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Fawkes
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* FridgeBrilliance: Nimmel\'s reasoning for attenting the Coldfire Academy seems very shallow and [[CharacterDerailment out of character]] at first, but it actually does have a sound reasoning for what is known about his character. He has had severe psychological depression and insecurity, he got his ass kicked by somebody far more powerful than him, and watched his friends die. It would make sense that he would rather be in a place he is far more powerful and able to make a stand for himself. His calling the werewolves \
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* FridgeBrilliance: Nimmel\\\'s reasoning for attenting the Coldfire Academy seems very shallow and [[CharacterDerailment out of character]] at first, but it actually does have a sound reasoning for what is known about his character. He has had severe psychological depression and insecurity, he got his ass kicked by somebody far more powerful than him, and watched his friends die. It would make sense that he would rather be in a place he is far more powerful and able to make a stand for himself. His calling the werewolves \\\"emotion-crazed beast people\\\" is very [[WhatTheHellHero cringe worthy]], but in a way it makes sense in context. Before this he held the (equally ignorant) assumption of werewolf culture as exclusively noble and pure etc. But, having been recently disillusioned of this, it seems he\\\'s a bit bitter and his emotions have flipped to the other side of the [[SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism spectrum]] for a while.
And my proposed changes:
* WallBanger: [[DesignatedHero Nimmel]]\\\'s reasoning for attending the Coldfire Academy is very shallow and [[CharacterDerailment out of character]]. His calling the werewolves \\\"[[FantasticRacism emotion-crazed beast people]]\\\" is very [[WhatTheHellHero cringe worthy]]. Previously, werewolf culture has been portrayed as [[PlanetOfHats exclusively noble and pure]]. But, since this facet of their cultural identity has largely been [[{{Flanderization}} abandoned]] and replaced with [[UnfortunateImplications wanton violence]], it seems he\\\'s a bit bitter and his emotions have flipped to the other side of the [[SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism spectrum]], and now he wants to prove he\\\'s the [[MarySue Big Dog]] by [[FaceHeelTurn lording his magic power]] over all the [[MoralDissonance apparently inferior werewolves]].
And my proposed changes:
* WallBanger: [[DesignatedHero Nimmel]]\\\'s reasoning for attending the Coldfire Academy is very shallow and [[CharacterDerailment out of character]]. His calling the werewolves \\\"[[FantasticRacism emotion-crazed beast people]]\\\" is very [[WhatTheHellHero cringe worthy]]. Previously, werewolf culture has been portrayed as [[PlanetOfHats exclusively noble and pure]]. But, since this facet of their cultural identity has largely been [[{{Flanderization}} abandoned]] and replaced with [[UnfortunateImplications wanton violence]], it seems he\\\'s a bit bitter and his emotions have flipped to the other side of the [[SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism spectrum]], and now he wants to prove he\\\'s the [[MarySue Big Dog]] by [[FaceHeelTurn lording his magic power]] over all the [[MoralDissonance apparently inferior werewolves]].
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* FridgeBrilliance: Nimmel\'s reasoning for attenting the Coldfire Academy seems very shallow and [[CharacterDerailment out of character]] at first, but it actually does have a sound reasoning for what is known about his character. He has had severe psychological depression and insecurity, he got his ass kicked by somebody far more powerful than him, and watched his friends die. It would make sense that he would rather be in a place he is far more powerful and able to make a stand for himself. His calling the werewolves \
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* FridgeBrilliance: Nimmel\\\'s reasoning for attenting the Coldfire Academy seems very shallow and [[CharacterDerailment out of character]] at first, but it actually does have a sound reasoning for what is known about his character. He has had severe psychological depression and insecurity, he got his ass kicked by somebody far more powerful than him, and watched his friends die. It would make sense that he would rather be in a place he is far more powerful and able to make a stand for himself. His calling the werewolves \\\"emotion-crazed beast people\\\" is very [[WhatTheHellHero cringe worthy]], but in a way it makes sense in context. Before this he held the (equally ignorant) assumption of werewolf culture as exclusively noble and pure etc. But, having been recently disillusioned of this, it seems he\\\'s a bit bitter and his emotions have flipped to the other side of the [[SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism spectrum]] for a while.
And my proposed changes:
* WallBanger: [[DesignatedHero Nimmel]]\\\'s reasoning for attending the Coldfire Academy is very shallow and [[CharacterDerailment out of character]]. His calling the werewolves \\\"[[FantasticRacism emotion-crazed beast people]]\\\" is very [[WhatTheHellHero cringe worthy]]. Previously, werewolf culture has been portrayed as [[PlanetOfHats exclusively noble and pure]]. But, since this facet of their cultural identity has largely been [[{{Flanderization}} abandoned]] and replaced with [[UnfortunateImplications wanton violence]], it seems he\\\'s a bit bitter and his emotions have flipped to the other side of the [[SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism spectrum]], and now he wants to prove he\\\'s the [[MarySue Big Dog]] by [[FaceHeelTurn lording his magic power]] over all the [[MoralDissonance apparentky inferior werewolves]].
And my proposed changes:
* WallBanger: [[DesignatedHero Nimmel]]\\\'s reasoning for attending the Coldfire Academy is very shallow and [[CharacterDerailment out of character]]. His calling the werewolves \\\"[[FantasticRacism emotion-crazed beast people]]\\\" is very [[WhatTheHellHero cringe worthy]]. Previously, werewolf culture has been portrayed as [[PlanetOfHats exclusively noble and pure]]. But, since this facet of their cultural identity has largely been [[{{Flanderization}} abandoned]] and replaced with [[UnfortunateImplications wanton violence]], it seems he\\\'s a bit bitter and his emotions have flipped to the other side of the [[SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism spectrum]], and now he wants to prove he\\\'s the [[MarySue Big Dog]] by [[FaceHeelTurn lording his magic power]] over all the [[MoralDissonance apparentky inferior werewolves]].
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* FridgeBrilliance: Nimmel\'s reasoning for attenting the Coldfire Academy seems very shallow and [[CharacterDerailment out of character]] at first, but it actually does have a sound reasoning for what is known about his character. He has had severe psychological depression and insecurity, he got his ass kicked by somebody far more powerful than him, and watched his friends die. It would make sense that he would rather be in a place he is far more powerful and able to make a stand for himself. His calling the werewolves \
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* FridgeBrilliance: Nimmel\\\'s reasoning for attenting the Coldfire Academy seems very shallow and [[CharacterDerailment out of character]] at first, but it actually does have a sound reasoning for what is known about his character. He has had severe psychological depression and insecurity, he got his ass kicked by somebody far more powerful than him, and watched his friends die. It would make sense that he would rather be in a place he is far more powerful and able to make a stand for himself. His calling the werewolves \\\"emotion-crazed beast people\\\" is very [[WhatTheHellHero cringe worthy]], but in a way it makes sense in context. Before this he held the (equally ignorant) assumption of werewolf culture as exclusively noble and pure etc. But, having been recently disillusioned of this, it seems he\\\'s a bit bitter and his emotions have flipped to the other side of the [[SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism spectrum]] for a while.
And my proposed changes:
* WallBanger: [[DesignatedHero Nimmel]]\\\'s reasoning for attending the Coldfire Academy is very shallow and [[CharacterDerailment out of character]]. His calling the werewolves \\\"[[FantasticRacism emotion-crazed beast people]]\\\" is very [[WhatTheHellHero cringe worthy]]. Previously, werewolf culture has been portrayed as [[PlanetOfHats exclusively noble and pure]]. But, since this facet of their cultural identity has largely been [[{{Flanderization}} abandoned]] and replaced with [[UnfortunateImplications wanton violence]], it seems he\\\'s a bit bitter and his emotions have flipped to the other side of the [[SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism spectrum]], and now he wants to prove he\\\'s the [[MarySue Big Dog]] by [[FaceHeelTurn lording his magic power]] over all the [[MoralDissonance poor dumb beast people]].
And my proposed changes:
* WallBanger: [[DesignatedHero Nimmel]]\\\'s reasoning for attending the Coldfire Academy is very shallow and [[CharacterDerailment out of character]]. His calling the werewolves \\\"[[FantasticRacism emotion-crazed beast people]]\\\" is very [[WhatTheHellHero cringe worthy]]. Previously, werewolf culture has been portrayed as [[PlanetOfHats exclusively noble and pure]]. But, since this facet of their cultural identity has largely been [[{{Flanderization}} abandoned]] and replaced with [[UnfortunateImplications wanton violence]], it seems he\\\'s a bit bitter and his emotions have flipped to the other side of the [[SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism spectrum]], and now he wants to prove he\\\'s the [[MarySue Big Dog]] by [[FaceHeelTurn lording his magic power]] over all the [[MoralDissonance poor dumb beast people]].
