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* NonElemental: Strength Kan. Unlike wizardry-focused characters like Zephie and Crocell, whose Kan are tied to the environment, he can store Strength Kan.
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* ProudWarriorRaceGuy: Previously chieftan of the Bluemoon Trewa. Interestingly, it is not the Trewa's ability to fight that Argo holds in high regard, but their nomadic ways as "the free folk".
* ProudWarriorRaceGuy: Previously chieftan of the Bluemoon Trewa. Interestingly, it is not the Trewa's ability to fight that Argo holds in high regard, but their nomadic ways as "the free folk".
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repay her.
* AllThereInTheManual: The artbook mentions that Crocell's parents and younger sister were all killed in Schuenzeit's purging of the nobles.
* AllThereInTheManual: The artbook mentions that Crocell's parents and younger sister were all killed in Schuenzeit's purging of the nobles.
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* ArcherArchetype: Uses a bow in combat.
* DisappearedDad: Her father, a human mercenary named Vaizen, had left Cota Mare in heartbreak after Celestine's mother died. Before he did so, he entrusted Mare Chieftain Keitan with his daughter. [[spoiler:Following this plotline, Celestine and the crew learn that Vaizen was captured by the Northern Forces, then turned into a Sentinel in an experiment gone wrong. The group later finds Vaizen's Sentinel-ified remains, where Vaizen's spirit exchanges words with his daughter before finally passing on.]]
* DisappearedDad: Her father, a human mercenary named Vaizen, had left Cota Mare in heartbreak after Celestine's mother died. Before he did so, he entrusted Mare Chieftain Keitan with his daughter. [[spoiler:Following this plotline, Celestine and the crew learn that Vaizen was captured by the Northern Forces, then turned into a Sentinel in an experiment gone wrong. The group later finds Vaizen's Sentinel-ified remains, where Vaizen's spirit exchanges words with his daughter before finally passing on.]]
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* ArcherArchetype: Uses She uses a bow in combat.
* DisappearedDad: Her father, a human mercenarynamed Vaizen, known as Vaizen the Silver, had left Cota Mare in heartbreak after Celestine's mother died. Before he did so, he entrusted Mare Chieftain Keitan with his daughter. daughter's well-being. [[spoiler:Following this plotline, thread, Celestine and the crew learn that Vaizen was captured by the Northern Forces, then turned into a Sentinel in an experiment gone wrong. The group later finds Vaizen's Sentinel-ified calcified Sentinel remains, where Vaizen's spirit exchanges words with his daughter before finally passing on.]]
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* LadyOfWar: She uses graceful 'katana' or 'shuriken' styles, and maintains an air of cool, detached competency throughout the entire story. Celestine thinks she's cool, something that Juto has a hard time of believing.cool.
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* AndNowYouMustMarryMe: Alex agreed to back Zephie with the Southern Forces with the promise of marriage when the war ended. Specifically, he would become Queen Rzephillda's husband, not a ruler himself. [[spoiler:Schuenzeit scoffs at Alex being merely satisfied with being married to Zephie, and persuades him to rule Lanzheim as its new ''king''. Thus when the Counter-Sentinel Unit encounters him on their way to La Strada, [[SubvertedTrope Alex fights them with the aim of killing Zephie.]]]]
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* ParentalSubstitute: Was one to Zephie, filling the void left by her father's early passing. This made his betrayal--killing her mother Queen Ibrin and seizing Lanzheim's throne--a complete shock to her.
* [[spoiler:WellIntentionedExtremist: Strauss has been perpetuating the cycle of war in Lanzheim to power La Strada and keep the continent prosperous. Unfortunately, he's already far down the deep end by the present.]]
* [[spoiler:WellIntentionedExtremist: Strauss has been perpetuating the cycle of war in Lanzheim to power La Strada and keep the continent prosperous. Unfortunately, he's already far down the deep end by the present.]]
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* ProfessorGuineaPig: He appears to be either a mutated old man, or an old man in a mutated suit of some kind. Whatever the case, the fact is thathe's been experimenting on his own body.Huaren did this to himself.
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* ILetGwenStacyDie: The Gwen Stacy Juto feels immense guilt over Melissa dying to Juto's Spider-Man.
%%* [[spoiler:MercyKill]]Elgar the way she did.
* [[spoiler:MercyKill: Subjected to this when Claire's "modifications" to Melissa transform her into a monster.]]
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* DefectorFromDecadence: He'd initially participated in the Sentinel research for money; [[spoiler:but after a series of events, including First Elgar's disappearance, Nyx Nix refused to go any further with it (which gets him dragged into an unused lab as a prisoner). When First Elgar returns as Juto, Nyx decides to help him and the others find the Princess.]]
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* HiddenDepths: For all his confidence in his fire wizardry in battle, Crocell doesn't like to draw attention to the fact that he used to be nobility, especially now that he's a soldier for the Southern Forces.
* IOweYouMyLife: During the purges on the nobility, Crocell came close to death until Zephie saved him. This led to him joining her in the Counter-Sentinel Unit.
* NoHeroToHisValet:Inverted. {{Inverted}}. His servant Marith is probably the only person he is openly kind to.
* IOweYouMyLife: During the purges on the nobility, Crocell came close to death until Zephie saved him. This led to him joining her in the Counter-Sentinel Unit.
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* FlatCharacter: Possibly {{invoked}}: as part of Rue's bodyguard training, she was taught to repress her emotions in order to best serve the Princess. [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Not even marriage proposals addressed towards herself will sway her]]. No matter what happens, Rue always puts Zephie's safety first, to the point that it seems as though it's her ''only'' concern in-game. Though she gets a ''little'' development, in the second character drama and the endinv.
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* FlatCharacter: Possibly {{invoked}}: as part of Rue's bodyguard training, she was taught to repress her emotions in order to best serve the Princess. As a result, Rue acts formal and stiff. [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Not even marriage proposals addressed towards herself will sway her]]. No matter what happens, Rue always puts Zephie's safety first, to the point that it seems as though it's her ''only'' concern in-game. Though she gets a ''little'' development, in the second character drama and the endinv.ending.
** The in-game Cube letters give her more characterization, as both Zephie's closest confidant in the Unit and someone who wants her to be happy.
** The in-game Cube letters give her more characterization, as both Zephie's closest confidant in the Unit and someone who wants her to be happy.
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A scientist who developed the humanoid Sentinels.
* DefectorFromDecadence: He'd initially participated in the Sentinel research for money; [[spoiler:but after a series of events, including First Elgar's disappearance, Nyx refused to go any further with it (which gets him dragged into an unused lab as a prisoner). When First Elgar returns as Juto, Nyx decides to help him and the others find the Princess.]]
!!Nyx
A scientist who developed the humanoid Sentinels.
* DefectorFromDecadence: He'd initially participated in the Sentinel research for money; [[spoiler:but after a series of events, including First Elgar's disappearance, Nyx refused to go any further with it (which gets him dragged into an unused lab as a prisoner). When First Elgar returns as Juto, Nyx decides to help him and the others find the Princess.]]
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A wizard whose parents were killed by the civil war, and war. He joined the Counter-Sentinel Unit to avenge them.
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A woman who is Zephie's loyal guardian. She tries not to show any emotion, and firmly believes (like the Southern Forces generals) that Zephie should never be put into harm's way. She never shows any emotion and doesn't have any backstory.\n
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* AllThereInTheManual: Her backstory involves her nearly getting attacked by Elgar [[spoiler: the first]] only for Zephie to [[TakingTheBullet get in the way]], but it's only in the artbook.
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!!Elgar the Regicide
The assassin who killed Queen Ibrin, and the original Sentinel. [[spoiler:He is actually a clone of Juto.]]
* [[spoiler:CloningBlues: He's a clone of Juto.]]
* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: Elgar the '''Regicide'''. He killed Queen Ibrin and wants to kill Zephie.
The assassin who killed Queen Ibrin, and the original Sentinel. [[spoiler:He is actually a clone of Juto.]]
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The leader of the Southern Forces, a noble who Zephie joined up with while fleeing from Schuenzeit. [[spoiler:Actually in cahoots with Schuenzeit.]]
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* TalkToTheFist: Juto punches him when he arrives in Abazet.
!!Raud
A foolish general who pisses off everyone with his superiority and his lack of emotion.
The leader of the Southern Forces, a noble who Zephie joined up with while fleeing from Schuenzeit. [[spoiler:Actually in cahoots with Schuenzeit.]]
* [[spoiler:EvilAllAlong]]
* {{Jerkass}}
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A foolish general who pisses off everyone with his superiority and his lack of emotion.
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!!Schuenzeit Baren
The Prime Minister, who assassinated the Queen Ibrin for some reason and became the ruler of Lanzheim.
* [[spoiler:CloningBlues: He's a clone of Strass.]]
!!Claire Setilan
Schuenzeit's right hand woman.
* BaitAndSwitchBoss
* FemmeFatale
!!Huaren Jass
Mad scientist who leads the Sentinel project.
* MadScientist
The Prime Minister, who assassinated the Queen Ibrin for some reason and became the ruler of Lanzheim.
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!!Claire Setilan
Schuenzeit's right hand woman.
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* FemmeFatale
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Mad scientist who leads the Sentinel project.
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[[spoiler:The great hero who ended the Great Carta War 1000 years ago, by committing genocide on the Carta race. He then used their Kan to power his kamond, and made up for it by also powering La Strada so that no-one would ever have to farm again. This didn't quite work out, as it runs out approximately every 150 years. He makes more Kan by starting a war with a clone of himself.]]
* [[spoiler:BigBad]]
* [[spoiler:FallenHero]]
* [[spoiler:WalkingSpoiler]]
* [[spoiler:WellIntentionedExtremist]]
!!Igton Pin
A member of the Avis race, who takes delight in spamming the people of Lanzheim through their Cube Mail with educational emails. He gets kidnapped by the Northern Forces and rescued by the Counter-Sentinel Unit later on in the game, when he helps them out.
* Spammer: He exploits the fact that if you don't put a recipient on Cube Mail, ''everyone'' gets it. [[hottip:*:That could be quite disastrous for someone who forgets to put a recipient...]]
!!Melissa Tiss
Juto's surrogate big sister, who takes care of him and bosses him about on Highwind Island. She is killed by Elgar very early on, leading to Juto joining the Counter-Sentinel Unit to avenge her. [[spoiler:She is not actually killed, but turned into a Sentinel and joins the Northern Forces. When she undergoes her Sentinel transformation, the party is forced to kill her.]]
* [[spoiler:DisneyDeath]]
* FieryRedhead
* GuestStarPartyMember: At the beginning [[spoiler:and on the second disc.]]
* ILetGwenStacyDie: The Gwen Stacy to Juto's Spider-Man.
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!!Juto
Juto is a young man living on Highwind Island, with no memory of his past or his identity. He is dragged into the war when his island is attacked by the Northern Forces.
* AmnesiacDissonance
* [[spoiler:ArtificalHuman]]
* EyesOfGold: Juto, when he uses his superpowers.
* HeroesPreferSwords: One handed ''and'' two handed.
* NonElemental: Strength Kan. On the upside, he can store it.
* [[spoiler:SuperPrototype]]
* ThisIsMyStory: His melodramatic narration.
* [[spoiler:WhiteHairedPrettyBoy: After discovering who he is.]]
!!Rzephillda Grena "Zephie" Berlinette
The princess of Lanzheim, who is the rightful heir to the throne after her mother's assassination. She fights on the front lines, which the Southern Forces officials do not approve of.
* BlowYouAway
* PaperFanOfDoom
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething
* SimpleStaff
!!Argo Kindu
A member of the Trewa race, and a former chieftain of them who lost his position after the Northern Forces destroyed his clan. He joined the Counter-Sentinel Unit because of this.
* AnAxeToGrind
* BigBadassBirdOfPrey mixed with InstantAwesomeJustAddDragons
* DropTheHammer
* NonElemental: Strength Kan. On the upside, he can store it.
* ProudWarriorRaceGuy
* TheStoic
--> '''Zephie (during battle)''': Argo, you're always calm. You can make the right judgment.
!!Crocell Reeden
A wizard whose parents were killed by the civil war, and joined the Counter-Sentinel Unit to avenge them.
* DeceasedParentsAreTheBest: Or not.
* FieryRedhead
* PlayingWithFire
* PowerFist
!!Celestine Roaa
A member of the Mare people whose mother died when she was young, and believes her father died as well. In truth, her father was a mercenary [[GoingNative Went Native]] and left after her mother's death, only to be turned into a Sentinel by the Northern Forces.
* AnIcePerson, advertised as MakingASplash
* TheArcher
* DisappearedDad
* GenkiGirl
* HalfBreed
* ImprobableWeaponUser
* InterspeciesRomance: With Argo. It's completely one-sided.
* ShipperOnDeck: When Juto and Zephie discuss [[spoiler:Juto's Sentinel powers]], she thinks they are trying to declare their love for each other.
!!Siara Rue "Rue" Tessia
A woman who is Zephie's loyal guardian. She tries not to show any emotion, and firmly believes (like the Southern Forces generals) that Zephie should never be put into harm's way. She never shows any emotion and doesn't have any backstory.
* FlatCharacter
* LivingProp: If she was replaced with a random soldier during her introduction, the story really wouldn't be affected.
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!!Juto
Juto is a young man living on Highwind Island, with no memory of his past or his identity. He is dragged into the war when his island is attacked by the Northern Forces.
* AmnesiacDissonance
* [[spoiler:ArtificalHuman]]
* EyesOfGold: Juto, when he uses his superpowers.
* HeroesPreferSwords: One handed ''and'' two handed.
* NonElemental: Strength Kan. On the upside, he can store it.
* [[spoiler:SuperPrototype]]
* ThisIsMyStory: His melodramatic narration.
* [[spoiler:WhiteHairedPrettyBoy: After discovering who he is.]]
!!Rzephillda Grena "Zephie" Berlinette
The princess of Lanzheim, who is the rightful heir to the throne after her mother's assassination. She fights on the front lines, which the Southern Forces officials do not approve of.
* BlowYouAway
* PaperFanOfDoom
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething
* SimpleStaff
!!Argo Kindu
A member of the Trewa race, and a former chieftain of them who lost his position after the Northern Forces destroyed his clan. He joined the Counter-Sentinel Unit because of this.
* AnAxeToGrind
* BigBadassBirdOfPrey mixed with InstantAwesomeJustAddDragons
* DropTheHammer
* NonElemental: Strength Kan. On the upside, he can store it.
* ProudWarriorRaceGuy
* TheStoic
--> '''Zephie (during battle)''': Argo, you're always calm. You can make the right judgment.
!!Crocell Reeden
A wizard whose parents were killed by the civil war, and joined the Counter-Sentinel Unit to avenge them.
* DeceasedParentsAreTheBest: Or not.
* FieryRedhead
* PlayingWithFire
* PowerFist
!!Celestine Roaa
A member of the Mare people whose mother died when she was young, and believes her father died as well. In truth, her father was a mercenary [[GoingNative Went Native]] and left after her mother's death, only to be turned into a Sentinel by the Northern Forces.
* AnIcePerson, advertised as MakingASplash
* TheArcher
* DisappearedDad
* GenkiGirl
* HalfBreed
* ImprobableWeaponUser
* InterspeciesRomance: With Argo. It's completely one-sided.
* ShipperOnDeck: When Juto and Zephie discuss [[spoiler:Juto's Sentinel powers]], she thinks they are trying to declare their love for each other.
!!Siara Rue "Rue" Tessia
A woman who is Zephie's loyal guardian. She tries not to show any emotion, and firmly believes (like the Southern Forces generals) that Zephie should never be put into harm's way. She never shows any emotion and doesn't have any backstory.
* FlatCharacter
* LivingProp: If she was replaced with a random soldier during her introduction, the story really wouldn't be affected.
!The Northern Forces
!The Southern Forces
!Others