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Huh. I was re-reading chapter 78, and I just realized- no wonder Zuko kept thinking about Toph. The sea serpent pulls on the feeling of aloneness (that\'s prorably why he was thinking about what Aang did, and then thought that Aang would not want people to look for him.) And the sea serpent also attacks the bonds of family, so thinking about them to combat aloness wouldn\'t work, either. But Toph is someone he trusts utterly yet DOESN\'T label as family, so the sea serpent couldn\'t quite attack thar bond.

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Huh. I was re-reading chapter 78, and I just realized- no wonder Zuko kept thinking about Toph. The sea serpent pulls on the feeling of aloneness (that\\\'s probably why he was thinking about what Aang did, and then thought that Aang would not want people to look for him.) And the sea serpent also attacks the bonds of family, so thinking about them to combat aloneness wouldn\\\'t work, either. But Toph is someone he trusts utterly yet DOESN\\\'T label as family, so the sea serpent couldn\\\'t quite attack their bond.

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And no wonder he\'s being so pessimistic about Uncle Iroh using him. (I mean, yes, Uncle Iroh has been using him, but he loves him, too. Zuko\'s not mentally in great shape right now. Haivng a person who wasn\'t family he could depend on probably helped keep him alive.)

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And no wonder he\\\'s being so pessimistic about Uncle Iroh using him. (I mean, yes, Uncle Iroh has been using Zuko, but he loves Zuko, too. Zuko\\\'s not mentally in great shape right now. Having a person who wasn\\\'t family he could depend on probably helped keep him alive.)

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Now I\'m wondering if it was a coincidence that the people who mostly survived defying loyalty to Sozin seemed to have been women and children. Kuzon, at fifteen, had help from Shidan to heal from breaking loyalty. But maybe his youth helped. Shidan wasn\'t able to save that many others, it seems like. And Temul survived alone. But the only other memebers of her clan- the only other great names in her family- were also women and children. Maybe Kuzon was loyal to his parents first, even if he was still loyal to the Fire Lord, and that was why it was easier to save him. Iroh did say that to break loyalty suddenly is fatal, but choosing between two loyalties can be survived. And TEmul was likely loyal to her children first, as she was a mother.

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Now I\\\'m wondering if it was a coincidence that the people who mostly survived defying loyalty to Sozin seemed to have been women and children. Kuzon, at fifteen, had help from Shidan to heal from breaking loyalty. But maybe his youth helped, too. Shidan wasn\\\'t able to save that many others, it seems like. And Temul survived without him. But the only other memebers of her clan- the only other great names in her family- were also women and children. Maybe Kuzon was loyal to his parents first, even if he was still loyal to the Fire Lord, and that was why it was easier to save him. Iroh did say that to break loyalty suddenly is fatal, but choosing between two loyalties can be survived. And Temul was likely loyal to her children first, as she was a mother.

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