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This fic is alright, but it's not for everyone. It's very thoroughly thought-out, with protocols and gadgets with technical descriptions and other cultures. Unfortunately, it spends all of that on long drawn out battlescenes. The fic is currently five chapters long and has yet to get through its first RESCUE MISSION. And it employs a host of OC's, which (perhaps because we've mostly seen them in battle) are flat and uninteresting.
It's a pity, because the premise itself is interesting, and like I said, the universe is very thorough. But it's the kind of fic that collapses under its own weight, and considering how it's been nearly a year since the last update, I think the writer may have given up on it.
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