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''Goodbye, June'' is a story by Tropers/KaBlamoid4Life, about the relationship between ''WesternAnimation/KaBlam'''s Henry and June, and the feelings and thoughts they have about each other and being separated. It's sad, touching, and at times pretty funny, all at once - while avoiding tasting like diabetes. Definitely leaves you with a warm and fuzzy feeling after reading it, especially if you have fond memories of watching ''WesternAnimation/KaBlam'' as a kid or are a fan.
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''Goodbye, June'' is a story by Tropers/KaBlamoid4Life, about the relationship between ''WesternAnimation/KaBlam'''s Henry and June, and the feelings and thoughts they have about each other and being separated. It's sad, touching, and at times pretty funny, all at once - while avoiding tasting like diabetes. Definitely leaves you with a warm and fuzzy feeling after reading it, especially if you have fond memories of watching ''WesternAnimation/KaBlam'' as a kid or are a fan.
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''Goodbye, June'' is a story by Tropers/KaBlamoid4Life, about the relationship between ''WesternAnimation/KaBlam'''s Henry and June, and the feelings and thoughts they have about each other and being separated. It's sad, touching, and at times pretty funny, all at once - while avoiding [[TastesLikeDiabetes tasting like diabetes]].diabetes. Definitely leaves you with a warm and fuzzy feeling after reading it, especially if you have fond memories of watching ''WesternAnimation/KaBlam'' as a kid or are a fan.
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* CrossOver: In a mild example of this trope, it's mentioned in the original version that June makes friends with [[HeyArnold Helga]].
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''Goodbye, June'' is a story by Tropers/KaBlamoid4Life, about the relationship between ''KaBlam'''s ''WesternAnimation/KaBlam'''s Henry and June, and the feelings and thoughts they have about each other and being separated. It's sad, touching, and at times pretty funny, all at once - while avoiding [[TastesLikeDiabetes tasting like diabetes]]. Definitely leaves you with a warm and fuzzy feeling after reading it, especially if you have fond memories of watching ''KaBlam'' ''WesternAnimation/KaBlam'' as a kid or are a fan.
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''Goodbye, June'' is a story by Tropers/KaBlamoid4Life, about the relationship between ''KaBlam'''s Henry and June, and the feelings and thoughts they have about each other and being separated. It's sad, touching, and at times pretty funny, all at once - while avoiding [[TastesLikeDiabetes tasting like diabetes]]. Definitely leaves you with a warm and fuzzy feeling after reading it, especially if you have fond memories of watching ''KaBlam'' as a kid or are a fan.
Peep it [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6178736/1/KaBlam_Goodbye_June here.]]
Recently, [=KaBlamoid=] 4 Life revisited the story, fleshing it out, adding new scenes and rewriting parts of it. It's a big improvement over the original. Peep ''it'' [[http://s1.zetaboards.com/The_KaBlam_Forum/topic/3845708/1/ here.]]
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* BigApplesauce: Where June and her dad move to.
* BigfootSasquatchAndYeti: Mr. Foot, the stagehand from the show, appears in a couple chapters.
* CallingTheOldManOut: In the original version only: When [[spoiler: her dad reveals that he's just been fired for stealing money, June snaps and chews him out for doing something so foolish and moving them to New York in the first place]]. This was removed in the re-do, to make him seem less asshole-ish.
* CrossOver: In a mild example of this trope, it's mentioned in the original version that June makes friends with [[HeyArnold Helga]].
* DeadpanSnarker: June, of course. She's a bit dialed-down from the show (being all depressed about being away and all), but it comes through in places.
* NightmareFetishist: June is fascinated by spiders.
* [[PrecisionFStrike Precision S Strike]]: The story features very little swearing, and what little there is is very tame. Which makes it all the more surprising when June tells her dad "You're on (her) Shit List" for moving them away.
* PuppyLove: In the show, Henry and June's relationship is mostly hinted at. This story is a progression of that, having them become closer than ever... and then June has to leave. [[spoiler: Henry tells his mom that he "might" love June, and it's mentioned that June's crushed on Henry since preschool. And when June comes back, not only do they kiss, but Henry also asks June if she'll marry him when the time comes... and she agrees. Though Henry ''does'' mention that [[LampshadeHanging it's a ways off, and that they're probably too young to be having this conversation.]]]]
* ShoutOut: Several, especially ''Film/{{Ghostbusters}}''.
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Peep it [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6178736/1/KaBlam_Goodbye_June here.]]
Recently, [=KaBlamoid=] 4 Life revisited the story, fleshing it out, adding new scenes and rewriting parts of it. It's a big improvement over the original. Peep ''it'' [[http://s1.zetaboards.com/The_KaBlam_Forum/topic/3845708/1/ here.]]
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* BigApplesauce: Where June and her dad move to.
* BigfootSasquatchAndYeti: Mr. Foot, the stagehand from the show, appears in a couple chapters.
* CallingTheOldManOut: In the original version only: When [[spoiler: her dad reveals that he's just been fired for stealing money, June snaps and chews him out for doing something so foolish and moving them to New York in the first place]]. This was removed in the re-do, to make him seem less asshole-ish.
* CrossOver: In a mild example of this trope, it's mentioned in the original version that June makes friends with [[HeyArnold Helga]].
* DeadpanSnarker: June, of course. She's a bit dialed-down from the show (being all depressed about being away and all), but it comes through in places.
* NightmareFetishist: June is fascinated by spiders.
* [[PrecisionFStrike Precision S Strike]]: The story features very little swearing, and what little there is is very tame. Which makes it all the more surprising when June tells her dad "You're on (her) Shit List" for moving them away.
* PuppyLove: In the show, Henry and June's relationship is mostly hinted at. This story is a progression of that, having them become closer than ever... and then June has to leave. [[spoiler: Henry tells his mom that he "might" love June, and it's mentioned that June's crushed on Henry since preschool. And when June comes back, not only do they kiss, but Henry also asks June if she'll marry him when the time comes... and she agrees. Though Henry ''does'' mention that [[LampshadeHanging it's a ways off, and that they're probably too young to be having this conversation.]]]]
* ShoutOut: Several, especially ''Film/{{Ghostbusters}}''.
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''Goodbye, June'' is a story by Tropers/KaBlamoid4Life, about the relationship between ''KaBlam'''s Henry and June, and the feelings and thoughts they have about each other and being separated. It's sad, touching, and at times pretty funny, all at once - while avoiding [[TastesLikeDiabetes tasting like diabetes]]. Definitely leaves you with a warm and fuzzy feeling after reading it, especially if you have fond memories of watching ''KaBlam'' as a kid or are a fan.
Peep it [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6178736/1/KaBlam_Goodbye_June here.]]
Recently, [=KaBlamoid=] 4 Life revisited the story, fleshing it out, adding new scenes and rewriting parts of it. It's a big improvement over the original. Peep ''it'' [[http://s1.zetaboards.com/The_KaBlam_Forum/topic/3845708/1/ here.]]
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* BigApplesauce: Where June and her dad move to.
* BigfootSasquatchAndYeti: Mr. Foot, the stagehand from the show, appears in a couple chapters.
* CallingTheOldManOut: In the original version only: When [[spoiler: her dad reveals that he's just been fired for stealing money, June snaps and chews him out for doing something so foolish and moving them to New York in the first place]]. This was removed in the re-do, to make him seem less asshole-ish.
* CrossOver: In a mild example of this trope, it's mentioned in the original version that June makes friends with [[HeyArnold Helga]].
* DeadpanSnarker: June, of course. She's a bit dialed-down from the show (being all depressed about being away and all), but it comes through in places.
* NightmareFetishist: June is fascinated by spiders.
* [[PrecisionFStrike Precision S Strike]]: The story features very little swearing, and what little there is is very tame. Which makes it all the more surprising when June tells her dad "You're on (her) Shit List" for moving them away.
* PuppyLove: In the show, Henry and June's relationship is mostly hinted at. This story is a progression of that, having them become closer than ever... and then June has to leave. [[spoiler: Henry tells his mom that he "might" love June, and it's mentioned that June's crushed on Henry since preschool. And when June comes back, not only do they kiss, but Henry also asks June if she'll marry him when the time comes... and she agrees. Though Henry ''does'' mention that [[LampshadeHanging it's a ways off, and that they're probably too young to be having this conversation.]]]]
* ShoutOut: Several, especially ''Film/{{Ghostbusters}}''.
* {{WAFF}}
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Peep it [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6178736/1/KaBlam_Goodbye_June here.]]
Recently, [=KaBlamoid=] 4 Life revisited the story, fleshing it out, adding new scenes and rewriting parts of it. It's a big improvement over the original. Peep ''it'' [[http://s1.zetaboards.com/The_KaBlam_Forum/topic/3845708/1/ here.]]
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!!Tropes:
* BigApplesauce: Where June and her dad move to.
* BigfootSasquatchAndYeti: Mr. Foot, the stagehand from the show, appears in a couple chapters.
* CallingTheOldManOut: In the original version only: When [[spoiler: her dad reveals that he's just been fired for stealing money, June snaps and chews him out for doing something so foolish and moving them to New York in the first place]]. This was removed in the re-do, to make him seem less asshole-ish.
* CrossOver: In a mild example of this trope, it's mentioned in the original version that June makes friends with [[HeyArnold Helga]].
* DeadpanSnarker: June, of course. She's a bit dialed-down from the show (being all depressed about being away and all), but it comes through in places.
* NightmareFetishist: June is fascinated by spiders.
* [[PrecisionFStrike Precision S Strike]]: The story features very little swearing, and what little there is is very tame. Which makes it all the more surprising when June tells her dad "You're on (her) Shit List" for moving them away.
* PuppyLove: In the show, Henry and June's relationship is mostly hinted at. This story is a progression of that, having them become closer than ever... and then June has to leave. [[spoiler: Henry tells his mom that he "might" love June, and it's mentioned that June's crushed on Henry since preschool. And when June comes back, not only do they kiss, but Henry also asks June if she'll marry him when the time comes... and she agrees. Though Henry ''does'' mention that [[LampshadeHanging it's a ways off, and that they're probably too young to be having this conversation.]]]]
* ShoutOut: Several, especially ''Film/{{Ghostbusters}}''.
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Being based on a comedy show, it definitely has its share of funny moments. Three words: [[spoiler: "You're welcome, Henster."]]
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: It's one of [[{{WAFF}} those]] fics. But especially [[spoiler: the last chapter in the original version, and all of the last two chapters of the revisit]]. And the tree.
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: It's one of [[{{WAFF}} those]] fics. But especially [[spoiler: the last chapter in the original version, and all of the last two chapters of the revisit]]. And the tree.
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* PuppyLove: In the show, Henry and June's relationship is mostly hinted at. This story is a progression of that, having them become closer than ever... and then June has to leave. [[spoiler: Henry tells his mom that he "might" love June, and it's mentioned that June's crushed on Henry since preschool. And when June comes back, not only do they kiss, but Henry also asks June if she'll marry him when the time comes... and she agrees. Though Henry ''does'' mention that [[LampshadeHanging it's a ways off, and that they're probably too young to be having this conversation.]]]]
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* ToyShip: In the show, Henry and June's relationship is mostly hinted at. This story is a progression of that, having them become closer than ever... and then June has to leave. [[spoiler: Henry tells his mom that he "might" love June, and it's mentioned that June's crushed on Henry since preschool. And when June comes back, not only do they kiss, but Henry also asks June if she'll marry him when the time comes... and she agrees. Though Henry ''does'' mention that [[LampshadeHanging it's a ways off, and that they're probably too young to be having this conversation.]]]]
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* CrossOver: In a mild example of this trope, it's mentioned that June makes friends with [[HeyArnold Helga]].
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* BigfootSasquatchAndYeti: Mr. Foot, the stagehand from the show, appears in a couple chapters.
* CallingTheOldManOut: In the original version only: When [[spoiler: her dad reveals that he's just been fired for stealing money, June snaps and chews him out for doing something so foolish and moving them to New York in the firstplace]].
place]]. This was removed in the re-do, to make him seem less asshole-ish.
* CrossOver: In a mild example of this trope, it's mentioned in the original version that June makes friends with [[HeyArnold Helga]].
* CallingTheOldManOut: In the original version only: When [[spoiler: her dad reveals that he's just been fired for stealing money, June snaps and chews him out for doing something so foolish and moving them to New York in the first
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: It's one of [[{{WAFF}} those]] fics. But especially [[spoiler: the final chapter...nearly all of it]]. And the tree.
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: It's one of [[{{WAFF}} those]] fics. But especially [[spoiler: the final chapter...nearly last chapter in the original version, and all of it]].the last two chapters of the revisit]]. And the tree.
* DeadpanSnarker: June, of course. She's a bit dialed-down from the show (being all depressed about being away and all), but it comes through in places.
* DeadpanSnarker: June, of course. She's a bit dialed-down from the show (being all depressed about being away and all), but it comes through in places.
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* ShoutOut: Several, including ''GrandTheftAutoIV'' and especially ''GhostBusters''.