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** Despite being a stick figure, she supplies plenty of {{Fanservice}} and is proud of it. For instance, she doesn't ''need'' a TransformationSequence to change clothes, but she prefers it. See [[http://keychain.patternspider.net/archive/koc0092.html here]] and [[http://keychain.patternspider.net/archive/koc0006.html here]].
** Take a close look. She's not wearing anything behind that "Forward" sign!
** Despite being a stick figure, she supplies plenty of {{Fanservice}} and is proud of it. For instance, she doesn't ''need'' a TransformationSequence to change clothes, but she prefers it. See [[http://keychain.patternspider.net/archive/koc0092.html here]] and [[http://keychain.patternspider.net/archive/koc0006.html here]].
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**MsFanservice: Despite being a stick figure, figure (granted a stylized one), she supplies plenty of {{Fanservice}} and is proud of it. it.
** For instance, she doesn't ''need'' a TransformationSequence to change clothes, but she prefers it. See [[http://keychain.patternspider.net/archive/koc0092.html here]] and [[http://keychain.patternspider.net/archive/koc0006.html here]].
** Take a close look. She's [[https://keychain.patternspider.net/images/forward.gif not wearing anythingbehind behind]] that "Forward" sign!
**
** For instance, she doesn't ''need'' a TransformationSequence to change clothes, but she prefers it. See [[http://keychain.patternspider.net/archive/koc0092.html here]] and [[http://keychain.patternspider.net/archive/koc0006.html here]].
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A beleaguered Sidereal that was first shown bringing Ten Winds a horse in comic OneHundredEight. Has appeared several times since, [[http://keychain.patternspider.net/archive/koc0203.html talking to Ten, his Sifu]], and Nemen Yi.
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A beleaguered Sidereal that was first shown bringing Ten Winds a horse in comic OneHundredEight.108. Has appeared several times since, [[http://keychain.patternspider.net/archive/koc0203.html talking to Ten, his Sifu]], and Nemen Yi.
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* SilverFox: She's thirty eight years old (46 in [[AlternativeCalendar Earth years]], which is a lot given the expected lifespan of mortals in Creation), and according to Secret, doesn't look a day out of her twenties. That, [[FoxFolk and the fox part is quite literal]]. Of course, being a Celestial Exalted and barring death or horrible mutation, she's going to maintain that figure for the next thousand years and more. In fact, by the game rules, those tattoos mean only death can take that figure away from her. 'Cause, you know, this is Exalted.
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* SilverFox: [[FoxyVixen Both figuratively and literally]]. She's thirty eight years old (46 in [[AlternativeCalendar Earth years]], which is a lot given the expected lifespan of mortals in Creation), and according to Secret, doesn't look a day out of her twenties. That, [[FoxFolk and the fox part is quite literal]].twenties.. Of course, being a Celestial Exalted and barring death or horrible mutation, she's going to maintain that figure for the next thousand years and more. In fact, by the game rules, those tattoos mean only death can take that figure away from her. 'Cause, you know, this is Exalted.
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* BadassGay: Marena's SmellsSexy fails to work on him for this reason.
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* ThrowItIn: After her creation in the comic, Nova got a cameo in the 2nd Edition Alchemicals book for Exalted, making her a [[CanonImmigrant canon character]].
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* ThrowItIn: After her creation in the comic, Nova got a cameo in the 2nd Edition Alchemicals book for Exalted, making her a [[CanonImmigrant canon character]].character]] (specifically, her name was used as an example Alchemical).
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-->Secret: How many merits do you have?!?
** Also subverted. He's got amnesia of his Pre-Exalted life, and Nightmares ("It's not worth the three points.") Oh, and the Eidetic Memory [[spoiler: resulted from his sacrifice of ignorance to gain the third circle of Sorcery. Which is part of what led to his lonely death in his first incarnation.]]
** Also subverted. He's got amnesia of his Pre-Exalted life, and Nightmares ("It's not worth the three points.") Oh, and the Eidetic Memory [[spoiler: resulted from his sacrifice of ignorance to gain the third circle of Sorcery. Which is part of what led to his lonely death in his first incarnation.]]
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-->'''Marena:''' I've got ten obols on robot clone!
-->'''Ten:''' I'll take a piece of that action!
-->'''Misho:''' Yes, we've discussed it. At length.
-->'''Marena:''' I've got ten obols on robot clone!
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-->'''Secret:''' ...you realize that is extremely suspicious.
-->'''Misho:'''suspicious.\\
'''Misho:''' Yes, we've discussed it. Atlength.
-->'''Marena:'''length.\\
'''Marena:''' I've got ten obols on robotclone!
-->'''Ten:'''clone!\\
'''Ten:''' I'll take a piece of that action!
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Full Name: The Most Secret And Sorrowful Of The Bearers Of The Endless Destiny Of All Creation Which Wander Amidst Forgotten Sights And Fallen Tears Along The Tread Of Ancient Ashen Footsteps Through The Shadow Of That Which Comes And Into That Riotous Cacophony Which Births All Fools And Steals All Beauty, Who Heralds Through Her Silence The Stillness And Chill Of Those Who Were Not Born And Who Will Fade ‘Till All Things Fall And In That Most Grim Harvest Form The Final Restful Tomb Of All Awakened Life And All The Sleepless De- (At this point she collapsed.)\\
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Formerly a monk in the Immaculate Order, who left because he grew disillusioned with the Order, and because he enjoyed the pleasures of the world a bit too much. [[spoiler:At least, that's what he originally said. While it's true to an extent, he was originally an aide to the Bronze Faction as well, and a member of the Realm's SecretPolice, the All-Seeing Eye. He left because he was tired of his life being a spy novel, not because he wanted to drink (which he probably did a lot of, being essentially Film/JamesBond).]] Taciturn, wry, resolute.
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Formerly a monk in the Immaculate Order, who left because he grew disillusioned with the Order, Order... and because he enjoyed the pleasures of the world a bit too much. [[spoiler:At least, that's what he originally said. While it's true to an extent, he was originally an aide to the Bronze Faction as well, well and a member of the Realm's SecretPolice, the All-Seeing Eye. He left because he was tired of his life being a spy novel, not because he wanted to drink (which he probably did a lot of, being essentially Film/JamesBond).]] Taciturn, wry, resolute.
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* DarkSkinnedRedhead: Has the same look as Marena, but acts much more calm and subdued. [[spoiler:This turns out to be only skin-deep -- her true personality fits the trope well, and becomes a plot point.]]
* DynamicEntry
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--> ''Marena'':BigSisterInstinct: According to Marena, her twin, Karen had always felt it was her job to protect me.
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* TheFarmerAndTheViper: In life, it was her nature to turn and bite everyone, friend or foe. Kind of made it hard to make friends, until she met a Solar who enjoyed the challenge of defending himself from her. In death, she hasn't changed. Secret has to feed her blood to keep her "tame."
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* TheFarmerAndTheViper: In life, it was her nature to turn and bite everyone, friend or foe. Kind of made it hard to make friends, until she met a Solar who enjoyed the challenge of defending himself from her. In death, she hasn't changed. Secret has to feed her blood to keep her "tame.""tame".
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* AnticlimacticParent: Marena describes her mother as a borderline EvilMatriarch, but when we first see her she ''seems'' to be a caring and generous woman.
---> "Petal!"
:: Consider, though, that one of the primary traits ascribed to her is a penchant for manipulation, so this discrepancy is hardly unexpected...
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* AnticlimacticParent: Marena describes her mother as a borderline EvilMatriarch, but when we first see her she ''seems'' to be a caring and generous woman.
---> "Petal!"
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-->'''Marena:''' You're not my mother, Aria!!
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-->'''Aria''':Aria!\\
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* GrandmaWhatMassiveHotnessYouHave: Astonishingly good-looking considering that she's one of the oldest people (or at least, closest to their proper age-related expiry date) in the comic (122 AlternativeCalendar years old. Which makes her roughly ''147 and a half'' years old by our calendar).
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* InformedAbility: Misho favors Awareness as an ability. We're reminded of this every time he [[FailedASpotCheck fails an Awareness roll]].
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* BoringButPractical: '''''DODGE CHARMS''''' are good for just about everything.
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* BoringButPractical: '''''DODGE CHARMS''''' are good for just about everything.everything, like avoiding blood, as said in strip [[https://keychain.patternspider.net/archive/koc0009.html 9]].
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* CureForCancer: Thinks In strip [[https://keychain.patternspider.net/archive/koc0337.html 337]], he notes that it's easy.easy once you know how.
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* FoxyGrandma: She might not be a grandma yet, but she's thirty eight years old (46 in [[AlternativeCalendar Earth years]], which is a lot given the expected lifespan of mortals in Creation), and according to Secret, doesn't look a day out of her twenties. That, [[FoxFolk and the fox part is quite literal]]. Of course, being a Celestial Exalted and barring death or horrible mutation, she's going to maintain that figure for the next thousand years and more. In fact, by the game rules, those tattoos mean only death can take that figure away from her. 'Cause, you know, this is Exalted.
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* [[MrViceGuy Ms. Vice Girl]]: Marena's lack of sexual ethics is [[WhatTheHellHero called out]] by Secret, and she's not remotely [[ChivalrousPervert chivalrous]] about it, but she's otherwise not that bad of a person.
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* [[MrViceGuy MrViceGuy: Ms. Vice Girl]]: Girl: Marena's lack of sexual ethics is [[WhatTheHellHero called out]] by Secret, and she's not remotely [[ChivalrousPervert chivalrous]] about it, but she's otherwise not that bad of a person.
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* SilverFox: She's thirty eight years old (46 in [[AlternativeCalendar Earth years]], which is a lot given the expected lifespan of mortals in Creation), and according to Secret, doesn't look a day out of her twenties. That, [[FoxFolk and the fox part is quite literal]]. Of course, being a Celestial Exalted and barring death or horrible mutation, she's going to maintain that figure for the next thousand years and more. In fact, by the game rules, those tattoos mean only death can take that figure away from her. 'Cause, you know, this is Exalted.
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* PerkyGoth: Sorta, especially what with [[http://keychain.patternspider.net/archive/koc0124.html her secret affection]] for [[spoiler: [[CaramelldansenVid Caramelldansen]].]] Spoilered because it's [[RuleOfFunny funnier that way.]]
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* PerkyGoth: Sorta, especially what with [[http://keychain.patternspider.net/archive/koc0124.html her secret affection]] for [[spoiler: [[CaramelldansenVid [[JustForFun/CaramelldansenVid Caramelldansen]].]] Spoilered because it's [[RuleOfFunny funnier that way.]]
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* FoxyGrandma: She might not be a grandma yet, but she's thirty eight years old (46 in [[AlternativeCalendar Earth years]], which is a lot given the expected lifespan of mortals in Creation), and according to Secret, doesn't look a day out of her twenties. That, and the fox part is quite literal. Of course, being a Celestial Exalted and barring death or horrible mutation, she's going to maintain that figure for the next thousand years and more. In fact, by the game rules, those tattoos mean only death can take that figure away from her. 'Cause, you know, this is Exalted.
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* FoxyGrandma: She might not be a grandma yet, but she's thirty eight years old (46 in [[AlternativeCalendar Earth years]], which is a lot given the expected lifespan of mortals in Creation), and according to Secret, doesn't look a day out of her twenties. That, [[FoxFolk and the fox part is quite literal.literal]]. Of course, being a Celestial Exalted and barring death or horrible mutation, she's going to maintain that figure for the next thousand years and more. In fact, by the game rules, those tattoos mean only death can take that figure away from her. 'Cause, you know, this is Exalted.
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TRS Cleanup: https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/posts.php?discussion=1543951738020239600. Deleting due to lack of context.
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* PettingZooPeople: Fox ears and tail.
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How To Write An Example - Do Not Pothole the Trope Name
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* LoveableSexManiac
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* LoveableSexManiacLovableSexManiac
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Per word of Jukashi, the alchemicals Nova makes don't belong to any caste.
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!!Blossom of Harmonious Ethers (''Unknown Caste Alchemical'')
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!!Blossom of Harmonious Ethers (''Unknown Caste (''Casteless Alchemical'')
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!!Unnamed Gunslinger Alchemical (''Unknown Caste Alchemical'')
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!!Unnamed Gunslinger Alchemical (''Unknown Caste (''Casteless Alchemical'')
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dewicking badass grandpa.
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* BadassGrandpa: All Exalts are Badasses, but Ten is old enough that his age has started showing (though his hair color comes of good breeding rather than age).
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* FromACertainPointOfView: His original backstory.
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* TeamDad:
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*DistinctionWithoutADifference: Due to her MommyIssues, she doesn't refer to Aria as her "mother" but "the woman in whose body Karena and I were lodged in for a year".
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* MamasBabyPapasMaybe: Her actual father is unclear, since her mother [[ReallyGetsAround gets around]] as much as she does.
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* MamasBabyPapasMaybe: Her actual father father's identity is unclear, since her mother [[ReallyGetsAround gets around]] as much as she does.
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* TrainingFromHell: Grew up with the sociopolitical version of this.
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* TrainingFromHell: Grew up with the sociopolitical version of this.this thanks to her mother. It's the reason they're so estranged.
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* TheAlcoholic: Helps him out in the conflict with Nova. Other times... not so much.
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* TheAlcoholic: Helps Chronic drinking of fermented beverages helps him out in the conflict with Nova. Other times... not so much.
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* TeamDad: Fills this role at times.
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* TeamDad: Fills this role at times.
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Badass is no longer a trope.
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* {{Badass}}: You're saying this guy is an all-powerful martial artist ''despite'' being of a weaker character type than other Exalts, he knows almost everyone important in Creation, [[spoiler:and he's an {{Expy}} of James Bond]]? Holy shit, is this guy badass!
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** {{Badass}} enough that a Sidereal thinks twice before fighting him. [[spoiler:Probably because he knows that particular Sidereal]].
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** {{Badass}} Badass enough that a Sidereal thinks twice before fighting him. [[spoiler:Probably because he knows that particular Sidereal]].
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!Allies and Associates
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!Servants of the First and Forsaken Lion
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!Others
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[[folder:Others]]
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!!Unnamed Gunslinger Alchemical (Unknown Caste Alchemical)
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* ShoutOut: Has [[KingdomHearts Sora's]] hair.
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* ShoutOut: Has [[KingdomHearts [[Franchise/KingdomHearts Sora's]] hair.
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[-They get a roll call on [[http://keychain.patternspider.net/archive/koc0277.html this]] page.-]
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A beleaguered Sidereal that was first shown bringing Ten Winds a horse in comic OneHundredEight. Has appeared several times since, talking to Ten, his Sifu, and Nemen Yi.
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A beleaguered Sidereal that was first shown bringing Ten Winds a horse in comic OneHundredEight. Has appeared several times since, [[http://keychain.patternspider.net/archive/koc0203.html talking to Ten, his Sifu, Sifu]], and Nemen Yi.
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!!Lady In The Untold Depth
One of the two Exalts the Silver Prince sent to fetch Secret.
One of the two Exalts the Silver Prince sent to fetch Secret.
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* TalkLikeAPirate: She knows [[http://keychain.patternspider.net/archive/koc0035.html Seatongue]], having sailed during her backstory.
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* TalkLikeAPirate: She knows [[http://keychain.patternspider.net/archive/koc0035.html Seatongue]], having sailed during spent her backstory.teenage years on an island.
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A Deathknight with an enormous appetite for combat and a violent disdain for people who have more power than puissance.
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* BloodKnight
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A Deathknight with an enormous appetite for combat and a violent disdain for people who have more power than puissance.
puissance. Ex-servant of the Lion.
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BloodKnight: He left Secret and Cluivnarihe because fighting with them as his side had become too easy.
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* NameThatUnfoldsLikeLotusBlossom: Exaggerated, even by Exalted standards.
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* TalkLikeAPirate: She knows [[http://keychain.patternspider.net/archive/koc0035.html Seatongue]], having sailed during her backstory.