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** The first time that Yui drops her act of being an innocent child, it's to correct Yulier [[DudeNotIronic on what irony is]], as well as [[LittleMissSnarker diss Thinker for being stupid enough to fall for an obvious trap and Yulier for falling in love with such an idiot]]. It's what starts to endear her to her "parents", and what starts to inform the audience of how NotSoDifferent she is from them.
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** During Kayaba's speech to the captive players at the start of the death game, he's AffablyEvil with his victims, makes movie references [[PopCulturalOsmosisFailure they don't get]] and has to quickly bring up media to make his points, and generally rambles and makes mistakes like accidentally muting himself. It's a pretty big hint that [[spoiler:he's not a villainous mastermind, but someone [[ExhaustionInducedStupidy loopy from sleep deprivation]] and desperately slapping together an "EvilPlan" to cover for the fact that he just discovered a game glitch that kills people.]]

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** During Kayaba's speech to the captive players at the start of the death game, he's AffablyEvil with his victims, makes movie references [[PopCulturalOsmosisFailure they don't get]] and has to quickly bring up media to make his points, and generally rambles and makes mistakes like accidentally muting himself. It's a pretty big hint that [[spoiler:he's not a villainous mastermind, but someone [[ExhaustionInducedStupidy [[ExhaustionInducedIdiocy loopy from sleep deprivation]] and desperately slapping together an "EvilPlan" to cover for the fact that he just discovered a game glitch that kills people.]]
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* ''WebVideo/FiftyPercentOff'' lets everyone know what they're in for with its take on [[TheCutie Nagisa]], AKA [[FanNickname "Thugisa."]]
-->'''Nagisa:''' [[ScaryBlackMan What's up, sluts? Guess who just got out of prison?]]


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** Kirito is introduced one-shotting a demonic boar enemy in the titular video game that Klein [[AdaptationalWimp couldn't defeat]], then launching into a long, sarcastic story mocking Klein instead of carrying on with his game session. Then after the BigBad announces the start of the [[TheMostDangerousVideoGame death game]], Klein notes that while Kirito ''is'' "the most unbearable asshole I've ever met," he does see the advantage of them teaming up and offers to form a guild with him... but Kirito has already run off crying because the guy he was just mocking called him names. This establishes that 1) Kirito is very good at the game, [[SmugSuper and well aware of it]], 2) his idea of entertainment is to make fun of the less-skilled players around him, and 3) as much of a {{Jerkass}} as he acts, he's in fact [[BrokenAce deeply insecure.]]
** During Kayaba's speech to the captive players at the start of the death game, he's AffablyEvil with his victims, makes movie references [[PopCulturalOsmosisFailure they don't get]] and has to quickly bring up media to make his points, and generally rambles and makes mistakes like accidentally muting himself. It's a pretty big hint that [[spoiler:he's not a villainous mastermind, but someone [[ExhaustionInducedStupidy loopy from sleep deprivation]] and desperately slapping together an "EvilPlan" to cover for the fact that he just discovered a game glitch that kills people.]]
** In her introductory episode, Asuna is able to instantly see through Kirito's aloof front and realize he's an anti-social mess, foreshadowing that beneath her MaskOfSanity she's NotSoDifferent from him.
** In Suguha's debut scene in the second season, she thrashes her brother during a kendo match, then launches into a long, sarcastic story mocking him instead of carrying on with her day... or in other words, she's just as much a {{Jerkass}} in real life as Kirito was online before his CharacterDevelopment, and presumably who he modeled his online persona on. Then when we first see her "Leafa" character in ''Alfheim Online'', she's [[DeliberatelyDistressedDamsel trying to]] act like a DamselInDistress, making it clear that while Kirito goes online to indulge in his PowerFantasy, Leafa's trying to do the complete opposite.


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* [[spoiler:Summer Rose]] [[MamaBear makes her personality quite clear]] with the very first words she says in her official debut. For context, Team RWBY has just been thoroughly wiped out by [[spoiler:Briar Breeze, the Maiden of Summer.]]
-->'''[[spoiler:Summer Rose]]:'''"Don't you touch her, you hot-headed ''[[PrecisionFStrike bitch]]."''

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-->'''[[spoiler:Summer Rose]]:'''"Don't Rose]]:''' Don't you touch her, you hot-headed ''[[PrecisionFStrike bitch]]."''
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* ''Fanfic/LeaveForMendeleiev'':
** [[RichBitch Chloé]] introduces herself by tripping Marinette as she passes by, then leering down at her while taunting her for thinking that [[ForWantOfANail transferring out of Mme Bustier's class]] was honestly going to protect [[TheBully from her]]. This immediately drives home just how much Chloé is used to getting her way, and that she has no intention of letting her favorite victim slip from her grasp.
** While Adrien's reputation as Gabriel's model son precedes him, he first appears when Marinette [[InSpiteOfANail is stranded by a storm after school]]. Despite seeing that she's stuck, he offers little more than an apologetic smile as he hurries past; she's not one of his classmates, and he's not trying to clear up any misunderstandings with her, so he isn't motivated to help her out as he doesn't see any immediate benefit for himself.
** Alya first appears as Lady Wifi, having gotten akumatized offscreen for [[InSpiteOfANail getting punished for breaking into Chloé's locker]]. She gleefully 'exposes' her as the heroine Ladybug; after the real deal intervenes, she proceeds [[SecretChaser to chase after her]] demanding she reveal her SecretIdentity. This shows that she's prone to leaping to conclusions and is more interested in GoingForTheBigScoop than considering the potential consequences of her actions -- even being victimized by Hawkmoth herself doesn't make her realize what kind of problems exposing their heroes could create.



* ''Fanfic/CrimsonAndEmerald''
** Hawks shows himself to be proactive as he goes to Hosu to help the local pros capture Stain out of his own volition. He then shows himself to be a cautious ReasonableAuthorityFigure as he listens to Tokoyami's concerns that his classmate might be in danger when Tokoyami is sent his classmate's coordinates without explanation. Hawks worries that Tokoyami's might be hurt or being attacked so he accompanies Tokoyami to classmate's coordinates.

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** Hawks shows himself to be proactive as he goes to Hosu to help the local pros capture Stain out of his own volition. He then shows himself to be a cautious ReasonableAuthorityFigure as he listens to Tokoyami's concerns that his classmate might be in danger when Tokoyami is sent his classmate's coordinates without explanation. Hawks worries Worrying that Tokoyami's they might be hurt or being attacked so attacked, he accompanies Tokoyami to his classmate's coordinates.



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* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/26361532/chapters/64205539 Science: Saving Humanity without Regard to Morals or Ethics]]'': Kaede Agano and Satsuki Ooi are introduced carving up Shamshel's corpse then cooking and eating it. Aoi Mogami criticizes them for doing so while knee deep in blood and gore.
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** Shizune kills [[spoiler:the defenseless Toki]], and then immediately prays that she hopes her victim goes to Hell.

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* ''Fanfic/{{Essence}}'': Ash arrives at Professor Oak's lab 30 minutes early. This shows his dedication and excitement at becoming a Pokémon trainer. When he meets Growlithe, he calmly decides to stare it in the eyes and get on eye-level with it, which shows Growlithe that he wants respect and views it as a partner, not something to look down upon. Growlite likes Ash's compassionate nature.

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* ''Fanfic/{{Essence}}'': Ash arrives at Professor Oak's lab 30 minutes early. This shows his dedication and excitement at becoming a Pokémon trainer. When he meets Growlithe, he calmly decides to stare it in the eyes and get on eye-level with it, which shows Growlithe that he wants respect and views it as a partner, not something to look down upon. Growlite Growlithe likes Ash's compassionate nature.

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\n[[AC:''Franchise/{{Danganfonpa}}'']]* [[spoiler:Summer Rose]] [[MamaBear makes her personality quite clear]] with the very first words she says in her official debut. For context, Team RWBY has just been thoroughly wiped out by [[spoiler:Briar Breeze, the Maiden of Summer.]]
-->'''[[spoiler:Summer Rose]]:'''"Don't you touch her, you hot-headed ''[[PrecisionFStrike bitch]]."''

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* ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfRemnant'':
** The very first scene is Qrow's point of view, but is a better character moment for Summer. She empathizes deeply with the parents of the Claimed, and is still horrified about the part she played in the whole affair fifteen years ago.
** The first scene from the point of view of the Claimed showcases them all quite well. Pyrrha is unsettled by the new environment, so she focuses on her family and remembers how she can [[WorldsBestWarrior kill anyone who might threaten them]]. Weiss is [[{{Womanchild}} playing with dolls]]--and her sisters make sure she's ''just'' playing, [[TheArchmage not casting magic]]. Jaune is almost late getting ready, but still spares the time to make sure his sisters are settling in alright. Blake coaches the others on [[ManipulativeBitch how to manipulate their biological families]], and [[SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids picks apart what she finds stupid about her parents' pacifistic beliefs]]. And Emerald [[ArmoredClosetGay talks about how awesome Cinder is]] ([[PsychologicalProjection couched in terms of how Jaune is obviously in love with her]]), [[NoSocialSkills has trouble getting the words out]], but is noted to be the only one physically strong enough to stand up to Pyrrha.
** Jacques' first scene has him bitterly reflecting [[MoneyIsNotPower how worthless all his money was in the end]], and being comforted by people who, in canon, he held in the deepest scorn.
--->If he was given the chance, by some miracle of the gods, to do it all over again, there were many, many things [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Jacques Schnee]] would have done differently. He would have known how trivial money truly was, he would not have squandered so much time on business at the neglect of his family, he would ''never'' have let that monster take his child...\\
And he would have cherished his wife. He would have ''never'' taken her for granted if he knew how little time he'd have with her, and how dearly, how deeply he would miss her once she was gone.

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* Claymade's sequel to ''FanFic/TheDarkLordsOfNerima'' introduces the new BigBad by having him casually defeating an assassin trying to kill him (that he had hired himself), who had already easily torn through his security forces.

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* Claymade's sequel to ''FanFic/TheDarkLordsOfNerima'' ''Fanfic/TheDarkLordsOfNerima'' introduces the new BigBad by having him casually defeating an assassin trying to kill him (that he had hired himself), who had already easily torn through his security forces.



* In the ''Anime/GirlsUndPanzer'' and ''{{Manga/Saki}}'' crossover, ''Fanfic/NecessaryToWin'', which can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10130193/1/Necessary-To-Win here]], there are quite a few.

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* In the ''Anime/GirlsUndPanzer'' and ''{{Manga/Saki}}'' ''Manga/{{Saki}}'' crossover, ''Fanfic/NecessaryToWin'', which can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10130193/1/Necessary-To-Win here]], there are quite a few.



* Being a crossover between two popular series (Manga/RanmaOneHalf and Anime/SailorMoon), ''FanFic/FistOfTheMoon'' has characters that the audience already knows, but their establishing moments for each other are quite potent.

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* Being a crossover between two popular series (Manga/RanmaOneHalf and Anime/SailorMoon), ''FanFic/FistOfTheMoon'' ''Fanfic/FistOfTheMoon'' has characters that the audience already knows, but their establishing moments for each other are quite potent.



* The first episode of ''[[FanFic.ChristianWestonChandlerInSurvivorKujiraJima Christian Weston Chandler in Survivor: Kujira-Jima]]'' gives moments to most of the cast:
** The [[IntroDump introductory scene]], while nominally one for everyone, is especially one for [[BasementDweller C]][[CasanovaWannabe h]][[FatIdiot r]][[HairTriggerTemper i]][[UnsympatheticComedyProtagonist s]], who harasses the other castaways throughout the whole sequence.

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* The first episode of ''[[FanFic.ChristianWestonChandlerInSurvivorKujiraJima ''[[Fanfic/ChristianWestonChandlerInSurvivorKujiraJima Christian Weston Chandler in Survivor: Kujira-Jima]]'' gives moments to most of the cast:
** The [[IntroDump introductory scene]], while nominally one for everyone, is especially one for [[BasementDweller C]][[CasanovaWannabe h]][[FatIdiot r]][[HairTriggerTemper i]][[UnsympatheticComedyProtagonist s]], Chris]], who harasses the other castaways throughout the whole sequence.



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* In FanFic/JusPrimaeNoctis the readers already know Louise's character, but she gets an in-universe one for [[spoiler: Saito's mother Ayako]] when she's the only one to stop Ayako from beating up her son.

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* In FanFic/JusPrimaeNoctis ''Fanfic/JusPrimaeNoctis'' the readers already know Louise's character, but she gets an in-universe one for [[spoiler: Saito's mother Ayako]] when she's the only one to stop Ayako from beating up her son.



* In ''FanFic/ChristmasWithACorduroy'': Lynda Pines is established as a [[{{Jerkass}} mean-spirited]] and [[NervousWreck neurotic woman]], when she flips out at Wendy for leaving a mud stain on the floor, instead of ,you know, welcoming a guest into her house.

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* In ''FanFic/ChristmasWithACorduroy'': ''Fanfic/ChristmasWithACorduroy'': Lynda Pines is established as a [[{{Jerkass}} mean-spirited]] and [[NervousWreck neurotic woman]], when she flips out at Wendy for leaving a mud stain on the floor, instead of ,you know, welcoming a guest into her house.



* ''FanFic/QueenOfShadows'': Each of the Oni Generals, as well as each of [[HeroAntagonist Lord Rokutaro's]] inner circle, get their general personalities made quite clear within their first scenes.

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* ''Fanfic/PerfectionIsOverrated''
** Hitomi uses her MindControl powers to rob people, and is quickly getting bored with how easy it is.
** Toki expresses her intent to change the past to get together with Hayate, without being able to adequately describe what Hayate means to her.
** Shizune kills [[spoiler:the defenseless Toki]], and then immediately prays that she hopes her victim goes to Hell.


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* ''Fanfic/PerfectionIsOverrated''
** Hitomi uses her MindControl powers to rob people, and is quickly getting bored with how easy it is.
** Toki expresses her intent to change the past to get together with Hayate, without being able to adequately describe what Hayate means to her.
** Shizune kills [[spoiler:the defenseless Toki]], and then immediately prays that she hopes her victim goes to Hell.
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* [[PaperPeople Lexi's]] first action in ''Fanfic/InfinityTrainBlossomingTrail'' after being recovered is to attack his father and lash out at how Titus was oblivious to the fact that his own son was BuriedAlive for eight years in their own car. Then, when Chloe pushes him out of the way so his papers don't get soaked from a hot water kettle that got sent flying into the air, he looks in remorse when she gets hot water burns on her shoulder. This shows off how Lexi is filled with bitterness and wants to lash out at people who hurt him, but also has remorse when others get hurt becuse of him.
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* ''Fanfic/ThePortal'': In Chapter 16, Zobek encounters Blizzard and Storm, then proceeds to [[CurbStompBattle curb-stomp Blizzard]] before infecting him by [[BewareMyStingerTail stabbing him with his tail]].
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* In ''Fanfic/WhatAboutWitchQueen'', Prince Ferdinand is established as a good counterpart to Hans and a honorable man when he apologizes to Anna for his brother's actions. The same scene, moments earlier, also sets him up as borderline {{Adorkable}} with his inability to form the apologies coherently:

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* In ''Fanfic/WhatAboutWitchQueen'', Prince Ferdinand is established as a good counterpart to Hans and a honorable man when he apologizes to Anna for his brother's actions. The same scene, moments earlier, also sets him up as borderline {{Adorkable}} dorky with his inability to form the apologies coherently:



** [[SadClown Jaune]] is introduced several sentences later, when he comforts Pyrrha and makes her laugh ([[{{Adorkable}} at his expense]]) despite that.

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* In the second chapter of ''Fanfic/HopeForTheHeartless'', an unnamed girl gazes at the moon, remembering one of the fairytales she loves. It leads her to wonder how the deceased [[TheDreaded Horned King]] could have become the monster he was known as. Despite herself, [[SympathyForTheDevil she finds herself pitying the warlord with all her heart]]. This girl turns out to be [[PurityPersonified Avalina]] and she becomes the [[ResurrectedForAJob resurrected]] Horned King's MoralityPet.

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* In the second chapter of ''Fanfic/HopeForTheHeartless'', an unnamed girl gazes at the moon, remembering one of the fairytales she loves. It leads her to wonder how the deceased [[TheDreaded Horned King]] could have become the monster he was known as. Despite herself, [[SympathyForTheDevil she finds herself pitying the warlord with all her heart]]. This girl turns out to be [[PurityPersonified Avalina]] Avalina]], and she becomes the [[ResurrectedForAJob resurrected]] Horned King's MoralityPet.



* [[DemonSlaying Nat's]] first introduction in ''Fanfic/TheUltimateEvil'' includes her attacking a demon that's about to eat its victim, killing it without mercy with her [[WalkingArsenal various weapons]], calling an ambulance, leaving the spot, taking an interest in the reports of Jackie's encounters with the Demon Sorcerers and deciding to do a little "clean up".

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* [[DemonSlaying Nat's]] first introduction in ''Fanfic/TheUltimateEvil'' includes her attacking a demon that's about to eat its victim, ruthlessly killing it without mercy with her [[WalkingArsenal various weapons]], calling an ambulance, leaving the spot, taking an interest in the reports of Jackie's encounters with the Demon Sorcerers Sorcerers, and deciding to do a little "clean up".



* As soon as [[KnightTemplar Commander Hildread]] first appears in ''Fanfic/LovedAndLost'', she makes her arrogance and hatred toward Shining Armor crystal clear before she proceeds to beat up the former captain with sadistic pleasure in his cell. Her {{Foil}} and subordinate [[MinionWithAnFInEvil Lieutenant Shackle]] in turn acts like a professional guard toward the imprisoned heroes before the appearance of her commanding officer whose orders she nervously follows. She also turns her pitying gaze away from Shining Armor's torture.

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* As soon as [[KnightTemplar Commander Hildread]] first appears in ''Fanfic/LovedAndLost'', she makes her arrogance and hatred toward Shining Armor crystal clear before she proceeds to beat up the former captain with sadistic pleasure in his cell. Her {{Foil}} and subordinate [[MinionWithAnFInEvil Lieutenant Shackle]] in turn acts like a professional guard toward the imprisoned heroes before the appearance of her commanding officer whose orders she nervously follows. [[ICantLookGesture She also turns her pitying gaze away from Shining Armor's torture.
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* In ''Fanfic/PointMeAtTheSkyrim'', Antares' response to waking up bound in a cart surrounded by hostile strangers is to try and de-escalate the situation.
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** The [[IntroDump introductory scene]], while nominally one for everyone, is especially one for Chris, who harasses the other castaways throughout the whole sequence.

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** The [[IntroDump introductory scene]], while nominally one for everyone, is especially one for Chris, [[BasementDweller C]][[CasanovaWannabe h]][[FatIdiot r]][[HairTriggerTemper i]][[UnsympatheticComedyProtagonist s]], who harasses the other castaways throughout the whole sequence.

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* The first episode of ''[[FanFic.ChristianWestonChandlerInSurvivorKujiraJima Christian Weston Chandler in Survivor: Kujira-Jima]]'' gives moments to most of the cast:
** The [[IntroDump introductory scene]], while nominally one for everyone, is especially one for Chris, who harasses the other castaways throughout the whole sequence.
** [[TheWhitestBlackGuy Kenny]]'s moment also comes in the introduction. He introduces himself politely, but snaps when Chris becomes afraid that Kenny will shoot him.
** Chlamydia introduces herself by her long and bizarrely-spelled name, calls everyone scum, tries and fails to commit assault, then immediately claims she's being raped.
** Neri's first appearance sees her clutching onto Chris. She promises to cook and clean for Chris, and she's studying medicine, but she completely fails to realize that, despite being Chris's perfect girlfriend, he's terrified of her on account of her race.
** For [[GrumpyOldMan Jude]]:
-->'''Jude:''' Clowns to the left of me. Degenerates to the right.
*** He gets a second moment when he and four tribemates are hoisting a huge log at the behest of his rival, Stan. The other four let go. He manages to keep hold of it all by himself.
** The latter moment is also Stan's moment, as he manages to build a sturdy wall out of ropes and wood while [[TheStoner high as a kite]].
** [[WhiteCollarWorker Roscoe]] rattles off some corporate jargon about how disorganized the tribe is. Then he realizes he's in the middle of a four-way free-for-all within his tribe. Then he decides he's in the perfect position to take charge.
** [[JerkJock Fabian]] starts the first day of the game by calling Chlamydia a fat bitch and spends the rest of it terrorizing Chris.
** Senken tribe gets a collective one. Ato Chie tear themselves apart on the first day, screaming at each other and almost coming to blows. Cut to Senken peacefully cooperating to build a shelter and make fire.
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* Edwin Chaos in the SI [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13501363/1/Chaos-Effect Chaos Effect]] originally planned to keep his head down for a bit... until he sees Yugi and Joey shivering after diving off the ship to try and save the Exodia cards Weevil tossed overboard. Edwin storms into the common room where Weevil is, causing everyone to go silent, then drags the brat to a quiet corner of the ship and nearly THROWS HIM OVERBOARD, then demands his room key as payment. He then turns around and invited Yugi and his friends to share the room with him so that Joey and Yugi can warm up.
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* In ''FanFic/TheApprenticeTheStudentAndTheCharlatan'', we have two such moments for major characters.
** For protagonist Nova Shine, the first we see of him is him approaching a beggar on the streets, taking him to a nearby apartment complex, and ''purchasing the beggar an apartment for two months'' to help him get back on his hooves, before swearing both him and the landlady to secrecy.
** Aegis, a major character who is a peacekeeper in Canterlot, is introduced by "arresting" Nova just to get a rise out of him.
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** Jane Seaworth would do anything for her loved ones, and lying doesn't bother her a wit for this. How does the reader know this? Because she didn't even hesitate to frame the Crown Prince up after seeing him bullying her charge Shireen. [[spoiler:More subtler, the fact she twisted the situation to her advantage via creative use of the truth foreshadows her parentage as a daughter of Loki.]]

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* ''Fanfic/{{Essence}}'': Ash arrives at Professor Oak's lab 30 minutes early. This shows his dedication and excitement at becoming a Pokémon trainer. When he meets Growlithe, he calmly decides to stare it in the eyes and get on eye-level with it, which shows Growlithe that he wants respect and views it as a partner, not something to look down upon. Growlite likes Ash's compassionate nature.
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--> Usagi: “We know her, Mars. She rescued three children and two senshi, putting her life on the line. We know her very well.”

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--> Usagi: “We --->'''Usagi:''' We know her, Mars. She rescued three children and two senshi, putting her life on the line. We know her very well.
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* As soon as [[KnightTemplar Commander Hildread]] first appears in ''Fanfic/LovedAndLost'', she makes her arrogance and hatred toward Shining Armor crystal clear before she proceeds to beat up the former captain with sadistic pleasure in his cell. Her {{Foil}} and subordinate [[MinionWithAnFInEvil Lieutenant Shackle]] in turn acts like a professional guard toward the imprisoned heroes before the appearance of her commanding officer whose orders she nervously follows. She also turns her pitying gaze away from Shining Armor's torture.
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* ''Fanfic/CrimsonAndEmerald''
**Hawks shows himself to be proactive as he goes to Hosu to help the local pros capture Stain out of his own volition. He then shows himself to be a cautious ReasonableAuthorityFigure as he listens to Tokoyami's concerns that his classmate might be in danger when Tokoyami is sent his classmate's coordinates without explanation. Hawks worries that Tokoyami's might be hurt or being attacked so he accompanies Tokoyami to classmate's coordinates.

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* In the second chapter of ''Fanfic/HopeForTheHeartless'', an unnamed girl gazes the moon, remembering one of the fairy tales she loves. It leads her to wonder how the deceased [[TheDreaded Horned King]] could have become the monster he was known as. Despite herself, [[SympathyForTheDevil she finds herself pitying the warlord with all her heart]]. This girl turns out to be [[PurityPersonified Avalina]] and she becomes the [[ResurrectedForAJob resurrected]] Horned King's MoralityPet.

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* In the second chapter of ''Fanfic/HopeForTheHeartless'', an unnamed girl gazes at the moon, remembering one of the fairy tales fairytales she loves. It leads her to wonder how the deceased [[TheDreaded Horned King]] could have become the monster he was known as. Despite herself, [[SympathyForTheDevil she finds herself pitying the warlord with all her heart]]. This girl turns out to be [[PurityPersonified Avalina]] and she becomes the [[ResurrectedForAJob resurrected]] Horned King's MoralityPet.



* ''Fanfc/WhereTalentGoesToDie''

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* ''Fanfc/WhereTalentGoesToDie''''Fanfic/WhereTalentGoesToDie''




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* In ''WebVideo/FateStayNightUnlimitedBladeWorksAbridged'', [[TheSnarkKnight Archer]] is introduced lazing casually on the wrecked furniture in someone else's house.
-->"[[{{Determinator}} I saw a spider, so I threw a table at it. It survived, so I threw a cabinet at it.]] This continued. The spider escaped. I assure you I mean to track it down."
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** [[HarryPotter Dumbledore]] is introduced [[ATasteOfTheLash whipping a student]] [[KickTheDog for praying]], establishing himself as close to an aversion of DesignatedVillain as most of the fic's cast gets.

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** [[HarryPotter [[Franchise/HarryPotter Dumbledore]] is introduced [[ATasteOfTheLash whipping a student]] [[KickTheDog for praying]], establishing himself as close to an aversion of DesignatedVillain as most of the fic's cast gets.
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* ''Fanfic/UnstableEquilibrium'': A well-dressed Asami offers to pay for Korra's meal out of the blue, despite not even knowing her. This serves to show that Asami is a generous and wealthy person.

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