have done something as clichéd as face-faulting at the snow woman's response. Since this was reality, I settled for palming my face and sighing.

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--> If -->If this was some kind of anime or story of some sort, I was absolutely positive that I would have done something as clichéd as face-faulting at the snow woman's response. Since this was reality, I settled for palming my face and sighing.



--> '''Shirou''' concerning Yukari: "There has got to be something wrong with that girl, Takami must have dropped her on her head a few times when she was a baby." [[spoiler:This is one of the few funny parts of the WhamEpisode.]]

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--> '''Shirou''' -->'''Shirou''' concerning Yukari: "There has got to be something wrong with that girl, Takami must have dropped her on her head a few times when she was a baby." [[spoiler:This is one of the few funny parts of the WhamEpisode.]]



--> They became fragile. They became dangerous. They became broken.

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--> They -->They became fragile. They became dangerous. They became broken.



--> "No!" I snapped, trying not to blush. "That one is completely inappropriate! Absolutely not!" I ordered her immediately.

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--> "No!" -->"No!" I snapped, trying not to blush. "That one is completely inappropriate! Absolutely not!" I ordered her immediately.



--> With numb hands I took the offered bag and looked in. "Agh!" I shrieked in a manly fashion, and threw the bag to the corner of the room, determined not to look in it. "No more! Absolutely not! Completely inappropriate! Sisters do not buy sex toys for their brothers!"

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--> With -->With numb hands I took the offered bag and looked in. "Agh!" I shrieked in a manly fashion, and threw the bag to the corner of the room, determined not to look in it. "No more! Absolutely not! Completely inappropriate! Sisters do not buy sex toys for their brothers!"



--> "Oh," a new voice interrupted, and I realized that at some point the figure of Miya in the courtyard had disappeared. Musubi was still in the courtyard, hand poised to block an attack that would never come and blinking in surprise as where her sparring partner had apparently vanished mid strike. "God isn't here right now," Miya continued from where I assumed she was standing directly behind Kazehana and I, her voice deceptively cheerful as she did so.

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--> "Oh," -->"Oh," a new voice interrupted, and I realized that at some point the figure of Miya in the courtyard had disappeared. Musubi was still in the courtyard, hand poised to block an attack that would never come and blinking in surprise as where her sparring partner had apparently vanished mid strike. "God isn't here right now," Miya continued from where I assumed she was standing directly behind Kazehana and I, her voice deceptively cheerful as she did so.



--> The only warning the three would be combatants received was a 'whooshing' noise, the sound of air rustling some kind of loose clothes, and then I was greeted by three nearly simultaneous 'thump' noises and three startled cries of 'ow', 'oof', and 'ugh'. When I pulled my head from my hands the scene before me had changed as though by magic. Yukari, Tsukiumi, and Musubi were all clutching the backs of their heads, looking absolutely flabbergasted at the sudden and unexpected assault. Miya had somehow managed to transport herself from her original seated position to the other end of the room, and was clutching a surprisingly clean ladle that had originally been intended to be used for serving the soup in her hand like it was a weapon.

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--> The -->The only warning the three would be combatants received was a 'whooshing' noise, the sound of air rustling some kind of loose clothes, and then I was greeted by three nearly simultaneous 'thump' noises and three startled cries of 'ow', 'oof', and 'ugh'. When I pulled my head from my hands the scene before me had changed as though by magic. Yukari, Tsukiumi, and Musubi were all clutching the backs of their heads, looking absolutely flabbergasted at the sudden and unexpected assault. Miya had somehow managed to transport herself from her original seated position to the other end of the room, and was clutching a surprisingly clean ladle that had originally been intended to be used for serving the soup in her hand like it was a weapon.



--> WordofGod says that: "For any references on what she looked like after Shirou was done accidentally making out with her, please refer to Manga/MahouSenseiNegima, the scene where Chachamaru [[spoiler:finally gets her pactio]]. Or whenever the cute little android girl is getting 'screwed', pun intended."

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--> WordofGod -->WordofGod says that: "For any references on what she looked like after Shirou was done accidentally making out with her, please refer to Manga/MahouSenseiNegima, the scene where Chachamaru [[spoiler:finally gets her pactio]]. Or whenever the cute little android girl is getting 'screwed', pun intended."



* {{Pride}}: [[spoiler: Shirou has reunited with Saber and Rin, who have a method of keeping the Clock Tower from experimenting on Shirou by having them stay with him. You'd think this would be just the thing to lead to a happy ending for him, right? Wrong. The only problem is that Rin's pride as a magus and human would never allow her to be reduced to the level of his [[Manga/{{Sekirei}} Alien Harem]] and she would rather go into exile than share him. Note that she staked her future on bringing him in and being with the Sekirei would allow her to keep her magic and be with her lover.]]

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* {{Pride}}: [[spoiler: Shirou [[spoiler:Shirou has reunited with Saber and Rin, who have a method of keeping the Clock Tower from experimenting on Shirou by having them stay with him. You'd think this would be just the thing to lead to a happy ending for him, right? Wrong. The only problem is that Rin's pride as a magus and human would never allow her to be reduced to the level of his [[Manga/{{Sekirei}} Alien Harem]] and she would rather go into exile than share him. Note that she staked her future on bringing him in and being with the Sekirei would allow her to keep her magic and be with her lover.]]



--> [[spoiler:"I've already seen [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight one secret tournament nearly end the world]], Asama-san, I'm not going to turn my back [[HarsherInHindsight on a second one that might do the same]]."]]

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--> [[spoiler:"I've -->[[spoiler:"I've already seen [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight one secret tournament nearly end the world]], Asama-san, I'm not going to turn my back [[HarsherInHindsight on a second one that might do the same]]."]]



* TheReveal: [[WhamEpisode The Twenty-Fourth Wing]][[spoiler: revealed the AwfulTruth of both himself and of the Holy Grail War without revealing the existence of {{Franchise/Nasuverse}} magic. The Twenty-Sixth Wing revealed the existence of Nasuverse magic and Shirou's true thoughts of why he didn't want to reveal it. The Twenty-Eighth Wing revealed the differences between the Holy Grail War and the Sekirei Plan, Shirou's goal in joining the plan, and Saber's identity to the residents. The Twenty-Ninth Wing reveals Miya's truth of the Sekirei Plan and about the Jinki, which can cause MASS GENOCIDE! The Thirty-First Wing reveals some more of the Nasuverse, Shirou's idea of [[CrapsackWorld "The Age]] [[AllMythsAreTrue of Gods"]], its connection to the Grail War, and more identities of some of the Heroic Spirits (Gilgamesh, Hercules, Medea, Cú Chulainn, and Sasaki Kojirō). The Thirty-Third Wing reveals more Nasuverse information, the spirits of the Earth Gaia and Alaya, the Akashic Record (The ROOT), the [[SpannerInTheWorks Counter]] [[DivineIntervention Force]] (which Shirou himself admits that he could be one for the Sekirei Plan), the [[DarkMessiah Counter Guardians]] which then leads to the final Servant of the Holy Grail War Archer and HIS Identity as an alternate future possibility of Shirou EMIYA, how they both differ from each other, and finally Reality Marbles and the reveal of his [[FieldOfBlades Unlimited Blade Works]]. In the Thirty-Seventh Wing, Shirou reveals more in depth of his tracing and that [[FieldOfBlades his body is literally made of swords]]. The Thirty-Eighth Wing reveals more information about his adopted father [[LightNovel/FateZero Kiritsugu Emiya, his role during the Fourth Holy Grail War and the aftermath with the fire]]. The Fortieth Wing reveals the AwfulTruth about Shirou's distortion brought about by the fire and [[ThatManIsDead the main reason he abandoned his original name of Minato Sahashi]].]]

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* TheReveal: [[WhamEpisode The Twenty-Fourth Wing]][[spoiler: revealed Wing]] [[spoiler:revealed the AwfulTruth of both himself and of the Holy Grail War without revealing the existence of {{Franchise/Nasuverse}} Franchise/{{Nasuverse}} magic. The Twenty-Sixth Wing revealed the existence of Nasuverse magic and Shirou's true thoughts of why he didn't want to reveal it. The Twenty-Eighth Wing revealed the differences between the Holy Grail War and the Sekirei Plan, Shirou's goal in joining the plan, and Saber's identity to the residents. The Twenty-Ninth Wing reveals Miya's truth of the Sekirei Plan and about the Jinki, which can cause MASS GENOCIDE! The Thirty-First Wing reveals some more of the Nasuverse, Shirou's idea of [[CrapsackWorld "The Age]] [[AllMythsAreTrue of Gods"]], its connection to the Grail War, and more identities of some of the Heroic Spirits (Gilgamesh, Hercules, Medea, Cú Chulainn, and Sasaki Kojirō). The Thirty-Third Wing reveals more Nasuverse information, the spirits of the Earth Gaia and Alaya, the Akashic Record (The ROOT), the [[SpannerInTheWorks Counter]] [[DivineIntervention Force]] (which Shirou himself admits that he could be one for the Sekirei Plan), the [[DarkMessiah Counter Guardians]] which then leads to the final Servant of the Holy Grail War Archer and HIS Identity as an alternate future possibility of Shirou EMIYA, how they both differ from each other, and finally Reality Marbles and the reveal of his [[FieldOfBlades Unlimited Blade Works]]. In the Thirty-Seventh Wing, Shirou reveals more in depth of his tracing and that [[FieldOfBlades his body is literally made of swords]]. The Thirty-Eighth Wing reveals more information about his adopted father [[LightNovel/FateZero Kiritsugu Emiya, his role during the Fourth Holy Grail War and the aftermath with the fire]]. The Fortieth Wing reveals the AwfulTruth about Shirou's distortion brought about by the fire and [[ThatManIsDead the main reason he abandoned his original name of Minato Sahashi]].]]



* SelfMadeOrphan: [[spoiler: Shirou, after he kills Minaka.]]

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* SelfMadeOrphan: [[spoiler: Shirou, [[spoiler:Shirou, after he kills Minaka.]]



*** [[spoiler: Though the last chapter states that Shirou still has some kind of relationship with Rin and Saber, plus his flock is working on getting them into the harem. And it's also implied that Miya's feelings for him are changing too.]]

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*** [[spoiler: Though [[spoiler:Though the last chapter states that Shirou still has some kind of relationship with Rin and Saber, plus his flock is working on getting them into the harem. And it's also implied that Miya's feelings for him are changing too.]]



* TheStationsOfTheCanon: Averted. Shirou moves into Izumo House and gets [[Manga/{{Sekirei}} Minato]]'s harem, but he also gets Akitsu, the circumstances of several of the wingings are vastly different, Yukari's relationship with her brother is quite different and elements of the {{Franchise/Nasuverse}} intervene.

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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: Averted. Shirou moves into Izumo House and gets [[Manga/{{Sekirei}} Minato]]'s harem, but he also gets Akitsu, the circumstances of several of the wingings are vastly different, Yukari's relationship with her brother is quite different and elements of the {{Franchise/Nasuverse}} Franchise/{{Nasuverse}} intervene.



** WordofGod has revealed that Shirou is in fact a Sekirei descendant, but that his powers are all from the {{Franchise/Nasuverse}}.

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** WordofGod has revealed that Shirou is in fact a Sekirei descendant, but that his powers are all from the {{Franchise/Nasuverse}}.Franchise/{{Nasuverse}}.



--> "Are you sure?" I hedged, not liking the sound of that. When Miya's eyes narrowed, I held up my hands in surrender. "I mean, I'm certain you can cook, but I wouldn't mind putting off the shed until later tonight." I winced slightly. There had been a body in the blaze I was about to root through and it would be a little awkward if I were to unearth some particularly incriminating piece of the corpse at an inappropriate moment. It might be best to wait for after dinner before I began the salvage operation. Seriously. That was my only reason. I was in no way nervous at the way Miya was trying to cut in on my kitchen time. Not nervous at all.

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--> "Are -->"Are you sure?" I hedged, not liking the sound of that. When Miya's eyes narrowed, I held up my hands in surrender. "I mean, I'm certain you can cook, but I wouldn't mind putting off the shed until later tonight." I winced slightly. There had been a body in the blaze I was about to root through and it would be a little awkward if I were to unearth some particularly incriminating piece of the corpse at an inappropriate moment. It might be best to wait for after dinner before I began the salvage operation. Seriously. That was my only reason. I was in no way nervous at the way Miya was trying to cut in on my kitchen time. Not nervous at all.



--> '''Shirou''': "I just prayed to the gods that she never decided to start using [[{{Irony}} eroge]] as a source of inspiration."

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--> '''Shirou''': -->'''Shirou''': "I just prayed to the gods that she never decided to start using [[{{Irony}} eroge]] as a source of inspiration."



--> '''Yukari''': "Oh, I knew I should have brought my H collection," she wailed. "Now what am I supposed to do?"

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--> '''Yukari''': -->'''Yukari''': "Oh, I knew I should have brought my H collection," she wailed. "Now what am I supposed to do?"



* [[spoiler: ThatManIsDead: The main reason why Shirou threw away his Minato Sahashi name.]]

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* [[spoiler: ThatManIsDead: [[spoiler:ThatManIsDead: The main reason why Shirou threw away his Minato Sahashi name.]]



--> '''Shirou''': "If nothing else, [[spoiler:I had to give Akitsu this much]]: when she decided to kill someone she did so in a very thorough manner."

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--> '''Shirou''': -->'''Shirou''': "If nothing else, [[spoiler:I had to give Akitsu this much]]: when she decided to kill someone she did so in a very thorough manner."



* TokenEvilTeammate: [[spoiler: Karasuba becomes this to Shirou's flock after his use of Rule Breaker removes her connection to Natsuo and, in turn, causes her to make herself Shirou's Sekirei instead.]]

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* TokenEvilTeammate: [[spoiler: Karasuba [[spoiler:Karasuba becomes this to Shirou's flock after his use of Rule Breaker removes her connection to Natsuo and, in turn, causes her to make herself Shirou's Sekirei instead.]]



** As of the DistantFinale, his harem consists of Akitsu, Matsu, [[RomanticTwoGirlFriendship Musubi, Tsuikiumi]], [[spoiler: [[AttractiveBentGender Homura]], [[LoveFreak Kazehana]], [[JailBaitWait Kuu]], and [[InLoveWithYourCarnage Karasuba]], also with the implication that [[TeacherStudentRomance Miya]], [[BiTheWay Uzume and Chiyo]], and [[SexWithTheEx Saber and Rin]] are also tentatively involved in some capacity]], bringing his total to thirteen. It's a good thing most of them are willing to double up on the sleeping schedule.
* UnwittingPawn: [[spoiler: Shirou is this to Higa, though indirectly. By providing Uzume with information about the targets Higa told her to take out, Shirou is aiding the man.]]

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** As of the DistantFinale, his harem consists of Akitsu, Matsu, [[RomanticTwoGirlFriendship Musubi, Tsuikiumi]], [[spoiler: [[AttractiveBentGender [[spoiler:[[AttractiveBentGender Homura]], [[LoveFreak Kazehana]], [[JailBaitWait Kuu]], and [[InLoveWithYourCarnage Karasuba]], also with the implication that [[TeacherStudentRomance Miya]], [[BiTheWay Uzume and Chiyo]], and [[SexWithTheEx Saber and Rin]] are also tentatively involved in some capacity]], bringing his total to thirteen. It's a good thing most of them are willing to double up on the sleeping schedule.
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* UnwittingPawn: [[spoiler: Shirou [[spoiler:Shirou is this to Higa, though indirectly. By providing Uzume with information about the targets Higa told her to take out, Shirou is aiding the man.]]



--> [[spoiler: '''Rin:''']] "Inverse ultracompact counter-crystaline [[TastesLikePurple purple]]!"
* WellIntentionedExtremist: [[spoiler: Minaka, as a former member of Atlas, wanted to prevent the end of the world, but ultimately came to the conclusion that it was impossible. But, upon finding the Sekirei, he decided to make humanity strong enough to survive even after the [[Literature/AngelNotes planet's death]].]]

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--> [[spoiler: '''Rin:''']] -->[[spoiler:'''Rin:''']] "Inverse ultracompact counter-crystaline [[TastesLikePurple purple]]!"
* WellIntentionedExtremist: [[spoiler: Minaka, [[spoiler:Minaka, as a former member of Atlas, wanted to prevent the end of the world, but ultimately came to the conclusion that it was impossible. But, upon finding the Sekirei, he decided to make humanity strong enough to survive even after the [[Literature/AngelNotes planet's death]].]]



** Chapter 38: [[spoiler: Rin and Saber show up.]]
** Chapter 40: [[spoiler: Shirou must fight Rin and Saber to help them return to the Clock Tower; if Shirou loses, he must go back with them and his role in the Sekirei Plan ENDS.]]
** Chapter 41: [[spoiler: The "emotional climax" of the story, where Shirou puts a geas on Rin and himself, forbidding them from contact and unable to approach each other]]
** Chapter 42: [[spoiler: Minaka is a magus with a plan to reach the Akasha, despite the fact that it may result in everyone who has Sekirei blood dying. That's millions, if not ''billions'', of people.]]

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** Chapter 38: [[spoiler: Rin [[spoiler:Rin and Saber show up.]]
** Chapter 40: [[spoiler: Shirou [[spoiler:Shirou must fight Rin and Saber to help them return to the Clock Tower; if Shirou loses, he must go back with them and his role in the Sekirei Plan ENDS.]]
** Chapter 41: [[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The "emotional climax" of the story, where Shirou puts a geas on Rin and himself, forbidding them from contact and unable to approach each other]]
** Chapter 42: [[spoiler: Minaka [[spoiler:Minaka is a magus with a plan to reach the Akasha, despite the fact that it may result in everyone who has Sekirei blood dying. That's millions, if not ''billions'', of people.]]



-->[[spoiler:[[PlayfulHacker Matsu]]: "I mean the tournament that happens in [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Fuyuki]] [[{{Franchise/Nasuverse}} City]] of course!"]] Cue the WhamEpisode.
** [[spoiler: In Forty-Second Wing:]]
--> [[spoiler: Hiroto Minaka: "It certainly took you long enough, Sealing Designee Emiya."]]
* WalkingTheEarth: [[spoiler: Yukari and Shiina go around stopping wars and helping people after Shirou kills Minaka.]]

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-->[[spoiler:[[PlayfulHacker Matsu]]: "I mean the tournament that happens in [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Fuyuki]] [[{{Franchise/Nasuverse}} [[Franchise/{{Nasuverse}} City]] of course!"]] Cue the WhamEpisode.
** [[spoiler: In [[spoiler:In Forty-Second Wing:]]
--> [[spoiler: Hiroto -->[[spoiler:Hiroto Minaka: "It certainly took you long enough, Sealing Designee Emiya."]]
* WalkingTheEarth: [[spoiler: Yukari [[spoiler:Yukari and Shiina go around stopping wars and helping people after Shirou kills Minaka.]]



--> "I was cruising through the wiki for facts about apostles and it turned out the idea would never have worked, not without the type-lunatics destroying me forever."

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--> "I -->"I was cruising through the wiki for facts about apostles and it turned out the idea would never have worked, not without the type-lunatics destroying me forever."
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--->'''Shirou''': "What was so special about me? Was it [[{{Tsukihime}} some kind of gland]] or something? Did I unconsciously produce pheromones that caused all the Sekirei nearby to automatically want to jump me?"

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--->'''Shirou''': "What was so special about me? Was it [[{{Tsukihime}} [[VisualNovel/{{Tsukihime}} some kind of gland]] or something? Did I unconsciously produce pheromones that caused all the Sekirei nearby to automatically want to jump me?"



** While discussing "True Magic" [[spoiler:with his flock]], Shirou mentions [[{{Tsukihime}} Zelretch and Aoko Aozaki]], two users of said magic, though the latter is not actually named in-story. The funny thing is, Shirou is actually ''[[EntertaininglyWrong wrong]]'' about what Aoko's "Magic Blue" is. It's related to TimeTravel, but nobody can really blame him for coming to the conclusion that it's cold fusion instead, because Aoko is ''very'' good at blowing things up.

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** While discussing "True Magic" [[spoiler:with his flock]], Shirou mentions [[{{Tsukihime}} [[VisualNovel/{{Tsukihime}} Zelretch and Aoko Aozaki]], two users of said magic, though the latter is not actually named in-story. The funny thing is, Shirou is actually ''[[EntertaininglyWrong wrong]]'' about what Aoko's "Magic Blue" is. It's related to TimeTravel, but nobody can really blame him for coming to the conclusion that it's cold fusion instead, because Aoko is ''very'' good at blowing things up.
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* TheReveal: [[WhamEpisode The Twenty-Fourth Wing]][[spoiler: revealed the AwfulTruth of both himself and of the Holy Grail War without revealing the existence of {{Nasuverse}} magic. The Twenty-Sixth Wing revealed the existence of {{Nasuverse}} magic and Shirou's true thoughts of why he didn't want to reveal it. The Twenty-Eighth Wing revealed the differences between the Holy Grail War and the Sekirei Plan, Shirou's goal in joining the plan, and Saber's identity to the residents. The Twenty-Ninth Wing reveals Miya's truth of the Sekirei Plan and about the Jinki, which can cause MASS GENOCIDE! The Thirty-First Wing reveals some more of the Nasuverse, Shirou's idea of [[CrapsackWorld "The Age]] [[AllMythsAreTrue of Gods"]], its connection to the Grail War, and more identities of some of the Heroic Spirits (Gilgamesh, Hercules, Medea, Cú Chulainn, and Sasaki Kojirō). The Thirty-Third Wing reveals more Nasuverse information, the spirits of the Earth Gaia and Alaya, the Akashic Record (The ROOT), the [[SpannerInTheWorks Counter]] [[DivineIntervention Force]] (which Shirou himself admits that he could be one for the Sekirei Plan), the [[DarkMessiah Counter Guardians]] which then leads to the final Servant of the Holy Grail War Archer and HIS Identity as an alternate future possibility of Shirou EMIYA, how they both differ from each other, and finally Reality Marbles and the reveal of his [[FieldOfBlades Unlimited Blade Works]]. In the Thirty-Seventh Wing, Shirou reveals more in depth of his tracing and that [[FieldOfBlades his body is literally made of swords]]. The Thirty-Eighth Wing reveals more information about his adopted father [[LightNovel/FateZero Kiritsugu Emiya, his role during the Fourth Holy Grail War and the aftermath with the fire]]. The Fortieth Wing reveals the AwfulTruth about Shirou's distortion brought about by the fire and [[ThatManIsDead the main reason he abandoned his original name of Minato Sahashi]].]]

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* TheReveal: [[WhamEpisode The Twenty-Fourth Wing]][[spoiler: revealed the AwfulTruth of both himself and of the Holy Grail War without revealing the existence of {{Nasuverse}} {{Franchise/Nasuverse}} magic. The Twenty-Sixth Wing revealed the existence of {{Nasuverse}} Nasuverse magic and Shirou's true thoughts of why he didn't want to reveal it. The Twenty-Eighth Wing revealed the differences between the Holy Grail War and the Sekirei Plan, Shirou's goal in joining the plan, and Saber's identity to the residents. The Twenty-Ninth Wing reveals Miya's truth of the Sekirei Plan and about the Jinki, which can cause MASS GENOCIDE! The Thirty-First Wing reveals some more of the Nasuverse, Shirou's idea of [[CrapsackWorld "The Age]] [[AllMythsAreTrue of Gods"]], its connection to the Grail War, and more identities of some of the Heroic Spirits (Gilgamesh, Hercules, Medea, Cú Chulainn, and Sasaki Kojirō). The Thirty-Third Wing reveals more Nasuverse information, the spirits of the Earth Gaia and Alaya, the Akashic Record (The ROOT), the [[SpannerInTheWorks Counter]] [[DivineIntervention Force]] (which Shirou himself admits that he could be one for the Sekirei Plan), the [[DarkMessiah Counter Guardians]] which then leads to the final Servant of the Holy Grail War Archer and HIS Identity as an alternate future possibility of Shirou EMIYA, how they both differ from each other, and finally Reality Marbles and the reveal of his [[FieldOfBlades Unlimited Blade Works]]. In the Thirty-Seventh Wing, Shirou reveals more in depth of his tracing and that [[FieldOfBlades his body is literally made of swords]]. The Thirty-Eighth Wing reveals more information about his adopted father [[LightNovel/FateZero Kiritsugu Emiya, his role during the Fourth Holy Grail War and the aftermath with the fire]]. The Fortieth Wing reveals the AwfulTruth about Shirou's distortion brought about by the fire and [[ThatManIsDead the main reason he abandoned his original name of Minato Sahashi]].]]



* TheStationsOfTheCanon: Averted. Shirou moves into Izumo House and gets [[Manga/{{Sekirei}} Minato]]'s harem, but he also gets Akitsu, the circumstances of several of the wingings are vastly different, Yukari's relationship with her brother is quite different and elements of the {{Nasuverse}} intervene.

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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: Averted. Shirou moves into Izumo House and gets [[Manga/{{Sekirei}} Minato]]'s harem, but he also gets Akitsu, the circumstances of several of the wingings are vastly different, Yukari's relationship with her brother is quite different and elements of the {{Nasuverse}} {{Franchise/Nasuverse}} intervene.



** WordofGod has revealed that Shirou is in fact a Sekirei descendant, but that his powers are all from the {{Nasuverse}}.

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** WordofGod has revealed that Shirou is in fact a Sekirei descendant, but that his powers are all from the {{Nasuverse}}.{{Franchise/Nasuverse}}.



-->[[spoiler:[[PlayfulHacker Matsu]]: "I mean the tournament that happens in [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Fuyuki]] [[{{Nasuverse}} City]] of course!"]] Cue the WhamEpisode.

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-->[[spoiler:[[PlayfulHacker Matsu]]: "I mean the tournament that happens in [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Fuyuki]] [[{{Nasuverse}} [[{{Franchise/Nasuverse}} City]] of course!"]] Cue the WhamEpisode.
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