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Whilst Nimmel wants to feel like a \\\"big-dog\\\", at no point is this feeling derived from a desire to dominate others. This can been seen in the following ways:

1: This is apparantly the first time he has used his powers on the Werewolves. In both instances such a usage could rightly be called justified. He was stopping Olena from attacking a friend, and stopping several Werewolves from attacking him.

2: He has already been subject to a great deal of bullying, yet this is the first time he responded by using magic. If Nimmel wished to satiate his ego, he would have been using his powers the MOMENT he arrived at the Coldfire academy. Instead he has been enduring the abuse dealt to him, and trying to focus on his friends and study.

3: It\\\'s been established Werewolves are pretty damn strong, and are more than capable of killing a person in a rage. The text also makes it clear it is VERY easy for Werewolves to fall into such a rage. Given such facts (they are facts within the narrative, having already been communicated), I fail to see why the use of magic in such a fashion is an extreme reaction.

4: Nimmel does want to feel powerful, but wishes to use the environment to do so, not through attacking other people. The only mistake Mookie has made is slightly clumsy wording.

5: After stopping ONLY those Werewolves intent on hurting him, Nimmel proceeds to ask everybody to calm down. Does that sound like the actions of a bully, or somebody who just wants to resolve a violent situation?

6: Olena manipulated the Werewolves into attacking him. The fact that she then goes on to attack Nimmel (whose only crime was defending himself against creatures that were physically stronger and faster than him) just shows how much of a bitch she really is:

\\\"You beat up the guy who wanted to kill you. I hope you feel good about yourself, you asshole!\\\"

Changed line(s) 3 from:
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Whilst Nimmel wants to feel like a \
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Whilst Nimmel wants to feel like a \\\"big-dog\\\", at no point is this feeling derived from a desire to dominate others. This can been seen in the following ways:

1: This is apparantly the first time he has used his powers on the Werewolves. In both instances such a usage could rightly be called justified. He was stopping Olena from attacking a friend, and stopping several Werewolves from attacking him.

2: He has already been subject to a great deal of bullying, yet this is the first time he responded by using magic. If Nimmel wished to satiate his ego, he would have been using his powers the MOMENT he arrived at the Coldfire academy. Instead he has been enduring the abuse dealt to him, and trying to focus on his friends and study.

3: It\\\'s been established Werewolves are pretty damn strong, and are more than capable of killing a person in a rage. The text also makes it clear it is VERY easy for Werewolves to fall into such a rage. Given such facts (they are facts within the narrative, having already been communicated), I fail to see why the use of magic in such a fashion is an extreme reaction.

4: Nimmel does want to feel powerful, but wishes to use the environment to do so, not through attacking other people. The only mistake Mookie has made is slightly clumsy wording.

5: After stopping ONLY those Werewolves attacking him, he Nimmel proceeds to ask everybody to calm down. Does that sound like the actions of an bully, or somebody who just wants to resolve a violent situation?

6: Olena provoked the Werewolves into attacking him. The fact that she then goes on to attack Nimmel (whose only crime was defending himself against creatures that were physically stronger and faster than him) just shows how much of a bitch she really is:

\\\"You beat up the guy who wanted to kill you. I hope you feel good about yourself, you asshole!\\\"

Changed line(s) 3 from:
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Whilst Nimmel wants to feel like a \
to:
Whilst Nimmel wants to feel like a \\\"big-dog\\\", at no point is this feeling derived from a desire to dominate others. This can been seen in the following ways:

1: This is apparantly the first time he has used his powers on the Werewolves. In both instances such a usage could rightly be called justified. He was stopping Olena from attacking a friend, and stopping several Werewolves from attacking him.

2: He has already been subject to a great deal of bullying, yet this is the first time he responded by using magic. If Nimmel wished to satiate his ego, he would have been using his powers the MOMENT he arrived at the Coldfire academy. Instead he has been enduring the abuse dealt to him, and trying to focus on his friends and study.

3: It\\\'s been established Werewolves are pretty damn strong, and are more than capable of killing a person in a rage. The text also makes it clear it is VERY easy for Werewolves to fall into such a rage. Given such facts (they are facts within the narrative, having already been communicated), I fail to see why the use of magic in such a fashion is an extreme reaction.

4: Nimmel does want to feel powerful, but wishes to use the environment to do so, not through attacking other people. The only mistake Mookie has made is slightly clumsy wording.

5: Olena provoked the Werewolves into attacking him. The fact that she then goes on to attack Nimmel for defending himself just shows how much of a bitch she really is:

\\\"You beat up the guy who wanted to kill you. I hope you feel good about yourself, you asshole!\\\"

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Whilst Nimmel wants to feel like a \\\"big-dog\\\", at no point is this feeling derived from a desire to dominate others. This can been seen in the following ways:

1: This is apparantly the first time he has used his powers on the Werewolves. In both instances such a usage could rightly be called justified. He was stopping Olena from attacking a friend, and stopping several Werewolves from attacking him.

2: He has already been subject to a great deal of bullying, yet this is the first time he responded by using magic. If Nimmel wished to satiate his ego, he would have been using his powers the MOMENT he arrived at the Coldfire academy. Instead he has been enduring the abuse dealt to him, and trying to focus on his friends and study.

3: It\\\'s been established Werewolves are pretty damn strong, and are more than capable of killing a person in a rage. The text also makes it clear it is VERY easy for Werewolves to fall into such a rage. Given such facts (they are facts within the narrative, having already been communicated), I fail to see why the use of magic in such a fashion is an extreme reaction.

4: It is the environment that Nimmel wants to feel powerful, not attacking other people.

5: Olena provoked the Werewolves into attacking him. The fact that she then goes on to attack Nimmel for defending himself just shows how much of a bitch she really is:

\\\"You beat up the guy who wanted to kill you. I hope you feel good about yourself, you asshole!\\\"

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