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* The Queen from \'\'ICO\'\'. She has been emotionally abusing \'\'her own [[TheWoobie daughter]]\'\' for her entire life, imprisoning her in a small cage hanging from a ceiling. (which was actually considered a form of \'\'\'\'\'torture\'\'\'\'\' in the medieaval ages). Not to mention manipulating [[TheWoobie Yorda]] into thinking that she\'ll die if she ever leaves the castle, effectively breaking her spirit. (it\'s implied that this is the reason [[TheWoobie Yorda]] is so passive during the game, it\'s not because she\'s weak, it\'s because she\'s [[BreakTheCutie broken]]. Then theirs the fact that she\'s been manipulating an entire village into sacrificing there children. (said sacrifice involves \'\'[[AndIMustScream sealing those children inside of]]\'\' \'\'\'\'\'[[AndIMustScream coffins]]\'\'\'\'\' \'\'[[AndIMustScream until they die]])\'\'. And it\'s implies that she controls their spirits as her servants.
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* The Queen from \\\'\\\'{{ICO}}\\\'\\\'. She has been emotionally abusing \\\'\\\'her own [[TheWoobie daughter]]\\\'\\\' for her entire life, imprisoning her in a small cage hanging from a ceiling. (which was actually considered a form of \\\'\\\'\\\'\\\'\\\'torture\\\'\\\'\\\'\\\'\\\' in the medieaval ages). Not to mention manipulating [[TheWoobie Yorda]] into thinking that she\\\'ll die if she ever leaves the castle, effectively breaking her spirit. (it\\\'s implied that this is the reason [[TheWoobie Yorda]] is so passive during the game, it\\\'s not because she\\\'s weak, it\\\'s because she\\\'s [[BreakTheCutie broken]]. Then theirs the fact that she\\\'s been manipulating an entire village into sacrificing there children. (said sacrifice involves \\\'\\\'[[AndIMustScream sealing those children inside of]]\\\'\\\' \\\'\\\'\\\'\\\'\\\'[[AndIMustScream coffins]]\\\'\\\'\\\'\\\'\\\' \\\'\\\'[[AndIMustScream until they die]])\\\'\\\'. And it\\\'s implies that she controls their spirits as her servants.
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EDIT: The last fic died in 2008, according to the main trope page. The first chapter of the first one was apparently posted somewhere between 2001 and 2003.
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EDIT: The last fic died in late August of 2008, according to the main trope page. The first chapter of the first one was apparently posted just after Christmas in 2002. So that\\\'s been about five and a half years of work on this fic. Do you remember beta-ing all of them, or just the first one? Because I can see your friend writing the first one and then deciding to write three more, but it wouldn\\\'t really make sense to write all four and then post them over several years.
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Are you still in contact with her? Then again, if she did write the fic, [[OldShame she probably wouldn\'t want to talk about it.]]
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Are you still in contact with her? Then again, if she did write the fic, [[OldShame she probably wouldn\\\'t want to talk about it.]]
EDIT: The last fic died in 2008, according to the main trope page. The first chapter of the first one was apparently posted somewhere between 2001 and 2003.
EDIT: The last fic died in 2008, according to the main trope page. The first chapter of the first one was apparently posted somewhere between 2001 and 2003.
