This is absolutely wonderful. The writing is very strong, the characters are consistent, and the descriptions are very vivid. The race in particular is brilliant: it reads exactly the way you'd expect a race between the Best Young Flier and a veteran Wonderbolt to go.
FanficRecs Best Rainbow Dash story I've seen.
This is absolutely wonderful. The writing is very strong, the characters are consistent, and the descriptions are very vivid. The race in particular is brilliant: it reads exactly the way you'd expect a race between the Best Young Flier and a veteran Wonderbolt to go.