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This one needs to be rewritten. ExampleIndentation: triple stars are for sub-sub-examples so are rarely needed. They don\'t substitute for the paragraph break markup: end with \\\\, \\\\ by itself on the next line. The first sub-example doesn\'t have enough details as per HowToWriteAnExample, neither does the fourth. The second isn\'t written as a confident example of a the trope, with details of how the trope works out such that a non-viewer can make sense of it. A qualification or justification doesn\'t get us anywhere substantial.The third sub-example \
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This one needs to be rewritten. ExampleIndentation: triple stars are for sub-sub-examples so are rarely needed. They don\\\'t substitute for the paragraph break markup: end with \\\\\\\\, \\\\\\\\ by itself on the next line. The first sub-example doesn\\\'t have enough details as per HowToWriteAnExample, neither does the fourth. The second isn\\\'t written as a confident example of a the trope, with details of how the trope works out such that a non-viewer can make sense of it. A qualification or justification doesn\\\'t get us anywhere substantial.The third sub-example \\\"chains\\\" off the second -- probably better to either be stand-alone or combined with the above.
Suggest dropping the spoilertext: it\\\'s nigh unreadable as-is. Please see HandlingSpoilers.
* StalkerWithACrush:
** Sketch, to Maxxie.
** Emily\\\'s pursuit of Naomi has traces of this too. Plus, it\\\'s not like Naomi didn\\\'t encourage it to an extent.
*** If the S4 Finale is anything to go by... [[spoiler:she encouraged it for certain, seeing as she fell in love with Emily when they were 12. Hindsight suggests the AlternateCharacterInterpretation that Naomi may even have been stalking Emily for a while at the start of S3..]].
** And in S4... [[spoiler:Naomi has a - far less likeable - new stalker, in the late Sophia. Of course, it turns out that [[YourCheatingHeart she may have encouraged that one too...]] ]]
--->\\\'\\\'\\\'Emily:\\\'\\\'\\\' \\\"You\\\'re very stalkable.\\\"
** [[spoiler:John Foster also counts as one.]]
Suggest dropping the spoilertext: it\\\'s nigh unreadable as-is. Please see HandlingSpoilers.
* StalkerWithACrush:
** Sketch, to Maxxie.
** Emily\\\'s pursuit of Naomi has traces of this too. Plus, it\\\'s not like Naomi didn\\\'t encourage it to an extent.
*** If the S4 Finale is anything to go by... [[spoiler:she encouraged it for certain, seeing as she fell in love with Emily when they were 12. Hindsight suggests the AlternateCharacterInterpretation that Naomi may even have been stalking Emily for a while at the start of S3..]].
** And in S4... [[spoiler:Naomi has a - far less likeable - new stalker, in the late Sophia. Of course, it turns out that [[YourCheatingHeart she may have encouraged that one too...]] ]]
--->\\\'\\\'\\\'Emily:\\\'\\\'\\\' \\\"You\\\'re very stalkable.\\\"
** [[spoiler:John Foster also counts as one.]]
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This one needs to be rewritten. ExampleIndentation: triple stars are for sub-sub-examples so are rarely needed. They don\'t substitute for the paragraph break markup \\\\\\\\. The first sub-example doesn\'t have enough details as per HowToWriteAnExample, neither does the fourth. The second isn\'t written as a confident example of a the trope, with details of how the trope works out such that a non-viewer can make sense of it. It gets two double stars: one The third \
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This one needs to be rewritten. ExampleIndentation: triple stars are for sub-sub-examples so are rarely needed. They don\\\'t substitute for the paragraph break markup: end with \\\\\\\\, \\\\\\\\ by itself on the next line. The first sub-example doesn\\\'t have enough details as per HowToWriteAnExample, neither does the fourth. The second isn\\\'t written as a confident example of a the trope, with details of how the trope works out such that a non-viewer can make sense of it. A qualification or justification doesn\\\'t get us anywhere substantial.The third sub-example \\\"chains\\\" off the second -- probably better to either be stand-alone or combined with the above.
* StalkerWithACrush:
** Sketch, to Maxxie.
** Emily\\\'s pursuit of Naomi has traces of this too. Plus, it\\\'s not like Naomi didn\\\'t encourage it to an extent.
*** If the S4 Finale is anything to go by... [[spoiler:she encouraged it for certain, seeing as she fell in love with Emily when they were 12. Hindsight suggests the AlternateCharacterInterpretation that Naomi may even have been stalking Emily for a while at the start of S3..]].
** And in S4... [[spoiler:Naomi has a - far less likeable - new stalker, in the late Sophia. Of course, it turns out that [[YourCheatingHeart she may have encouraged that one too...]] ]]
--->\\\'\\\'\\\'Emily:\\\'\\\'\\\' \\\"You\\\'re very stalkable.\\\"
** [[spoiler:John Foster also counts as one.]]
* StalkerWithACrush:
** Sketch, to Maxxie.
** Emily\\\'s pursuit of Naomi has traces of this too. Plus, it\\\'s not like Naomi didn\\\'t encourage it to an extent.
*** If the S4 Finale is anything to go by... [[spoiler:she encouraged it for certain, seeing as she fell in love with Emily when they were 12. Hindsight suggests the AlternateCharacterInterpretation that Naomi may even have been stalking Emily for a while at the start of S3..]].
** And in S4... [[spoiler:Naomi has a - far less likeable - new stalker, in the late Sophia. Of course, it turns out that [[YourCheatingHeart she may have encouraged that one too...]] ]]
--->\\\'\\\'\\\'Emily:\\\'\\\'\\\' \\\"You\\\'re very stalkable.\\\"
** [[spoiler:John Foster also counts as one.]]
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