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Best part of the attack on the Fire Lord is that \'\'everyone\'\' reading this has a feeling that Vathara is perfectly capable of killing \'\'[[AnyoneCanDie any]]\'\' and perhaps \'\'\'[[KillEmAll every]]\'\'\' single member of the invasion force. She\'s been savaging the Gaang for dozens of chapters - it feels like an extended version of Jack Torrence slamming an axe into Scatman Crothers\' chest the instant he enters the Overlook.
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Best part of the attack on the Fire Lord is that \\\'\\\'everyone\\\'\\\' reading this has a feeling that Vathara is perfectly capable of killing \\\'\\\'[[AnyoneCanDie any]]\\\'\\\' and perhaps \\\'\\\'\\\'[[KillEmAll every]]\\\'\\\'\\\' single member of the invasion force. She\\\'s been savaging the Gaang for dozens of chapters - it feels like an extended version of [[TheShining Jack Torrence slamming an axe into Scatman Crothers\\\' chest the instant he enters the Overlook.]]
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\\\"This isn\\\'t Fire Lord Ozai\\\'s world. It\\\'s our world, and we\\\'re going to take it back!\\\" Aang still believes that RightMakesMight, even after all he\\\'s been through. He\\\'s lost his civilization, seen it vilified before his eyes, his LoveInterest is terrified of him...
While the cynical and paranoid outcast she\\\'s been worshiping for the same amount of time is now safely ensconced in his own lordship, from where he\\\'s been effortlessly savaging a battalion of Earth Kingdom troops with guerrilla warfare.
Vathara might as well be shouting \\\'\\\'\\\'\\\'\\\'TonightSomeoneDies.\\\'\\\'\\\'\\\'\\\' Creepifying, but exciting. My personal wild guess is that she\\\'s about to kill Katara.
While the cynical and paranoid outcast she\\\'s been worshiping for the same amount of time is now safely ensconced in his own lordship, from where he\\\'s been effortlessly savaging a battalion of Earth Kingdom troops with guerrilla warfare.
Vathara might as well be shouting \\\'\\\'\\\'\\\'\\\'TonightSomeoneDies.\\\'\\\'\\\'\\\'\\\' Creepifying, but exciting. My personal wild guess is that she\\\'s about to kill Katara.
