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[[folder:'''[[color:red:Ryu]]''']]
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** In the original fic he would go berserk every single time he heard anything perverted, which went along with his [[PuritySue original]] image, and start attacking whoever made the perverted comment.
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** In the original fic he would go berserk every single time he heard anything perverted, which went along with his [[PuritySue [[IncorruptiblePurePureness original]] image, and start attacking whoever made the perverted comment.
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* CloningBlues: [[spoiler:Second Turning, a sequel and continuation to First Strike, reveals that First Strike Ryu is actually a clone of the real Ryu, who is the AlternateSelf of the hero of the remake. The Real Ryu in that timeline is not amused with the clone when he came back.]]
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* CloningBlues: CloneAngst [[spoiler:Second Turning, a sequel and continuation to First Strike, reveals that First Strike Ryu is actually a clone of the real Ryu, who is the AlternateSelf of the hero of the remake. The Real Ryu in that timeline is not amused with the clone when he came back.]]
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!!! Karen Hibiki/'''[[gold:Kodenyellow]]'''
!!! Karen Hibiki/'''[[gold:Kodenyellow]]'''
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!!! Karen
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[[folder:'''[[color:pink:Ryn]]''']]
!!! Ryn Tsubasa/'''[[pink:Kodenpink]]'''
!!! Ryn Tsubasa/'''[[pink:Kodenpink]]'''
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!!! Ryn
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* BoobsOfSteel: The Author likes describing her 'melons' a lot and she's the strongest out of the three girls. Apparently she had them as a seven year old too.
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* ThatManIsDead: He really is
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* WhipItGood
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** TheChick: Technically more girly than Ryn and also doesn't have the actual personality of an ActionGirl though.
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* TheChick: Has no experience in battle whatsoever.
** ActionGirl: Granted though, she actually does have the personality and unlike Karen, won't falter in battle and thus is a little more Gung Ho in battle.
** ActionGirl: Granted though, she actually does have the personality and unlike Karen, won't falter in battle and thus is a little more Gung Ho in battle.
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* EverythingsEvenWorseWithSharks: He's themed after a shark.
** Played straight in the original but subverted in the remake. He's a lot nicer in there.
** Played straight in the original but subverted in the remake. He's a lot nicer in there.
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* DisappearedDad: Didn't have much of a choice though, it was either this or let a KillEmAll happen.
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* DisappearedDad: Didn't have much of a choice though, it was either this or let a KillEmAll mass murder happen.
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* ATeamFiring: He's not really good at firing his {{BFG}}.
* PowerFist: On the back of Lee's cannon, there is a set of ''[[MusicalAssassin Bell Knuckles]]' which he uses often.
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* WeaponOfChoice: {{BFG}}: Supposed to be it. [[ATeamFiring He sucks with it]].
** On the other hand, on the back of Lee's cannon, there is a set of '[[MusicalAssassin Bell]] [[PowerFist Knuckles]]' which he uses often.
** On the other hand, on the back of Lee's cannon, there is a set of '[[MusicalAssassin Bell]] [[PowerFist Knuckles]]' which he uses often.
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* DualWielding: Ryu's [[WeaponOfChoice personal weapons]] are a set of twin Chinese Swords.
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* DualWielding: Ryu's [[WeaponOfChoice personal weapons]] weapons are a set of twin Chinese Swords.
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* RingsOfDeath: Her [[WeaponOfChoice Chakram]] are quite deadly. And she has [[DualWielding two]].
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* RingsOfDeath: Her [[WeaponOfChoice Chakram]] Chakram are quite deadly. And she has [[DualWielding two]].
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* DoubleWeapon: Her [[WeaponOfChoice personal weapon]] is a bow, a Bladed Bow with blades on both sides.
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* DoubleWeapon: Her [[WeaponOfChoice personal weapon]] weapon is a bow, a Bladed Bow with blades on both sides.
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* WeaponOfChoice: Oddly enough, not a [[{{Handguns}} pistol]], or a [[SniperRifle rifle]], or a {{BFG}}. Instead, a BladeOnAStick.
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* AnAxeToGrind: His WeaponOfChoice
** He likes to use an [[JustForPun Axe]] Kick
** He likes to use an [[JustForPun Axe]] Kick
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* {{Nerd}}: He was one until he stood up to Rai. Now he's the most athletic person in the school. Even Ryu has a hard time believing that.
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!!! Ryunosuke 'Ryu' Rekka/'''[[color:red:Kodenred]]'''
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!!! Ryunosuke 'Ryu' Rekka/'''[[color:red:Kodenred]]'''Rekka/'''[[red:Kodenred]]'''
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!!! Rai Shishi/'''[[color:green:Kodengreen]]'''
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!!! Rai Shishi/'''[[color:green:Kodengreen]]'''Shishi/'''[[green:Kodengreen]]'''
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!!! Lee Hamura/'''[[color:blue:Kodenblue]]'''
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!!! Lee Hamura/'''[[color:blue:Kodenblue]]'''Hamura/'''[[blue:Kodenblue]]'''
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!!! Karen Hibiki/'''[[color:gold:Kodenyellow]]'''
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!!! Karen Hibiki/'''[[color:gold:Kodenyellow]]'''Hibiki/'''[[gold:Kodenyellow]]'''
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!!! Ryn Tsubasa/'''[[color:pink:Kodenpink]]'''Tsubasa/'''[[pink:Kodenpink]]'''
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!!! Miku Sorahane/'''[[color:silver:Kodensilver]]'''
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!!! Miku Sorahane/'''[[color:silver:Kodensilver]]'''
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!!! Kousuke Sorahane/'''[[color:goldenrod:Kodengold]]'''
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!!! Kousuke Sorahane/'''[[color:goldenrod:Kodengold]]'''Sorahane/'''[[goldenrod:Kodengold]]'''
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!!!Kyoko/'''[[color:magenta:Baraotome]]'''
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!!!Kuma Daisan/'''[[color:orange:Daikuma]]'''
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!!!Kuma Daisan/'''[[color:orange:Daikuma]]'''Daisan/'''[[orange:Daikuma]]'''
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!!! Ryuuji Hinote/ '''[[color:red:Kodenfire]]'''
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!!! Ryuuji Hinote/ '''[[color:red:Kodenfire]]'''
'''[[red:Kodenfire]]'''
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!!! Takumi-sensei/'''[[color:brown:Koden]][[color:gold:knight]]'''
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!!! Takumi-sensei/'''[[color:brown:Koden]][[color:gold:knight]]'''Takumi-sensei/'''[[brown:Koden]][[gold:knight]]'''
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!!!Jiro Kyosei/'''[[color:green:Kodenhero]]'''
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!!!Jiro Kyosei/'''[[color:green:Kodenhero]]'''Kyosei/'''[[green:Kodenhero]]'''
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** He's the leader of the [[FiveManBand team]] in the rewrite because of this.
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** He's the leader of the [[FiveManBand team]] team in the rewrite because of this.
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* TheLancer: Not in the FiveManBand but to Rai.
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* TheLancer: Not in the FiveManBand TheTeam but to Rai.
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** [[HarsherInHindsight Which kind of confirms that Ryu might be an]] [[AuthorAvatar Author Avatar]] and thus may be a [[MarySue true Mary Sue]]. Oops.
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** [[HarsherInHindsight Which kind of confirms that Ryu might be an]] [[AuthorAvatar Author Avatar]] and thus may be a [[MarySue true Mary Sue]].self-insert. Oops.
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* MartyStu: There's unfortunately accusation that this version of Kai is one. [[CreatorBacklash And every one knows]] [[CreatorBreakdown what happened the last time there was a Mary Stu.]]
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* ManInWhite
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** InterruptedSuicide: In a chain of multiple [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome Moments of Awesome]], Ryu grabs Lee while Lee is dangling and then Ryu starts calling Lee out, even showing that [[BewareTheNiceOnes he can be tough when need be]]. Afterwards, Rai steps in to help, saving Lee from death. Rai then [[SlapSlapKiss beats Lee and hugs Lee]] and starts crying about why [[HoYay he needs Lee]]. Then Karen comes and heals Lee's arm with her newly taught healing powers.
* InterruptedSuicide: Ryu grabs Lee while Lee is dangling and then Ryu starts calling Lee out, even showing that [[BewareTheNiceOnes he can be tough when need be]]. Afterwards, Rai steps in to help, saving Lee from death. Rai then [[SlapSlapKiss beats Lee and hugs Lee]] and starts crying about why [[HoYay he needs Lee]]. Then Karen comes and heals Lee's arm with her newly taught healing powers.
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** He was made when [[spoiler:Ryou]] wanted to create a copy of [[spoiler:Ryuuji]] to hug. Daisan was made instead, but Daisan turned out to be a [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments good hugger]].
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** He was made when [[spoiler:Ryou]] wanted to create a copy of [[spoiler:Ryuuji]] to hug. Daisan was made instead, but Daisan turned out to be a [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments good hugger]].hugger.
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* [[SensitiveGuyAndManlyMan Manly Man]]: The Manly Man to Rai and Ryu's Sensitve Guy.
** This was reversed when he and Rai were kids.
** This was reversed when he and Rai were kids.
* SensitiveGuyAndManlyMan: The Manly Man to Rai and Ryu's Sensitve Guy.
** This was reversed when he and Rai were kids.
** This was reversed when he and Rai were kids.
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* [[TheSmartGuy The Smart Girl]]: She's able to think on her feet and she was the one to figure out a strategy to beat the [[HealingFactor constantly healing]] Bat Kagejyu.
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* [[TheSmartGuy The Smart Girl]]: TheSmartGirl: She's able to think on her feet and she was the one to figure out a strategy to beat the [[HealingFactor constantly healing]] Bat Kagejyu.
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* [[PaperFanOfDoom Feathery Fan Of Doom]]: [[DualWielding Uses two of them]].
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* [[PaperFanOfDoom Feathery Fan Of Doom]]: PaperFanOfDoom: [[DualWielding Uses two of them]].
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* [[AbsurdlyYouthfulMother Absurdly Youthful Father]]: He's a sixteen year old dad to a sixteen year old boy. Wait [[FlatWhat what?]]
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* [[AbsurdlyYouthfulMother Absurdly Youthful Father]]: AbsurdlyYouthfulFather: He's a sixteen year old dad to a sixteen year old boy. Wait [[FlatWhat what?]]
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* [[spoiler:CloningBlues: Second Turning, a sequel and continuation to First Strike, reveals that First Strike Ryu is actually a clone of the real Ryu, who is the AlternateSelf of the hero of the remake. The Real Ryu in that timeline is not amused with the clone when he came back.]]
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* [[spoiler:CloningBlues: Second CloningBlues: [[spoiler:Second Turning, a sequel and continuation to First Strike, reveals that First Strike Ryu is actually a clone of the real Ryu, who is the AlternateSelf of the hero of the remake. The Real Ryu in that timeline is not amused with the clone when he came back.]]
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* [[SpotlightStealingSquad Spotlight Stealing Boy]]: Every single chapter in the original fic had Ryu be the center of attention. Even when it wasn't his focus chapter he still received MORE focus than the character it was supposed to be focused on. The chapters in which he had the least appearances are the chapters in which he doesn't talk much, and he still [[SerialEscalation receives more focus]]!
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* [[SpotlightStealingSquad Spotlight Stealing Boy]]: SpotlightStealingSquad: Every single chapter in the original fic had Ryu be the center of attention. Even when it wasn't his focus chapter he still received MORE focus than the character it was supposed to be focused on. The chapters in which he had the least appearances are the chapters in which he doesn't talk much, and he still [[SerialEscalation receives more focus]]!
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* [[spoiler:KilledOffForReal: In Second Turning, Kousuke was killed in the very first chapter because he was a {{Jerkass}}.]]
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* [[spoiler:KilledOffForReal: In KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:In Second Turning, Kousuke was killed in the very first chapter because he was a {{Jerkass}}.]]
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* [[spoiler:LongLostRelative:Sort of. He's not really the brother of the Ryu in the story, but he's still the brother of a Ryu from the timeline that he had come from, but since both Ryu's were essentially the same person, that sort of means that Kai is Ryu's brother.]]
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* [[spoiler:LongLostRelative:Sort LongLostRelative: [[spoiler:Sort of. He's not really the brother of the Ryu in the story, but he's still the brother of a Ryu from the timeline that he had come from, but since both Ryu's were essentially the same person, that sort of means that Kai is Ryu's brother.]]
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* [[spoiler:TomatoInTheMirror: He's not even the real Kai, he's actually a clone of Raiju mixed with some of Ryou's traits, and after killing Ryou, took the name of Kai, and absorbed Ryou's essence, which ended up giving Kai a messy personality and messy memories.]]
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* [[spoiler:TomatoInTheMirror: He's TomatoInTheMirror: [[spoiler:He's not even the real Kai, he's actually a clone of Raiju mixed with some of Ryou's traits, and after killing Ryou, took the name of Kai, and absorbed Ryou's essence, which ended up giving Kai a messy personality and messy memories.]]
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* BadassGrandpa: For an old man, he sure does a lot of badass things.
* CoolOldGuy: For an old man, he sure does a lot of badass things.
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* DirtyOldMan
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* [[spoiler:TheReveal]]: [[spoiler: HE'S RYU! Albeit from a parallel universe.]]
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* [[spoiler:TheReveal]]: TheReveal: [[spoiler: HE'S RYU! Albeit from a parallel universe.]]
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* CastingAShadow
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* DarkIsEdgy