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As for the Muggle, even if they had the time to think of it (Hannah almost did) and were willing to take the unprecedented risk (no one knows if Muggles can be Side-Along Apparated or if they\\\'d be Splinched to death), he breaks away from the group to turn on his stereos to cover their escape, and they\\\'re out of time to do anything but just scram as he tells them to.
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And at the time Neville reams Colin out for what *were* really stupid mistakes, he\'s numbed himself out completely with Percy\'s old nerve potion. Mr. Weasley finds this so suspicious that he rings in Kingsley Shacklebolt to find out if they\'re dealing with the real Neville or an impostor - and makes Neville own up to doping himself to the eyeballs. The chapter ends with Neville admitting he\'s been a Jerkass and preparing to apologize as humbly as necessary.
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And at the time Neville reams Colin out for what \\\'\\\'were\\\'\\\' really stupid mistakes, he\\\'s numbed himself out completely with Percy\\\'s old nerve potion. Mr. Weasley finds this so suspicious that he rings in Kingsley Shacklebolt to find out if they\\\'re dealing with the real Neville or an impostor - and makes Neville own up to doping himself to the eyeballs. The chapter ends with Neville admitting he\\\'s been a Jerkass and preparing to apologize as humbly as necessary.
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Gran Longbottom later shows Neville how he *should* have handled it, after his own colossal screwup of bolting for Willow Creek after narrowly escaping execution. *First* she welcomes him home - *then* she slaps him and reams him out.
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Gran Longbottom later shows Neville how he should have handled it, after his own colossal screwup of bolting for Willow Creek after narrowly escaping execution. First she welcomes him home - \\\'\\\'then\\\'\\\' she slaps him and reams him out.
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Neville\'s not quite *that* much of a Jerk Stu. Yes he does carry the Idiot Ball re: the Creevey boys getting a Nasty Christmas Surprise, but Colin lets him *think* that he (Colin) has his options all planned out, while juggling a whole lot of distracting information at the same time. (Any mention of Bellatrix Lestrange, in *any* context, is at that point still enough to give Neville a short-circuit between the ears. And Colin dropping the bombshell that she\'s his *aunt by marriage*....) Neville has enough wits left to make Colin promise to contact him immediately if anything is or goes wrong - but both of them mistakenly think Colin can handle it, and he *can\'t*.
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Neville\\\'s not quite \\\'\\\'that\\\'\\\' much of a Jerk Stu. Yes he does carry the Idiot Ball re: the Creevey boys getting a Nasty Christmas Surprise, but Colin lets him think that he (Colin) has his options all planned out, while juggling a whole lot of distracting information at the same time. (Any mention of Bellatrix Lestrange, in \\\'\\\'any\\\'\\\' context, is at that point still enough to give Neville a short-circuit between the ears. And Colin dropping the bombshell that she\\\'s his \\\'\\\'\\\'aunt by marriage\\\'\\\'\\\'....) Neville has enough wits left to make Colin promise to contact him immediately if anything is or goes wrong - but both of them mistakenly think Colin can handle it, and he \\\'\\\'\\\'can\\\'t\\\'\\\'\\\'.
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