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Okay, I feel like this doesn\'t apply for the series as, while there are a couple of Deus Ex Machina (like the golden truth), there aren\'t enough to really count as this and if so it needs to be rewritten (feels more like an attack than something more specific). So while it might seem strange at certain points I feel like most of them is understandable and rather clear when you understand Beatrice/Yasu and how the series work.
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Okay, I feel like this doesn\\\'t apply for the series as, while there are a couple of Deus Ex Machina (like the golden truth), there aren\\\'t enough to really count as this and if so it needs to be rewritten (feels more like an attack than something more specific). While certain parts of the series might seem strange at certain points I feel like most of them is understandable and rather clear when you understand Beatrice/Yasu and how the series work and so not a case of this.
