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* Portfolio: [[TinyTyrannicalGirl Being a mean, violent, and unpleasent little brat]], [[Blackmail threatened to tell her mom on her big brother]], [[HairTriggerTemper having a very short fuse]], [[KarmaHoudini almost always getting away with doing unpleasent and mean things]], [[CuteBruiser being a surprisingly strong little girl]], being [[BrattyHalfPint bratty]], [[SpoiledBrat spoiled]], and [[EntitledBastard entitled]]. [[HeelRealization finally seeing the error of her ways]] [[HeelFaceTurn and starting be more]] [[TookALevelInKindness respectful toward others because of it]].
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* Portfolio: [[TinyTyrannicalGirl Being a mean, violent, and unpleasent little brat]], [[{{Blackmail}} threatened to tell her mom on her big brother]], [[HairTriggerTemper having a very short fuse]], [[KarmaHoudini almost always getting away with doing unpleasent and mean things]], [[CuteBruiser being a surprisingly strong little girl]], being [[BrattyHalfPint bratty]], [[SpoiledBrat spoiled]], and [[EntitledBastard entitled]]. [[HeelRealization finally seeing the error of her ways]] [[HeelFaceTurn and starting be more]] [[TookALevelInKindness respectful toward others because of it]].
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* Allies: [[Pantheon/Friendship The Eds]], though only after her HeelFaceTurn.
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* Allies: [[Pantheon/{{Friendship}} The Eds]], though only after her HeelFaceTurn.
