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** Ranma grabs three kids that the senshi were protecting from youma and get them out of danger, then comes back to help again. During this s/he takes two hits that leave her literally dead on her feet, and require the Silver crystal to heal.
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** Ranma grabs three kids that the senshi were protecting from youma and get them out of danger, then comes back to help again. During this s/he takes they take two hits that leave her literally dead on her feet, and require the Silver crystal to heal.
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* ''Fanfic/VowOfNudity'': Fiora's first scene involves trying to sacrifice Haara to a demon lord, foolishly attempting to sleep with her while they wait, and then accidentally getting sucked through the portal alongside her intended victim, quickly establishing her as an evil-but-underwhelming witch whose impulsivity and shortsightedness tends to be the cause of her own troubles.
* ''Fanfic/VowOfNudity'': Fiora's first scene involves trying to sacrifice Haara to a demon lord, foolishly attempting to sleep with her while they wait, and then accidentally getting sucked through the portal alongside her intended victim, quickly establishing her as an evil-but-underwhelming witch whose impulsivity and shortsightedness tends to be the cause of her own troubles.
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* In ''[[https://www.romhacking.net/hacks/7775/ Antinomia: Final Fantasy VI]]'', a discussion between [[PromotedToPlayable Leo]] and [[BigBad Kefka]] in Vector immediately establishes the type of characters they are. Leo shows concern for Biggs and Wedge after they didn't report back. Kefka immediately shows disdain for Leo, views Terra as his weapon, and calls the two soldiers disposable.
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* In ''[[https://www.romhacking.net/hacks/7775/ Antinomia: Final Fantasy VI]]'', ''VideoGame/AntinomiaFinalFantasyVI'', a discussion between [[PromotedToPlayable Leo]] and [[BigBad Kefka]] in Vector immediately establishes the type of characters they are. Leo shows concern for Biggs and Wedge after they didn't report back. Kefka immediately shows disdain for Leo, views Terra as his weapon, and calls the two soldiers disposable.
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* ''Fanfic/CindersAndAshesTheChroniclesOfKamenRiderDante'' introduces original characters and ''re''-introduces characters from ''Anime/ReCreators'' given the larger roles they play in the story.
** [[BigBad Altair]] is first introduced by offering Hotaro a DealWithTheDevil to help her get revenge on the Land of Gods (i.e. [[RefugeeFromTVLand the real world]]), only for Hotaro to establish ''his'' character by not only rejecting it, but also [[KirkSummation describing exactly what her motivation truly is]]... To which she [[ShutUpKirk takes rather well]].
** [[TeamMom Marine]] is introduced by comforting a panicking Hoshi after he is chased by Altair, and then later on when he's looped in on [[RookieRedRanger being part of the heroes]] and the mess he has to help them solve.
** [[BigGood Meteora]]'s voice is described by Hoshi as "[[TheSpock cold, distant, analytical]]". Her later chat with Hoshi alongside Kikuchihara shows they work in tandem together and are the closest things he has to commanders.
** Yuuya's introduction, after a fight with Hoshi, shows he was able to figure out that he's Dante's author rather than Dante himself, showing that he's more observant than he lets on.
** Tachibana's entire character ''began'' with this moment according to WordOfGod, as [[WhatCouldHaveBeen he was originally going to be a one-note character]] before [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/cinders-and-ashes-the-chronicle-of-kamen-rider-dante-re-creators-kamen-rider-oc-si.554418/#post-65852640 a few dialogue exchanges between Hoshi and Tachibana]] showed he had HiddenDepths worth exploring.
** [[NiceGirl Mamika]] and [[KnightInSourArmor Alicetaria]] have a whole side-chapter introducing their characters, with Alicetaria wanting to kill Hoshi and Mamika wanting to protect him, before she gets Alicetaria to compromise with her having to deal with Hoshi if he presents himself to be a threat.
** The first original Creation, Jurogumo, makes her introduction known through the murder of a gang member and giving him the moniker of "some pig", contrasting to how Magane's original establishing moment went down.
** Magane's full introduction has her sow the seeds that lead to Hoshi's UnstoppableRage-induced FaceHeelTurn by stringing together reveal after reveal after reveal, allowing him to find out four things in the ''worst'' possible way. [[note]]Namely that she took Honoka's phone, that Souta had a connection to Setsuna's demise, and that Mamika died. The fourth thing was Hoshi coming to the wrong conclusion that Meteora killed her own Creator[[/note]].
** Suruga's introductory chapter has her be mysterious until she hands Hoshi the keys to the Machine Inferner and, in scene shortly after, confers with Kikuchihara that the revision powers worked as she had suspected.
** [[TheRival Yudai]]'s introduction was a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown on Hoshi that's later revealed to be an ExtremeMeleeRevenge, showing just how cruel and vindictive he is, especially taking into account that [[spoiler:he's reflecting Hoshi's own vindictiveness towards Souta]].
** Vega, by contrast, is a lot calmer and methodical, referring to Hoshi by father on his first appearence and calming down Yudai enough to back off. We later learn he has a tendency to refer to the influences of his creation by these terms and sees Yudai as a son... Though [[BadBoss treating him like one is another story]].
** Shimashima is introduced trying to reason with the other Creations that they can't include Mamika into the Elimination Chamber Festival due to her Creators wanting to distance from her due to current events, citing how it's out of his hands. Matsubara comments on how he's "a stuffy suit" and is even surprised that he'd be taking up such a white collar job as being the messengers of other companies. His inability to stick up for Mamika (which he later allows the Creators to LoopholeAbuse) and his dutiful servitude towards the industry [[spoiler:become foreshadowing to his true identity as Shimazaki Yuusuke, who had similarly been unable to stick up for his daughter Setsuna due to being a servant for the industry]].
** Hikayu has an entire introductory arc that establishes her as different from the canon self, being more willing to help the others stop Altair after some thought, putting some training into boxing and even getting to become a [[MagicalGirl Magical Slayer]].
** Yuichi and Melt have a contrast to Mamika and Alicetaria's introduction to Hoshi, though [[InvertedTrope it serves to establish]] how broken ''Hoshi'' has become, as he freezes up at Melt asking if he knew Mamika and barely struck up a conversation with Yuichi. It's played straight with Yuichi's debut as [[AnIcePerson Kamen Rider Verge]], given he gives a quick and merciless CurbStompBattle with a snake-themed monster that had poisoned Hoshi just moments prior.
** Izumi Dan's entire character arc kicks off with him mourning the loss of his childhood friend and being called out by Ohnishi for always having tragedy in his stories. Cue a victim of his tragic stories coming to get his revenge... [[DeathSeeker and Dan accepts]].
** Freezing Bear's human form is introduced with Magane asking a simple question after showing Yudai [[StalkerWithoutACrush his favorite hobby]]: "What happens to a stalker when they're given [[TheUnfettered the power to do what they want without consequence?]]". Cue him murdering two girls and some cops just because one of them was an idol.
** Sparking Giraffe's debut has him blasting a dude with his powers simply because he badmouthed the murdered idol.
** [[PapaWolf Shimazaki Yuusuke]]'s proper introduction makes it clear that he's just as psychotic, if not ''more'' psychotic, than Altair by insisting that ''he'' personally kills the man who prevented him from helping Setsuna not get cancelled at the expense of the artists who made her take the fall. [[spoiler:Kamen Rider Toris also shows that reality itself is bending to their whims as while it could barely put together a form, it was able to be tangible enough to make his victim lose his sanity]].
** [[BigBad Altair]] is first introduced by offering Hotaro a DealWithTheDevil to help her get revenge on the Land of Gods (i.e. [[RefugeeFromTVLand the real world]]), only for Hotaro to establish ''his'' character by not only rejecting it, but also [[KirkSummation describing exactly what her motivation truly is]]... To which she [[ShutUpKirk takes rather well]].
** [[TeamMom Marine]] is introduced by comforting a panicking Hoshi after he is chased by Altair, and then later on when he's looped in on [[RookieRedRanger being part of the heroes]] and the mess he has to help them solve.
** [[BigGood Meteora]]'s voice is described by Hoshi as "[[TheSpock cold, distant, analytical]]". Her later chat with Hoshi alongside Kikuchihara shows they work in tandem together and are the closest things he has to commanders.
** Yuuya's introduction, after a fight with Hoshi, shows he was able to figure out that he's Dante's author rather than Dante himself, showing that he's more observant than he lets on.
** Tachibana's entire character ''began'' with this moment according to WordOfGod, as [[WhatCouldHaveBeen he was originally going to be a one-note character]] before [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/cinders-and-ashes-the-chronicle-of-kamen-rider-dante-re-creators-kamen-rider-oc-si.554418/#post-65852640 a few dialogue exchanges between Hoshi and Tachibana]] showed he had HiddenDepths worth exploring.
** [[NiceGirl Mamika]] and [[KnightInSourArmor Alicetaria]] have a whole side-chapter introducing their characters, with Alicetaria wanting to kill Hoshi and Mamika wanting to protect him, before she gets Alicetaria to compromise with her having to deal with Hoshi if he presents himself to be a threat.
** The first original Creation, Jurogumo, makes her introduction known through the murder of a gang member and giving him the moniker of "some pig", contrasting to how Magane's original establishing moment went down.
** Magane's full introduction has her sow the seeds that lead to Hoshi's UnstoppableRage-induced FaceHeelTurn by stringing together reveal after reveal after reveal, allowing him to find out four things in the ''worst'' possible way. [[note]]Namely that she took Honoka's phone, that Souta had a connection to Setsuna's demise, and that Mamika died. The fourth thing was Hoshi coming to the wrong conclusion that Meteora killed her own Creator[[/note]].
** Suruga's introductory chapter has her be mysterious until she hands Hoshi the keys to the Machine Inferner and, in scene shortly after, confers with Kikuchihara that the revision powers worked as she had suspected.
** [[TheRival Yudai]]'s introduction was a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown on Hoshi that's later revealed to be an ExtremeMeleeRevenge, showing just how cruel and vindictive he is, especially taking into account that [[spoiler:he's reflecting Hoshi's own vindictiveness towards Souta]].
** Vega, by contrast, is a lot calmer and methodical, referring to Hoshi by father on his first appearence and calming down Yudai enough to back off. We later learn he has a tendency to refer to the influences of his creation by these terms and sees Yudai as a son... Though [[BadBoss treating him like one is another story]].
** Shimashima is introduced trying to reason with the other Creations that they can't include Mamika into the Elimination Chamber Festival due to her Creators wanting to distance from her due to current events, citing how it's out of his hands. Matsubara comments on how he's "a stuffy suit" and is even surprised that he'd be taking up such a white collar job as being the messengers of other companies. His inability to stick up for Mamika (which he later allows the Creators to LoopholeAbuse) and his dutiful servitude towards the industry [[spoiler:become foreshadowing to his true identity as Shimazaki Yuusuke, who had similarly been unable to stick up for his daughter Setsuna due to being a servant for the industry]].
** Hikayu has an entire introductory arc that establishes her as different from the canon self, being more willing to help the others stop Altair after some thought, putting some training into boxing and even getting to become a [[MagicalGirl Magical Slayer]].
** Yuichi and Melt have a contrast to Mamika and Alicetaria's introduction to Hoshi, though [[InvertedTrope it serves to establish]] how broken ''Hoshi'' has become, as he freezes up at Melt asking if he knew Mamika and barely struck up a conversation with Yuichi. It's played straight with Yuichi's debut as [[AnIcePerson Kamen Rider Verge]], given he gives a quick and merciless CurbStompBattle with a snake-themed monster that had poisoned Hoshi just moments prior.
** Izumi Dan's entire character arc kicks off with him mourning the loss of his childhood friend and being called out by Ohnishi for always having tragedy in his stories. Cue a victim of his tragic stories coming to get his revenge... [[DeathSeeker and Dan accepts]].
** Freezing Bear's human form is introduced with Magane asking a simple question after showing Yudai [[StalkerWithoutACrush his favorite hobby]]: "What happens to a stalker when they're given [[TheUnfettered the power to do what they want without consequence?]]". Cue him murdering two girls and some cops just because one of them was an idol.
** Sparking Giraffe's debut has him blasting a dude with his powers simply because he badmouthed the murdered idol.
** [[PapaWolf Shimazaki Yuusuke]]'s proper introduction makes it clear that he's just as psychotic, if not ''more'' psychotic, than Altair by insisting that ''he'' personally kills the man who prevented him from helping Setsuna not get cancelled at the expense of the artists who made her take the fall. [[spoiler:Kamen Rider Toris also shows that reality itself is bending to their whims as while it could barely put together a form, it was able to be tangible enough to make his victim lose his sanity]].
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* ''Fanfic/{{Paradoxus}}'': Aen'da is introduced in the [[Recap/ParadoxusPrologo prologue]] as a powerful yet awkward Kaldorei/Sin'dorei hybrid. Proof of the former is that with one shoot from her bow Delune she can access the Maw where Sylvanas, thrice sent there, is without worrying about not going back. The latter is accomplished the moment she opens her mouth and doesn't quite know how to explain to Sylvanas why she's rescuing her from there or who she is. She admits not having prepared a speech.
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** [[RichBitch Chloé]] introduces herself by tripping Marinette as she passes by, then leering down at her while taunting her for thinking that [[ForWantOfANail transferring out of Mme Bustier's class]] was honestly going to protect [[TheBully from her]]. This immediately drives home just how much Chloé is used to getting her way, and that she has no intention of letting her favorite victim slip from her grasp.
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** [[RichBitch Chloé]] introduces herself by tripping Marinette as she passes by, then leering down at her while taunting her for thinking that [[ForWantOfANail [[PointOfDivergence transferring out of Mme Bustier's class]] was honestly going to protect [[TheBully from her]]. This immediately drives home just how much Chloé is used to getting her way, and that she has no intention of letting her favorite victim slip from her grasp.
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* In ''Webcomic/PureLight'', we are introduced to Electroy and Burner with the former bragging about having pranked the Guardians, and the latter admonishing him as childish. This handily establishes that Electroy is a prankster with high enough social standing to have access to the highest ranking civilian organization in the city, and Burner as a grumpy TeamDad.
* In ''Webcomic/PureLight'', we are introduced to Electroy and Burner with the former bragging about having pranked the Guardians, and the latter admonishing him as childish. This handily establishes that Electroy is a prankster with high enough social standing to have access to the highest ranking civilian organization in the city, and Burner as a grumpy TeamDad.
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* The first time we see Makoto in ''Fanfic/TheEvilQueen'', she is at a personal office desk in the student council room cutting the drama club's budget because she felt that their choice to perform ''Theatre/OedipusTheKing'' was inappropriate for school, demonstrating how {{AbsurdlyPowerful|StudentCouncil}} she is and how she abuses her power to uphold her own standards of decency.
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* The first time we see Makoto in ''Fanfic/TheEvilQueen'', she is at a personal office desk in the student council room cutting the drama club's budget because she felt that their choice to perform ''Theatre/OedipusTheKing'' was inappropriate for school, demonstrating how {{AbsurdlyPowerful|StudentCouncil}} {{Absurdly Powerful|StudentCouncil}} she is and how she abuses her power to uphold her own standards of decency.
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* ''Fanfic/AIEchidnasFiveNightsatFreddys'': Throughout most of ''Withered'', [[RoboticPsychopath Freddy Fazbear]] is foreshadowed only via Fritz's phone calls, said to be threatening and smart, as well as being heard through the phone taunting "Fritz". In Night 4, he finally makes himself known to Jeremy, who is scared by him immediately.
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* ''Fanfic/AIEchidnasFiveNightsatFreddys'': ''Fanfic/AiEchidnasFiveNightsAtFreddys'': Throughout most of ''Withered'', [[RoboticPsychopath Freddy Fazbear]] is foreshadowed only via Fritz's phone calls, said to be threatening and smart, as well as being heard through the phone taunting "Fritz". In Night 4, he finally makes himself known to Jeremy, who is scared by him immediately.
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*''Fanfic/AIEchidnasFiveNightsatFreddys'': Throughout most of ''Withered'', [[RoboticPsychopath Freddy Fazbear]] is foreshadowed only via Fritz's phone calls, said to be threatening and smart, as well as being heard through the phone taunting "Fritz". In Night 4, he finally makes himself known to Jeremy, who is scared by him immediately.
-->'''Freddy''': ''How could you forget your ol' pal, Freddy Fazbear, Jeremy?''
*''Fanfic/AIEchidnasFiveNightsatFreddys'': Throughout most of ''Withered'', [[RoboticPsychopath Freddy Fazbear]] is foreshadowed only via Fritz's phone calls, said to be threatening and smart, as well as being heard through the phone taunting "Fritz". In Night 4, he finally makes himself known to Jeremy, who is scared by him immediately.
-->'''Freddy''': ''How could you forget your ol' pal, Freddy Fazbear, Jeremy?''
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* In ''[[http://sonicsymphony.tumblr.com/post/128615370829/first-off-love-terrestrial-trolling-im-a-huge Terrestrial Trolling]]'', the narrator first notices Feferi when she persuades a total stranger to participate in a tarot card reading, cavalierly brushing off his disbelief in magic.
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* In ''[[http://sonicsymphony.tumblr.com/post/128615370829/first-off-love-terrestrial-trolling-im-a-huge Terrestrial Trolling]]'', the Trolling]]'': The narrator first notices Feferi when she persuades a total stranger to participate in a tarot card reading, cavalierly brushing off his disbelief in magic.
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* ''Fanfic/TheOopsCycle'': Saminga, fresh off of being made an Archangel, quickly showed his hand to his new allies in Heaven. He let his more skeptical fellows in on the existence of a dangerous relic, a coffin which can turn someone into a undead without any consent and that Hatiphas, the top contender for succeeding Saminga in the Word of Death, has captured one of David's soldiers to use it on. In less than a few minutes Saminga possessed the Soldier (thus keeping their soul from being destroyed), broke free, destroyed the relic, possessed every zombie in the room and proceeded to go to town on Hatiphas and her minions. He then destroyed everything even remotely connected to sorcery in the site before bringing the remnants of the relic back to Heaven and informing the attending archangels there are 127 more of these things. The next few weeks one by one the remaining relics were all are brought forth and destroyed. This killed any doubt of his honesty or that he hadn't [[DumbassNoMore become more intelligent]].
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* ''Fanfic/TheOopsCycle'': Saminga, fresh off of being made an Archangel, quickly showed his hand to his new allies in Heaven. He let his more skeptical fellows in on the existence of a dangerous relic, a coffin which can turn someone into a undead without any consent and that Hatiphas, the top contender for succeeding Saminga in the Word of Death, has captured one of David's soldiers to use it on. In less than a few minutes Saminga possessed the Soldier (thus keeping their soul from being destroyed), broke free, destroyed the relic, possessed every zombie in the room and proceeded to go to town on Hatiphas and her minions. He then destroyed everything even remotely connected to sorcery in the site before bringing the remnants of the relic back to Heaven and informing the attending archangels there are 127 more of these things. The next few weeks one by one the remaining relics were all are brought forth and destroyed. This killed any doubt of his honesty or that he hadn't [[DumbassNoMore become more intelligent]].
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* ''Fanfic/WeMakeOurOwnLight'': Dunstan's complete lack of respect for the divine is obvious when he attacks Gwynevere's illusion before chasing Gwyndolin down the endless corridor, just because he wanted to peek under the Moon deity's mask. But after ripping the crown away, the man is aghast by Gwyndolin being JustAKid saddled with such crushing duties -- for all his cynicism and weariness, Dunstan cannot help softening towards people when he gets to see them as they truly are, instead of their social persona.
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* In ''Fanfic/TheWizardInTheShadows'', Harry introduces himself by chasing off the Nazgul at Weathertop with a patronus, setting one on fire, and then, a little later on, when asked what he's doing by a thoroughly suspicious Merry, says a line that cements him as a DeadpanSnarker HurtingHero and a total badass:
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* In ''Fanfic/TheWizardInTheShadows'', Harry introduces himself by chasing off the Nazgul at Weathertop with a patronus, setting one on fire, and then, a little later on, when asked what he's doing by a thoroughly suspicious Merry, says a line that cements him as a DeadpanSnarker HurtingHero and a total badass:
